User blog comment:Nightmare975/Official Release of Imperial Treachery Chapter 1!/@comment-31421-20090308005021

Oh, well, yes, I did read it. A week ago or so, in fact. If, in the sense that it's capable of making somewhat coherent sentences that when joined together form a plot, then yes, it's better. (Never read the first draft). But I rarely get excited over 1 chapter, and even then, only if I'm thoroughly impressed, which. . . yeah.