User talk:Brandon Rhea/Archive 1

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Fanonified

 * It was just the part in the first sentence, mentioning the name of the book is OOU. That's all, i would have changed it myself but it had a no-edit banner on it. [[Image:DarthAbeonisSig2.gif|Jasca Ducato]] Sith Council Sith Campaign 11:01, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

Re: Bendu
No problem. I enjoyed the article very much. Very well done. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:54, 30 January 2007 (UTC)

Good job with the Bendu Order. Worth being a featured article. Did you see my Trask Onasi? He's not finished yet.

I im a noob here wanna be my friend?
 * That would be easier to answer if I knew who you were. ;) - Brandon Rhea 03:11, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

I am User:Eric Big E Quinn. Hey wanna join the Contribution of Fanon? Ill explain what it is below. Eric Big E Quinn 03:12, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

The Contribution of Fanon or the contribution or CF is basically a group of elite users from The Star Wars Fanon Wiki only who edit more articles with great skills at a Wiki called Contribution. You do not need to be a member to have a account their but to edit articles and pages their you do and you must have a account here and must be a contributor only those editors with great skills like yourself can join. Eric Big E Quinn 03:12, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Bendu edits

 * No problem. No, that was all of them. [[Image:DarthAb.gif]] Sith Council Sith CampaignSith Empire 09:20, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Some ideas?
What should I add to make the introduction longer?--Nightmare975 16:05, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Nomination removal
I assumed since i voted for yours, you would vote for mine. But obviously u didnt.

Okay u have my vote

Bendu
Heh, I can be vague sometimes. I mean that shortening it would take away vital information. I'll reenforce this on the Bendu talk page. Thanks for pointing that out. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:19, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

FA
I sent the same message to RR yesterday. I was not aware that people would be so against my brothers voting. For that reason I have removed their votes.

Drew University?
Dear Rhea,

That's right next door to me. =D

Cheers,

Gho st I nsi de the M ach ine ''(Whisper through the Storm ) (My Journeys ) (Omens ) 18:42, 16 March 2007 (UTC)

Orco'
I lengthenned the article and added a picture Swerto 14:23, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

Troyb
Im about to get some pics for my page.Then would you change your vote? Troyb 21:03, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Very well. Troyb 21:07, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I will in good time. Troyb 14:44, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Yes. Troyb 15:15, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Thank's but next time I think I will nominate my new confederacy. Troyb 15:19, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Yeah tell me about it but at least it is better then that other new confederay. Troyb 15:23, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

Ussej Padric Bac III

 * Great article man. Nicely done.
 * Very cool. Definitely going under my hall of fame.


 * Very well; it has my vote.

UOTW

 * I've nominated you for UOTW. Good luck and hope you get the victory.
 * No problem. You deserve it.

Thank you for complying with our requests. I will review it again.

Pic request

 * I have a question. Do you know how to do book covers (photoshopped)? If you do, could you please do one for me? I'll give you the details if you accept.


 * Ah, well that's just fine, because I've liked your book covers. If that's okay with you, could you please do it on this picture here. The title would be "Star Wars: Narod Antrell: Path of the Jedi". Please and thank you, and when you upload the pic, could you title it BookNarod.jpg? Please and thanks.


 * They look good, I like them. Can you change the font color to red/darkred please? That's all the rest is fine. Please and thank you!


 * Thank you for the pic, I'll check it your article in a moment.


 * Hey, I like your Ussej II article. Although Ussej III is still better, Ussej II is very good and has a variety of pictures. I especially like how you used some of the pictures from Gladiator. Also, can you please check out the battle of Vuur article? I added some pics and removed the notes, by merging it into the article.


 * I thought so, I knew someone with as good as articles as your own wouldn't have so many pics clumped together. Regardless, they're both good articles. And thanks for the feedback!

Invite
Hey i'm Darth tader, probally never heard of me but I'm out inviting people to the 2nd Mandalorian Party, see here for deatials, Forum:Mandalorian Party. Bye. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  03:36, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

DL

 * OK. [[Image:DarthAb.gif|Jasca Ducato]] Sith Council Sith Campaign 10:23, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Congrats
I want to congradulate you on your Dark Guardians of Lettow article. Very good, but the Bendu Order one is my favorite. I was thinking we could co-write an article together if you want to. I like your ideas and writing skills.

Your welcome and it was true i enjoyed all your articles that i have read especially Ussej Padric Bac III

Alright I'll go more in depth for the Hidden Rakata. Yeah Smallville rocks! I was going to put Kryptonians in there, but decided it wouldn't be a good idea. The next new episode is on April 19, next Thursday!

UOTW winner!
Congrats on winning UOTW! You and your article (Ussej III) both get to be on the main page together! Again, congrats. (Talk)

Vandalism
Hey man. Someone vandalized Ussej Padric Bac III. Don't worry I reverted for ya. Just thought I'd let ya know so you can do what you need to do. The IP of the vandal is 193.84.44.70

He replaced it with this text: "OMG. Can someone tell me, how is possible that this crazy, unreal, unoriginal article can be featured article?!? User that write this crazy article must be friend with some admin or is admin. Because if it should be fairly-minded then will win another article. This is absolutely dishonour of this page and all star wars universe!!! Next choose the featured article carefully please!!!"

Yeah, it's a great article! I'll keep an eye out for the rewrite so I can check it out.

End of UOTW

 * You can now use this template just like this, since you won UOTW.

Well, I know it seems short, but its because its supposed to only be one week in length. However, a lot of times people have forgotten all about the UOTW therefore sometimes they've lasted a month or so. But from now on, I'm going to try my best to keep it at one week

Pics
Hey Brandon, I just wanted to know where you get your pics from. Cause that pic for Adena is freakin sweet! Thanks, I'm pretty decent with photoshop, but i never really put any thought into doing it on actual persons. Thanks again!

RE:
I already apologized to Aeods and admitted my faults, just to let you know. (Talk)


 * Fine by me, but I did not drag you into it, although I do apologize for (pretty much) spamming your talk page. [[Image:SVsig.jpg]] (Talk)


 * And I'm sorry for that. [[Image:SVsig.jpg]] (Talk)

Re:Arguing and Temper
I wasn't planning on losing any sleep.-- Talk to Palpy Palpy is awesome 00:49, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, I know.-- Talk to Palpy Palpy is awesome 00:52, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

Ussej III pic
First off, I took care of the Tyler "problem". Second, in case you are wondering, a while back Ussej Padric Bac III's main pic was vandalized. That night, I got into a revert war with the vandal (who had uploaded an explicit picture) until they were banned by Bub. So, now that I'm an admin, I went back to that main pic and deleted the old revisions (of the explicit pic). That's why it's edited by me, just thought I'd let you know. (Talk)

RE:FA suggestion

 * That is a good idea. But it would not apply to Steel Legion's nomination because it'd only be fair to leave it for now, since we thought of it after. I'll see to it that I change that up… SV undefined


 * See here and here. SV undefined
 * Sometimes, but not lately. Why? SV undefined


 * Sure, just link me. SV undefined


 * Sorry [for the late reply], I'll read your fan fics soon. I'm just going to get some work done on here and then I'll be off to bed. Perhaps tomorrow I can get started on reading it. SV undefined

I know, I just said we need to stop fighting. I won't start them anymore unless I strongly am against the vote. Sorry.&mdash; Contact the GDE GDE's conquests  20:39, 22 May 2007 (UTC) Oh yes, thanks for your support in UOTW and FA. talk to the Swerto
 * I have asked Tyler to stop the fighting and now I am asking you. I know you haven't been fighting in your opinion, but Tyler and Troyb can both get very defensive. I have already talked to Troyb today about it and have asked him to calm down. He has agreed to listen and take my advice.

Re:Ussej Padric Bac II
Its awesome!!&mdash; Contact the GDE GDE's conquests  00:37, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, it is. I will read it completely later. (just don't spam talk pages, please) SV undefined
 * I didn't read the whole article! I examined it, read a few paragraphs, and judged it. The only article I've read all the way through on this site is Narod Antrell, and that was because I was bored.&mdash;[[Image:DTylerSig.gif|150px]] Contact the GDE GDE's conquests [[Image:Kuat Systems Engineering.jpg|25px]] 00:42, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

Decreton Knights
Can I contact you through AIM or Yahoo? SV undefined
 * Just letting you know, because thats not the issue. The issue is posting the same message on people's talk pages. It's just I've seen it done before (the warning about spam) but in your case, I'm sure it's fine, I believe. Anyways, I'll message you on AIM ASAP. SV undefined
 * Very good. Certainly FA worthy. -- [[Image:JM76Sig.gif]] Talk to an Admin Mind Trick Jedi Library [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg]]

Ussej
Good article just a few problems. You link to the same thing WAAAAAAAY too much. You only need to link to each article one or two times. Every time you say father its blue. My only other complaint is a personal one and I'll keep it to myself because it doesn't affect the integrity of your article. I'll sweep over it for more erros later. Its a good article though, good job. talk to the Swerto

Opinion
I finished this article a while ago. Tell me what you think since I told you what I thought.&mdash; Contact the GDE GDE's conquests  12:57, 23 May 2007 (UTC)


 * No its against calling Jesus the son of god, I'm atheist and I'm sure not everyone on this site is christain, I've seen quite a few non christain people on here. I thought I wouldn't bring it up. You could say the son of the christain god or something, because there are other religions out there. I said it was personal because its something that could start a fight, I don't EVER fight over religion, I'll debate over almost ANYTHING else. [[Image:Swerto sig.jpg]]talk to the Swerto

Your article...

 * I say just one thing: REEAAALLY GOOD!!! I wish I could write that good! I like the images also, what movie/movies are they from?  N@M3Le$ I know how to talk! Journal [[Image:Namelesennius.jpg|30px]] Namelesennius(Mysteries of a Distant System: Exile) 16:12, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll get to work.&mdash; Contact the GDE GDE's conquests  20:55, 24 May 2007 (UTC)

Image
You probably don't remember me, but at least I can say well done for getting several more of your articles up to FA, they're pretty good. To get to the point, I was clicking around when I came across this image. I thought the style and composition was excellent. I am asking, may I use the image (which I assume is your property, you have similar nice looks-like-custom-made images on your articles) on my picture warehouse page? It's where I keep pictures that I like and that inspire me. I sometimes will come up with a background history for them, or when I need a character/ship/whatever, I usually choose an image from that picture pool. If given permission, I will, for now, put it on that page with a copyright thingy as the image caption saying that the image was made by you. If I decide to use the image, I will first ask your permission and be sure to affirm somewhere on the article that the image is yours. The method of copyright notification I leave to you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:49, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Does that mean I may use the image, or no? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:48, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  13:15, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

High Priests
Hey Rhea, I was thinking perhaps we could use the main image from you Bendu Order article on a template for all of us HP's.
 * Cool. Want to do it?  Or should I?  Also, what text should we have?
 * Finished. Take a look here.

Proposal
I got a proposal for what we were discussing earlier. After Good article voting takes place each week, the High Priests set up another vote. This vote, only includes the winners of the GA, to take another vote. Like so:

Comments
etc. They are voted on based on what articles the community wants to see to be FA of those that have made GA. Once the top GAs are voted on, they go to the DLs for review and such, then the DLs solely select the FAs. Its system where the people, High Priests, and DLs word together to choose the best of the best articles. Now, it must be clarified, that just because a GA wins to be a FA nominee, it doesnt mean its guaranteed to win FA status. However, it does get rid of the DLs handpicking selections for FAs and instead teh community chooses which ones they'd like to see as FAs (of the GAs).

Tell me what you think. Also, for GA showcasing, I believe they should be right under the FA, but without a picture, merely text. That'd be nice enough, to show what else SWF has to offer besides the FAs. Again, let me know if you like this idea. Hope you do. SV undefined


 * Good then. I think your layout format is just as good as it gets. So, do we have an agreement then? SV undefined

RE
Yes, please do write up the proposal and add it to C3PO's proposal. (At the bottom) And yes, I will get to the DL reviews soon. I have something bigger in mind for them; soon, just not right right now, I will merged all the "DL reviews" together. I dont mean merging all the articles together, but I mean for example if Ussej had 3 reviews, I would merge all 3 into one. I will do it in a bit, and when I do that, I will review the current FA nominations. SV undefined
 * No, sorry for the confusion, I meant this one: Forum:Good Articles and Featured Articles, as well as a new appointment of users. SV undefined

We've failed
I'm afraid that perhaps we've failed in our HP duties. There are 14 articles that got nominated though, and I think we got overloaded. We need to have a max number of articles that are allowed.

Umm, Brandon, is there a reason you don't want your articles to be nominated? You don't have to answer if you don't want to, but I'm kinda curious, because those are some great articles.

Oh, then allow me to nominate them back the right way.

Not a one, I'm saving them for the next one, because they are nowhere close to being considered yet. Maybe Battle of Almania, but I'll leave that up to you if you wish to add any of my articles to the Wiki Awards.

Will do, but I'll have to do it after I look at Solus' stuff, because I'd already promised him I would look at his first.

RE: Second Wiki Awards
thank you, but yes, Pinky alerted me not long before you did. I took off what I remembered putting on, though I might have missed one. Did you know I was highly observant? :P - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:59, 8 June 2007 (UTC)

Order of the Whills delivers your typical greatness at writing articles. (Please excuse the flattery, I mean every word of it. ) While, yes, it's not finished by any means, it still looks very promising. Lord of the Rings, Star Wars, and ET collide for fun on the Star Wars Fanon! Keep up the good work, Brandon.

I don't know about you, but my siblings think I've overstayed my welcome at the computer desk. Talk to you later.

Added
Hey Rhea, let me know if there is anything else I can add to Shizu.

Re:Order of Whills-HP
I looked it over again, and the only one I found was the second link to the Great Territorial War the section about the Shaman (with the pic of Ussej Bac). -- Talk to an Admin Mind Trick Jedi Library

RE:Antrell
To use the name Antrell, it depends. If it takes place in between 3,951 BBY (end of KOTOR II) – c.100 BBY, then its fine. Thanks for considering using the Antrells in your story! It's quite an honor. SV undefined
 * Then yes. He can be Vi'odran Durus Antrell's son. SV undefined
 * No, so please just keep it "Anonymous" (such as an "Unknown Antrell") for now. SV undefined

CIS reveiw

 * Please look at my New CIS now, I have worked at it more and think its GA now.TroybTalk contribs[[Image:Troyb2.jpg|20px]] 20:44, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

IM
Nah, I got Yahoo. But I'm almost always on the Fanon channel of IRC.

Hey
Rhea, I decided that the DL are going to automatically put all of the GAs up for FA nomination, so I will go handle that now. Thanks for removing the nominations from Solus, I didn't even notice them. That's what I get for being gone for 5 days. Anyways, so in the future, any article(s) that make GA will automatically be up for FA nomination. BTW, out of curiousity, have you added the "Unknown" Antrell to your story yet? SV undefined

Well, now with the new policy, FAs dont have to be selected on Sunday, they can be selected once the DLs believe an article is up to standards (after it was voted as the #1 hopeful FA) therefore we can always add to the FA noms. So far, I think we have quite the selection of GAs anyway. I had no idea that 4 would win so quickly. SV undefined

RE: Featured Nominations
Oh, okay. Thank you. And sorry. -67.34.186.30 00:40, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
 * That was me. Forgot to log in. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:45, 14 June 2007 (UTC)

Opinion
Hello. If you have the time, could you take a quick look over at Rohi, and tell me what you think and what I could improve? I would nominate it for good article, but the noms are full and I understand that you guys are busy, I appreciate what you do. If there's anything I could do to help, just ask. Thank you for your time. And, again, thank you for removing my articles from the FA page - I really ought to look at instructions more. Sorry for the inconvenience. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:15, 16 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Just noticed your comment. No I really don't like Star Trek, never liked it. Just not my thing, plus too many people get WAAAAAAAAYYYY too overworked on it... more people go supergeek on that than Star Wars. [[Image:Swerto sig.jpg]]talk to the Swerto

Criticism
I want to try and nominate this for GA, and would like to get advice on it before I nominate it. Can you look over it and tell me where I could expand or tidy up? Say it like it is... Or it was. 20:07, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

Forum comment
Thank you for the comment Rhea. You are correct, I am not looking for pity, in fact, I never do. I only ask that people understand where I am coming from. That this Personal Attack BS is just that. I wrote it to prove a point, not to share tears, it also states the same thing in the opening paragraph of my userpage here. If I wanted that I'd go to a damn therapy session, but I don't, my life is so ****** up, many people would have probably killed themselves by now. But, I digress from the point of this post. Long story short, I appreciate you taking time to read it, and for backing me.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 08:34, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

About Jonathan Bac, it's a great article. Also I love Star Trek: Enterprise. But you said he was the first Supreme Chancellor of the Republic. But according to Wookieepedia, the leader of the Galactic Republic was called President of the Senate. Supreme Chancellor wasn't used until 15,000 BBY, 10,000 years after Jonathan. Just telling you. --Trask Ulgo
 * Oh, sorry. I didn't know if you knew or not. --Trask Ulgo

Advice
Rhea, I need some advice. I was reading your userpage, and have to say, you are a busy man. You have awesome articles, and would like to know how you find time to write? Also, how do you write, I mean, do you just sit down with a notebook, or do you have a room set aside where you go when you don't want to be disturbed?--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 14:58, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, it does help. I have always liked your work.  In fact when I first found this site, I perused it while hitting random article, and it was Ussej Padric Bac II that got me into this site.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 15:13, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Could you please move pages like Brandon Rhea's articles being improved to a user subpage?

Yes, it may be as you put it "dickish", but I am simply trying trial & error. I have tried with users in the past to say "Hey man, it'd be nice if you follow policy next time and source your images" or "categorize your articles" or "create more than just an infobox"; however, many of the users failed to comply even after I explained to them what they must do and guided them through it. They continued to fail and a few bans were placed, and then when they are unbanned they continue. Some users however, have followed policy and are willing to continue to follow it. There are many methods on how to guide users and help them out, and that's what I'm trying to do. Like I said, the previous way of saying "Read our policies, please!" would not work, therefore I am trying a new strategy. -- Victor  ( talk ) 04:43, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

It has nothing to do with my own personal feelings of this matter, its what works to make the community and site look better. I know about leadership and what I must do. I wasn't frustrated with anyone when I made the Notice/No content/Warning templates, I simply found similar templates amongst Wikipedia and realized that those would be a good way to easily link a new user to the important policies when it comes to making articles on the site. Second point I'd like to make is how is this going to "hurt" them? It's more of a way to guide them through the way articles are to be read or not. If the user decides not to follow these policies laid out before them, then he/she is choosing to "test" me and find out what consequences come with not following the rules. Like I said, I wish to make this site better, not let the users who intentionally disregard policy toy around and ignore messages placed before them. -- Victor  ( talk ) 04:59, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I understand your point about new users being like "Huh? What did I do?!" Well, I just added (yesterday) a line on the template that notifies users that they either haven't been doing that or they are simply new to SWFanon, so it could be a bit more user friendly. Besides, in the case of Bantha man, I replied to him and explained what he needed to do with all his articles/image, plus had he read the entire notice, he would have noticed that it said some thing along the lines of "this notice has been placed here because you have not been doing one or all of the following" on the template. He would have gone back to his article (it was a Sith Lord, I forgot the name now) and had he read the pages supplied to him, he would have realized that the article had been incorrectly categorized and needed to fit the manual of style (Intro, layout, etc). But anyways, the point is that I'm not trying to harm new users, I'm trying to help them, but if you think other wise, then I apologize for making it look that way. However I will not change the way I'm doing things because so far, it has been working and getting things a bit more organized amongst new users' articles, or at least the majority.

and on another note… Yes, I would like to collaborate on Kavari Antrell, of course. Can you please supply me with another link to the fan fiction on TFN? I forgot where it had been and I think it'd just be easier if you linked me to it again, that way I can get the details on what you're talking about (and I can bookmark it). Once you get back to me on this, I will begin to write out Kavari's background story in the article, and we can start developing a story together. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

RE:
Yes your article looks great. It's very interesting and the name (Prophecies of The Skywalker) is a much better title than the old one (I'd seen it before... it was Jedi Bendu Prophecies or something). Anyways, looks great. Seems like it could become a GA, if you just complete it. Also, check out Kavari Antrell; I added pictures and very few lines of description. Anyways, at the moment I am busy and I have to go for now. But if you wish, you may start to add into Kavari's article about his friendship with the characters of Shadows of the Jedi. All you have to do is say how they met and such, because his past I have covered. -- Victor  ( talk ) 20:30, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:38, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

New Pic
Thanks for the new pic for the book man. Like I said, it really wasnt that important. But, the new one is cool. :) --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 19:10, 30 June 2007 (UTC)

special:Uncategorizedpages; yes, images should be sourced (even old ones) but the deletion will not be implemented until later; and I saw Kavari's info. I will add to it later as well. -- Victor  ( talk ) 20:39, 30 June 2007 (UTC)

Nice work
Dear Mr. Rhea,

I voted for your Good Article thingie about prophesies. :-) Truely amazing job!

Cheers,

Relen tless Recu sant 'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/halofanon/images/a/ac/Fleet_Admiral.jpg TALK • <font color="A9A9A9">SPEAK 17:12, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
 * My pleasure! :-) Cheers, <font color="#D3D3D3">Relen <font color="#A9A9A9">tless <font color="#808080">Recu <font color="#000000">sant 'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/halofanon/images/a/ac/Fleet_Admiral.jpg <font color="#A9A9A9">TALK • <font color="A9A9A9">SPEAK 17:25, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

Moved
I moved your proposal page to Forum:Categorization Policy Rewrite Proposal, because you had it as an article (and its not an article) so it was moved. Just to let you know. -- Victor  ( talk ) 23:44, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. I was hoping we would raise the count soon. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 01:52, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

I don't mind but the que for future GA's to be showed on the MP might be too long. I'm tentative on it for now, I'll see what the others have to say about it. Darth tader Mandalore battles 01:59, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

Yeah it wasn't that the GA que was a bad thing, it's great, it's that the more the longer the wait is for GA's to be showcased on the MP, becuase if theres 25 in the que to be showcased, thats about 6 months. So I'm up for it, just wanted to keep that bit in mind. Darth tader Mandalore battles 13:26, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

Patrick Keylan Bac
I just want you to know, I loved your prophecies article. Let me know when you make Patrick's article. I'm a big Supernatural fan and would like reading it. --Trask Ulgo
 * Is Sam going to make an appearance in your work? --Trask Ulgo
 * Dean's brother? --Trask Ulgo

Patrick's article is coming along good. I feel sorry that he lost both his parents in very bad ways. Also, you don't watch Supernatural? That is where the pic of Patrick comes from. The pic you use for Patrick is Dean, and Sam is his brother in the show. --Trask Ulgo
 * Oh, I forgot Jensen Ackles played on Smallville as Clark's coach during Season 4. I thought you watched that other show, Supernatural, that also stars Jensen Ackles that plays right after Smallville on the CW. My bad. --Trask Ulgo

Clarifications
Dear Brandon Rhea,

Responded. Good enough? ;-)

Good luck!

Cheers,

<font color="#D3D3D3">Relen <font color="#A9A9A9">tless <font color="#808080">Recu <font color="#000000">sant 'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/halofanon/images/a/ac/Fleet_Admiral.jpg <font color="#A9A9A9">TALK • <font color="A9A9A9">SPEAK 23:24, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

Oh...didn't see that.--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 02:57, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I was going to go by my first impression, however I am willing to allow Arav a second chance. He must follow policy, not reveal personal information, and his friend better not be a sockpuppet. If any of those things are to be violated or broken, they (or just he, if its a sockpuppet) will be banned indefinitely. -- Victor  ( talk ) 07:20, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

IRC
Hey Rhea, I noticed you asked for my IRC name. Is there something you need?--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 16:06, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Bac novel
You're welcome. Ahh... I was both hoping and dreading that. Because this is going to be long (it's a critical review. Good thing I don't have to source it :)), I'm going to send this much, and write it up. Just so you don't think I've ignored you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:29, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * NOTE: I am not a professional critic. You need not take a thing I say seriously. Now, on with the show. Firstly: To tell you what was rushed I first have to define what I meant by 'morally lax' in my 'kwik review.' I know that everyday people curse. So, in order to be true to life, I don't especially mind that your characters curse. In fact, everyday people have premarital sex. And though I'm disturbed by it (I'm one of "Them," i.e. Fundamentalists), I understand why it's in there. Partially. Now I will explain the rushed part, and will get back to the morally lax part in it. I will try to go through it chronologically. Firstly, in the prologue the revelation about Kit was rushed, or at least done in a way that makes it seem so. It's like 'Ooh, problem' but then, a few paragraphs 'Ooh, solution' (I like problems to last a while, adds suspense). in my opinion, it would have been better to state in the beginning who Kit was, and do either a flashback on what had happened or make Kit go over it in his mind and do a commentary on it from his point of view. Secondly, Ussej's 'love-at-first-sight' thing is okay-ish, though, when written it wasn't love so much as lust or noticing her beauty, I think the latter is more accurate, taking all things into account. Now, I'm pretty sure Ussej has seen some 'hot dames' in his lifetime, and his noticing her so very muchly is... odd. Now I would understand it if it was guided by the Force that he should feel that, so I'll not dwell on it. Next, when you are in the midst of your dialogue, you seem to overlook emotions. When I'm reading something stinging said to a person (other than Ussej or Laili) or something similar, the emotion isn't described, it just jumps to the next thing they say. Now, I would understand it if you were... I don't remember the term but a writer who reveals his character through dialogue, that would be just fine, as 'dialogue-ists' are good at it. But you are a lot better at describing emotions than you are at dialogue. I wouldn't cut away at the dialogue such as give it a few more words of explanation tagged onto them. But then maybe I'm an 'emotional-ist,' so that could just be a preference of mine, nothing more. now, lastly and most importantly is Ussej's and Laili's romance. While it is well done up until 'A Night to Remember' that chapter leaves you shaking your head and asking 'What?'. While your description of their emotions is excellent, the execution of their actions is going 100mph too fast. I'll try and tell it the way I see it: two people, barely know each other, haven't even had a chance to really even just sit down and have a nice, person-to-person talk suddenly admit to automatically loving one another. While this does happen, it is most usually always heat, not love. But, faster than that, their climbing into bed with one another. Whaaat? They haven't even spoken about how it would work, what they were going to do, how they could pull it off, how would he support her, whether it was a wise decision (though that is usually overlooked anyway), and whether or not they really and truly knew one another. They obviously don't know one another, as one minute Ussej is pledging to protect her and the next he couldn't trust her word if she brought lightning from the sky. And she doesn't know him either, as she doesn't expect his temper tantrum and handles it very badly (though the latter was probably just part of her character). If they'd have known each other, she would have known how valuable loyalty was to him and how much he hated and had been hurt by betrayal, and he would have known that she really loved him. There are only really three reasons why it would proceed so quickly: 1) they aren't real. Duh. :) 2) They were compelled by the want to go through the thrill of having sex, whether or not the other person really wanted to, i.e. for a selfish reason; one that could rip them apart just as quickly so they're under the sheets with the next prospect once they're bored 3) The author wanted to write out and/or put his character through a sex scene. That's it. i know it's harsh, because I haven't gone through and deleted or rewritten some because if I did I would probably chicken out and neglect to tell you. So if you come across several grammar and spelling mistakes, that's why.

Well, I hope you don't think of me as an enemy&mdash;that's not what I want. I'm just honest. And I like your writing, I really do, don't get the impression I don't. your style of writing is different than mine, your focuses on more of a mythological/fantasy-yet-very-believable writing, mine is written more like history. I very much look up to your creativity, and would like to thank you for it. It's given me a lot of inspiration. Though it's little, I even wanted to put an unnamed 'supposedly' Jedi Bendu in one of my articles. I enjoy what you write. A lot. Don't let the above make you think otherwise. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:58, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I have neither AIM or MSN, neither do I have an e-mail account. My parents don't let me, and I wouldn't use it enough to garner one anyway; plus I'm too young. Sorry. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:00, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ah, I do understand better. I was planning to write something about then not being in love so much as in heat, but forgot to add it. It does make a lot more sense. I guess I should have run the Bendu thing by you, but it didn't mention anything about his life, per se. It's only really about what happened after he 'died.' Details ish be here: Wanderers. If you want anything changed, just ask. I respect your criticism; you obviously know how to write a good article. Thank you so much for taking a lot better than I dreaded (You agreed with me on the last dreaded point! Yay. I was really worried about how you were going to take the last point). - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:29, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I didn't mention it anywhere, I figured I had a better chance of not contradicting anything of yours if I neglected to mention details like that. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:39, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, I use IRC. I'm honore that you would want to toss around ideas with me. However, I can't tonight; it's nearly midnight here and I was supposed to be in bed at around 10:30. What time zone do you live in, and when would you like to set up a time to meet on IRC? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:45, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ah, a fellow east-coast-ian. Okay. I understand, however, if you get back late, I have to tell you that I'll be at church from around 7:00 to 8:30; though I'm kinda sick I can't miss it since I play offertory (playing da piano while they take offering if you aren't especially church-literate) that night. So that kinda gives you an idea when I'll be on. I do have something in the morning, but it sounds as if you'll be occupied then. :) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:52, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * See you tomorrow. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:59, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

No problem sir. I am fixing it now i needed to get the template. Sry. Syndrome 18:36, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Hi, Brandon. Good to see you; have a good time? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:55, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * That's great. :) Did you think of a time you want us to get together on IRC? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:00, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Novel
Hey man, I read the first part of the book, and I must say, that I love the way Ravinos killed that one guy, slicing down his spine from the neck. Great! If you've read any of my stuff, you'd know that I kind of have an affinity for violence. Anyway, great stuff.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 11:08, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Opinion
I was just wondering, could I ask your opinion on a character I made up a while back? I want to make sure he's not a Gary Stu or has a flat or otherwise whacked out personality. If you don't mind, I have to warn you that my explanation of his character and personality will be long, so I don't mind if you don't want to. I don't want to take up a huge chunk of your time. Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:02, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay. I'm sorry. I understand that, I've done that a lot. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:42, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the reply above, I forgot to read the second half of your reply. That explains why my lowest grade is in Reading Comprehension. Um, I don't know if you want to discuss it, as for the time and place, either here or IRC would be 100% fine. the time I leave to you, I'm going to be on pretty much all day today and tomorrow (so far as I know). I have a long personality review of him already typed up just in case you said yes, and to double-check to make sure everything I wanted in there was in there. I can just post that here, or wait and do it on IRC, whichever floats your boat. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:48, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the delay in the reply, SWFanon was doing weird things. At any rate, here it is:

I want to know if this character’s a Gary Stu, and also if there are any things about his personality you think I ought to change, or anything to that effect. The two ‘Mary Sue litmus testers’ both graded him as a Gary Stu (though they themselves admit that the test is not completely accurate), though this is probably just because of his race as a Shapeshifter. Being a Shapeshifter, I had to entirely rethink his thought processes so that he wasn't just a Human who can morph. In order for me to better describe him to you, it would help if you had a dog, because that’s where I got a lot of my inspiration for his personality. I don’t know if you have one or not, or if you have an ornery one or one of odd temperament, so even that may not prove accurate. His name is Zenethir Rodiron. Now, I don’t have much of his history up because I’m a lazy procrastinator (Oops, sorry... 'eventualist'), and even if I did put up all the history that I knew, he wouldn’t be complete because he’s still being RPed. You know how that is. :) At any rate, his history was one that I guess is shared by Gary Stus (i.e. it was hard) but I had a reason. Being a Pureblood Shapeshifter, his parents, and the sister he’s forgotten, all believe that Shapeshifters are incapable of real true love, and they are all, as per usual with Purebloods, bloodthirsty (Take a quick look at the image of a Shapeshifter. They’re carnivores, they love the sight of blood. They even drink the stuff). So, in order to make Zenethir different, I had to get him away from his family. I also liked the idea of a Zayne Carrick-esque opposite-of-the-Chosen-One talent-less Jedi (though at the time of his creation, I’d never heard of Zayne – or pretty much most all of the EU), so I created for him a Jedi Master that thought he had talent, but he really didn’t. Zenethir's master just confused Force-sensitivity with Zenethir's innate telepathy and psychometry, common to Shapeshifters. So with no other choice he continues his training as a Jedi in disguise as a Human. So he would not be the uber-powerful person with L33T Shapeshifting powers that pwn, I made it so it would be dangerous for him to use his powers in public – after all, if someone came across a not-legally-protected Shapeshifter (unlike the Gurlanins), you can bet the scientist-type people would be crawling all over him; some of them not so interested in his well-being. So out of fear he doesn’t use the power much at all. While at the Jedi Temple, he comes to admire a talented girl named Arzia Remus, to the point where he’s kinda smitten with her. Now, when you imagine what a female Shapeshifter would look in natural form, it wouldn’t surprise me if you would scratch your head at a Shapeshifter being attracted to a Human of the opposite sex. However, being a Shapeshifter, whatever form he chooses as his ‘normal’ form, the form he is usually seen as, becomes an acquired taste. The longer he chooses to use the form the more he grows like the race in small ways. I can do that because Shapeshifter genes are wacky :). Out of fear, when his race is discovered by his master, Zenethir runs away from the Jedi Temple. He doesn’t want to be the trophy on some xenobiologist’s shelf, and he’s afraid of pain; though his race is highly resistant to it. However, he writes a farewell/love letter to Arzia which she never receives. You can read pretty much all that on his article, though without the little explanations, but now we’re going to get started on some new ground. During his time working for Black Sun (Shapeshifters would be devilishly good at criminal acts, so I gave him an opportunity to learn the ropes) he learns some underhanded techniques that help him immensely when he starts work as a freelance smuggler. Now, another thing that seems to make him Gary Stu-esque is that he seems moral – he’s not greedy or overtly luxurious despite having a lot of money, he doesn’t chase women, he doesn’t drink, ect. He’s only as moral as your dog, really. You dog doesn’t care for money and doesn’t like luxuries (a 10-year-old tennis ball is just as good as a new one). Your dog doesn’t go 'getting friendly' (if you get my drift) with Human females. And being a Shapeshifter (if you remember Lorsanan'sondora), he can’t drink because he’ll get poisoned. Your dog may also kinda go to extremes with emotions. Zenethir does, too. When he’s happy, he's perky and you can’t get him down. When he’s sad, he’s mournfully so. When he gets mad, he’s positively livid, almost to the point of being murderous. His temper is also kinda easy to set off. And, like your dog, he’s got a sense of innocence. I guess this is best described when, later in his life, he meets up with a girl named Rem which he finds out later is Arzia Remus, his childhood sweetheart. As they begin to fall in love, they both deny it as heat or just gratitude. They’re a Shapeshifter and a Human, he’s not even warm-blooded. He doesn’t think he should be feeling the feelings he does. Even when he does start to really fall for her, he denies it the right to surface. He doesn’t think she could ever really love him – take a look at his natural form and you’ll understand why – and he doesn’t think it could work; he’s a lizard, she’s a Human, you can figure out the odds of them having a family. It comes to a head when something bad happens to Rem (as he continues to call her) and he just wants to comfort her. You’re dog can tell when you’re sad and he wants to please, he wants to help. So, he innocently gives Rem a hug (sending jolts up and down his spine the entire time; he’s grown Human enough to like 'things like that'). The emotion comes to where they admit their love to one another at last, but Zenethir doesn’t even think to kiss her. It never occurs to him, much less climbing in bed with her while they're alone in the little safehouse. It would be as foreign as if someone asked him to hang upside down. When he asks her to marry him about a month later and they get engaged, she has to instigate their kiss – he didn’t think to. Of course, after the first sampling, he decides he likes the action very much. She just had to get him started. Another incident like that happens on their wedding night. It never once occurs to him to 'make love' to her before that, I’m trying to make it clear in the story that he's different, that he’s not a Man. In fact, when it gets to the point where they’re in the bedroom, he’s as confused as a perplexed pup suddenly dropped in front of a mountain of Milkbones. It’s heaven, but he doesn’t want to pick up the wrong one and have the whole thing crash down on him. He doesn’t even know if the intense feelings he feels are right or good. He’s a bundle of confusion. Again, Rem has to help him get started, pretending the fastening on her gown is stuck and asking Zenethir to help her; she has to seduce him. She has to help him through. She doesn’t have to ever again, though, he found out how very 'nice' it was (to put it mildly). With someone who takes emotions to the extreme, you can image how he gets when he gets passionate. Another thing that got him a higher grade for Gary Stu-ism were his eyes. The question asked if he had unique hair and/or eyes. His eyes are the same as mine, hazel, so there isn’t anything special about them (besides the fact that he can change their color at whim… heh). I just made them intense, so that any emotion he feels is carried through his eyes. He would need this, as having no facial expressions in his normal form would inhibit the reading of emotions. Another point against him was the fact that he is the last of his kind (so he thinks. His sister is alive and causes problems later on when she is bound and determined to have sex with him so she can conceive. It’s a Pureblood thing; you’d have to read Kowak V to understand it). Another point was that, in his Human form, he’s handsome. Now, in the RP, I never once said he was handsome, the other RPer decided to let Rem think that, so it isn’t my fault he’s a hunk :). At least one thing I thought I might have gone too far with is that I actually did give him a Force power, shieldmaking. At first, its use was purely instinctive, so that he could only use it when he needed it, but he could never, ever use it to protect himself. As time goes on, though, he learns to make them at a whim, though that is his only power, and he still can’t use it to protect himself. Another thing is he meets Arzia Remus again after the Great Jedi Purge, about a year after the declaration of the New Order, making him a survivor of a great cataclysm, a Gary Stu-ish trait. This explains why he can get away with a relationship with Arzia; the Jedi Order is, for all extents and purposes, nonexistent. Another thing that may be a Gary Stu-ish trait is that, even though he’s married to Rem, he’s not 100% sure that he is the right one for her. Thus, if he ever thought that she was having an affair of her own free will (if he thought for one second she was being forced in any way, shape, or form, he would have no scruples against murdering the suitor. Bloodily, if he could manage it), he wouldn’t make a move to stop her. He always felt that a Human would have been a better choice for her, so, though he would die of heartbreak death (mentioned in the Shapeshifter article), he would let her leave him without a fight. He is, however, extremely greatful that she did marry him, it made him truly happy. He doesn’t doubt her love, he just doubts her destiny was ever with him. It’s complicated, but that’s how he thinks. He is also extremely protective of her, he wouldn’t be against hunting down and killing anyone that was threatening to harm her, if she allowed it. She is kinda his anchor to keep him from going too far with his intense emotions when angered – though he does sometimes ignore her and go into, as you put it, 'insane-o mode.' Another what could be Gary Stu-esque trait is that he doesn’t think much of himself at all. He constantly berates and mentally kicks himself and holds a high standard for himself which he rarely, if ever, obtains. Though Rem tries to help him, and he is getting better, he still is very self-conscious. He feels especially like a rat when Tarina (his sister) uses her pheromones (mentioned in Shapeshifter physiology. Works kinda like a strong drug on other Shapeshifters, one that causes extreme lust towards the one giving it off) to get them both nearly to the point of petting, though she was definitely going for a bedroom scene. He manages to run out before getting too far, but he still feels like he’s betrayed Rem and feels he can’t face her. Because of his high sense of marital fidelity, he feels the penalty for his actions is death, even so far as asking – almost demanding - Rem to kill him, after cutting himself first with his claws as a form of self-punishment (yeah, he has issues). Also, having some of the personality of a dog, for humor I gave him the awkwardness of a dog. His table manners, for one thing, are definitely lax. He does try, though, like a hillbilly who took an overnight crash course in etiquette and is dumped in Buckingham Palace. I’ve always imagined him holding the fork (or whatever device is used) like a harpoon instead of a utensil. In one incident, as a mix of his awkwardness and his innocence, he decides to surprise Rem with a dinner of something she’s never had before. Raw egg. Making use of what he had available, he got her two eggs, a sauce bowl, and an awl, since she didn’t have claws. To show her how to do it, he poked into the egg with his claw and dumped its contents into his mouth right in front of her, oblivious to both table manners and salmonella. When she tells him that she can’t eat raw egg, he drops his spoon into his soup; and when she does show him how to cook an egg, he describes them as looking like brains. One last thing that might have ranked him towards a Gary Stu title is that he’s strong. In his natural form, it’s perfectly natural to assume that he’s stronger than Humans in relation to mass. So when he is a Human, he’s powerful. Also, being a Shapeshifter he’s very creative, often coming up with somewhat unorthodox ideas on the fly. On such idea was to use the threat of impending epidemic to cause mass confusion in which they could escape from two Jedi Hunters that were after him and Rem. This was something that proved easy to pull off, as being a Shapeshifter Zenethir could exemplify pretty much all visual symptoms of any illness. He also, since he could not completely develop one style due to his lack of talent in the Force, uses a mixture of the all of the lightsaber styles with his own special twist, switching constantly between forms as he fights. As a final note, as a Shapeshifter he has a photographic memory.

If there are still aspects of his character I haven’t mentioned, or you have any questions at all, just ask. I’m sorry if this has taken up your valuable time; your opinion would be greatly appreciated. It turned out a lot longer than I planned, sorry. Thank you so much for your time. Keep up the good work with your articles and novels, I enjoy reading them. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  20:09, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Lol, no, I understand that you're busy. It's just that the above was rife with so many grammar and spelling mistakes it wasn't even funny. I'm a perfectionist, I positively had to fix it or I would explode. I know you're busy, what with the GA on the front page thing, CUSWFN, CBT's crusade against category-less articles, and Ussej, I don't know how you find time to do it all. Unless you don't have a life outside of SWFanon, which I seriously doubt. :). I'm a recent images browser, and when I came across the new cover, I thought it looked awesome. Very nice. Looks very Star Wars-y and yet very cool. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:18, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * O.o I wish I had your incentive. And energy. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:27, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much! Was there any constructive criticism you could give me, or anything you liked and would want me to expand? I thrive on criticism. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  20:32, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

GAs
Brandon, I want to let you know that I don't want to make any enemies either. I will tell you exactly how it went last night.

Squishy had asked JM to come to IRC and talk about the GAs. I was on the computer because I couldn't sleep. (It was around 1:00 (ET).) So, with nothing better to do, I went to the IRC to see if I could do anything important to what they were planning to do. (At the time I was for keeping GAs on the main page.)

Vic said that the GAs were basically taking away from the FAs by being there and I could understand that. I wasn't really for it until he said something about the Rafe Richters of the site, which I totally despised, because they had very good potential, and could become FAs, but their authors didn't do anything to improve them. I asked Vic if we should put this into a new forum or have a consensus vote and he shot both down.

I didn't think much about it last night because I was tired, but I still think we should have put it into a consensus at the very least. I am not trying to "play both sides" here by saying that, because I believe that GAs shouldn't be showcased, but I also believe in consensus, because I love the community and have always valued its opinions. This is also not because you voted against me in the UOTM, even though that's what started this letter. I also thought it was kinda fair, since there were two admins and two non-admins there to agree on it. (Drowsy late night wisdom from me.)

I hope this sheds some light on what happened last night. If I forgot anything, I will bring it to your attention asap. I for one think we should put it towards consensus vote, but I think we'll have people, not naming any names, who'll vote: " I wanna have my article on the Main Page, but then after that I'll do nothing to improve it."

If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me. Thanks for your time. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 19:13, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Sorry to keep you waiting, but the database thing prevented me from posting. I was able to preserved my first post, so I'll post it below.

I was being a little hypocritical in that statement and I apologize. I should have written it better to get what I meant to say out.

I can definitely see where you are coming from. This isn't an easy argument for either side. As such, I am adopting a talk-to-Vic-about-this stance and I am going to ask for a consensus vote. (Of which, I should have argued more for last night.)

About the two articles on the main page twice, I really believe that it does take away from the FAs, as they are the culmination of a user's time and a user's ideas being put together to make the best of the best. As much as I'd like to have an article of mine on the Main Page twice, I'm really not one for vanity—despite what I may joke about on IRC. (Not to imply that you or anyone else here is, that's just my personal feelings on the matter.)

I am not being insecure about this—and I know that's not what you're saying. I enjoy the FAs as much as the GAs, but I still don't want to see them together for the reason above. I know it sounds a little weak, but, believe me, the less stuff like that I have to deal with the better my spiritual condition is.

I'm sorry if I'm not making any sense here, I really hate all of this arguing because that's not what the site was designed for. If it came down to it, right now I would abolish both GAs and FAs to end the "brawling", because it's very distracting. I want to make articles here. I want them to be critiqued, respected, even hated, but I don't want anyone to think I do them for the sole reason of making them a GA and eventually a GA. (Not that anyone's thinking that, once again, just pointing out something.) I liked the old days without the FAs, really I do. People would just say: "Hey, NK. I like (insert article name) very much. Great job."

I also realize there are two very different opinions of mine here, I just wanted to give them out so you'd know how I truly feel. To keep the community happy, I'll stay with the consensus vote and I'll vote for keeping them off the Main Page. I truly, deeply care about everyone here and their opinions, but sometimes I'm at a loss of words of how to say that without contradicting myself in some way.

If you haven't contacted Vic yet, I will, so we can end this silly, pointless debate and let the community decide, because I do care. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 20:06, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Just left a message for Vic that said that I'm going to create a forum to where both of you can post your opinions/views on this silly debacle. I will post a link asap. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 20:11, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Forum:GAs On Main Page Brawl. I am leaving after I give Vic his link to clear my head. I am exhausted over this debacle. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 20:17, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

You're welcome. I'm just tired of this whole issue. I'm going to watch until both you and Vic have given your say and then I'll vote. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 21:05, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Sure, I see no problem with that. I won't vote. But just to let you know, I'm not trying to make enemies with you. If GAs are voted back on the main page, then I have no problem restoring the queue and the main page with them. -- Victor  ( talk ) 21:25, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Novels

 * I haven't done any, and really don't plan on it. But I have a bit of info for the Veil of Darkness, if you'd like to look at it.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 10:47, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

Re:Stories
Well I think you wanted to do something about news lately here, there was;
 * 1) Star Wars real life news and updates
 * 2) Article story(on SWF)
 * 3) Latest news and events here
 * 4) New policies and rules set here(the IRC one might be good)


 * So yeah, thats it, hope that helps, gonne go see a movie, bye. Darth tader Mandalore battles 23:42, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I don't have IP lookup capabilities, only Wikia staff. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 20:35, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll bug one when I see one, ya. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 20:40, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, Jack got Sannse to do an IP lookup, and he has no other accounts, except the one on Wookieepedia by the same name. I believe you wanted the actual IP, but I don't think that's allowed. Sorry. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 20:57, 7 July 2007 (UTC)

IRC
Hey Rhea, if you have some free time, jump on Fanon IRC. A few of us are just BSin.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 16:46, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

Can you go on either AIM or IRC? I have something to discuss with you. -- Victor  ( talk ) 06:09, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

HP vote and what I wrote (hey, it rhymed)
Brandon, I would like to thank you for the vote you gave me in the HP elections. I was completely surprised by the nomination, and I'm glad you think I'd live up to the position.

Also, I didn't want you to think I was confronting you earlier on the Forum:Happy First Contact Day! page. I replied to you and was waiting for an answer, but I figured you didn't want to get into a potential conflict and opted out because you didn't give one. I understand that, and I wasn't going for a debate or nothing. I stink at debates and I feel horrible when doing them, so I wasn't going for that. It was an accident, and I tried to make that clear in the post. So I apologize for any misunderstanding. Thank you for your time.

P.S. for the character sketch thing that you read about Zenny, first, I want to thank you very much for reading it, and I'm glad you liked it. Secondly, is there any constructive criticism you could give me, any suggestions, any questions, anything you wanted me to describe better, more about his history, etc.? I thrive on criticism and I would love answering any questions you had. Thanks again! - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:46, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
 * You're willing to read it again? O.o Wow, thank you so much! And about the Bac chapters, I have the upcoming chapters on my watchlist, which I check frequently, so I usually am reading them while you're setting up the post on the Ussej forum. Also on my watchlist. :) I don't want to miss a thing. Also, MTFBYW on your election for DL. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:54, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I, personally liked Foretold in the Heavens, mostly because I love foreshadowing... and little mysterious prophecies that have multiple meanings. I already know about Damien, though, so it ruins the surprise. I have his page watched. :) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  13:30, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, that's fine, I don't mind waiting. If it's not worth waiting for it's not worth reading. Besides, I don't get on IRC much, we'd have to set up a time. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:19, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sure. I would have never guessed that the latter would have told me anything of the guy-that's-rumored-to-be-a-Muun. ;) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:04, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I know that and you know that, but does Damien know it? :) Personally, I'd like to think that your version wins out by seniority. Not to mention I don't like Muuns. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:39, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Here, here. If your book does get published, we can just let Abel figure it out. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:50, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

Absence
Hey Rhea, lately I have been really busy and I will be until late Sunday I believe. My computer is disconnected and moved so I have no internet on that, and the Laptop(what i'm using now) is now the main computer. And cause my parents use it as there main computer I can rarely use this. So once I get it my comp hooked up and I am less busy I will be back, I told you cause incase you wonder where I am for HP stuff. Darth tader Mandalore battles 22:22, 13 July 2007 (UTC)

Jaxia Veers
May I use the sentence "In later years, both Revan and the Jaxia Veers visited his tomb, though by the time the Jaxia arrived, the entrance had been closed off and his tomb looted." in my Tulak Hord article, since I know you own the name 'Jaxia Veers'? Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:05, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, I thought you did. Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:47, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, I know. Did I accidentally use a masculine pronoun or something? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:28, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh. I had better clarify that, thanks for pointing that out. What do you think of Tulak? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:43, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

You live in Jersey? Hello, I am from Boston. Michael Nicobrasi 07:36, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I see you graduated, I am just entering my senior year. Did you play any sports in school and are you planing to in college? Michael Nicobrasi 07:42, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

I see, this might sound stupid but I dream of playing in the NBA for the Celtics some day. I have a good shot, this last season me and my squad won the Basketball state championship. We haven't won any championships in football but I also one a JV Basketball championship in my Freshmen year but half the season until the coach thought I had potential i came off the bench as sixth man. Michael Nicobrasi 07:47, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

Yeah. I mean it was freakin hard wining those championships becuase on paper and statistcly we arent the best. Truly our best player were me and this Power forward who hapens to be my best friend, the starting runing back on our footbal squad, Israel. Usually I'd dish the ball like Steve Nash to him and he put it in. I did good this year averaging slightly about 15 points per game and about 10 assists and 10 rebounds per game. Michael Nicobrasi 07:54, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

RE:Congrats!
They did? Cool. If the elections are over, that means that you're now a DL, right? Heh, I knew you could do it. Hey, I just read your userpage and I just found out that you're only a year older than I am. I could have sworn you were at least a sophomore. You act a lot older than your age. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  11:33, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, okay. Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:14, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

CUSWFN/III
Enjoy

Darth tader Mandalore battles 16:02, 16 July 2007 (UTC)

Congrats
Thanks, I'm also honored that it's in your Hall of Fame. Also, congrats yourself in the new DL election. You Speak, I've Spoken 22:46, 16 July 2007 (UTC)

Good articles
Just to clear this up, I do not expect an immediate answer. I know your busy, and I'm used to waiting for replies; the person I RP with hasn't posted a reply in months because she's so busy, that's how it's been for about a year now. I'm used to it. So, to get to the point, firstly I'd like to say that I'm honored that you have Rohi in your Hall of Fame. I'm glad you like it. Stemming from that, on the FA noms and the GA noms, my articles have gotten largely positive reviews, to the point that I'm floored. Because I didn't know they were good. I don't know how good an article is, unless it is super-duper good or super-duper bad. My question is, what is a good article? What makes Rohi so good, or Shapeshifter good, or K'Anaverous 'greatly done,' or Shikkri good, or Wanderers 'very good,' or Lorsanan'sondora 'quality'? Truth be told, I don't know how to write a good, quality article, but, for some reason, I just can't seem to make a bad one (not that I've tried). - Solus (Bird of Prey)  13:58, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:18, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

You won't have to worry about it, not just yet. The purge of no source images won't be instilled for a long, long time. -- Victor  ( talk ) 01:38, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

Re:
Replied. Atarumaster88  ( Talk page ) 17:55, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Review of the rest of the novel. I browsed through your talk page and noticed Solus made some of the same comments, so I didn't feel they bore repeating. Let me stress that I appreciate your willing acceptance of criticism and allowing me to chop your work into tiny pieces for my sheer amusement and reading pleasure (which it, by and large, was). Cheers. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:10, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Infobox

 * I switched my infobox over to the one you have on your novel, but I encountered a small error in that there's a loose apostrophe running around when I have empty "preceded by"/"followed by" fields. If it's your template, do you have any advice? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:29, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Force Exile I and Force Exile II are currently using the infobox. Thanks for your help. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:04, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks. And no, I don't have an IM or MSN. I do have a wookieepedia.com e-mail account that you should be able to access. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:20, 20 July 2007 (UTC)

Re: Rafe Richter
I don't know. I have my hands full with other projects at the moment, if I do it wouldn't be until like mid-August. Also I wanted to know if you wanted to use Berethor Onasi in your novels. He is a Telosian king that lived sometime before 3,500 BBY and I don't have any ideas for him right now. --Trask Ulgo

StarWarsRP.com
I as wondering, if you do sign up for the SWRP.com, do they send you stuff via the e-mail address, like notices or anything? I am wondering this because if I do sign up I'll have to do it with Dad's email address, and I don't want him getting a bunch of stuff, I'll get in trouble. Plus, what's going on on the SWRP right now? I am very interested in it and do not want to read a long thread of posts to figure out what's happening, though I will have to do a little of that to get a feel for the characters. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  11:48, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Brandon. I'm glad it's at the beginning of one, I can get into the juicy stuff right away. Thanks. Just as a side note, there is a basic style FAQ or something, right? I've only RPed in one way, I don't know if there are others. I don't assume so, but I don't want to look like an idiot. :)- Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:14, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much, I'll most likely make an account tomorrow. BTW, have fun on your trip! - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:04, 29 July 2007 (UTC)

CBT

 * To me it seems CBT should start believing in god, hes life is a mess and praying in god will help him through, helped me once and it should help him. Even though it might have been the wrong thing to say, I'm still happy I said it.Troyb(CIS ShadowFeed) contribs[[Image:Troyb2.jpg|20px]] 23:43, 29 July 2007 (UTC)


 * I said should, Its his choice yes but time like his he should. I did what I think was right O.k. I dont care what anyone else thinks.Troyb(CIS ShadowFeed) contribs[[Image:Troyb2.jpg|20px]] 02:30, 30 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Do you know CBT personaly, I mean in real life?Troyb(CIS ShadowFeed) contribs[[Image:Troyb2.jpg|20px]] 02:51, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

RE:Galactic Civil War (ASWS)
I deleted the article Galactic Civil War (ASWS) because it contained only an infobox, plus I deleted the consequently broken redirects. Don't worry about the "link problem"- I took the liberty of going through the "What links here" on the article and its redirect and fixed them to link back only to Galactic Civil War (ASWS), so when you fill in the redlink, all the articles that have it linked will automatically have it linked, and no redirecting will be necessary. That is all. -- Victor  ( talk ) 08:48, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

Awesome pick for a picture.

-- Victor  ( talk ) 04:17, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Hehe. Indeed, it looks awesome. Anyway, no problem about the correction. -- Victor  ( talk ) 04:22, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

I already corrected it for you, but there should be no category "Ships". The correct one is "Starships", and "Twi'leks" instead of "Twi'Leks". Also, if you do create a category, please categorize it (because categories need a category too). -- Victor  ( talk ) 23:20, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Note

 * replied. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:28, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Congratulations!
Congratulations! Welcome to the Cabal, my friend. -- Victor  ( talk ) 04:46, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

Congrats, Brandon! Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 19:30, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

Thank You
Just wanted to say thank you for resizing those images, I was just going to do it when I realized how big they were, and you had gotten to it so thank you  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 02:03, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Cat policy

 * Rhea, who gave you permission to completely rewrite our categorisation policy? Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 11:16, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Altsage Template
I did some edits noticed your comment to Squishy Vic, see if you like what I did if not feel free to revert.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 19:03, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Glad I could be of help, just trying to prove myself as a helper around here, got out of the game for a while, and decided if I was comin back I should try and help everyone rather than just hide in the corner and write my arts.

Let me see what I can do  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 19:25, 7 September 2007 (UTC)


 * how's that work for you? Template:Altsaga N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 19:33, 7 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Glad I could be of help, I've found the best way to learn is actually to go to a template that looks like what you want, and start picking it apart, delete lines of code and then show preview to see what changes or disappears. Same way I learned HTML code for websites  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 19:44, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

Question

 * I just have one question: What did you see wrong with the Fireworm-scale armor article that needed to be changed. I read through the article and it seemed to keep to the manual of style, which I've also read three or four times (I'm thorough when it comes to rules). So i was just wondering what you saw against the sytle in it? --  Tesh  1  6  2  20:24, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks. I didn't write the article, a friend of mine did, but he's going to be gone tomorrow and the next day so I thought I'd try to clear that up. Again, thanks. --  Tesh  1  6  2  20:32, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I'll be sure to notify him on that. --  Tesh  1  6  2  06:43, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Jedi Orders
I've noticed you have a Dark Jedi Warrior group in operation around the time of the Rise of the Empire and the Rebellion eras, I was wondering if you had a Jedi Order in operation at the same time, if so I'd like to collaborate with you to intermix our two sagas and extend your Alternative Saga further into the future beyond the time of Sidious and Palpatine.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 21:16, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

Well what I was thinking is that, shortly before the Empire is born Havik and Jasyn will be flying the first wave of T.I.E. fighters created for the Republic as test pilots. They are going to have a battle over Dathomir where they will be forced planetside. Havik and Jasyn will be approached by a man from a village of force-sensitives hiding on the planet, as a result of visions of the Jedi Purge to come. They will take in Havik and Jasyn and begin teaching them the ways of the force, until Havik comes across a Malak Holocron in a nightsister cave. After some time as a Sith Pair, Havik will start to insinuate that he wants to destroy the Village on Dathomir, which after a long time being reluctant about his choice to follow Haviks dark path Jasyn will return to the village in order to finish his Light Jedi Training, and to protect the village from Haviks wrath. At this point Havik will go in search of his new apprentice Darth Nyne. What I was thinking that you could offer was the group of Light Jedi on Dathomir that would do the training. And after that the, "In motion the future is..."

- Darth Nyne

 N.Y.N.E. Comlink 22:02, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

I would definitely enjoy working with you in any aspect, I've been checking out your articles and your stories and you've got some real talent. If you wanted to create a hidden order of jedi somewhere around the end of the Republic at the least 5-10 years before 19 BBY, probably with a creation predating even that, that were in hiding on Dathomir, and using the force to keep the village hidden from even the nightsisters, I would be happy to add them as the village that start Havik and Jasyn along their paths to destiny. It would also leave the availability to pick up a lot of the internal characters from that group to spread the story farther outward.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 04:26, 8 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Also wanted to let you know, I'm beginning work on Jasyn Carnait now, and will soon start on Darth Havik to bring the three up to 19 BB which will be a year or two at most before Havik and Nyne attack Jasyn and the Unkown Jedi Order's village.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 05:41, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

What if we were to extend your Rendar family line, into the GCW period and have the elder of the Jedi Village, being that there was no distinct Jedi Order by then, be an ancestor of Kit?  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 05:12, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Re:

 * Replied. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:33, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Unused images
Hey Rhea, when you decided to "unuse" an image, please delete it. Thanks. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

DL Problem
Hello, Brandon. Could you please look over this forum: Forum:DLs - FA voting change?, and vote on it? Thanks. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 22:11, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

What is the current year in the RP? Xwing327 02:33, 13 September 2007 (UTC)

I don't know about deleting userpages. I believe Vic did that, so you'd have to ask him for that reasoning. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 15:55, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Let me clarify that, because I unintentionaly said that Vic deleted his userpage. I mean to say that he just put the user template there. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 16:00, 22 September 2007 (UTC)

Force Exile II

 * Hey Brandon, are you familiar with Force Exile? Have you read any of it? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:55, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it's been up . . . Force Exile I: Fugitive and Force Exile II: Smuggler, though Smuggler isn't finished. I'm in the final stages of working on Part 5 of Smuggler and that's what's been keeping me from reading the rewritten SaL:TLUPB. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:47, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I appreciate it. And yeah, Fugitive is about 120ish pages altogether. Smuggler is already past that. I'd appreciate any feedback you've got. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:51, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I was going for a different style of narration when I wrote that part. Fixed now, thanks. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:42, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I put it back to "was" because it just doesn't seem to make sense. That paragraph is designed to be written from the narrator's perspective, almost as if it's an opening crawl to a Star Wars movie, for purposes of setting, but that tense error was nasty. Also, I did catch a diction error a few lines down, so it's all good. Thanks for the review!  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 29 September 2007 (UTC)

Block
No problem. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:34, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

Vandal
Nice job blocking that vandal, just in the future, please erase the page the vandal creates (if he creates it). If he was to vandalize, for example, Ussej Padric Bac, just revert his edit (since it'd be stupid to delete it, unless you wish to copy all the information first, delete it, then re-create it, but then you'd lose all those edits and that history), but if the vandal creates a page (like he did on the talk page of the FA changes) then just blast it. Just thought I'd let ya know. -- Victor  ( talk ) 06:12, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Ussej II
No, as long as the required sections are still filled. -- Victor  ( talk ) 23:31, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

Reviews

 * I've reviewed all of the new segments that you've uploaded. Thank you for taking the time and consideration you've shown in getting my opinion, and thanks for the story. As I'm sure you know- any criticism or suggestion I make is purely optional and subjective and is only intended to improve the quality of the story from my own POV, which may or may not reflect your vision of the tale. Thanks again.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:03, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Replied on my talk page. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:48, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * FYI. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:51, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, of course the plot and coverage of the battle of Coruscant seems sketchy!- I'm reading an unfinished version! ;-) As the author, you know what will happen and what other things are going on- you see the big picture. So, no, the battle seems choppy and fragmented to the uninformed reader, because it is. It's not completely filled in with all the accounts and such. Now, as the author with the "big picture", this is where you tell the reviewer, "It's the plot, stupid." and move on. In the future, if I point out something in the story that just hasn't been revealed yet, a similar line will tell me that it's intentional and has a purpose and isn't just sloppy writing. :-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:21, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * And by the way, keeping readers in suspense is not a very nice thing to do. So naturally, I use the technique often (or would if I had readers). Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:25, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Another look
I've made the corrects you and NKSCF asked for on Muggera. Please let me know if it is enough.

Account
Holy sh**. What was that all about? I only use the account for Fanon Wiki and BTTF Wiki, and I forgot to sign off. You can ban the account forever, and ban me, but just remember that Squishy Vic knows of this too and did not take the same action.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 01:40, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Since you obviously did not read my comment before you responded, I said above that I forgot to sign off. Now please leave me alone.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 01:42, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I didn't get snippy. You did to me by not even reading my comment before you posted.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 01:46, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Whatever. Oh, BTW, Squishy Vic does have a better userpage than you in my opinion, and its not just because we're having an argument right now.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 01:52, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh. I see. Well anyways, I'm back for good, so just put up with me for the next million years or so.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 01:57, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. You are too. But believe me, I am very self-centered. The reason I "left" was because no one nommed me for HP.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 02:37, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No, but I wish ;)&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 03:00, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Very funny &mdash; Darthtyler Talk 03:03, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Are you okay with my changes to Template:Battle? I need an admin's opinion.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 03:06, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

I didn't know he used the Roman commander account here. I only talked to him with that account on Fanon Wiki and Halopedia. -- Victor  ( talk ) 03:13, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Of course. If persistent then his Roman commander gets infinite banned while his Darth tyler gets 3 day ban. -- Victor  ( talk ) 03:17, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

RE:
Thanks. But your signature "talk" link is still too long. Rename it to "Staffroom" or something. Whatever floats your boat, Mr. President. -- Don Victor   ( contact )  00:37, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

apologising
I am apologising to Frog 15 and removing the word Pathetic.It was not itended to do anything to the user just to stress my point-Clonecommander19 03:05, 19 October 2007 (UTC)

GA nomination
About your article Jonathan Bac, i was wondering if I could have a friend review it too, b/c frankly, he's a lot better at grammatical/spelling issues then me? The ones i noticed were really only because i'd been reviewing them recently for the SAT. --  Tesh  162  09:06, 19 October 2007 (UTC)

Congrats on the GA. --  Tesh  162  16:19, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

apologies
I was removing the word pathetic.I did not change anything else.-Clonecommander19 13:45, 19 October 2007 (UTC)

Article Ideas
Hey, I've been writing an article; the Phoenix Storm. I really like what I have, but I need some new ideas/way to improve it. If you have any please suggest them. Thanks!--Foxfire 02:14, 20 October 2007 (UTC)

SWRP problems
Erm, ever since the new board came up, I've been unable to log on, so I lurked and found that I had to reset the password, so I set out to do that and put in my dad's e-mail address, because I don't have my own. I did that last night and thirty minutes ago, and I haven't seen the message. I don't know if my dad changed something or what, and I made sure to check the junk box. I can't post on SWRP, because I can't register another account if my dad's e-mail address isn't working. I'm not sure what to do. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  16:52, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * My username is 'Solus,' both the screenname and the username are the same for me, though the username might be lowercase, but I don't think so. I realized that dad may have found it to be junk, that's why I sent it again this afternoon, and I checked it constantly for forty minutes +. Thank you so much for your help. I cannot register because I can't seem to get e-mail from SWRP, but on IRC there's a way for two people to communicate privately, JM76 and I did that to collaborate, but I don't know how he did it, all I know is I had to do some kind of code name and then type in my SWFanon password and he set the rest up. I can't quite remember. I can go check real quick. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:24, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Gack. I checked my dad's computer five minutes ago and both e-mails were there, as if they had been mailed at the same time; just a couple minutes ago it seemed. Wacky. At any rate, I clicked on the link on one, and now I just have to hope that my dad won't delete the password it sends me. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  21:59, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

Removing messege
Brandon rhea may i please remove the messege you left on my talk page, i have seen it and finally understand.-Clonecommander19 18:17, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

Fanon

 * Hey Brandon. You don't mind if I mention your fanon in an article I'm writing do you? --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 01:56, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Its for an article about a historian I plan on making sometime soon. I wanted his historical writings to go from about Founding of the Old Republic-Dark Age-ish. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 02:52, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

RE:Ussej Padric Bac
I created a new category, at Category:Former Sith Lords, since a Sith can't technically "fall" as a Jedi can. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( Commission Room ) 21:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

RE
Guess what? I'm starting to think Zak was right. The admins are dictators around here. Whatever you guys say, goes. No matter what anyone else thinks.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:24, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * God I should've stayed on my vacation. You know what, I might actually do that! This place has gotten much worse since I "left".&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:28, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I bet you are.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:30, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Have you ever started a wikia?&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:33, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Alright. Just wanted to know.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 00:59, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

You're welcome. No need to thank me. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( Commission Room ) 20:57, 25 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Thats good to know -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:02, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

:(

 * Please dont change your vote, like you said they nominated articles like mine before, also there is a seperate article on the council, I just felt like it should stay there. Also there is enough Detail to be GA like you said, I dont want you to change your vote on what I say but think about it.TroybAllSpark Quest contribs[[Image:MovieBlack.JPG|30px]] 21:12, 25 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Well I dont know what else detail to add, I'm having a writers block. But I give permission to you if you want to add stuff to it, go ahead.TroybAllSpark Quest contribs[[Image:MovieBlack.JPG|30px]] 21:19, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

Hello
Alright, its been itching me to ask you and tell you something. First of all, the "telling you something" part is to tell you you need to archive this page. Second, I need an admin's opinion (or a DL, for that matter, since you're both). What do you think of Kosh? I feel the sections are too long and I may need to group them into subsections.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 02:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, yes it has redlinks all right. I'm planning to get it to FA. I'm going to create all of the redlinks after I finish the article. When I was writing Darth Tyler, I created the redlinks as I wrote it, and it took a long time.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 02:52, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

New CIS
Very nice of you to help out in the rewriting of New CIS. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( Commission Room ) 03:24, 26 October 2007 (UTC)