Thread:Sebolto/@comment-104549-20190326194958/@comment-104549-20190419224748

I found it intriguing that Tirien's annoyance seemed out of character, and it made me think. He's stoic with most people, but I think he's gotten relaxed enough with Narasi to be more open with her (to an extent; he's still Tirien). He and Slejux are close too; Slejux isn't Mali, but he's much more like Tirien, which helps Tirien relate to him as well. On the whole, Tirien was serious about not keeping a gizka aboard, but Narasi's wearing him down. I couldn't find a way of bringing the issue back at the end of the story that didn't feel forced.

I'm glad you liked the KotOR touches, and I'm really glad you like Slejux too. Aside from the fact that it's always an interesting challenge writing his unusual perceptions, I enjoy how he relates to both Tirien and Narasi; it draws interesting things out of all three of them.

And none of them feature in the latest installment...