Talk:Gray Jedi Code/@comment-74.73.120.48-20170601185019/@comment-25836167-20170605031123

I'm not a fan, sadly. There's too much obvious implication in a lot of the lines, ex: soldiers marching, guarding the Force, "hold"ing vs "cling"ing. It reads like an attempt at a 'balanced' code by a person who is still Jedi at heart. The 3 "Through ____, I gain ___" don't make much sense to me, either.