HP:Darth Krayt

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Review

 * 1) It's good. A quick read-through to correct maybe one or two grammar mistakes and this'll be good to go. The only real instances that I particularly noticed was that, under the header 'The Successors War', twice the word 'to' is used instead of the proper word 'too,' and both in the same sentence. Just under Darth Krayt's quote in the same heading, the word 'Dark Lord's' is used as the plural (one of the greatest Dark Lord's ever) instead of 'Dark Lords' (one of the greatest Dark Lords ever). - Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:11, 15 July 2007 (UTC)