User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapters 13, 14 and Essential Guide released/@comment-1169345-20091121051559

Yeah, the Temple of Desire was an intriguing way of implementing your "Dagobah" sequence into the novel. Annikin's journey is much more believeable and interesting than Luke's.

You based it on the ESB scene, but you were smart enough to change it and make it your own.

The whole sequence of chapter four was riveting and the reactions/actions of the characters was very interesting.

I especially liked the ending with Bac, that was unexpected and an excellent way to wrap up the chapter and change the course of events.