Interesting use of multiple exclamation marks. Will you be adding it to Star Wars Fanon? =)
copy the whole thing? Nay, but i will make pages of it in fanon.
I'll check this out, but could you guys check out my stories "What if Anakin didn't dew it?" and "Star Wars Revisiting Endor". Please read at your own pace and leave comments about what you think on those pages. Thanks.
Let me start by saying I do not like the Sequel Trilogy Era. Despite this, you seem to have done a good job of bringing life into this era. I also like how the two main characters the story introduces are aliens. The story could use more character build development imo and the pacing is very fast. I love the character Kormack, but the Star Destroyer got taken apart way too easily in Chapter 14. A few words need to be capitalized and a few words were misspelled, fun story all in all.
@General B.H. You don't like clones? :(
Thanks for the comments, @General B.H. , I'll check out your Fan fic. I'm sorry about the grammer and the spelling, I'm not the best at those aspects of writing.
@MrHappyJohn I love clones.
@General B.H. Restoring my faith in humanity! =)
What do you think?