HP:Burt Drewton

This is the High Priest review of Burt Drewton.

Support (3 High Priests/7 users/10 total)

 * 1) If this is chosen as a GA, it will be my first good article. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 15:57, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Very original, spell check comes up clean. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:01, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Per Tom.--Arav (talk ) 06:25, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) I... whatever. -MPK 15:26, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) i'm in favor of this winning mainly because of how nice the photo-novel looks. its a sharp piece. and the main guys aren't exactly weak wither. give it a read before you cast your about the page. user: Darth Depressis
 * 6) Great job. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 13:52, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) I have decided to go ahead and support this article.
 * 8) Per Tom.  Wing   msg 21:29, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) I support this as a GA, it's inventive and the story as a whole is interesting, I will say prior to pushing it for FA I'd like to see what TOM pointed out the headers are slightly confusing the way they are right now... and I know that my GA had to have some Header cleaning before it was accepted.  Other than that, inventive, original, an all around good piece gratz  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 04:30, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Good enough. --Victor (talk) 23:08, 17 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
==Biography==
 * 1) The spell check comes up clean, but I'd like to see the headers sorted out, as I mentioned to you on your talk page. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 20:45, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I don't really know what you mean by sorting out the headers, unless if you mean having sections combined. The formating is done correctly.  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:24, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **I mean having the sections that are the ones that are meant to be large sections, with smaller ones inside to have only two == signs on either side, so that they're headers, for example, the section 'Peace Keepers'. By making it a header, a gray line appears beneath it, and this shows it's a header. Otherwise, it just looks like all of the other sections, and you can't tell the difference. To do this, just type ==Peace Keepers== and it'll be sorted out. If what you told me was true, then they need to be a header. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 08:46, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***The smaller sections have one more = than the larger. Clone Wars has three ='s and Battle of Geonosis has four ='s.  If subheaders have three ='s, I meant them as having four.  Two ='s are used for Biography, personality and traits, etc.  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:24, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Yes they are used in those sections, but they're also used as headers! Look at the toolbar at the edit window up top, and click the button labelled 'headers'. How many == signs pop up? Two. Look at FA's such as (I'll get back in a sec to insert a name) and they have done this! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 14:32, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *****I looked at some featured articles, and they do the headers the same way as in Burt Drewton. For example, in Nathaniel Kenobi Solo, it is:

Extragalactic Species and No Force-Sensitivity Don't Mix
And in Burt Drewton: ==Biography==

Terrorists on Mithus
Drewton  ( Drewton's Holocron ) 15:00, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. It would seem that it's a matter of opinion. I believe it works then. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:25, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Will you support it then? It's also the way it's done for all of the Wookieepedia articles I've seen.  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 21:59, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

Neutral/comments

 * The name 'Burt' isn't the best, I only used it because originally The Drewton Legacy was meant as a prequel to another series, though I might change it soon. The beginning seems short, but it's all the information available for those parts, and I don't like adding information exclusively for articles (that wasn't in any chpaters).  The later sections use much more information about Burt, specifically Appointment with Palpatine, Delta Station, and Captured by the Nockudumey.  Anyone is free to add any information from the available chapters (listed in Appearances).  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 15:57, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, I forgot to add that everything in the article is sourced as sources are done on Wookieepedia. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 16:05, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I will read it soon.--  Arav the Undersith ( Talk Page ). 23:56, 31 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Personally, I'd like to see it expanded a bit more. I'm a fan of long sections.
 * Indeed, but this is only GA standards remember. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 17:00, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
 * True. That's why I'm not voting against it. However, I'd like to give him a chance to expand it before I give this article a yes vote.
 * As I said above, there isn't a lot of material to use for the beginning, but I'll try to make it more detailed today. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 20:18, 3 June 2008 (UTC)

The beginning has been expanded. Drewton  ( Drewton's Holocron ) 20:32, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

People seem to be more hesitant to vote for or against this. Any suggestions/ideas/comments? Drewton  ( Drewton's Holocron ) 21:35, 10 June 2008 (UTC)


 * I personally just haven't had the time to look at it yet. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 22:33, 10 June 2008 (UTC)