User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapter 5 released!/@comment-300259-20130228025220

Very good read. Nice to see that the teenage drama that dominated the previous chapters (which, the purpose of establishing backstory, was necessary, I know) was traded in for some action/adventure in this chapter. The chapter was delightfully suspenseful, a welcome change as the previous chapters were not really page-turners like this one turned out to be. The first page or two was a little long-winded, IMO, and a few times I could not help but think "For the love of God, just get on with it already!" Overall, this little chapter did well to continue the cliffhanger at the closing of its predecessor and did well at carrying the ball up until the end, although I hate you for making it end on another cliffhanger. March 15, I wait for you.