Thanks a lot for the help with my last post. I have tried to rewrite my Yoda quote with your help now. Does it sound better now?
“Master Solo. Trials he passed, understanding the ways of the Jedi not does he. “A Jedi shall not avoid battles” (snuffles). - And with patience no wrong character for a Jedi is there, just training harder some they must. Just learning longer some they must. Many training longer than they live must they.”
And another question: Instead of (snuffles) is there a typical Yoda disagreement squeal or other way of showing he considers something wrong? It must get clear here that “A Jedi shall not avoid battles” is a statement Yoda considers very wrong. For the story, Yoda here indirectly approves quite some crazy stuff the Jedi Ben Solo did in this fanfic as it avoided battles and spared lives.