Forum:CL:Star Wars: Vindictive Justice

Hello there! I have recently published the second chapter of Star Wars: Vindictive Justice, a novella I'm currently writing. I would like anyone and everyone to give me their thoughts on how it's going so far. I hope you enjoy reading it, and I look forward to your reviews.--SAMurai (-.-.-..-.-) 23:03, February 21, 2013 (UTC)