Star Wars Fanon:FW/Force Exile III: Liberator

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Force Exile III: Liberator
Nominated by: Atarumaster88  ( Talk page ) 22:03, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Excerpt
''Selu wordlessly clutched the controls with a frenzied grip, precariously dodging and jinking to evade the deadly fusillades of green turbolaser bursts even as he clawed for open space far enough from Zhar’s gravity well to jump to lightspeed. The beams were getting closer. Selu keyed the navicomputer, hoping to plot a jump to somewhere, anywhere away from their assailant. Unfortunately, that particular piece of equipment had yet to be tweaked by Sarth, and precious seconds would be needed to complete the complex calculations for jumping to lightspeed. Seconds they didn’t have. ''

The Hawk-bat'' shuddered as another near-miss from a turbolaser detonated near the aft quarter of the sleek freighter. The impact of the blow threw Sarth into a wall across from the overheating shield control circuitry he was trying to bypass. From a muffled groan coming from down the hall, he could tell that the hit had had a similar effect on Cassi. He struggled back to his feet, retrieving the dropped hydrospanner and other tools rolling around on the deck. Cursing at the sight of the now burned-out circuitry and the shower of blue sparks it was emitting, he quickly shut off the entire relay before it literally blew up in his face. Keying the intercom, he shouted a message to Selu.''

''“Selu! We can’t take any more hits! The shields are gone!”''

Comments

 * After finishing the rewrite of this work earlier this year, I feel comfortable with nominating it here. Reserving my Archivist vote until other reviewers have looked at it. Atarumaster88  ( Talk page ) 22:03, July 8, 2014 (UTC)