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''I never thought it would come to this. Never did I think that I would turn my back on the Jedi Order, when I was on top. I never thought that one day I would be looking over my lightsaber blade at the face of my brother, now with the blade at his throat. Never would I have dreamed that he was a Sith Lord. That my brother was one of the Phantoms of my Past. That he was...Darth Plaquis the Wise.''

Tell me what you think of this story I am about to write. Tell me truthfully what your thoughts are.