User talk:Darth tom/IV

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E-mail
I'll reply shortly. --Victor (talk) 18:03, 18 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Done, I replied with a bit of revision on some of the questions. Also, is that image of a Zayre really necessary here on your talk page? I see nothing wrong with having an image up top, like Brandon and I have, but yours is tall, so it makes a big difference. --Victor  (talk) 18:11, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, please. --Victor (talk) 18:25, 18 May 2008 (UTC)


 * The crossword and the answers do not match up. --Victor (talk) 19:27, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

I already checked, and it doesn't match up. I'm redoing it, so don't worry. I'll upload it over the old one. --Victor (talk) 19:48, 18 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Done. --Victor (talk) 20:25, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Sponsor
What does a sponsorship get me? - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 18:54, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, okay. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 19:09, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

thank you for the nice greeting, my buddy joey who is known as obi maul12 helped me create this account. do you know him?

Thats cool. Sorry about the signature thing. Baseball1414 19:56, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

Welcome Back
Thanks a lot, man. Oh, yea, and, two things; 1) I will do the reviews for this week and 2) Dont worry, I haven't forgotten about Project Cruentus. I will start working on it soon, rest assured. :) -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 19:20, 21 May 2008 (UTC)


 * And what is offensive about saying I don't have any good articles? I know that, and I'm working toawrds getting some now. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 19:42, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

ACE Comics
Hello Darth Tom. Wow, remember on Wookieepedia, when we first began talking and you joined the ACE comics. Well, we understood why you left. Elijah, if you remember him, the leader, took it hard but is ok.

Just recently, we lost Calvin, the weapons-master of the group, leaving me and Elijah. You won't believe how we lost him. The ACE comics are no more. We had to part ways. It's to bad. Oh well. Just keeping you posted. Goodbye, old friend.

Most sincerely, user:jedimasteraust

Editor
Yeah, sure. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 18:41, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Cruentus
Hey, Tom. I posted a message on the Cruentus page relating to your question, but here it is anyway because it's piling up above other comments:

"Tom: On the Cruentusian War page, it says there are four combatants. You all are attempting to protect and regain territory of the Rakatan Infinite Empire, right? Or is it 2v2? Or Free for all, four opponents battling each other, survival of the fittest? Never mind. The case here is that the slaves are fighting against the rear guard of the Rakatans. If so, I would like to be on a neutral side, sending mercenaries to people willing to pay. That would be why we would need a five way war box; it would include a box for the mercenaries and their commanders. -- Joe Butler  (Obi Maul12)   talk  20:39, 22 May 2008 (UTC)" -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 00:43, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Tom, I think you're definitely ready to be an Hp. Can I nominate you? -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 10:57, 23 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Darth Nyne has suggested that you use some of my mercenaries towards the end of the war (see the Cruentus froum page). What do you think? -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 15:40, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Okay. I'll get back to you in a few minutes with my opinion on the layout. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 15:43, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Layout meaning the article we'd make. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 15:44, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Also, I'm doing the FA/GA updates now. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 15:44, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Meaning the negotiations between the Savi Alliance and the Necasian Military. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 15:47, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Below is the FA review. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 16:59, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

When this article first greeted me on the main page, I knew this wasn’t going to be my most positive review, unfortunately. Although I enjoy seeing collaboration on SWFanon, and though I enjoy CIS droid articles, I believe that this article carries it a bit too far for my liking. It seems to me that this is a rather typical Mary Sue. For example: "Never thought I'd have an opponent so weak"

- Darth Tyler

That’s the kind of stuff I’m talking about.

While I enjoyed reading the battle between Unit 8311 and Darth Tyler, I found it incredibly ridiculous that a feeble droid such as Tyler could have survived the entire battle against 8311. No matter how connected this droid was to the force, a simple blaster bolt from 8311 could disintegrate him.

The battle itself, on the other hand, was written well, and is definitely more believable than the duel. It was written in enough detail to give a clear picture of what was happening, yet it doesn’t give too many details to clog up the readers’ minds.

The images are definitely creative, but they come out too blurry to seem realistic. Lastly, I just want to say that I can’t picture a droid such as Tyler talking how he does, with his (and 8311’s) swearing, but maybe that’s just me. All in all, I would enjoy this battle more if it was molded into a more believable and less Mary Sue-ish article.

RE:WeeGee request
Sadly, he is not running at the moment, as my old computer crashed and died and I lost all of the files necessary to run WeeGee. However, I will try to get him back up and running soon. Thanks for the greeting. :) --  JM  76  Ask   Archives   17:58, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yup, of course I'll tell you. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 09:24, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Question
I would catagorize my Borvo's ship pages but havent figured out how.

Borvo's fan
If you know could you tell me?

Borvo's fan
do you mean like this? (starships)--Borvo&#39;s fan 18:17, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Borvo's fan
I put [Category:starships]] but nothing happened

New members

 * Tom, when helping new members, it's easiest just to type , then  , followed by   . For example, you'll want to type    when showing them how to add categories. --  Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 18:49, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

User page
Do you need help with the coding on your user page? --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 19:26, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I'll try and figure it out. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 19:28, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Sure, send it on over via talk page or e-mail, preferably the latter. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 19:31, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Fixed your page. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 19:35, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Alright. I'll get a review back to you later tonight or perhaps tomorrow. I have to go ... for now... --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 19:38, 24 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Yeah, sure thing. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 18:20, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

Re:Hello
Thanks! Don't worry about images, since I have no clue how to upload them. Got accounts on Wookieepedia, Wikipedia, and now here, yet have not uploaded one image.--Jedi Kasra 06:43, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Is it OK of I create an article on a Jedi character?--Jedi Kasra 17:21, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Re:Legacy of Rella
Sure, I'll be glad to... where should I start?£litolu | Talk to me | Star Wars: Aftermaths | 14:51, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

I'm done with the article£litolu | Talk to me | Star Wars: Aftermaths | 15:39, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the opportuny£litolu | Talk to me | Star Wars: Aftermaths | 15:51, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

This week
Sorry to hear about whatever happened. Since it's the US Memorial Day today I won't be able to do it until later, but I will certainly do it. Also, having just glanced at it, I see that you won't be able to do an issue two weeks from now. I'd be happy to put that one together for you just so we don't miss a week. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 17:52, 26 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I hope everything turns out for the best. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 18:59, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

I haven't gotten it out yet because of Memorial Day and because I wanted to finish up my next chapter in The Chosen One as it's been delayed for about a week now, but I will get the newsletter out for you today (Tuesday). - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 05:28, 27 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I just finished editing. Since you seem to be online today, do you want to distribute it or should I? - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 16:00, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

RE:Review
Indeed it is; thanks a lot! I plan on becoming active on it soon. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 15:42, 27 May 2008 (UTC)