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It's not letting me comment so I'll try to do it here. The formatting could use some work regarding the dialogue, but nothing too bad. I love how this is relevant to audio logs, similar to the ones used in the early Battlefront game with the 501st clone trooper. I'm a little confused on whether Zach is a sergeant or captain, as he is addressed multiple times by each. I also like how you make the stormtroopers have their own perspective in the battle of Endor with motives and personalities, unlike how they are regularly portrayed. Cannot wait for the next episode!