The Seventh Star[]
- Nominated by: Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs)
- Nomination comments: A very nice story written by Katana Geldar. Renominating it so she can vote on it herself, as the third Archivist is mysteriously missing in action.
Excerpt[]
A guard walked through a door carrying a locked metal box, placing it on the counter in front of Jali. The guard pressed his thumb against the plate on the front of the box and the lid sprung open. He started to take the items out one by one, checking them against a datascreen as he did so.
“A wallet, synthetic leather,” the guard said. “Four currency chips, two holographs and a key-access card for 17329 Permel Apartments.” Jali grabbed the objects as the guard took them from the box. “One Coruscanti identification in the name of Jali Dawler, planet of origin Coruscant, born thirty-five standard years ago, occupation Coruscant Security Officer, rank Sergeant.” The guard looked up. “You’ll have to get a new one, soon.”
Jali didn’t smile as he tucked the ID into his wallet. What description did they give to those in his position? “Unemployed”? “Ex-criminal”? “Just got out of jail for something I didn’t do”? It was something he had considered in his time inside, just one of the many things waiting him on the way out.
Support (2 Archivists/5 Users/7 total)[]
- - Katana Geldar 21:40, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
- Reviewed in the first nomination. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 01:07, 25 April 2009 (UTC) - Darth Wylind
(Conference Room) (D.W.P.) - — JM76 Ask Archives
06:04, 25 April 2009 (UTC) - Very enjoyable and interesting. --
(talk) (contributions) 10:07, 26 April 2009 (UTC) - Same as Ataru said --Kathkira talk 16:17, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Still has my vote.--Nightmare975 19:15, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
