Talk:Octo

You need to fix the following character problems:
 * "&hellip;and was the strongest and bravest in his group." This is POV. Most of his group or a random person in the galaxy would probably disagree. This is a wiki, and a neutral point of view is required for all articles, so you should specify who considered him to be the strongest and bravest.
 * "and was intelligent as well." Same problem as above. In what aspects was he intelligent? Who considered him to be such?

These points at issue are similar to the ones I encountered in other articles of yours. Please contact me or post a message here if you've corrected these. Thank you.&mdash; TK-999  (Comm channel) (Campaign of conquest) 10:37, February 12, 2011 (UTC)