DL:Unit 8311

Approve

 * 1) Still not a fan of the language, but it's much improved from last time. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 19:33, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) MUCH better. - Brandon Rhea 23:50, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:28, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 19:39, 25 September 2007 (UTC)

Disapprove/complaints

 * 1) Expand Creation, In the service of the Empire, New Republic activities, Further Conflict and Legacy. I also think the quote on top is rather bad (I'm going to kick your sorry ass!), but that has nothing really to do with an opposition vote. - Brandon Rhea 04:52, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 22:31, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. Is it worthy now? And I am NOT changing the main quote. Unit 8311 14:57, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I never told you to change the main quote. I just said I think it's a bad quote. - Brandon Rhea 23:50, 31 August 2007 (UTC)


 * 1) "Personality" should be expanded into "Personality, traits and talents" or something similar. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:14, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. Unit 8311 17:12, 25 September 2007 (UTC)