User talk:Atarumaster88

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To maintain at least some form of order, all posts will be responded to on this page. Do not look for a response on your page. Additionally, restrictions on my spare time mean that I will not be on SWF very often, so do not expect urgent results. To reach me the fastest, use e-mail.

Poll
What would you rather see? Force Exile IV: Guardian. Now. More Essential Guide entries! I'd rather have more Yanibar Tales. I don't want to see any more Force Exile. Ever.
 * See Force Exile I: Fugitive, Force Exile II, Force Exile III: Liberator, Yanibar Tales, and The Essential Guide to Force Exile for more information.

Review request
Can you please review Narod Antrell for me? He's been re-rewritten (as an update to the massive fanon cutting I did in recent months) and he should be up to FA standards again. If not, that's fine (I know you're busy with 3FAR too), but if you can, please do so on the talk page. Thank you, Ataru. --Victor talk 22:50, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm rather pressed for time at the moment/foreseeable future. Given that I've already reviewed this at least once before, I can't promise this any time soon. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:24, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

Force Exile Covers
How did you make the cover art, such as the art on and ?--Mattkenn3 02:05, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
 * To put it simply, I didn't. Those two particular covers were made by Solus, while Darth Nyne made the FE III cover. I picked the images, and they put them together in PhotoShop. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:21, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

They look pretty good. Thanks--Mattkenn3 02:25, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks and you're welcome. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:24, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

FA Review
I was wondering if you could look over The Fanon Menace/Season 1 again, when you get a chance soon, and let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done. I've gone through and tried to correct many of the things you stated on the Review page, however, I didn't know if there might be something new. Thanks. --  Tesh  162  09:47, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I will get to it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:24, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

FFA
Oh migod mah articles become FFA! Ohnose! :P But seriously, nice work stripping the FAs. It's motivating and hopefully I will eventually make mah articles up to par. --Victor talk 04:08, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

FA review
On the note of FA review, I'm the go-to guy on The Fanon Menace for the next couple of weeks, as Tesh is at school and I'm not busy. So if you could let me know what the problems with the article are, I'll do my best to fix them. --Ryluk Shouja(The Mukhabarat 19:05, 31 August 2008 (UTC) Thanks for the review on The Fanon Menace/Season 1. Sorry it was such a long process, but your tips will come in handy later when we work on the Season 2 article. I don't know what Ryluk has in mind as far as nominations go for Season 2, but with your help, we can still make it into somewhat FA quality. --  Tesh  162  13:09, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:24, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

RE: That one WP article
Inowatyamean. --Victortalk 04:20, 6 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Task complete. --Victortalk 04:31, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

I did, and it was fixed immediately (the format). As for errors, only subtly (an image needed replacing). The rest is up to you! :P --Victortalk 04:39, 6 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Well, I'm just the messenger. Don't shoot meh! --Victortalk 04:43, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Re:Objections and things
I don't remember you saying that to me, but I'll keep that noted. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 16:35, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

Territorial War
I just corrected the objections to Great Territorial War, aside from the Mutually Assured Destruction one for the same reason as the instance in the Pho Ph'eah article. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 19:22, 17 September 2008 (UTC)


 * By the way, right now I'm working on an article about Ussej that is sourced completely from SWRP role-plays, and that can be found here. You might be interested in seeing how bad of a character Ussej used to be and, if you follow the links in the References section, how terrible of a writer I was. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 19:58, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

3FAR Review: Ryan Vex
Hey Ataru, you voted against Ryan Vex in the Third Featured Article review. I have rewritten and improved the article so it lives up to our current featured article standards; please re-review the article in question when you get the chance. As you know, the article gets de-FA'd on September the 25th. If you could re-review it before then, that would be great. Cheers &mdash;  JM ' 76 ' Ask Archives 01:11, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

Darth Haagen
Hey, Ataru. I've been working on an article for a few weeks now which I intend to nominate for FA status. While it's obviously not done yet, before I continue writing it, I'd like to know whether you think the currently finished sections are even close to having FA qualiity or if the article as a whole even has potential. I'm not asking for a full review, just your general thoughts on it if you have the time. Drewton  ( Drewton's Holocron ) 22:01, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * At a very quick glance, I would say that this has potential. I think you might draw some flak for having him created out of nowhere. I didn't read all the way through it, but this is certainly better than a lot of other Former FAs that I've read. If developed, tweaked and copyedited, I could see this go to FA. By the way, I've pointed in your direction about a Main Page redesign. Are you at all interested?  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:20, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks. It may look like a Mary Sue at first glance, but it won't be close to the one by the time it's finished. He has a lot of power, but he doesn't use it very well, and I'm planning for him to lose almost all of the battles in the "Second Jedi Civil War". He's actually kind of a pathetic Sith. Yes, I would be interested in redesigning the main page; I've actually been thinking about that myself. One of my ideas would be having a random spotlight for a few "promoted" fanfics and a random featured article feature. I'm also working on various Monaco skins which will be proposed and voted on for a new default skin. If you want to try what I have so far, I have a "Lightning" one and a test of how it would be if only the colours of the current skin were altered. You might be seeing it differently than I am if you have a different screen size. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 23:33, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * The P&T and P&A are really what I look at to make Mary Sue judgments . . . what I read in the bio didn't seem that bad, aside from the unusual conception sort of thing-making life out of nothing is about as realistic as spontaneous generation, but this is a galaxy with planetary hyperdrives. On the Main Page issue, I actually have a pending proposal that deals with the promotion of fanfics that would necessitate a Main Page design, which is why I ask. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:49, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
 * He was created by Nihilus the same way Plagueis created Anakin. Anyways, your idea looks good; I'd definitely support it, and I've almost completed my main page redesign. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 22:02, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

RE: Droid name
Sure. Give me tonight to think, and I'll get back to you sometime during the week (as early as tomorrow, if you're online). Give me another talkpage message if you want to discuss if via IRC and I'll try to drop in ASAP. &mdash;  JM ' 76 ' Ask Archives 03:25, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

Jedi Bendu
My promise has been kept. Order of the Jedi Bendu of the Ophuchi has been rewritten and fixed up. I rewrote the entire history section and then changed what you pointed out regarding the other sections. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 22:46, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

RE: Featured Artice
Thanks for the reminder. Could you give me a link to the page, please? I've been away from the internet for two weeks because of my college program, and am at a public library using a 30 minute internet connection and don't have the time to search for it now. Thanks again. --Ryluk Shouja(The Mukhabarat 22:47, 1 October 2008 (UTC)