Thread:Boomdodger/@comment-26933649-20160805191647/@comment-5148107-20160818181631

I tried to reply as fast as I could so that you could get started. I will say this - sounds a lot like the beginning of the Clone Wars movie, but that's alright - a good beginning to a series. Sounds like a good idea, you have my approval. Feel free to ask me for other story ideas, that is one of the things I do best.

Also, howcome Varanee decides to just be her padawan. Would it be that she was assigned by a Jedi Master, or did she come on her own? I think it may be a better idea, if you want, if she were to arrive and just help (unless she was sent by another Jedi), and then later Viera says she will take her in and teach her.