Talk:One Year War

I personally don't see the point of this article. There's a lot of contradicting information; the infobox states that the war started in 444 BBY and ended in 445 BBY [sic], while in the text, the starting date is said to be 420 ABY and the ending date is again 445 BBY [sic]. The Battle of Trengganu is said to be the first space battle in history&mdash;while the article describes other battles before it and features the galactic government known as the Galactic Republic. In addition, there are numerous OOU remarks; "January", "GMT" and so on. POV problems are also common: "deadliest"; "innocent" etc. The tense is incorrect throughout the article, featuring twisted and nonsensical sentences, although this is can be attributed for the fact that the author is not a native speaker of English. And one final error: "Galactic Republic" is nearly always written as "GALACTIC REPUBLIC". &mdash; TK-999  (Comm channel) (Campaign of conquest) 11:34, January 30, 2011 (UTC)