CS:Dax Olesa

This is the review page for the ongoing featured article nomination of Dax Olesa.

Vote to reject&mdash;Seers only (1/4)

 * 1) Alright, let’s see here. There are spelling and grammar errors across the board. There’s POV throughout. We’ve got some poorly formatted headers. There are large paragraphs that need to be broken up. So specifically, this article fails rules 2.2, 2.7, 2.9, 6, and 9 of the general featured article requirements. Sorry, but this simply isn’t ready to be a featured article. With some work, this is definitely something that could be a featured article. Because of that, don’t be discouraged! This does not mean that the article will never be a featured article, and once it’s up to all of the requirements then I’d love to see it as one! Feel free to ask me or any other members of the Council of Seers for help, along with Seers and non-Seers alike in the Writing Center. All of us would be happy to pitch in and help you get this to featured status. It’s just not something that can be done here, because the nomination page is meant for just minor clean ups, not large-scale clean ups. Good luck! - Brandon Rhea Alliance Starbird.svg (talk) 23:09, February 12, 2010 (UTC)