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J.J. Cushwex

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  • Thank you for your insight on my short story, Star Wars: Zero Hour. I would be happy to not only take your advice, but also let you be part of the project if you would be willing.

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  • Hello, I'm just copy and pasting my reply to the message you left on my Wall, in case you hadn't seen it there. 

    Yes I totally agree with how it could have been constructed better (what is there so far and even future content). I've written a lot for many years but I've always struggled with properly constructing a text. And as you pointed out, yes! You can see that it's like half article, half narrative and I want it to be an article obviously but struggle at it sadly. Since you are offering some help, I'd totally appreciate it!

    I haven't thought of that  much yet, but I would like to do some in the future.

    Again thank you for the lovely feedback and I wouldn't mind some help!

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    • From what I've seen it is better, great job! 

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    • Thank you!

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  • Hey there! I'm appreciative of your recent efforts to improve the formatting & categorization of fan-fiction articles on the wiki. As a friendly reminder, categories must exist on the wiki as created, populated entities before they can be applied to articles. Regarding your edits here & here in particular, Category:Fanfiction does not exist—the category for which you're looking is Category:Fan fiction. Unfortunately, Wikia removed the styling code that previously displayed nonexistent categories as redlinks, so the only way to determine if categories actually exist is to navigate to their respective URLs & check them manually.

    Let me know if you have any questions or require clarification. Thanks!

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    Hi! It's me. First, I'd like to say I've began the rewriting of the first five chapters of Whispers of Dorin, so they will be at peak performance once I publish them here. As I said, they'll be in pentalogies, so stay tuned! But, enough about me. I've finally gotten around to reading Sword of the Jedi: The Fall, and I've left an honest review in the comment section. Check it out!
     

    —Kind regards (and God Bless to you this time), Octo

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    • Howdy! First thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it! I really appreciate when people take the time to read my stuff, so big thanks! 

      Second, with your novel, I can't wait! What you had the first time was definetly interesting (if flawed) and I'm excited to see what a finished version will be like. 

      Again, thank you and God bless! 

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  • If possible, I would love to get some feedback from you on my stories Revisiting Endor and What if Anakin didn't dew it? Plus new stories I may make. I always encourage more feedback.

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    • Okay, here's the feedback for Revisiting Endor. 

      First, I enjoyed the story and liked how you made it a Holo-documentary instead of a Short Story, this was an interesting idea that I thought you executed well. I also thought the characters of Derreck, Chanler and Katrina were fun characters. 

      Here's what I thinkg you could improve. 

      -Names. A good chunk of the characters had Earth names. While this isn't that horrible, I prefer more star warsy names. 

      -Descriptions. I mentioned this above so I won't go into it, I'm just saying that the descriptions could be better. 

      I hope this is helpful, (Sorry that it's breif.) and I wish you good luck on your future stories. If you want I can try and read Episode 2 sometime soon. God bless! 

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    • Alright man and in the future I will think of more star wars names. That is a flaw that will carry on for a bit in this series.

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  • Thank you so much for the feedback! Yeah, I think my writing, particulary the descriptions have gotten better, especially considering that the Ponds story was written two years ago. I will read your Sword of the Jedi: The Fall right now! In the meantime, please feel free to give some other stories of mine in the Feedback Section a read. I will give yours some feedback right after I finish it!

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