Forum:Project Cruentus/13

Further Discussion
As of right now, due to the Star Wars Fanon:Clan policy, or project is a clan. --Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 04:53, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Unit:I have finished the last 2 DKA people. Please add images to your liking. With the battle, cool. I was hoping my DTM could actually battle the Sravs for once but next time. --Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 00:16, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, I noticed, and I've added images to all but the last one. I'll add a bit to the battle, and I have a proposition for you: make a skirmish were the Savis learn of Vac alliance remnants. They decide that if you start a job, you finish it, and go over there and largely pwn them. Your say? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  14:55, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Your on! . (I always wanted to use the Savis!)--Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 23:09, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I like your enthusiasm. Here's a planet you could use: Lanma. If you need pics or ideas, just call.  Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  16:13, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
 * So far so good, but I had to change a continuity blooper, unless Dofine is actually Jesus in disguise and resurrected himself from the dead. Anyway, carry on, I'll change any mistakes if I see 'em.  Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  15:11, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Excuse me? We don't have a leader or ranks or anything. --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] (talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 06:38, 4 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Thats what Rhea and Victor told me on the IRC. NOTE: Skirmish on Lanma (Cruentusian War) is done. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 07:29, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
 * This isn't a clan. It's a collobrative project. We work on producing constructive articles. Didn't we already have this at the beginning of the project? Anyway, Arav, fine. Tom, you think I should start on the Makakson-napalm battle, or should we have some more filler before that? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  10:59, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
 * More filler. And I'll hope to have Ankarr finished this weekend. --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 11:44, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. In that case, I have an idea for Arav: the DKA tries to infiltrate the Srav capital on Sviat to assassinate Yuiln himself, but get beaten back by Vergulva and the Crimson Elite Guard. Nonetheless, the Sravs are still shaken by the fact that they're not 100% safe even on their homeworld. Thoughts? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  11:46, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

Arav, or Unit, if you need help creating an article with the Savis, I'm more than willing to help. I apologize once more for not being around to help; but I'm going to take a look through the articles, so I'm up-to-date with what's going on. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 21:20, 4 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Joe: Wonderfull, if you see Skirmish on Lanma (Cruentusian War), I have made a article for them. It's a warship for them. Hyperblast. You can add to that if you wish and please add to the main article of the Savis, the Savi Alliance. Unit:Ok. I was wondering if we could make that one a colab. What do you think?--<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 01:06, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, I think I bit off more than I wanted to chew when I signed up for this Project. Lol, Arav: "I always wanted to use Joe's faction!" -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 03:31, 5 October 2008 (UTC)


 * There a massive army of mercenaries. Who wouldn't want to use em'? --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 04:50, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Alright guys. Arav, let me find the images I want and I'll start it, and you can add some stuff to it if you want. Joe: your Savis will be playing roles in the future, so stick around. :) Oh, and I think you could add to the Savi Alliance page a bit. It's kinda sparse compared to the other faction pages. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  14:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Sure thing. I'll have it up-to-date within the next few days. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 14:59, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

I just read the Cruentusian War page, so I'm all caught up. Also, I've thought of an idea for my Savis: it seems like they've gotten beaten up by pretty much all of the big factions, right? So you'd think they would want revenge. Let's say the Savis discover that the Necasians are planning to attack a Srav-controlled planet with some valuable resource; and the Savis see their chance. They send some soldiers onto the planet to deploy mines and and explosives and the like, and when the Necasians attack, they detonate them while watching from afar, resulting in heavy losses for both sides. Now, the Necasians are outraged by this move; yet the Sravs see the strength of the Savis and potential of hiring some soldiers. So they hire X of X soldiers with some of their backup funding, and this helps them greatly in the war. This is just a starting point. Thoughts? -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 15:52, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I like. I was also thinking that the Sravs would enlist the Savis later in a campaign against the Zayre, and this idea could spur that on. Perhaps the Savis could make use of KRUD missiles, which are cheap and disposable. EDIT: Arav, the DKA mission is started. Joe: I've taken the liberty of making a Savi commander: Holst Kolgan. Thoughts? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  16:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I've made my edits to the Battle of Ankarr (Cruentusian War), Unit. I did roughly the same amount as you did for the Skirmish on Ankarr (Cruentusian War). Shall we swap over, then? --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 19:52, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Not much you could add to the skirmish, though, but I look forward to see what you come up with. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  19:54, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Unit: Smackdown FTW. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 00:14, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay...anyway, do you want to start your Savi battle? You can use one of Arav's crazy planet survivors or a canon planet-- comes to mind. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  15:16, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

Dude...you don't get it? Holst Kolgan sounds nothing like Hulk Hogan. Yeah. Oh, and yeah, about the battle. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 21:24, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, I see. Do you want to start the Savi battle, or should I do that? Also, which planet option do you prefer? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  13:52, 11 October 2008 (UTC)


 * I need to get caught back up on where Simiyar fits in, and who's currently in control of the moon and the Tech, but I would think it might be time to start working on some upgrades to their original designs, and possibly a change of leadership, Macab could use a Death sentence and have whichever faction has been holding them hostage put in a puppet "CEO" to assure Simiyar stays on their page and starts providing to one side only.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 03:42, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * So far Simiyar has faded into the background for now; the only real new thing that's come from them is the Rapier combat bike, made by kidnapped Simiyar techs. Currently, they haven't changed since the skirmish on Simiyar, and I think Macab should stay for now, so that we can have a good reason for the destruction of Simiyar later on. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  17:16, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

If you could create the article, that'd be great. I'll build on it once you have the base down. As for the planet, Toydaria seems reasonable. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 22:39, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Started. Also, I have an idea for a Savi hero: Rafe Taker, a Chiss woman in exile who has decided to become a merc and signs up with the Savis. She's got minor Force powers, such as sensing other's presence, but regards them as natural telepathy. Thoughts? EDIT: To Mav, the pivotal Janos battle is started. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  15:08, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't have any ideas for it at the moment. When it fills up and/or I come up with something, I'll run it through here first then add it if it fits. I was thinking, IIRC, in our past conversation about the UCW, that we decided that it they wouldn't support concepts such as democracy or freedom of speech. Well I was thinking if it could be altered slightly. I was thinking that, they could remain as unsupportive for democracy, but instead of being unsupportive for freedom of speech, they could have "Humano-centric specieism" (if that's the term), much like the Empire had. Thoughts? Darth mavoc (Talk) 06:16, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
 * That's not a problem; I already have most of it planned out anyway, but you can add stuff if you want. Hmm...interesting idea, but I guess they'd have to be humanoid-centric, if they wanted the support of multiple planets. And maybe they could have freedom of speech, but have a blasé attitude towards it, in that the leaders don't really give a crap what the people think. Your thoughts? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  16:26, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nice job all. I will start on a new battle with Bothian natives again, soon. They attack a DTM controlled planet and they put up a fight. DTM enilate them. Unit:Thanks for finishing our article. I have been doing alot of sport practice. :)--<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 04:48, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Arav: cool. BTW, why is there so much hatin' between the DTM and Bothawui? You never seemed to have explained that. And I think that by now the DTM will have other stuff on their minds than the Boths (although of course the reverse can well be true). Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  14:57, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Is is possible for me to join the project?
 * Yes. Welcome aboard!Also, please tell us you want to do here. To get as much info about the project as possiable, please try to read most of the battles and Factions. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 02:48, 18 October 2008 (UTC)

Actually, it would be more efficient if you just read the Cruentusian War article. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 03:13, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Finished my content additions to the Battle of Tahu (Cruentusian War). --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 10:17, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Great job. I'll nominate it ASAP, if that's alright. Unit 8311  Talk!  16:43, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Still needs spellcheck and italicization of ship names. --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 16:44, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Took the liberty of starting the first superweapon battle. EDIT:Obi, next battle has been decided to have the Savis as well, so stick around. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  19:44, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok I had the first Taung Confederacy battle completed, and if it is ok with u Unit, I would have them attack Hypori.
 * I finished it off with spelling and images and stuff. And let's go for another planet: Sevastopolitan. Also, wait a few more battles, as the aftermath has them waiting a few months before attacking. You can plan the battle on a user subpage, though. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  21:06, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Sorry for my late response, Unit: That sounds like a good idea, but I wouldn't want her to have force powers. I'd like to focus on her unselfishness, and her strength as a leader. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 23:56, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Bearing in mind that her force powers are extremely limited and weak, and she focuses more on physical skill. If you want to develop the character further, be my guest. Also check out the latest Savi battle.  Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  18:32, 5 November 2008 (UTC)