User blog:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapters 10 and 11 release



They're here! After a two month hiatus, I'm very happy to release the tenth and eleventh chapters of Star Wars: Episode I - The Chosen One. In Chapter 10, we learn more about the mystery of the clone army that the Senate Armed Services Committee reported was being created to wage war against the Republic. Jedi Master Mace Windy travels to Kamino, the source of the clones, and starts to learn some shocking truths about the situation. Who ordered the clone army? Who was the host? Does the host of the clones perhaps have an agenda of his own? Something is lurking in the darkness, and the Jedi have no idea what it is. Is the end near? Chapter 10 may shed some light on that. Also in Chapter 10, Lieutenant Chamberlyn of Utapau's Veermok Resistance has a difficult moral decision to make about treating his enemies.

In Chapter 11, we resume the Tatooine story arc and pick up six hours after Chapter 9 left off. Sarus, the strange hermit who said Annikin Skywalker has a destiny to defeat the armies of evil, is leading Annikin, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Jard Dooku, Queen Arcadia, Logan Amator, and Jar Binks deep into the Dune Sea, farther than anyone thought was inhabitable. But that's just it–it is inhabitable, as they all soon find out. The mystery of Sarus and, in turn, his people deepens, and Annnikin still has no idea how any of it relates to him. What we, the audience, know, however, is that it has something to do with a prophecy. What does Sarus know that we and the characters don't, and what is his agenda? Is he friend or foe? Only time will tell.

Now that I've piqued your interests with vague teasers, here are the two completed chapters:


 * The Chosen One, Chapter 10
 * The Chosen One, Chapter 11

You also may notice that there are quotes from the Journal of the Whills at the beginning of each chapter. If you read the full .PDF instead of the individual chapters, you'll find quotes at the beginning of every chapter, save for the prologue. I haven't yet updated the other individual chapter .PDFs yet. Basically, these Journal of the Whills quotes sum up something important in the chapter. These were influenced by Dune by Frank Herbert, who put quotes, mostly from Princess Irulan, at the beginning of each of his chapters.

As always, comments and feedback are GREATLY appreciated!

Until next time,

- Brandon Rhea