User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Update, March 8, 2009/@comment-20644-20090309213121

Just wanted to give an update on this update (lol). Chapter 3 is COMPLETELY done. Solus has reviewed it and it's been saved as a .PDF, so it's all ready to go in the next few days. Chapter 4 is about 1/3 done, and it's coming along really well.

I've been able to tell how I've improved since writing these segments over a year ago. Right now, I have about 3 pages of Chapter 4 done. This same sequence in the first draft of TCO was only 2 pages long. I've been able to expand the prose not with historical detail about characters or anything, but with characterization. I think it adds a lot more to the story and I'm hoping others agreed.

Check back soon.