Thread:Sakaros/@comment-29301-20180903145046/@comment-29301-20181220054814

I think your inclination is right, as regards 9 and 12 being less than ideal places to explain more things about the poison. Adding a scene to The Tango of Destruction would help, I suppose, or at any rate it wouldn't hurt. But it seems to me, if you want the relevant information to stick in the reader's head so that it'll click when it needs to, your best bet is to find a place for that information in Desperate Times or Desperate Measures; further back, and the odds are increased that the reader may forget.

I might or might not have more thoughts on this later.