Shocker Venn

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Description 	This is a picture of Shocker Venn after his final upgrade. As you can see he resembles General Grievous quite a bit because the geanosian who made his cyborg body also created the designs for Grievous’s. Author/Artist 	Unknown Editing details 	No editing. Licensing 	{{fair use}}

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|name=Shocker Venn |home world=Unknown (thought to be Dantooine) |birth= Unknown (around the time of Nomi Sunrider) |death= NA |species= Human |gender= Male |hair= None (Used to be brown) |eyes= Brown |height= 2.16 meters |cyber= completely cybernetic except for his brain, some vital organs, 	 and his blood stream. |allies= Master Zendara, Dakk Tred, Jazz Tyrie, Nomi Sunrider, Aayla Secura, Shaak Ti, & Jada Celectia |enemies= Darth Ragnos, Darth Savage, Darth Omnis. |fighting style= Shocker has mastered every lightsaber fighting style in existence and has created two new ones: A style that is later used by General Grievous and dual wielding saber staphs. |profession= Jedi master & warier |position= Jedi master |era= Ancient Republic to the New Republic (he is very long lived) |affiliation= Old Republic & the Jedi remnants (during the jedi purge) |master= Master Zendara |apprentice= Gi'onsi'gs, Derak, Alean, Oshia, Sarcoo, Pa’corr, Belee, & Ezeel (Last names not known).
 * saber= Too numerous to name here. See the powers and abilities section for a list of his lightsaber styles.

Shocker Venn was a human cyborg jedi master who was born around the time of Nomi Sunrider. He lived for a long time (up even through the Galactic Civil war era & even through the New Republic era). He lived at the jedi academy on Dantooine, but moved to Shaak Ti’s academy on Felucia during the Galactic civil war. His sole perpose

Origins Shocker Venn started out as a Jedi in the Old Republic around the time of Nomi Sunrider. He was a brown-haired, brown-eyed lad who was raised on Dantooine. He was trained by Jedi Master Zendara, An extremely talented Human Female who went blind during one of her missions. Shocker was considered the 'perfect' jedi pupil at his academy on Dantooine. While there, Shocker trained wih several other students including a young Nomi Sunrider, his best friend Dakk Tred, his jealous rival Chah'lee Chez, and the love of his life, Jasmine 'Jazz' Tyrie. One day, when shocker was still a young apprentice, Shocker & Jazz were sent into a cave on Dantooine to build their lightsabers when Shocker met a Sith who had been hiding in the caves. The sith (calling himself the Nameless One) Fought with Shocker and warned him that if he went on his first mission, he would in time, join the dark side as The Nameless One had. Shocker ignored the Nameless One and went on that fateful mission. [edit] The Mission Shocker's mission was simple. An experimental power core was stolen and he and Jazz had to retrieve it. Shocker tracked the power core to Koriban where he fought many disciples of the famed Marka Ragnos. Upon reaching a palace on koriban, Shocker fought Darth Ragnos, who had the power core, but was soundly defeated by the sith lord, who cut off his arm before escaping in his starship. Secretly seeking revenge, Shocker tracked the disciples of Ragnos for years afterwards until he was a knight. Then, the jedi council on Dantooine called him up for a galactic emergency. [edit] The Crisis On the planet Malachor V, Darth Ragnos had constructed a weapon known as the Dark Sun, using the power core that Shocker had failed to retrieve when he was an apprentice. As a raging battle ensued outside of Malachore V between the Republic and the Sith, Shocker, Jazz, and Chah'lee, along with many other jedi were sent in a small fighter craft to Infiltrate the Dark Sun and destroy it. The Dark Sun Powered the dark force energy over 10,000 times greater than it should possibly be and it began to get to Shocker. The team infiltrated the Dark Sun, But only Shocker made it to the core room where the sith who was controlling the Dark Sun was. The sith, who was Ragnos's greatest disciple Darth Savage, fought Shocker using the Dark Sun to enhance his powers. Shocker, giving into the dark side for one moment, used the Dark Sun to enhance his own powers and killed Savage. He then used a super force push that destroyed the Dark Sun and the sith army that had gathered around it. The mission was the most successful mission Shocker ever went on and he was promoted to jedi master for it. When he got back to Dantooine, he took Jazz on a picnic alone in the hillsides. While there, Shocker saw the Nameless One watching him. Shocker confronted the nameless one who only told him "Today, you reap your rewards,” Just then, Shocker's friend Chah'lee stopped by. Jealous of him and Jazz and filled with the dark side from being too close to the core of the Dark Sun, he struck down Jazz, killing her and dismembered Shocker, leaving him for dead. That day, a group of Ragnos's disciples raided and destroyed Shocker's academy in revenge for destroying their master's greatest disciple. [edit] The Machine When Shocker awoke, he was in a lab with a cyborg geanosian testing him. The geanosian, whose name was Gi'onsi'gs or just 'Geo', had built Shocker a droid body resembling an ancient magna guard. Geo informed Shocker that he was built to fight in the geanosian arena and if he did well enough, the geanosians would set him free. Shocker, with no other option, fought many creatures in the geanosian arena. On his final battle, Shocker was forced to fight a female cathar sith who claimed to have killed Shocker's master Zendara. Fighting out of rage, Shocker defeated the cathar but in the end let her live. When he went back to Geo, the geanosian said that he would let Shocker live if he taught the force-sensitive geanosian in the ways of the force. Shocker agreed and trained Geo as his first apprentice. Shocker also helped rid geanosis of Sith invaders & he became a legendary geanosian war hero. A Thousand Years Pass Shocker eventually left Geanosis and traveled the galaxy with Geo. He hunted the sith with such anger & persistence that the sith became almost unheard of. During the 'lost period', where he was never heard of for some time, Shocker trained in and mastered every lightsaber style known to the jedi and sith and he even created two other styles of his own, one that would later be used by the famed General Grievous. Around the time of the battle of Naboo, Geo upgraded Shocker's armor. Shocker's old magna guard body was replaced with a armored prototype body resembling General Grievous's. During the clone wars, Shocker fought many times against the CIS, although mainly without the Republic knowing it, for he knew that the Republic was corrupt and he didn't want to fight for a corrupt system. He even fought against Asajj Ventress & Sev'rance Tann on a couple occasions. The Change During the end of the clone wars, Shocker was on Felucia. He saved a twi'lek jedi Aayla Secura from a droid ambush but in the process revealed himself to her. Aayla, mistaking him for General Grievous, attacked him but Shocker was able to convince her that he wasn't the famed CIS general. During the month or so on Felucia, Shocker grew close to Aayla but that all changed when he accompanied her on what would be her final mission. Shocker went and scouted ahead while Aayla stayed back with the troops. Shocker didn't get very far when he heard gunfire. He rushed back to see Aayla getting shot by the clones. Enraged once again, Shocker killed the entire squad of clone with a single death field, draining the life out of all of the clones. He then transferred their life essences into Aayla's body, keeping her in a state between alive and dead. Shocker carried Aayla's stassised body to a cave where he hid until Jedi Master Shaak Ti arrived on Felucia, where she was planning to build an academy to train force sensitives to stop Darth Vader. Mistaking Shocker for General Grievous, Shaak Ti attacked him but Shocker was able to convince the jedi master that he was not Grievous. Shocker joined the academy, but mainly lived underground where Geo had made a secret lab. That was where Geo was experimenting on Aayla to see if he could bring her out of stasis. He was also creating a droid army to help defeat the Empire. The Students At Shaak Ti's academy, Shocker was given a choice of apprentices to train. Of all the young force sensitives in the academy, Shocker only chose 7 to train (a very small amount compared to the amount of students Shaak Ti had to train). He chose Darek, a human male who used a saber staph, as well as Alean, a human female & a fine dualist with a curved saber, Oshia, a Twi'lek female who used 2 lightsabers, Sarcoo, a male Rodian who used a magna-staph styled saber, Pa’corr, a male Kel Dorr who used a single orange saber, Belee, a female bothan who used 2 curved sabers, and Ezeel, a dark side female Zabrak who used 2 tafona-style sabers. He trained all of them to be the first jedi of their class: the Jedi assassin. These jedi focused on eliminating their targets behind enemy territory and come out alive. Shocker trained them to be brutal and self sufficient & he trained them in both the ways of the light & the dark sides. To Shocker, neither side was evil but both were necessary to bring balance to the force. So his students were considered questionable as jedi or sith. The tests Another jedi master who was at the academy was a fully robotic entity claiming to be Master Sifo-Dyas. His Mind, he said, had possessed an experimental robot just before he died. Sifo-Dyas told Shocker that it was time for his students to be tested to see if they could become jedi knights. Sifo-Dyas gave Shocker's students 4 planets to go to for their tests. For their first test, the trial of the flesh, they would go to Mustifar and retrieve a sacred medallion. Shocker secretly accompanied his students on all of their tests, simply because he was an untrusting person and he really didn't trust this Sifo-Dyas guy. While on Mustifar, Oshia met a mysterious sith lord, calling himself the Nameless One, who fought her and shocked her into submission. She broke free from the pain and slashed at the Nameless One. The Nameless One just said "Good, you now have your first lesson learned." then he disappeared into the smoke, leaving the medallion behind. For their second trial, the trail of the mind, Sifo-Dyas sent Shocker's apprentices to Ilyum's caves to retrieve another medallion. The caves were suppose to inflict horrid nightmares upon whoever entered them and required great control over the mind to separate what was real and what was fake. Derak was faced by the Nameless One who appeared as a giant dark robed sith with fire appearing out of his limbs. He fought Derak until Derak was able to break free from The Nameless One and it was revealed the Nameless One had used force fear on Derak. Breaking free, the Nameless One no longer looked as fiery & he just replied "Good," and left, leaving the medallion behind himself. For their third trial, Shocker's apprentices were sent to Koriban to defeat a sith lord and take his medallion for their trial of skill. Ezeel, who was more dark side than light, was faced by the Nameless One who had previously killed the dark lord that she was supposed to face and had taken his medallion. Ezeel attacked the Nameless One, who easily blocked her every move. She even tried force lightning on him several times which he blocked and at one occasion absorbed. He replied to her "You use your anger, which is good, but if you can only use your force to bring harm to others you have missed the path of the jedi and the sith. The force doesn't want to be used to end lives, but to save them. Notice, I have never attacked you, yet you are the one who stands here defeated. It is because the force would prefer to protect its user rather than kill the user's enemy because the user is angry at him,” Upon hearing this, Ezeel sat and meditated. The Nameless One went to strike her with his lightsaber but Ezeel stopped his saber in mid air by using the force. The Nameless one said "Good. You now understand true skill,” When she looked up from her meditation, the Nameless One was gone as if he had never been there at all. The only thing that was left was the medallion. The final test For their final test, Master Sifo-Dyas sent Shocker's apprentices to Malachor V. They had to enter a temple there using the medallions. They all entered the temple where there wad a pillar in the middle of the room with 3 slots to hold the medallions with. There were also 5 places to stand, each marked with their species and gender. They stood in the places and placed the medallions in the slots. Just the master Sifo-Dyas entered and used force lightning on Shocker's apprentices, revealing to them that he was not really Sifo-Dyas, but an ancient sith called Darth Omnis. He needed the apprentices to activate the temple because, in ancient prophecy, only a 2 humans (one male, one female), a twi'lek, a zabrak, a rodian, and a kel dorr could activate the temple's pillar and awaken the remains of the Dark Sun. Darth Omnis used the Dark Sun's force enhancing powers to stasis Shocker's apprentices. But Derak was able to break free and free his friends from the stasis field. Omnis then brought the thick temple stones around himself, making a gigantic new body. He the used force lightning like none of the apprentices had ever felt before. Oshia was able to resist the pain, and sent the force lightning back at Darth Omnis, destroying one of his arms. Using the Dark Sun, Darth Omnis took control of the apprentice's lightsabers and used them to attack their owners. Ezeel, however, was able to put a force-field around her fellow apprentices, protecting them from Omnis's attacks. Omnis, growing very angry, sent the most powerful beam of force lightning into Ezeel, but the force deflected the beam back at Darth Omnis, destroying his outer shell. Just then, Shocker landed in front of Omnis from the ceiling and with one sure blow, destroyed the sith lord. He congratulated his apprentices saying "If it were up to me, you would all be masters. For now you will have to settle with being Knights." The Rebellion Shocker, while hating the empire, distrusted the rebellion and fought many times against them. Shocker and his apprentices fought many times through out the galactic civil war against both sides, even fighting them both at once on many an occasion. Even when the rebellion took control and made the New Republic, Shocker didn't fight for them. He was constantly at odds with the New Republic, for he believed that a galactic government would only corrupt with time as he had seen many governments rise and fall throughout his life. He fought so that every system could be free and independent worlds that didn't have to join some giant leviathan government. Jada Geo called up shocker and told him that he had revived Aayla under the new name of Jada Celectia (this was during the galactic civil war). Geo had to replace some of her organs with mechanical ones far ahead of his time, but that only made her faster, stronger, more durable, and it made her able to stay young for a very long time. Shocker was overjoyed and brought Jada along with him and trained her. Jada had no memory of ever being Aayla and it was better that way Shocker believed. Jada helped Shocker become a light jedi instead of one who used the dark side a lot. She also helped him through many hard times and the two were practically inseparable. They both fought to free worlds and probably still do. Powers and abilities. Shocker is a cyborg jedi with enhanced strength, durability, and speed. His body’s design was based on General Grievous’s body. He has over 4000 years of combat experience and has mastered every lightsaber combat style there is (he even made two lightsaber combat styles of his own). He has mastered the use of up to 4 normal lightsabers, curved lightsabers, and tonfa-style lightsabers. He has also mastered combat with the staph saber and has even mastered dual wielding staph sabers. He doesn’t focus too much on the force but he is fluent enough to face 2 sith masters in a force battle. Shocker’s most unique power is a force sense that allows him to sense the weakest point in a vehicle, a building, etc. It also allows him to sense flaws in an opponent’s fighting style, usually giving himself the advantage. Personality and Traits When Shocker was young, before he got his cyborg body, he was the ‘perfect’ jedi apprentice. He didn’t have a very independent spirit and was the most polite person on the face of Dantooine. When he was older, he was still the ‘perfect’ jedi, constantly referring to the jedi code and following orders without question, and was still the most polite person on the face of Dantooine. When Shocker got his cyborg body, his personality was shaken. Before, he had everything he could have ever wanted: power (enough to be content with), respect, and even his girl. The day he became a cyborg, he lost it all & he looked rather hideous. He became brutal, ruthless, and angry. With thousands of years of experience, he viewed his enemies as weak and not worthy of mercy, with whom he would dispose of by the cruelest means possible. As time went on his demeanor became less and less human-like and more-and-more droid-like. By the time of the jedi purge, he was quite emotionless except for his dry, bitterly cutting sense of humor and his anger. He always showed his authority through intimidation and was very mean, even to his allies. The only person that could ever drag the least bit of humanity out of him was Aayla Secura, and later Jada Celectia. Around her, he was kind and had a sad demeanor that she usually cheered up.

Behind the Scenes

•	Shocker Venn was actually my brother’s creation, I just posted him here because he didn’t know how. The moment me and my brother saw Star Wars Episode 3, it was a race to who could create the best General Grievous rip-off (that wasn’t too closely based on the character) the fastest. My character was actually the remains of Stass Allie constructed into the remains of Grievous’s body. This, however, didn’t work as well as my brother’s masterpiece, Shocker. After hearing about Shocker I just had to post him here as my first fan-fiction article (my brother is happy that I was able to finally able to post him here and let me use him here). Appearances None yet, maybe sometime in the future (If you would like to use him in any official and/or unofficial books or comic books, it would be a great way to revive General Grievous for all of those fans who desperately want General Grievous back. If you do, just mention that he was created here by Andrew).

See Also Coming Soon! A list of minor characters listed in the Shocker saga (His apprentices, Darth Omnis, etc.)

Succession Box Predecessor(s): Master Zendara Successor(s): Derak, Oshia, Pa’corr, Alean, Sarcoo, Ezeel, & Belee (his apprentices).

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