Talk:56th Order Battalion (Republic)/@comment-36984184-20180922134755

Full Reasons for Edits:  Edits were made to bring Grammar up to 'fluent' english, previously the profile had been switching between past and present tense repeatedly, and confusingly. Even using words which don't make sense for the context like describing who led the batallion with a word 'Leaded' which the definition refers to lead based paints. The Battle of Tattoine had been mentioned as a conflict the battalion had been present in, but wasn't mentioned in their history, so I moved that to their history, and mentioned the skirmishes of the tattoo system in which the battle of Tattoine took place in order to avoid retreading old ground. I rephrased a short paragraph about how Darth Vader "Fired" the battalion as with context given later in the profile it was implied they turned traitor, and joined the rebellion. Also you don't "Fire" a Battalion, you discontinue them. I rephrased the "What happened after order 66" section because it seemed to be tripping over itself in terms of wording, and structure.

All Information present in before the edit remains present after the edit, merely made clearer. If I have Misinterpreted anything in the process I will be happy to openly converse, and correct it. However I don't believe that There is any obvious reason to maintain these grammatical, structural, and context errors. If however there is context I am missing I ask you enlighten me.