HP:Jump droid

Star Wars Fanon &gt; Star Wars Fanon:High Priests &gt; 

Review

 * No. It still needs a lot of work. - Brandon Rhea 06:39, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

Things that need to be done

 * Expand introduction. It is currently 111 words (should be at least 200).
 * Tagged with the users personal improvment drive banner. Articles being improved should not be nominated.
 * Very little detail in every section.
 * Images need to be arranged properly.
 * "Sources" should be changed to "Appearances".

Comments

 * Though it does not break any rules, I think citations look awful in articles. - Brandon Rhea 06:39, 1 July 2007 (UTC)