HP:Battle of Cul Huq (Cruentusian War)

Support (6 High Priests/7 users/13 total)

 * 1) Hopefully the first GA of Project Cruentus. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:07, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) By far the most extensive and well-made Cruentus battle so far. Unit 8311 19:19, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) It qualifies.
 * 4) How can I not? --Arav (talk ) 06:23, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I'm not going to lie. I really never expected this project of yours to produce an impressive battle article, but in spite of that quote near the end, I was wrong this time. -MPK 19:20, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *Well thanks! We try our best! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 20:39, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) I gotta agree with MPK, I really didn't expect to see much from this community project. I am plesantly surprised. Just a note though: You should edit out (Cruentusian War) from the bolded title within the article - it isn't needed. It's already stated to be in the Cruentusian War in the main title, and again right in the begining of the article. Right now, it reads "The Battle of Cul-Huq (Cruentusian War) was a major battle of the Cruentusian War [...]", it should read "The Battle of Cul-Huq was a major battle of the Cruentusian War [...]". I checked for other things, like spelling errors and such, but it looks pretty clean. Good work! --[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|35px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 20:45, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) I thought this project was going to go nowhere fast. I'm impressed. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 19:55, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) Good work. -- Knowledge the Article Writer talk 15:22, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Excellent, and definitely worthy of GA status. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:24, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) Like the above have stated, I didn't see this project going very far. Thanks for making this doubter a believer. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 13:55, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) *You can refer to us as Jesus! No, on a serious note, thanks guys! This project was more of a success than I thought. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:58, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * How about, uh, no? - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 22:33, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) I seriously thought this project was gonna go down the drain, guess I was wrong. Good job.  Wing   msg 21:19, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Even though I am on the project, I still think this is a good article regardless of my association with its project. Darth mavoc 09:12, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Good work, guys. --Victor (talk) 04:32, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

 * 1) There's a few things, which makes me believe that the two HP candidates who have voted so far really haven't actually done a review of the article but rather looked at it in terms of length and general appearance. However, I could be wrong, but nonetheless here are the problems (grammatically, as I have not read the article for content yet):
 * 2) * In Initial moves: "The Necasian SpecOps team slipped by the Srav blockade in a stealthed SkyBull-class transport". "Stealthed" is not a word. It needs to be changed to "stealth".
 * 3) * In Initial moves: "...with the Zayre also playing a large part in the aerial defence". Remember to use English (U.S.) when running spell check. Using that, it will come up to say that it's spelled "defense".
 * 4) * In Initial moves: "...although they were suprised by heavy Srav flak and missiles". "Suprised" needs to be changed to "surprised".
 * 5) * In The ground battle: "...the Necasian task force immediately came under attack from Drapeznik hovercopter gunships, who had, thanks to Invado, become aware of their position". "Who had" needs to be changed to "which had", as it's refer to objects rather than people.
 * 6) * In The ground battle: "In response, the Srav commander called in a Yukel airstrike...". "Airstrike" needs to be changed to "air strike".
 * 7) * In The Holocaust: "...whilst the Necasian fleet, in disarray, were powerless to stop them". "Were" needs to be changed to "was", as it's referring to only one fleet.
 * 8) * In Aftermath: "...with Invado claiming that Redharn was wanting the Necasians to fail...". "Was wanting" reads very awkwardly. It should be changed to "wanted".
 * 9) *That's basically it. Just in terms of personal opinion, though, I think the quote that says "In Srav Federation, nukes destroy YOU" is pretty bad, because nukes destroy you everywhere. It doesn't make sense nor is it funny where something like "In Soviet Russia, cursor highlights YOU" is. Again, though, that's just an opinion and not really grounds for opposition. I figured I'd just say it anyway. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 19:56, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **Sorted that. And I know the quote's a bit silly, but I just couldn't resist a 'Soviet Russia' joke somewhere. If it's so terrible that it's detrimental to the article's quality, I'll change it...to a different Soviet Russia joke. Unit 8311 20:10, 3 June 2008 (UTC)

Neutral/Comments

 * 1) Though my opposition has been removed since the complaints were rectified, I need to give this article a read through to judge it on its content before deciding whether I can support it or not. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 20:16, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I'll read it today. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 20:19, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Its funny, The High Priest nominations now overwhelm normal user votes! [[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] <font color="Green">Arav (<font color="Green" size="1">talk ) 00:23, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * That is a bit ironic. Perhaps there aren't enough users participating in the voting?--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|35px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 01:59, 12 June 2008 (UTC)

That's exactly the problem. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 02:00, 12 June 2008 (UTC)


 * What we need are more users that contribute here and stay. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 02:03, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * We could purge all the HPs except me from their positions. :) -MPK 02:36, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 02:45, 12 June 2008 (UTC)


 * This has been up for a while, but it might look a bit better if you made the thumbnails slightly larger. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 00:50, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Damn, all this needs is one more user vote...anyone? Please? Unit 8311 10:26, 30 June 2008 (UTC)