Talk:Star Wars: The Yuuzhan Vong/@comment-173.90.97.218-20190829143528

Hello! Sorry I haven't been able to see this, I was busy.

First, as always, I will be honest.

I'll start of with the bad stuff first, luckily it's just the usual issues.

-Description, several scenes were confusing due to a lack of description.

-Prose, though better than some of your others, it still needs work.

-Characters, The Yuuzhan Vong mainly.

-Dialogue, the dialogue was really  cheesy as it had been some other times.

But, there was also much good.

First, thanks for putting Colly into the story, you did him perfectly!

Wow! I don't know why but I really liked this! The literary quality was poor and the other parts of the universe was a bit messed up. ( You could use wookiepedia in the future, or just make it a fan timeline. ) but I really liked it for some reason, you're best enjoyment wise so far!

All the clones were pretty well done ( except for Rex unfortunately, not terribly out of character though. )

Great cliffhanger to, I'm exited for whatever comes next!

If you can continue to improve on writing ( you have been over the course of the series. ) these could end up being pretty awesome! Good job!