Thread:Sakaros/@comment-29301-20180903145046/@comment-29301-20190412153607

I read it and I liked it.

From time to time I'm disappointed in myself because I keep not being able to find anything in these stories of yours to criticize. Then I remember how I told you Desperate Measures ended in a cop-out because you didn't kill off the main hero, and then I'm back to normal.

My favorite parts were the Jedi-morality-argument stuff toward the end, and the banter about the gizka earlier (needless to say, I do enjoy all the nods to the KotOR series). Seeing Tirien's frustration over the gizka thing made me realize why I like him so much as a character; I find him very relatable with his grumpy demeanor and dry sense of humor.

I don't know why, I've been curious about what happened to Jylo ever since I read Twist of Fate. I thought you'd forgotten about him. On the side, have you ever considered showing what happened to that one Senate Guard who survived the ballroom blitz back in Danse Macabre?

Only one other comment; it's helpful that the story's set prior to Aldayr's disappearance/grisly death/whatever; having that not hanging over Narasi and company helps keep the mood of the story somewhat light. And I'm wondering now if what she and Tirien were up to on Darkknell is going to remain ambiguous.