Thread:Atarumaster88/@comment-29301-20171114184134/@comment-31421-20180105212839

You're welcome. For the record, I disagree with the statement that you don't know how to write a fight scene. Beast of Rutan and River certainly belie that premise.

I've never accused TSL of having the greatest writing. It very clearly was rushed, hacked apart, and stitched back together. I didn't mind the fact that Kreia's dialogue with the Exile was cut short as a piece of intentional irony, that the old crone who's always talking had her poisoned tongue effectively muted, but between that and Sion's piece, it was fairly evident that there was more (completely-understandable) writer's fatigue involved. I've certainly been there.

Good luck with your next ventures! Mine are largely teaming up with my wife now to slowly clean up my old works. In a way, it's refreshing in that she brings a really solid grasp of good writing and isn't as steeped in Star Wars lore, so she helps me tell the stories and build the universe better. It can also be very humbling as she reads aloud every stilted phrase and run-on sentence, followed by silence as she considers how best to fix it. There's probably some meta-ironic analogy about breaking someone('s writing) to remake it in a stronger form that could be made about the process.