Talk:Gray Jedi Code/@comment-2607:FEA8:E2A0:EA:9D71:D949:BA67:6883-20190920185145/@comment-25836167-20190921230814

I don't mean to denounce, just bring attention to the words used.

This iteration use "I" seven times and "my" five times. It reads as very self-centered, which is more Dark-side than Gray. The concepts mentioned (passion, strength, knowledge, power, peace) are instrumental, but...whose passion? Whose strength or power? Whose peace? At its core, the Gray Code is selfless. The needs of the Many outweigh the needs of the Few.