Thread:Captain Dermot/@comment-1009967-20180106021051/@comment-1009967-20180106034530

Hey again. Thanks for the comments, I realize there's not currently much on Whiner to speak on at the moment. Reading through yours does, though, make me think about article intro length. I intend to make Carrine's at least a little bit longer, but I still want it to be short enough to read easily. The idea of an intro is to get someone hyped up to read about the character, and for my money, no one does that better than the Transformers wiki, with things like "Enormous in both size and power, Trypticon is an unstoppable engine of destruction" for a first line, instead of "Carrine Velos was a". I do appreciate the professionalism of the latter at times, but there's just nothing like some of those Transformers intros. Any general thoughts, there?