User talk:Darth Nyne/Archive 1

Darth Abeonis' fanon
Becuase you have presumed that i would allow you to use my fanon in your character stroylines, specifically Darth Krayt, Darth Nihl and the Successors War. I am here to tell you that if that information is not removed than i shall remove it for you. If you had asked than i may have allowed it, but since you did not, you are not allowed to use my fanon. Darth Abeonis Sith Council (Sith campaign) 09:06, 14 October 2006 (UTC)

Canon links
Just so you know, to link something to Wookiepedia (Cade Skywalker for example) do this...

example

Threat
I don't think threatening me is a good idea Nyne. I already informed you what my opinion was, and the fact that you edited two of my articles to fit in with your fanon could be considered vandalism as well. So don't go preaching to me! Darth Abeonis Sith Council (Sith campaign) 19:03, 14 October 2006 (UTC)

Info
Yeah. So it doesn't link to his story, just link to Wookieepedia, like the user above showed you.

what you do is like this:

Darth Krayt

which would be

Darth Krayt

Or you could create your own Darth Krayt article, just title it some else, like Darth Krayt (NYNE) or something so you won't change someone else's work.

Squishy_Vic 19:06, 14 October 2006 (UTC)
 * I would need to know what you need from me. Aeonz story is ever unfolding. But if we talk more about your ideas then we may work together in future projects. I'd like to talk more about where your going with this so we will talk soon I hope.

Pic Request
Hey, you made a pic for me once before, I loved it, and now I need another. Would you please make a pic for my First Jedi Council article? thanks!

I saw you made a picture. I have placed a request for an image for This article that no one has answered. Would you help? The request is Darth Orcron ('''Darth_Taikin (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) )

I like it, and will use it for something at any rate, but could you read the Darth Orcron request on the image request page? It is a more accurate description of what I want '''Darth_Taikin (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:07, 26 April 2007 (UTC)

Your Welcome
As the title says, not a problem. - Brandon Rhea 02:34, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Image Requests

 * I may request some images from you if you are interested in doing work for the Force Exile series. More details forthcoming. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:20, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Undercity Cup
No, I'm afraid not. For one, because they were disbanded at the time, and, two, I'm not much active about now. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  14:38, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Jafe Image
Thanks for the image! It looks realy good!  Ult  ima Join the SithMy Holocron 18:09, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Image
Could you make me an image using the one at this url: http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Image:Vorcha_forward.jpg I would like you to multiply it and make it look like a fleet of those ships. Make some small, showing their far away. Thanks. Xwing327 18:19, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks, its perfect. Xwing327 20:43, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

=grammatical; Error's.?==

2nd paragraph: Vaders armor 1st paragraph: Masters blade Add apostrophe's on both

Started life as most force-sensitive individuals of the Galactic Republic, he trained on Dantooine with Jedi Master Lat-Kai Ell, decendant of Zez-Kai Ell one of the masters that had condemned Revan. Should be 'starting'

End of last paragraph, 'Approached' is capitalized unnecessarily.

So after finishing up his search for the Sith Stronghold and retrieving a collection of Sith Artifacts, he gathered up the most precious of his cargo, Nyne, and headed off to Dantooine to report his findings to the Jedi Council. ''Not sure the 'so' is needed. I'd replaced it or remove it.''

I'm sure there are a few more like that throughout the article. Also, I'd put a main quote at the top of the article, and maybe another somewhere else. Its not necessary, but it adds color. Good luck with that GA! D arth  P  hobia  12:06, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

Template
Better, thanks. I made the image a bit bigger, though. - Brandon Rhea 19:10, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * In that case, maybe you can help me with this a bit more. I'd like to have the template be on two lines. The first line would be in big, bold letters and would say "You can't stop the change, no more than you can stop the suns from setting....". If that couldn't fit onto one line (probably can't), then I would just have it be "But you can't stop the change....". The second line would be what's currently there now, just without the BIG coding. Did what I just said make any sense at all? - Brandon Rhea 19:22, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

I made a size tweak, but other than that it's what I was hoping for. Thank you very much. I'm no good with this stuff, so I never would have figured that one out. Thanks again. - Brandon Rhea 19:38, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I tried that. Let's just say the result wasn't pretty, lol. - Brandon Rhea 19:46, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

Re:Jedi Orders
Yeah, I have the Dark Guardians of Lettow around then. I don't really have any sort of Jedi Order or anything, but the Bendu Order does take part in the Galactic Civil War. I also do have some stuff in the future beyond Palpatine and all that. If you give me your ideas on what you're thinking, I'll send you a write up about what happens after Palpatine dies and all. - Brandon Rhea 21:43, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, it wouldn't be the Bendu, as their too far away for the Empire to even know where they are and to want to test fighters that far out in space. I could always think of something if you'd like, though. - Brandon Rhea 22:10, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

The line is extended into that period with Dash Rendar, albeit my own modified version of him to fit the Alternative Saga. Dash has no living relatives and, in the stories, the Rendar line is threatened because he has no plans to settle down or have a family, as he's not particularly fond of kids. He wises up later on, though. - Brandon Rhea 11:48, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Thanks. That pic of the fleet was one you made me. Xwing327 17:04, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

FA requirements
Hey, I'm glad you support my option in the FA changes proposals, however that doesn't mean you have to strike-through/remove your option. Others still might support it and it's best to lay out all options available out there. -- Victor  ( talk ) 08:24, 13 September 2007 (UTC)

Jar'Kata
I added in Darth Nyne as one of the users, but I needed to find a way that he would be able to find out about the form. Perhaps finding a holocron regarding the form? Any other ideas? Dexington 00:18, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

That can work. I'll have it from Xeno Halthorn, the only other guy who uses it ATM on Kamino, since I don't see him going to Korriban. Dexington 00:20, 13 October 2007 (UTC)

Images
What images? - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  14:59, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Sorry, I took it as junk because it was created by an IP (I guess yours) and because there was no signature. Go ahead and recreate it. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( contact ) 20:45, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

A Thought Occurs
I was thinking, since Nyne was going to learn Jar'Kata at some point (though you haven't gotten there yet) from a holocron made by Xeno Halthorn, an interesting scenario could be made. Xeno is a Zelosian and Zelosians are, technically, plants. That said, he could in theory live for a long, LONG time, given he takes care of himself properly.

So what I was thinking was that Xeno could find out about Nyne's use of the form and attempt to stop him by killing him in a fight (though whether Nyne dies is up to you).

This not only helps your story, but helps me as I want to make Xeno an FA at some point. Get back to me. Dexington 03:17, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Pictures
"Image Linked" I love the Darth Nyne pictures especially the one on the right. --Elitolu 23:23, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Project Cruentus
Would be great if you joined!--Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (Battles I've Fought ). 09:15, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Micab Niathal
Nyne, just to let you know, you aren't allowed to create blank pages anymore. You might want to fix it before an admin sees. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 21:47, 22 May 2008 (UTC) Okay. But you could use the "show preview" button instead. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 21:51, 22 May 2008 (UTC) It also needs a category. That policy is being taken serious now too. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 21:53, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Images
Please properly source images to the exact link on DeviantArt from where you obtained it from as well as a link to the author. You must give due credit to all DeviantArt authors in order to comply with Fair Use Copyright Law; otherwise, the images will be deleted. --Victor (talk) 00:01, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

Re:Samples
No problem. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 04:38, 29 May 2008 (UTC)

DTM Alliance
I was wondering if you could make a treaty with your faction to supply my faction with vehicles, weapons and gear for giving you guys Blue Prints, battle moves and information about the other factions. What do you think?-- Arav (talk ) 09:36, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

Images

 * Darth Nyne, several months ago, I approached you about possibly doing some image work for the ongoing Force Exile series. In particular, I'm in need of a pair of book covers, but we can discuss other possibilities as well if you are interested. If you're interested, you can reach me via SWF or at Atarumaster88 (at) Wookieepedia Dot Com and we can hash out the particulars. Thanks. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:02, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
 * It was awhile ago. Anyway, I had been working with Solus on previous covers, so you can check his talk pages/archives for the kind of interaction that we had. As for the cover, Force Exile III: Liberator has a partially completed cover by Solus, which I had marked up for a few revisions. You can see it here . Now, here's what the revisions mean: "Let's move Milya (the brunette) down to be parallel with Selu (down and center) and move Sarth (top male, wearing earpiece) to be above and between them, for the left side of the cover. There's a bit of greenish nebula blur between Revan and Doriana, and I'd prefer we just use more of the Revan pic to fill that in so it's not overlapping with the Yanibar scene. At the left end of the Yanibar scene, can you go ahead and extend that until it's borderline with Selu's arm-don't worry about that if it's too much trouble, but I basically am trying to avoid seeing any direct border between the nebula and the Yanibar scene (Twi'lek attacking scouttroopers). On the "A" note, I'm assuming you plan on restoring the original color scheme of the nebula-it looks a bit . . . green. On the "B" note, I've placed a swatch of color that more accurately depicts what I was going for with the jade green background. There also should be some polishing; the male on the bottom center should be carrying a green-bladed lightsaber and there are lighting, hair touchups that haven't been made yet." For the sake of consistency with the first two books, if you could use the same title block/style as Solus did on, say,, that would be wonderful. I believe he was using PhotoShop, but I'm not sure. I apologize for there not being a lot of creativity room on this cover; I assure you that with Yanibar Tales, there'll be a lot more freedom. Anyway, thank you very much for your help and let me know if you have any other questions/concerns. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:24, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Update posted on my talk page; you'll find most of the images you need there; I'm working on that last one. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:16, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Final upload completed; the prop will need to be replaced by a proper lightsaber and blade, of course. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:17, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Requested a few changes on my talk page. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:19, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Very impressed. One last thing that should be easy, but I like it a lot! Great job on the Darth Vader image; it fits well. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:45, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Darth Nyne, I like what you've done with the cover. Thanks for making that. On an afterthought, Vic and I agreed that a minor tweak is needed to the wording if it's not too much trouble; the details are here. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:12, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The "Force Exile" still looks a little hard to read. Can you darken that particular line by a couple shades or move it up into the shaded title block part completely? Thanks again, and sorry for all the revisions. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:25, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * As they say in Hollywood "That's a wrap!" You're the best. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:18, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Simiyar Tech
I hope you don't mind, but I plan to link a new Project Cruentus article to Simiyar Tech; if you have an issue with this, please notify me. iChat What I've done 10:16, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Re:Darth Nyne
I'll read it, but I can't promise when. There's a massive amount of current FAs to review to see if they're still up to the new Featured Article Requirements, and I'm working on a few potential FAs of my own along with my fan fiction. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 01:38, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Image request
Nyne, will you take an image request for me, as Solus recommended you? Just a fairly simple photoshop job: I need the face of a Rodian (such as this one transplanted onto the face of this guy or this guy, whichever you prefer. I'm not concerned if it turns out like crap; speed over quality is more of a priority here. If you could do it, I'd be grateful. Unit 8311 20:26, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * That's great! Much better than I expected, in fact! Great job! Could you upload it for me? Unit 8311 20:12, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'll upload it myself. I just asked because I didn't have time to upload it myself then. Thanks again. EDIT: Oh, and I have another request: could you fill up Battle of Kopalnia (Cruentusian War), which is technically finished but still stubby? Don't worry about continuity errors; me or tom will clean them up if necessary. Unit 8311 12:49, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

Yanibar Tales
Nyne, I've got the cover for the next book (Yanibar Tales) laid out, if you're ready. It should be easier to do than the FE III one, and if you still have that in your PhotoShop format, it might make it easier for you (hopefully).
 * Main background image:
 * Bottom center-right. This image, with lightsaber blade fully extended.
 * Bottom right corner. |This image
 * Above and somewhat in between those two. this image.
 * Use the same title/lower block as from the FE III cover. Position the title banner just above those clouds please. Also, replace the Imperial logo with this image. (Or at least, a monocolor version. I can try and get you one with the lines and color removed if that would help).
 * Thanks again, Darth Nyne, for your hard and detailed work. It's great stuff. You've been appropriately credited in the back of FE III (the print version) and you will be for any future works. I've listed your full name there; if you wish it removed, just let me know.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 00:30, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Just curious, what is the status of the cover? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:34, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

Opps
Could you please see Forum:Project Cruentus: Stay or leave?. Thanks. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 21:36, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Simiyar go BOOM
Dunno if you're still active to see this, but Simiyar Tech is no more. Feel free to comment on the forum. Unit 8311 Talk!  18:50, 24 November 2008 (UTC)