DL:Order of the Whills

Approve

 * 1) Intros been expanded, very nice article.
 * 2) Up to FA standards. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:54, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 20:26, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Among the shorter nominations, but concise can be good, and it qualifies by the standards. --C3PO the Dragon Slayer 6,000,000 forms of communication 19:31, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 19:37, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Disapprove/complaints

 * Expand introduction.  Victor  ( talk ) 10:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Suggestions as to how the intro could be expanded would be helpful, as it seems good enough for me. I've seen much shorter pass by DL review in the past. - Brandon Rhea 22:47, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Indeed, which I look to rectify those mistakes about voting in short reviews for the future. Anyways, what I go by is word count and content. I use word count from microsoft word and to me, an article's introduction must have at least 225 words. The ones I told to expand the intro all had less than 200, even less than 180 I think. But that's not the point; some tips on how to expand: As I can see, the first paragraph talks about what the order was, and the second gives a brief overview of what Ussej did to guide the future. You should expand the second paragraph, by talking about it's history, its members and their overall impact on the galaxy.  Victor  ( talk ) 22:53, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Though I do not believe that word count really means much and that it does explain the impact of the galaxy, I will comply nonetheless. - Brandon Rhea 00:45, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Wordcount is my own personal system that I use to measure intros. Basically, if its not over 200 words, to me, its insufficient (though I prefer 225). -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:48, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
 * It is now 277 words and contains a bit of information about what happens to the Jedi Bendu after E.T. leaves Earth. - Brandon Rhea 00:52, 18 June 2007 (UTC)