All posts by DinosaurJedi777

I've started working Fic about a group of CIS commanders that survived the aftermath of RotS. The main cast is made up of A CIS ship captain (Main character), then two other CIS commanders, and Ex Jedi that they run into, along with several dozen other CIS members. My plan is for it to be set 6 months AFE and shortly in to the story their secret base gets raided by the Empire. This sends the main cast on a run trying to connect back with the larger CIS remnant. I like have the Idea for what I'm going to do towards the end while I'm writing the beginning. I've had a couple ideas for what to do in the larger novel:

The main cast is unable to meet with and live on the run.

The main cast is sent on a mission to collect a special cargo before they can return to the CIS remnant. Once they get back they find that the remnant has a Subjugator dread not and plans to attack large civilian imperial planets.

The main cast joins with some characters from other Fic characters. Then them, a couple other crime and rebel groups, and the the CIS remnant join forces to become an Independent mini government.

What do y'all think, any suggestions?

So I've gotten an idea for a Star Wars story that focuses on a group of resistance members that were captured my the First Order. But the plot twist is these resistance members are put into a FO experiment that simulates the persons worse fears on repeat (Like in the movie Groundhogs day but with wiped minds each day) til they finally break and give up everything they know. But slowly one by one The start to realize that they're in a sim and then try to breakout. Now I've only been thinking about this for a day or so so I don't have a lot of made plans but I want to hear any ideas you guys might.

Here's my ideas for the plot right now:

We start off with visiting each characters living normal life, each person in no way connected to the others. Ever thing will seem normal besides for some thing being a bit off and some strange and not natural dialog. (Still not at all saying that this is in a sim)

Have all the characters stories start to turn dark and nightmarish, and throwing in another resistance character that has broken free of the mind control but trying to break though to the others.

A brief chapter show how they got captured and sent into the sim.

Plot line of the out side and what the FO is doing.

Plot line of a rescue team trying to infiltrate the the FO base.

Plot line of an escaped resistance trooper who got out.

Each resistance trooper realizing that they're in the sim and having to face their deepest fears to break free and break out.

Them finally all breaking out and escaping the facility.

Thats all the boiled down basic version. I have a few other ideas but are sure on them, though if you guys want I'll share them. So what do you guys think? Is it a good idea? Do you have any of your own for it? What details should I emissive on? Please tell me all your thoughts, I'd love to hear everyone of them.