Talk:What if Anakin didn't dew it? Episode 3/@comment-31050517-20190913190653

I like how there are different theories in the galaxy, along with having Dooku let the Jedi know that Sheev was his former master. Did you come up with the quote from Tinn - "Sometimes, you have to sacrifice something to make your case convincing." That was well-written. Maybe you should give those clone commandos on Utapau names, like you did with their corps and commanding Jedi. I like how direct you are with the battle sequence at the end, but remember show don't tell. Instead of saying "Then Yoda picks both assassins up with the force and launches them out of the window" you could say "Yoda then uses his force to swiftly maneuver the two clone assassins, who were shrieking for help, to the window and launches them to their inevitable deaths". Overall, cannot wait for the next chapter.