User blog:Nightmare975/Imperial Treachery, now with less ;'s!

Phew! After weeks of trying to keep in touch with my editor, the two of us finally completed the revisions to the first three chapters! One of the first things you'll notice is that my addiction to semi-colons has been almost destroyed. You'll also notice that Issard is nowhere to be found. And hopefully, the story is a lot easier to follow.


 * Chapter One Pages 1-8
 * Chapter Two Pages 9-19
 * Chapter Three Pages 20-26

Read them, and enjoy! I hope to have chapter 4 done before the end of October. But that'll never happen.

I'll see you on the dark side...

-- Josh Bender Talk 20:35, September 25, 2009 (UTC)