Forum:CL:RC-1257

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I would like to have my article RC-1257 reviewed. This is my first article in Star Wars fanon (and my namesake article) and I am looking forward to make it a Good article in the future. As a new, and inexperienced user, I would like to have some advice from the "elders".

The article is far from completed yet (the only part that is completed is the introduction) but I want to know if the current quality of the article is good enough (vocabulary, grammar...) for the Good standards and if not, what changes should I make. Also, is the way I am writing his story in Biography section good, or should I adopt a different way of writing his story? (This is my main concerning). Images or other media have not been uploaded yet because I am not an autoconfirmed user. --Woka (talk) 06:31, May 7, 2010 (UTC)