HP:Nathaneiqua Adarak

Review

 * It's pretty good, but there are a few corrections that need to be made, as well as a little expansion.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 18:03, 25 December 2007 (UTC)

Things that need to be done
-- You Speak, I've Spoken 18:03, 25 December 2007 (UTC)
 * "Hoth Infiltration" needs to be changed to "Hoth infiltration".
 * "Returning to War" needs to be changed to "Returning to war" and needs expansion.
 * The Republic needs to be expanded.
 * Rising through the ranks needs to be expanded a bit.