User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapter 16 released!/@comment-67.173.77.213-20100221050709

Very good chapter. Action packed and slow at times, it had a perfect balance between the two.

One of the key scenes in the chapter left me in a state of unsurprised shock which I will not divulge openly until more people have read this chapter.

I was a bit shocked by Kenobi's lack of determination in regards to his chat with Annikin. I thought he would press the issue a little more.

The devolution of Annikin's opinion of Sarus was once again inserted beautifully into the chapter. It did not seemed forced and flowed with the events around them well.

I liked the continued development of Annkin and Owen's relationship it adds a whole new dynamic to the story.