Talk:Merkory Chal'wala

This was my first properly good and detailed article, so I'd love to know what you think of it! Please tell me, below here, what you think of it, and how I could improve it. Thanks. My page iChat What I've done 20:05, 25 March 2008 (UTC) 08:16, 8 April 2008 (UTC) 18:16, 9 April 2008 (UTC)