User blog comment:Nightmare975/First chapter of Imperial Treachery is released!/@comment-20644-20090210062937

Consider this in terms of the flowery prose. Here's an example of meh prose:

"The sun started to rise on the mythical world of Ashlan Four, but it wasn't really a myth. It was just hidden from the universe."

Now here's flowery prose:

"Night turned to dawn very quickly on the seemingly mythical world of Ashlan Four. But it was not a myth. It was real, very real, a reality hidden from the universe. In the end, it remained a subject of myth and folklore. The planet could be interpreted in so many ways that the interpretations were infinite, an immense rainbow of every possible color one could imagine."