CS:Nemo Qel-Droma

This is the review page for the ongoing featured article nomination of Nemo Qel-Droma.

Comments
I have two comments to start this off:
 * Just to be clear, the introduction is currently eight hundred and eighty eight (888) words, which a little over one third of the biography length. I have tried to shorten it down, but I am currently unable to make it any shorter. I know it is a very long intro, but I'm hoping it won't be to much of an issue.
 * I personally don't feel a relationships section would be very useful here, and seeing as it's not always required, I'm inclined towards not having one. If users feel it needs to be added, however, I will add one.

Thanks to any and all who review this!  Savage  1138  16:10, February 7, 2012 (UTC)