Star Wars Fanon:Deletion page/One Year War

One Year War
After I stumbled across this article in the maintenance categories, I decided to try and clean it up. However, there are more problems than just spelling/grammar errors&mdash;the article contradicts itself. The starting date for the war is given in the infobox as 444 BBY, while the beginning paragraph states that it begun in 420 ABY. There are also problems with the endings, as it is set in both the infobox and in the main body as 445 BBY; one might ask how could a war last from 444 BBY to 445 BBY or from 420 ABY to 445 BBY (note that this also clashes with the title).

Another major contradiction is near the "The Battle of Trengganu" paragraph. This section declares that this particular battle was the first major space battle in human history, which is POV and causes another problem&mdash;if this really was the first major space battle, then how could the Galactic Republic be involved? Not to mention that there are two other spatial conflicts mentioned and described; the One Week Battle and Operation Barbossa [sic] or Barbarossa.

Apart from these inconsistencies, the article has an excess of grammatical, italicization, capitalization and spelling errors. For example, "Galactic Republic" is nearly always written as "GALACTIC REPUBLIC", the whole article is in the present tense and there's not a single italicized ship name. There are also numerous OOU month names ("January" (which I've corrected), "November", "December" and "September") present all over the article.

The final problem is rather just the choice of words&mdash;the author uses words like "innocent" [civilians] (corrected), "huge" [humanitarian crisis] (corrected) and "largest" [land battles].

Although I agree that some of the POV errors are not so serious, the author has clearly abandoned both the article and the wiki, leaving behind a number of contradictions, which cannot be retconned due to his absence. I suggest deletion.&mdash; TK-999  (Comm channel) (Campaign of conquest) 15:28, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) &mdash; TK-999  ISD-arrow.jpg(Comm channel) (Campaign of conquest) 15:28, January 30, 2011 (UTC)