DL:Ontuse Karaane

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Review

 * The article is okay. However, it needs much revision.

Things that need to be done

 * Just in the first paragraph there are some spelling and grammar errors. Also, that template at the top should be moved to the talk page. The main picture must be resized to fit the infobox. The last section of Equipment needs to be formatted so it wont be cluttered and disorganized, and lastly I would like to see a personality/traits section.

FA status to be removed?

 * Until those things are fixed, yes.