CS:L337 Model BFG blaster rifle

This is the review page for the ongoing good article nomination of L337 Model BFG blaster rifle.

Objections

 * 1) *Introduction: Expand it to 100 words.
 * 2) *Characteristics
 * 3) **"Ridiculously over-sized, the weapon was not as widely-popular as other blaster rifles" Remove 'Ridiculously' as that's big POV. I think saying "over-sized" alone is sufficient, although a less obvious-POV word could be use (like perhaps "Largely over-sized"). Up to you.
 * 4) *History
 * 5) **"The gruesome nature of the sportsman's death, coupled with the L337's numerous injury reports, was just too much to dismiss as a freak occurrence." I don't have too much of a problem with the 'gruesome' POV, but that could be reworded if you like. However, "was just too much to dismiss" needs to be attributed to someone, otherwise its clearly POV. Simple fix, like "was just too much to dismiss as a freak occurrence for the public" or "the press" or something. Just standing alone is POV from the article's POV, not anything in-universe.
 * 6) *BtS
 * 7) **A bit of context on Dareth could be used, like on who he is, what he does (fellow author? Etc.)
 * 8) *That's it. –Victor  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|15px]] ( talk page ) 05:56, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) *That's it. –Victor  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|15px]] ( talk page ) 05:56, 22 April 2009 (UTC)