User talk:Darth Void

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Categorization
You're welcome; however, I should make you aware that you still have to properly categorize The Palpatine. -- Michaeldsuarez  ( Talk ) ( Deeds ) 19:31, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

I just did it I forgot to do it again. Thanks Darth Void 19:32, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. Thanks. -- Michaeldsuarez [[Image:Sabersmilygreend.jpg|20px]] ( Talk ) ( Deeds ) 19:33, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Picture
hi i was just browsing and saw your Darth Void article if you like i can have a real looking red blade added to it its up to you. Mal-man 21:02, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the offer but I want it to look a little cartoony.Darth Void 21:15, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

ok understood by the way good job on your articles

Mal-man 15:52, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Darth Void 15:53, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

Ventooine
I have reverted your changes to Ventooine. The article is not labeled as a Free-add article or a Free-edit article, so you cannot add new information to it or make any changes to the content aside from spelling, grammar and formatting without permission from the author, Jwebb13. Please remember this in the future. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 20:40, 30 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Sorry I thought it would work differently since its an official planet. Darth Void 14:34, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

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Thank you for your future cooperation. -- Knowledge the Article Writer talk 15:44, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, I try to remember. Darth Void 15:50, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Darth Prone
Sure! What for?Mattkenn3 20:11, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Thank you. I was planning to resurrect him during the end of the story. Darth Void 22:33, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Wonderful. Go ahead.Mattkenn3 22:39, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Made a change to Darth Prone just to the era's section. Remember if I make a change you don't like then feel free to let me know. Thanks again for making this possible!Darth Void 23:04, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Good. If you need any help or suggestions on anything, just let me know. Also, can you give me a little more descriptive idea about what and how Prone is going to do whatever he does. I just wanna know before it gets put in the novel.--ThanksMattkenn3 03:46, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

What are you planning on doing now?Mattkenn3 16:20, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

writing the next chapter in the story. I have something very ironic planned for Darth Prone and General Vigreous Vigreous is an anagrom of a characters real name. I'll let you know before I use Darth Prone in the story, Darth Prone won't show until the very end of the story, the very end. Darth Void 16:28, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to say that chapter 2 is now finished. 700 ABY: Darth Void Darth Void 16:33, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

I put a link to The Grand Sith Purge in Darth Prone's article. If you care, I'll take it out. Also, I put it in Janok Kaan. Kaan is a character that I've been wanting to throw into Prone's story, but I couldn't find an opening. But, your resurrection of him made it work out. Look at Janok Kaan. If it bothers you, just tell me, I'll take it out.Mattkenn3 16:40, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

I saw that about two hours ago and I thought Janok Kaan was a good addition to the story, I am confused about how Plo Koon and Cin Dralling were his masters sense they were both killed during order 66, plus they would both be dead even if they had survived because they would have died probably at 200 years old at the most. Did you mean they were his masters by holocron?Darth Void 16:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Right. Kaan was a very scholary-type person.  He studied the ways of the jedi in the old order and thought that they were far greater and wiser than the jedi of his time.  Though he had a real master, he gave him no credit because his teachings were worthless.  He went through the archives and found ancient books and holocorns of the jedi.  He thought that those two were the ones that he could learn from the most.  He read about them and learned about their ways and had to, pretty much, teach himself.Mattkenn3 16:55, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Look at the additions to Darth Prone. They are about his lightsaber skills. Do you like?Mattkenn3 21:02, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, lost my connection to the site. I probably wont notice any other changes you made until day after tommorow got to go to work at Pizza Hut. I have finished typing chapter 3 used Janok Kaan. Darth Void 21:19, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Re:User with offensive name
There's nothing offensive about the user name. It's just a joke from Bevis and Butthead. What I have removed, though, is the "bunghole" reference on the user page. Other than that, the user has done nothing wrong. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 13:44, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

ok, didn't know if you would consider it offensive or not. Darth Void 13:57, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Deletion
It's done. Darth Vain is no more. -- Michaeldsuarez  ( Talk ) ( Deeds ) 17:14, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you Darth Void 17:25, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. -- Michaeldsuarez [[Image:Sabersmilygreend.jpg|20px]] ( Talk ) ( Deeds ) 17:50, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Kaan
Remember, Kaan was against the purge.Mattkenn3 17:31, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, what about it? Darth Void 17:49, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Just a reminder that he won't be involved until later on. :)Mattkenn3 17:54, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

I dare you to look at Valsont, suprise, suprise. Darth Void 18:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

I saw it this morning. A little twist is always nice. Do you have his death planned out?Mattkenn3 00:59, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Possibly... Can't reveal too much ;) Darth Void 14:08, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Who is this Master Vlux?Mattkenn3 17:42, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

A deceased Jedi Master who took Kaan in as his Padawan. I think you will like what Kaan will soon do. Darth Void 19:50, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

I suppose I will find out.Mattkenn3 21:45, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Sorry for keeping you in the dark, just want their to be some suprises. Darth Void 21:57, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

That's fine.Mattkenn3 23:46, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Saw darth at-at. It'll work well.Mattkenn3 23:50, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

If the destruction of Ventooine made such a dynamic shift in the force, maybe some of the Jedi would have felt it. Like Kaan, Allster, Angular, Ploke-un.Mattkenn3 01:41, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

They did feel the destruction Ventooine, I didn't feel it was to important to state, if Darth Void is in the Unknown Regions and felt it, then surely the Jedi in the Known Regions of the Galaxy would have felt it. Speaking of Darth Void, what did you think of his heritage? And Darth At-At is a character you have breifly met and been introduced to in the story. Darth Void 13:34, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

Good. I made up the second of Prone's elite apprentices. He is Darth Sansus. How do you like? I think he won't be in this novel. You should make a sequel.Mattkenn3 01:09, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

Jar Jar Blinks
I see you've been editing my article Jar Jar Blinks. I'm not mad and you put in some funny stuff but, remember it isn't your arctile. Jonn1234 18:17, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

Sansus
What do you think about Prone's second padawan, Darth Sansus?Mattkenn3 20:38, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

I think that it will definatly work, I am nearly finished with Chapter 9.Darth Void 21:12, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Good, keep going.Mattkenn3 21:17, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Easy for you to say, I bought a Wii Friday, or was it Saturday? Anyways I have been hooked to Super Smash Bros. Brawl and Super Paper Mario for the last few days. I'll get it finished later, I will put Darth Sansus in the sequel, I have a lot of open options to take right now with the story, so I kinda need to think it through before continuing. I want the ending to have some closure to it as well as being a little open. Darth Void 21:39, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Calm down. I understand. If you need any help, I'm free.Mattkenn3 21:42, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

What is Sansus' birth name? Darth Void 14:13, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Alno DoonMattkenn3 15:35, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Good job on the end.Mattkenn3 15:36, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks. Darth Void 15:38, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Source
Can you prove to me that you created Image:Darth Desecrate.jpg? That look suspiciously like something out of a comic book. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 00:11, 17 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Yeah,its from a comic, I whited out a corner of it, to make it mine and so i wouldn't break any copy right lawsDarth Void 03:50, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

That doesn't mean you get to claim it as your own creation. The source is the comic book. The artist is whoever drew the comic book PLUS yourself because of the edits. The editing details is what you did to the image. The licensing is fair use. You're allowed to edit images here, but by saying you created an image that you didn't you did break copyright law. Please correct this immediately. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 03:56, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, I Corrected it, for a good laugh check out the other version link. Darth Void 15:28, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Talk page
If you don't want it to be deleted and it is just a workspace, you can move it to User:Darth Void/Workspace if you want. I think that would be best for now. I have a User:Mattkenn3/Workspace where I work on my upcoming articles. When I'm done working, I copy and paste it on the article.Mattkenn3 16:23, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks! didn't know those existed.Darth Void 16:28, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Have you seen Dark Eruption?Mattkenn3 16:37, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Not before now, that is what Darth Rupture used to destroy Ventooine, Good job on the article. If you don't mind I would like permission to kill off any characters that you have made, I doubt I would kill off Darth Prone or Sansus, If I did kill of Kaan it would be more of a sacrifice then a defeat in a duel. I doubt I will kill any off if you give permission but if I get your permission and if I am going to kill off someone then I would work with you until we reached an agreement on how they died, It certainly wouldn't be something lame like Order 66.Darth Void 16:46, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Maybe. I'll try to think about it and you can think about it and we'll see what happens. Sounds good?Mattkenn3 16:48, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Darth Hunter
Thank youDarth Void 19:01, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) hi nice user page

Collaborative Consulting
Is there going to be a war between the Sith and Jedi? Is that your plan?Mattkenn3 16:50, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Not expecting there to be a War maybe a few battles but not a war, remember the Jedi and Sith are both in the process of Rebuilding their orders. The Sith Vs. Jedi is always used, I am planning on something different. Not exactly sure what at this point.Darth Void 18:07, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Ok. Did you think about the killing off?Mattkenn3 18:12, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

yes, I don't think I will kill anyone off at this point, if I change my mind I'll consult with you about it. Darth Void 18:17, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Is Project Grief what I think it is?Mattkenn3 19:00, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Yep. Long live and all hail the General. Darth Void 19:04, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Do you wanna use my Grievous, Grievous (Mattkenn3)? I'll finish itMattkenn3 19:13, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Nah, it won't really have general grievous in the droid body, but there will be some one in their so to speak, look at the Vacare's thoughts towards the end of Emerging Threat for an idea of who it will be. Thanks though. Darth Void 19:20, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

I see your plan. Like N-K Necrosis but with, you know. I see.Mattkenn3 19:26, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Right. Darth Void 19:32, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

I added Vain and Rupture as known users of Dark Eruption, wasn't thinking, can I have permission?Mattkenn3 19:34, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, you have been a huge help. Darth Void 19:39, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

What about Prone's third apprentice? I haven't thought about it much. Maybe he should be a Kaleesh or a Herglic. What do you think?Mattkenn3 19:47, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

I think a Herglic not only have I never seen one be force sensitive but I also think that Prone would be a little wary of a Kaleesh assuming that he knew that General Grievous was a Kaleesh. Darth Void 19:59, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

I haven't thought of a name. Help me come up with one, will you?Mattkenn3 20:07, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

how about Z'taar and for a darth name Darth Cognitum Darth Void 20:09, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

That sounds good. I'll get on it. Thanks--Mattkenn3 20:11, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

When you have a chance I would like you to give me some input on my Raptor article. Darth Void 20:18, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

It's ok. I can't say much. It's not finished! Keep up the good work.--Mattkenn3 20:51, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Oh, you want to use my droids. Only Prone, Grievous, and Dooku knew about the secret location on Hav'dak's smallest moon. Prone will be the only one in the Galaxy with knowledge of their locationMattkenn3 21:22, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Using Len Duok too. Good.

I noticed that you Grand Sith Purge as the era for the mentioned characters so I figured you would want me to use them. Now Hav'dak's smallest moon is where the Droids are stored? If you have more info that I could use let me know. Darth Void 21:44, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Yes, Prone was a major supporter of the CIS and was put in charge, by Dooku, to operate the elite droid manufactoring and creation. He used one of the large hidden caves of Hav'dak to create and store the droids for Grievous's army.Mattkenn3 21:52, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

I have a couple ideas that I will ask you about. Some about Project Grief and some about other parts of the story.Mattkenn3 22:53, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Also, Prone would teach AT-AT, as he is the last Sith, but plan on taking the title of Dark Lord of the Sith for himself.Mattkenn3 23:25, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Alright, what are your questions? Darth Void 12:28, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

I made a quick Darth Cognitum. I'll add more later, but I was going to ask a few questions but decided not and to let it be a surprise. But I do think that Prone will fight "Project Grief" right?Mattkenn3 23:42, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

Your reading my idea's like an open book, In some ways it will make the novel much more dramatic for those who know about Darth Prone's background. Darth Void 15:31, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

Make Prone a bit more uncaring. A little less positive and dark. Good job so far

What are you working on now?Mattkenn3 22:18, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

I have some more ideas, I'll tell you tommorrow.Mattkenn3 02:02, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

I finished the Force Unleashed yesterday, very good novel, I am ready to start working again. Darth Void 16:04, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Block
Sorry, I had been told that IP belonged to Darth hunter, and was lead to believe that a check user had already been done. It's now been unbanned. My apologies. - Brandon Rhea <font color="#1A2BBB">(talk) <font color="#1A2BBB">(contribs) 21:04, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

That's fine, your just doing your job, besides I always wondered what a ban screen looked like. ;) lol just had an edit conflict. Darth Void 21:06, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

More Character Stuff
I've been thinking of some stuff and have made up my mind. First, look at Len Duok, it tells a little about his death. Second, I added some info about Kaan and a group of jedi that help him. It's on his page. Third, see on User:Mattkenn3/Gallery, the last two pictures on the second to last row are of the person who defeats Darth Cognitum. The pics on the last row are of Kaan fighting off some of Darth Sansus's Sith Minions. The last pic is of Kaan and the Golden Knights fighting off Sith invaders after the death of Len Duok. What do you think?Mattkenn3 21:14, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

Its good, I finished Chapter 3 today. Darth Void 21:20, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

I saw it. Only one problem. Hav'dak's moon is completely uninhabited and Prone would have been allowed in because it was his operation. But, you're still doing good. Keep it up:)Mattkenn3 21:23, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

hmmm, I'll fix that later. Darth Void 21:26, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

Made an error section on my workspace. Feel free to write down what I messed up.Darth Void 21:29, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

Are you still here? Do you mind if I make the planet Zhuun article? Just describe the enviorment to me, oh, and the inhabitants.Mattkenn3 21:52, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, I went to work at that time, I will let you make the Zhuun article, but I still need to flesh it out a bit, by the way, the Planet is Red. Darth Void 15:05, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Red? I imagined it kinda like this->, but I'll see. It's where I thought Ventar would die. What are it's inhabitants?Mattkenn3 16:02, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Ehh... Close enough I am not going to be picky on this (lol), There is none, the population was wiped out by the sith, It was an unknown humanoid speices that lived there. And it is where Ventar will die and where Alno Doon becomes Darth Sansus. Darth Void 16:07, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Ok, I'll get on it.Mattkenn3 16:08, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

You might want to put something on your workspace and on emerging threat about it being a sequel.Mattkenn3 16:18, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

It was on the Outer Rim, were there any notable neighboring planets?Mattkenn3 16:23, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Nope, I also fixed Chapter 3. Darth Void 16:25, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Look at Krath LCS Droid. Will that work?Mattkenn3 21:23, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

I'm making Ventar now. What do you think os the Krath LCS Droids?Mattkenn3 21:55, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Looks good! feel Free to check out Emerging Threat, it is being rewritten into a book format. Darth Void 21:57, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

See the outstanding errors on your workspace. Ventar's death is a little bit different.Mattkenn3 22:37, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

I noticed that, Check out the Infobox on Shattered Order.

Cool. Thanks. I've got a few more ideas. Oh, one quick thing. When Prone takes Sansus in as his new apprentice, he puts the Citidel raid off until later. When he feels Sansus is a worthy Sith Lord, he will attack.Mattkenn3 22:43, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

You can put the IG-100 MagnaGuards and the Krath LCS Droid in as the Sith Lord's bodyguards.Mattkenn3 20:48, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

Don't have enough time right now, I am getting ready for work, I am taking a break from Shattered Order I have been busy fixing my redlinks, re-writing emerging threat in story format and updating my articles. Darth Void 20:55, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

That is fine. I have many plans for my characters. I have been thinking about the third part of the Emerging Threat series. I might need to hear some more of your ideas for Shattered Order first.Mattkenn3 20:32, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

I am planning to kill off most of the characters in shattered order. ones that are safe for certain are
 * Darth Prone
 * Janok Kaan


 * Realy? I was planning on keeping Prone, Cognitum, Sansus, and Kaan.  I have plans for them in the third novel.  Most will fall then.  But please kill off all my other Jedi in the novel.Mattkenn3 21:06, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

I have something special in mind for the third one, I have a good idea on how it will end.How about a coin toss to decide the fates of cognitum and Sansus? If you have a coin then you can do the toss. Darth Void 21:35, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Hmm...
 * We'll just work it out. What is your idea?Mattkenn3 23:13, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

The Sith are turned on each other. Sansus trys blowing up a planet and it back fires. Cognitum dies in an attempt to dethrone Darth Prone.Darth Void 16:57, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Sounds pretty good. I thought that Sansus would die after having Dark Eruption redirected by Kaan and Cognitum beaten by Jul on Hoth. Jul works good because he won't die. He can be Force Crushed and be put through a lot that others couldn't. He's Gen'Dai. What do you think?Mattkenn3 17:37, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Also, do you have plans for Darth AT-AT's death?Mattkenn3 16:59, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Hey, when you come back, could you answer the stuff from up there. Also, I had some ideas about the novel, mostly about the character's fates. I'll tell you when you get back.Mattkenn3 (Talk) 23:39, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

Answers
Sorry I was gone for so long, I have been busy playing Spore and The Force Unleashed, I have only 2 days off in the week at work now, so i have to get into my uniform as soon as I get home from school, I have been sick today so.... I have managed to make alot of progress on Sernim:The Legend. I like the idea of Kaan Redirecting Dark Eruption back at Sansus, I have changed my mind about the dark Eruption killing Sansus though, I want it to backfire and gravely injure him, as for Darth AT-AT dying I think i might save him until the next book.Darth Void (Talk) 20:29, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Welcome back. I don't know.  I think that this is how Sansus shall fall.  Do you like the idea of Jul beating Cognitum?  I don't think I'll do away with him, just yet.  I would like to add Master Glace and Master Ayeel to the novel.  Glace won't fall until later, but Cognitum will take out Ayeel.  You can also put Glace and/or Ventar in Sernim:The Legend if you want.  So?Mattkenn3 (Talk) 22:08, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

I will use Master Ayeel but I want to save glace for the last story. As for using them in Sernim:The Legend it will not work, I don't see where I could fit them in it and I am thinking of changing around the ages of some characters and Sernim:The Legend's time period. I would like you to type all your ideas under the section below this one and I would like them typed by October 13th that way we can go over them and decide which ones to do and which ones to not do. I hope that I don't sound snotty if I do I apologize. Darth Void (Talk) 21:13, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I'll write something up and type a summary of my ideas. We'll talk about it once it's done.Mattkenn3 (Talk) 00:35, 26 September 2008 (UTC)

Done. Ready when you are.Mattkenn3 (Talk) 20:30, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

Mattkenn3's Input
This is just a brief summary. If we agree on any of the ideas, I will write up a more detailed description of what will happen. This is about my characters in the novel. I will try not mess up the plans you have for your characters. My input is,

Through much effort, Sansus and Cognitum will gain enough power to confront the Jedi. Prone will send Cognitum with an army of Elite droids and Sith Knights to take control of the Outer Rim. He will send Sansus to raid to Jedi Citadel.

Cognitum would succeed in his domination of the Outer Rim. He would take over Hoth first and use it as his base. He would attack countless planets, though not destroying them or killing all inhabitants, but shocked them into fear and left them terrified and defeated.

Sansus would also succeed in his raid on the Jedi Citadel. He, along with Sith Knights, Krath LCS droids, and Elite A-1 Armored droids, would burn the Citidel, and murder over 30 Jedi, including Len Duok.

Janok Kaan and the other Jedi are able to drive off the raiders away. Kaan finds Duok, dying, and he reveals that Darth Sansus is Alno Doon.

(I don't have any ideas at this point so you fill in the gap with your characters stuff or "Project Grief" or something.)

Kaan, Ayeel, and Donin confront Sansus on (some planet). The four duel, Sansus shows superiority over Ayeel and Donin but struggles to fight Kaan. Sansus escapes.

Ayeel and Donin, against Kaan's strict orders, leave to confront Cognitum on Hoth. Both are outmatched and die at the hands of Cognitum.

Kaan is shocked and terrified when his apprentice, Sha Tun, tells him of how the two had left to confront Cognitum. He later recieves a holocron from Prone, telling him that Cognitum had told him that two more prominant members of the Jedi Council were dead.

(Again, nothing much in my mind at this point.)

(at the end) Jul meets with Kaan and joins the fight against the Sith.


 * That is all of my ideas for the second. I have pleanty more for the third, so when you are ready, I'll put them up.Mattkenn3 (Talk) 19:55, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

Approved Ideas
Through much effort, Sansus and Cognitum will gain enough power to confront the Jedi. Prone will send Cognitum with an army of Elite droids and Sith Knights to take control of the Outer Rim. He will send Sansus to raid to Jedi Citadel.[Great]

Cognitum would succeed in his domination of the Outer Rim. He would take over Hoth first and use it as his base. He would attack countless planets, though not destroying them or killing all inhabitants, but shocked them into fear and left them terrified and defeated.

Sansus would also succeed in his raid on the Jedi Citadel. He, along with Sith Knights, Krath LCS droids, and Elite A-1 Armored droids, would burn the Citidel, and murder over 30 Jedi, including Len Duok. [Makes the story more dark.]

Janok Kaan and the other Jedi are able to drive off the raiders away. Kaan finds Duok, dying, and he reveals that Darth Sansus is Alno Doon. [like the part when Darth Sansus' Identity is revealed, but I think the Citadel should be abandoned by the Jedi.]

Kaan, Ayeel, and Donin confront Sansus on (some planet). The four duel, Sansus shows superiority over Ayeel and Donin but struggles to fight Kaan. Sansus escapes. [Great Idea, please give me more details]

Ayeel and Donin, against Kaan's strict orders, leave to confront Cognitum on Hoth. Both are outmatched and die at the hands of Cognitum. [like it]

Kaan is shocked and terrified when his apprentice, Sha Tun, tells him of how the two had left to confront Cognitum. He later recieves a holocron from Prone, telling him that Cognitum had told him that two more prominant members of the Jedi Council were dead. [revenge of the sith]

Darth Void (Talk) 20:58, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

Ok. They should abandon the Citadel. I'll put on more details for Sansus' duel. I do want Jul to be introduced at the end of the story though. Sounds good? Mattkenn3 (Talk) 21:06, 29 September 2008 (UTC)