Forum:High Priests - First Good Article Review/Archive

 This page is an archive of the first review of Good Articles. See below for the decisions of the High Priests. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  18:51, 5 January 2008 (UTC) The following is an archive of the First Good Article Review by the High Priests. This archive is separated into two sections. The first is an archive of complaints for articles that have now become Formerly Good Articles and the second is an archive of articles that have retained their Good Article status. If the author of a Formerly Good Article believes that they have rectified the errors and that the article is ready to become a Good Article again, they can re-nominate it for Good Article status on the Good Article Nominations page.

=Formerly Good Article Archive=

Complaints

 * Intro is too short (126 words). Red link. Expand the entire thing. Dexington 15:43, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Everything needs expansion, even the introductory "paragraph." The RL needs to be removed as well.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:40, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * I don't know how it got GA in the first place, to be honest. Dexington 15:43, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * This is not GA quality. Unfortunately, yes, it's GA status should be revoked.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:40, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. It needs a good deal of more work. -MPK 17:14, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * I know Tyler's gone, but still... Red links abound (due to Tyler being gone). Small amounts of one sentence paragraphs. Dexington 04:03, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Several redlinks throughout the article.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:09, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Though the article itself is ridiculous, it doesn't fail any requirements in my inspection. No Yes, per Brandon below. Dexington 04:03, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Just to point out, GA standards say that there can be absolutely no red links, so one red link makes an article fail standards. Just wanted you to keep that in mind for this and any other article with red links. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  04:10, 5 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:09, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, per Brandon and Dex's points above. -MPK 16:22, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Red links abound. Expansion in the entire "Escaping the Empire" section. Personality to Personality and Traits. Dexington 15:27, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Per above. --[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes, for now. Dexington 15:27, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until aforementioned errors have been rectified. -MPK 16:28, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry for delivering h death blow, but yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Nearly every paragraph in the first half is a couple sentences. Combination of said sentences is needed. Talents and abilities is its own section, not a sub section of personality and traits. Dexington 15:32, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Per above.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:46, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes, for now. Dexington 15:32, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:46, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until the paragraphs are fixed. I see no other problems. -MPK 17:04, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Red link. Expand Culture and Astrography. Dexington 15:41, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Per above.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:41, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes, get rid of the red link and it'll be fine. Dexington 15:41, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Just expand those two sections and kill the redlink.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:41, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, per above. It could also use an extra image or two and some paragraph merging. -MPK 17:12, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Expand "Pre-Colonization", "History of Ord Aretus after 64 ABY", "Fauna" and "Culture". Many of the paragraphs near the bottom half of the article are one or two sentences and need to be expanded or combined. Red links abound . Fauna needs to be "Flaura and Fauna", Culture needs to be "Society and Culture". Dexington 03:54, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Per above. It also needs a "Behind the scenes" section, possible appearances, and proper era icons.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:55, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes. Dexington 03:54, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:55, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until spelling mistakes are rectified and paragraphs are merged. -MPK 16:16, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Too many sentence long paragraphs. Pictures need to be ordered properly (left,right,left,right,etc.). Dexington 15:38, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Way too many paragraphs are just one sentence.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:43, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Unfortunately, yes. Dexington 15:38, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:43, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Absolutely. -MPK 17:09, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * All around it's too short. Amazing legacy, but the history needs vast expansion. Dexington 15:39, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Interesting, but this article need serious expansion.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:42, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes. Dexington 15:39, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Sadly, yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:42, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, for now. Knowing Brandon, it'll probably be ship shape before long. -MPK

Comments

 * For the record, I do plan on expanding this in the foreseeable future, but feel free to take away GA status if you feel the current history isn't enough. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  03:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

=Retained Good Article Status=

Complaints

 * I have been rectifying complaints for FA and I think it's there, but I'll let you guys decide here. I still think it's good enough. Dexington 03:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Just add a possible appearance, and it'll be ship-shape.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:53, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 03:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No, it's of good article quality.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:53, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. It's pretty professional for the most part. -MPK 16:14, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Picture congestion at "The Clone Wars". "Between the Wars" could use expansion or clarification. Dexington 04:01, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Expand "Talents" and "Personality and traits", then add a possible appearance.
 * Some of the paragraphs could be merged (minor nitpick). -MPK 16:21, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No, very nicely done article. Dexington 04:01, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:02, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. (I personally don't care that much for Darth Krayt, but that's more a matter of taste) -MPK 16:21, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Death could use a little expansion and the quotes are kinda lame, but other than that, perfect. Dexington 04:06, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Needs tidying up her and there, but overall a good article.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Absolutely not. Dexington 04:06, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. The story is surprisingly original. -MPK 16:25, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None, great article. Dexington 15:28, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Nothing.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:48, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 15:28, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I see no notable problems. -MPK 16:33, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Nope.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:48, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * It does have an improvement tag, but this isn't nomination so it doesn't matter. Combination in War's End to make paragraphs at the bottom could be helpful. Dexington 15:30, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Nothing really.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:47, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 15:30, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:47, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. -MPK 17:02, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. Dexington 15:34, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * None.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:45, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 15:34, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Nope.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:45, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I have no objections. -MPK 17:06, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * One short paragraph, nothing to worry about. Dexington 15:36, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Nothing.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:44, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Excellent article. Dexington 15:36, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No way.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:44, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. -MPK 17:08, 5 January 2008 (UTC)