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- Very nicely done. I truly enjoy reading about his submission/fall to the dark side. Squishy Vic
- I love this article, it wonderful.Troyb(CIS ShadowFeed) contribs
12:23, 23 June 2007 (UTC) - Thank you. It's always nice to know that others appreciate your work. 12:35, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
- I know, its a feeling of acompleshment.Troyb(CIS ShadowFeed) contribs 12:37, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
Emotion[]
CBT, I must commend you for your fantastic work upon this article. The writing style is different from most articles I've read here, as it's written in the style of a novel, rather than an encyclopedaeic article, which I like. In addition, the level of emotion used in this article is really fantastic, as it's such a sad tale, and I feel that you're writing from the very depths of your heart. It's a really fantastically written article, however, at the expense of sounding arrogant, these are two points for improvement I picked up on. Firstly, you mentioned the word 'guy' in places. Technically, this isn't a real word. Secondly, the abandonment of Darth Sadis isn't mentioned, and he just seemes to pop up and attack Faust from nowehere. I just picked up on these, but I must say, it really is a very fantastically written article. I really, as I've said, liked the level of emotion you put into it. 
My page iChat What I've done 13:02, 1 June 2008 (UTC)