What should I change in this to make it written in past tense? I've edited this twice and it still says "This article is not written in past tense." https://swfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Kar%27aki
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Hi, new to the wiki and my first article has been flagged for a number of reasons. One of these is because it's not 'neutral' enough. What does this mean? How do I make it neutral? It's not got any particular political bias or anything as far as I can tell.
Article link here: https://swfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Ogg please don't comment on the title
I didn't even insert the photo jet.
Is this my first time
All i wanted to do was create a fun little article about the Emperor's feats but it ended up receiving all these notices about how it's not living up to the wiki's standards and telling me that if didn't fix the article according to their rules, the article will be deleted. As a fanon wiki, the rules for editing should be more friendly. Making editors follow all these rules for their articles before they will even be accepted will likely turn off many users from editing this wiki. I understand that all content must be star wars related and that editing other people's articles shouldn't be done, but all these formatting and grammar rules seem excessive for a fanon wiki. Fanon article creators shouldn't be forced to use perfect professional level writing just for something they just wanted to do for fun.
As the admin of my own fanon wiki, i allow content to be posted even if it's not the most high quality.
Episode Description:
Introduction: In the original Star Wars timeline, Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn and his apprentice, Obi-Wan Kenobi, discover young Anakin Skywalker on Tatooine and take him to be trained as a Jedi. But what if, due to the pressing threat on Naboo, they were unable to take Anakin with them? In this alternate timeline, the abandoned Anakin is discovered by Darth Maul, who senses his strong connection to the Force and takes him to Darth Sidious. Anakin is then trained to become a Sith apprentice, dramatically altering the course of the Star Wars saga.
Divergence Point: The episode begins with Qui-Gon Jinn and Obi-Wan Kenobi hastily leaving Tatooine due to the urgent situation on Naboo, leaving young Anakin Skywalker and his mother behind. Shortly after their departure, Darth Maul arrives on Tatooine, tracking the Jedi. Instead, he discovers Anakin and, sensing his immense potential, captures him and takes him to his master, Darth Sidious.
Exploration:
Sith Training:Under the tutelage of Darth Sidious, Anakin's raw power and potential are molded into the dark arts of the Sith. He becomes a fearsome apprentice, known as Darth Vader, learning to channel his anger and pain into strength.Anakin's longing for freedom and power, coupled with Sidious's manipulations, drive him deeper into the dark side. His natural talent with the Force and combat skills make him a formidable Sith warrior.
Impact on the Jedi Order:
The Jedi Council remains unaware of Anakin's fate, but the presence of a new, powerful Sith apprentice soon becomes apparent through various conflicts and attacks orchestrated by Sidious.
Without Anakin, the Jedi Order's dynamics shift. Obi-Wan, deeply affected by the loss of Anakin, becomes more determined and focused on his duties, eventually taking on other promising Padawans.
Galactic Politics:
As Darth Vader, Anakin plays a pivotal role in Palpatine's rise to power. His strategic brilliance and ruthless efficiency accelerate the fall of the Republic and the establishment of the Galactic Empire.
Key battles of the Clone Wars see a much more aggressive and successful Separatist campaign, driven by Vader's leadership and strategic prowess.
Key Plot Points:
Battle of Naboo: Without Anakin's intervention in the space battle, the conflict on Naboo takes a darker turn. While the Naboo and Gungan alliance manages to prevail, the victory is more costly, and Queen Amidala’s reputation as a leader is strengthened by the adversity.
Jedi vs. Sith: Anakin, now Darth Vader, frequently confronts Jedi in battles across the galaxy. His encounters with figures like Obi-Wan Kenobi and Yoda are intense and personal, filled with dramatic lightsaber duels and philosophical clashes.
Political Manipulation: Palpatine, with Vader by his side, manipulates the Senate and public opinion more effectively. The accelerated rise of the Empire sees quicker suppression of dissent and more brutal enforcement of new laws.
Order 66 and Aftermath:
Order 66: The execution of Order 66 is even more devastating with Anakin leading the charge against the Jedi Temple. The presence of a powerful Sith apprentice ensures fewer Jedi survive the initial purge.
The Rebel Alliance: The formation of the Rebel Alliance occurs more quickly in response to the brutal tactics of the Empire. Leaders like Mon Mothma and Bail Organa are more desperate and aggressive in their opposition.
Legacy of the Sith: With Anakin fully embraced as Darth Vader from a young age, the Sith’s control over the galaxy is more entrenched and harder to dismantle. The Jedi who survive go deeper into hiding, their hope resting on the new generation of Force-sensitive individuals.
Resolution: The episode concludes with the galaxy under the iron fist of the Empire. However, seeds of rebellion and hope remain. The surviving Jedi, though fewer in number, train the next generation in secret, waiting for the right moment to strike back. The final scene hints at the rise of future heroes who will continue the fight against the Sith's tyranny, suggesting a new, unexpected path for the saga.
Visual and Narrative Style:
Visuals: Dark, intense, and dramatic scenes emphasizing the brutal efficiency of the Sith. High-stakes lightsaber duels and large-scale battles highlight the altered nature of the conflict.
Narrative: Focus on the psychological and moral conflicts within Anakin as he embraces the dark side, the impact on key characters, and the broader political changes in the galaxy.
Conclusion:
This alternate Star Wars universe presents a chilling and dramatic scenario where Anakin Skywalker becomes Darth Vader much earlier, leading to a quicker rise of the Galactic Empire and a more desperate struggle for the remnants of the Jedi and the emerging Rebel Alliance. The episode explores themes of power, corruption, and the enduring battle between light and dark, offering fans a compelling and dark twist on the Star Wars saga.
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This is a quick test post so I can save this image (made on a computer) onto a phone to be cropped. Delete.
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Does anyone write them here?