Talk:Revisiting Endor Episode 6/@comment-31050517-20191217202841

Hey sorry for not getting to this sooner, but without further ado, here is my review for Ep. 6! I know I've said this before, but I love how this is like audio logs, keep it up with that. Seems like Captain Zach cannot hold it together against that Imperial officer, I think that shows a lot of depth within his character. Loved the way you described Roner, but maybe show only a little more than just tell, otherwise, quite descriptive. I'm digging how this is more about character development rather than violence, I can see every one of them talking to each other with their natural conversations. Interesting that Zach this time stopped the argument between the verbally hostile Cooper to Kyle. Minor thing - "your's" should just be "yours". Fast-forwarding a bit, "wampa turp" is a great Star Wars curse, if you will, so great job on that. So is this the last one? I kinda hope so since the narration ended yet again I hope not since I really like this series. What are blackhats again? Anyway, another good one!