Forum:Decreton Lords - SECOND Featured Article Review


 * See Forum:Decreton Lords - SECOND Featured Article Review/Archive for the reviewed articles that maintained their FA status.


 * See Forum:Former Featured Article Review for the review of all former featured articles, including those who lost their FA status in this review.

Due to the creation of new, stricter Featured Article requirements, it is important that the Decreton Lords once again take the time to issue any complaints they have about the current Featured Articles and decide whether or not an article should remain as a Featured Article or become a Formerly Featured Article. Please be sure to sign everything you say, including complaints and whether or not you wish to revoke Featured Article status so that we know who is saying what. Please be sure to repeat complaints, as it’s important that all Decreton Lords have their voices heard.

Also, please be aware that there is no immediate rush to do this, so don’t feel as if you’re being pressured into reading into reading dozens of articles right now. While you can certainly take your time, don’t take that as an opportunity to wait a long time. While we don’t need it done immediately, it’d be nice to have it done relatively soon. The articles to review are as follows, separated into the categories they fall into on the Featured Article main page. - Brandon Rhea 00:32, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

Battle of Maryl
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Jack Phoenix, Brandon Rhea, NKSCF and Squishy Vic) 

Battle of Ossus
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Jack Phoenix, Brandon Rhea, NKSCF and Squishy Vic) 

Sith Crusade
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Complaints

 * Legacy, Personality/Traits and Talents all require expansion. Legacy should also address how she was remembered. Right now, it only says what happened after her death. - Brandon Rhea 23:34, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None that I can think of. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:49, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Tiny bit of expansion in Personality/traits and Legacy, though not enough to revoke status IMO. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:29, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:00, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 23:34, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:49, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:29, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:00, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Post-mortem should be expanded to include a legacy (ie, how she was remembered). Personality/Traits and Talents should also be expanded. And though it has nothing to do with the FA requirements, the massive quote in the middle of Clone Rebellion should either be at the beginning of that section or reworked to become part of the history rather than a quote. - Brandon Rhea 23:34, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None at the moment. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:58, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Brandon. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:27, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Better? [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:32, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 23:34, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:58, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:27, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * With most of the complaints addressed, no. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:02, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|20px]] ( contact ) 07:42, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Alpha-Ø4
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Darth Abeonis
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Darth Exemplar
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Darth Faust
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Darth Krayt
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Darth Nihilus
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Darth Tyler
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Hasti Zaadvala
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Jack Nebulax
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Jack Phoenix
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

K'Anaverous
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Complaints
*Expansion is needed at the "Twist of fate 19 BBY", " Imperial attack 6 BBY", " Chase of the imperial "fugitive" 0 BBY", "Meeting the Rebellion", " Way of the Force 11 ABY - 2,949 ABY", and " A Fateful Death (2,951 ABY)" sections. Traits should be added to the personality section and a legacy/post-mortem section is needed. Three redlinks as well. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:58, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * There should only be one quote at the top, IMO. The "Main Article" templates should be removed and integrated into the article. ECHO Visor should only be linked to once in the biography, and in the same section it's linked to twice. There are unnecessary boldings under the "The awakening" section. Why is the main pic also in the bio? Either remove it from the bio or change the main pic to a unique picture. Also, post-mortem is mispelled post-modem. Personality and traits should be a level 2 section as should talents, they shouldn't be together under "Characteristics". Expand P&t. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?
*Yes. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:58, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 20:55, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:43, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:17, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments
Just a note, Vic, alot of your complaints are personal opinions rather than rule violations. But I did everything you requested. You Speak, I've Spoken 15:59, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Sorry if you feel that way. I'm just giving a review based on common errors made (boldings, linked to more than once, two quotes at top) and based on the MOS/LG (Talents and Personality and traits are their own sections, plus the expansion part, mispelling on Post-mortem). -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:43, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Merc Gev, Sr.
 This article's FA status was revoked by four votes (from Brandon Rhea, NKSCF, Squishy Vic and Solus) 

Complaints
*Per the above and their are at least 35 redlinks in the article. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:22, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Out of the Dark, into the Light, Falling in Love, General of the Insurgence, Venture into the Unknown, Selam's Life Debt, Final Battle of Placidus, The Exploration continues, Battle of Buuill and Conclave on the Vanguard could all do with expansion. - Brandon Rhea 15:12, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Most of those sections are meant to be short. There is nothing more to expand on in those sections; most of them are "starters" sections, to lead you on to what Narod did for that time (such as Exploration continues). As for the redlinks, I'll get to 'em. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:03, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No more redlinks. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:22, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:25, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?
*Yes. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:22, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 15:12, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:22, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:25, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:51, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:33, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Just a tiny bit of expansion on Personality/Traits & Talents. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 06:04, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * The last three pictures should be spaced out a bit. Personality and traits and Talents and abilities can be expanded. I also hate quotes in the middle of sections, but that's not against the requirements. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:52, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:33, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 06:04, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:52, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. NKSCF, you shouldn't have any problem with lengthening anything. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:51, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Better? [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 02:54, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Complaints
*I will redo the talents/personality/traits etc. either later today or tomorrow. Most likely tomorrow. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 19:56, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:54, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Lacks era icons (only has FA star one). No offense to the artist, but the main image (although well drawn) looks sloppy on line paper. Perhaps someone could help you get rid of the lines and color in the main pic on photoshop or something, though this is not an FA issue, just a personal one. Anyways. The "For a more in-depth version of this look at:...." things need to be removed; such links could be placed in appearances or something similar. A lot of the sections should be merged; what I mean is a lot of the sections contain a bunch of one liners and no paragraphs, and I say these one liners should be merged to make paragraphs for neatness. "The Undead Live" is just a section of a bunch of quotes, way too many I think, and should be made into story/paragraph form. This occurs in various other sections too. Throughout the entire article, there are also a bunch of cluttered pictures. Some should be spread out, removed, or placed elsewhere in the article. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm no good at photoshop, so if you or anyone else would like to change it so that the pic doesn't have the lines, I'd be a very happy man. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:13, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. There are a lot of sections that simply need a lot more expansion. A lot of the quotes also need to be removed. A link to a page with quotes pertaining to NKS would be better suited. Also keep in mind that images should be organized in a left, right, left, right, etc. style. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:55, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 19:56, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:55, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:51, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
 * With points pretty much rectified, I give a No. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:37, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
 * No. Looks much better now. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|20px]] ( contact ) 07:47, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * I've removed the in-depth tags; shortened, changed and/or removed the quotes; added eraicons; lengthened the sections; fixed the images; and have asked Solus for help on the main image. What else should I do to help this article out, my friends? [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 02:58, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Talents section is needed. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:58, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Talents needed. Also, some of the pictures are really small; I think those small ones should be at at least 200px in width. 150px just seems too small now. Also, the "See also" section is unnecessary IMO; those links are already in the article. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:51, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Growing up, Forging an Alliance and Talents should be expanded a bit to include some more detail and The After-Life could use some expansion as well. A few of the images, particularly Darth Teddy during his fight with Brut and "The spirit of Mancer Lord Grakon, prepared to enter Brutalidon", "The End of Darth Teddy" and "Brutalidon standing victorious with Darth Teddy's lightsaber" and then "The School of Hidden Wisdom on Baltimn" and "The swirling whirlwind of fire, engulfing the Jedi on Baltimn" are too close to each other on a widescreen computer, so they'd be really close on a fullscreen one, presumably. They need to be spaced out or some should be removed. The image "Dexon Kyjar, renewed with Brutalidon's powers of Mancery" should be on the right side in keeping with left, right, left, right, etc. A legacy section is also required. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:49, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I blame the picture problem on Vic's advice. Fixing some/all of it now. Dexington 20:21, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:58, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:51, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:49, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 23:58, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No, now that the complaints have been addressed. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:54, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments
I'm busy lately, I'll get it done when I feel like it. Dexington 19:30, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Contrary to that, I did it anyway now. Dexington 19:40, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Now all of Brandon's complaints are fixed too. Dexington 20:41, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Legacy? - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  20:51, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * My bad, done. Dexington 23:05, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints
*Post-mortem and abilities/traits need to be expanded. Specific categories are needed. I.e. Category:Jedi Knights and not Category:Jedi. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:10, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Armor/Weapons needs to go under and "Equipment" section, separate from Abilities. Abilities section needs expansion and to be renamed Talents. Also, though not a big deal, perhaps there should only be one quote at the top. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:50, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?
*Yes. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:10, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. This is a great article though, I like it. Could use some more Revan pictures though (since Revan is the greatest.) -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:50, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 13:47, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:40, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|20px]] ( contact ) 07:49, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Did everything. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 00:50, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Not a major issue, but you could combine Legacy and Post-mortem, since they're basically the same thing. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:24, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Into the Unknown (0 BBY) seems a bit too short compared to other sections. Also, as NK said, Legacy and post-mortem can be combined, as it makes it a longer section. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:58, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I expanded it, though I must let you know that Roviik was merely 7 years of age at that time and not much left to say on that portion. As for post-mortem and Legacy, I thought we had to have them each individually? (Which I why I didn't merge them). -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:51, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:24, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:47, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, but I'm sure this will quickly change. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:58, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:40, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Expand post-mortem. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:31, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Introduction is too short at 178 words and so needs expansion. Post mortem could use a bit of expansion. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. It also lacks a Legacy section. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  20:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:31, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  20:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  03:42, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|20px]] ( contact ) 07:50, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Expanded post-mortem and added legacy. Also lengthened intro. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 01:32, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Spacing problem. Several of the paragraphs are short, i.e. about one or two short sentences in length. A legacy/post-mortem section is needed. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:35, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Some sections could use a bit of expansion and details, since a lot of them are composed of a bunch of one liner sentences. Talents section needs expansion. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:45, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:35, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:45, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Post-mortem expansion. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:41, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I expanded it a little bit, but nothing more happened than what is said (So nothing beyond that happened, and therefore, no Legacy is needed, just to let you all know). -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:35, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:41, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:35, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Spacing problems and the paragraphs are kinda short a lot of the time. Expansion is needed most everywhere. Post-mortem/legacy section is needed, along with a personality/traits and talents section. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Sections Leaving TSI and Obsidian Dagger Squadron are kind of short. When does this story end? Does not explain how he dies or lives out his days, just ends abruptly. Could use at least a cliffhanger ending, and add a legacy section at least. Appearance and personality need to be split into two different sections. A full Talents section needs to be added, and then the "Force Abilities" and "Lightsaber Use" sections need to be included in the talents. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:41, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Absolutely yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 05:41, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * I had to fix up a few things, so I no longer have any complaints. - Brandon Rhea 20:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * The only problem I have with this article is the introduction. The article is about Ussej II, not his ancestors. Therefore, writing about "his ancestor, Jonathan Bac, was the Supreme Chancellor. etc" The entire first paragraph of the intro includes this, when early life already has this. The intro should talk more about Ussej II and remove the ancestors thing. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:26, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:57, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. - Brandon Rhea 20:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:26, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:57, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * I tried to look at this as objectively as possible. If anyone points something out that I missed, I'll be sure to fix it. - Brandon Rhea 20:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints
*The only problem I have with this article is the introduction. The article is about Ussej III, not his ancestors. Therefore, writing about "his ancestor, Jonathan Bac, was the Supreme Chancellor. etc" The entire first paragraph of the intro includes this, when early life already has this. The intro should talk more about Ussej III and remove the ancestors thing. (same thing with Ussej II) -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:28, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I had to fix up a few things, so I no longer have any complaints. - Brandon Rhea 20:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 15:03, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?
*Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:28, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Brandon Rhea 20:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 07:04, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 15:03, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * I tried to look at this as objectively as possible. If anyone points something out that I missed, I'll be sure to fix it. - Brandon Rhea 20:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Links in section titles must be removed, there are a lot of those. There also a lot of very small/lack of detail sections (Specifically under "Jedi Master" section, but there are others before and after). There are far too many of them and they need to be highly expanded upon and given more details. Legacy should be it's own section (with level 2 headers is what I mean). Alternate battles should go elsewhere, perhaps in behind the scenes since they aren't part of the "canon" biography. Personality and traits shouldn't be a list of things, they should be in paragraph form and detailed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:35, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:23, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:35, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:23, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Red link right in the beginning of the intro. Why is one of the quotes bolded? (Not really an issue but still). I don't think bolding in quotes is necessary. Instead italicize (though like I said, this isn't really an issue IMO, just kinda bugs me ). Post mortem is extremely short, and just has a bunch of quotes together. Expand it and cut down the quotes or integrate it into paragraph form. Everything else seems fine. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:32, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:40, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:32, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:40, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * "The Holy War" can be incredibly condensed, as it talks too much about Ussej, Kalel and Isabella rather than the Bendu involvement in the war. "The Rebel Alliance" can be greatly expanded to include the battles that the Bendu fought in, as well as information on the reunification with the Jedi Order at the end of the war. "Path" and the sections within it should be expanded, as should the Religion, Pillars of Strength and Specialization. Proverbs of Ussej Padric Bac should be given its own page or a section within Bendu Religion and replaced with a blurb about them and perhaps a brief history on the Bendu page. - Brandon Rhea 17:45, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Path section should be expanded, religion should be expanded, red link(s) should be filled and unnecessary boldings (such as in the Behind the scenes) need to be removed. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Could you tell me where the red links are? My computer has color issues, so I can't tell the difference. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  12:03, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Sure. Under "The Rebel Alliance", the "Mon Mothma" link is red. I'd suggest linking it to Wookieepedia or not at all (unless you're going to write an article on her too). -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:28, 17 October 2007 (UTC)


 * 1) Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:45, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 17:45, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:45, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Hooray for voting against my own article! - Brandon Rhea 17:45, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * The early history under "Carden Mannux" to "The Millennium of Hiding" should be expanded with more detail. The section about the Galactic Civil War should also be updated with the new information about the war including the First Battle of Alderaan, the Battle of Endor, Bail Organa's escape from prison, the Sieges of Naboo, the Second Battle of Alderaan and then, finally, it would end with "Fall of the Lettow". A brief history about the events of the Earth Wars Trilogy should also be added to the history. "Government and Politics" and "Military" should be expanded and "Prophecies" should simply be a medium-sized blurb with a full link to Prophecies of The Skywalker. - Brandon Rhea 17:49, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Government, Military, and Prophecies should all be expanded. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:48, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 17:49, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:48, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Hooray for voting against another one of my own articles! - Brandon Rhea 17:49, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * The quote directly under the history needs to be moved under a section, not under the right under the History part. Prelude to the Order should be expanded. The Conquest Begins should be expanded. Subjection Wars should be integrated into the article and remove the "Main" template. Same thing with Sovereignty Campaign section/link/template. Remove unnecessary boldings under the ceremonies section. Locations might be expanded to talk about what each location held, who was there, how many were there and for how long it was owned, and also how it came to be owned. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Removed the quote under history. Prelude to the Order is suppost to be short. It's like an overview before to get to the meat of the subject, which was starting the Organization. The Conquest Begins is short for two reasons, one beign that it was never intended to be long, and two, I haven't finished the actual story. The "Main" templates were deleted, though I don't know why you don't like them. They were made for articles, after all. Sorry, but I'm not getting rid of the bolding under cerimonies as I think they're necessary to enhance the article. as for the Locations section, it's been expanded. [[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:45, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, as Brandon said below, bolding words does not enhance the article. As far as the "Prelude to the Order", I will accept your justification because I have a few sections just like that on Narod Antrell, the overview before the details. As far as the main templates goes, I only say to remove them because they could be integrated into the article. You don't have to put "Main: Article name here", because you could easily write it into the story like " Josh was a Sovereign Knight in the Order of Sovereignty. " -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:33, 17 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Prelude to Order needs to be expanded, and it most certainly can be. Many of the sections after that also require expansion such as Official Foundation, The Order of the Sons, Institution for the Order (3,921 BBY), [edit] Galactic Contact (540 ABY - 770 ABY), Contact with the Republic, Order of Sovereignty, Imperial Attack on the Sovereign Order and The Conquest Begins (4,040 ABY - 4,043 ABY). I also agree with Vic on the bolding of events and such. It's unncessary and does not enhance the article, as you said. As far as images go, the ones under The Conquest Begins (4,040 ABY - 4,043 ABY) are far too close together on my widescreen computer, so I would imagine they'd be way too close. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  16:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)


 * I've fixed up the article according to Brandon. Official Foundation, The Order of the Sons, Institution for the Order, Galactic Contact, Contact with the Republic, Order of Sovereignty, Imperial Attack on the Sovereign Order and The Conquest Begins have either been lengthened or merged. As for the bolding, I'm sorry we have differences of opinion and favored writing styles. But this sort of thing is trivial comparatively speaking, nor is it an FA requirement. And Brandon, I don't have a WS moniter, so I'm also sorry the images appear so close together. I'll try and space them out a bit. [[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 23:42, 17 October 2007 (UTC)


 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:52, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  16:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 23:56, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:52, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * After fixing up a few minor complaints that I went over in my head, I can find nothing else but I'll leave that to my colleagues. - Brandon Rhea 18:02, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Important figures isn't really necessary. But everything else is fine. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I agree with you there. It has been removed. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  16:58, 17 October 2007 (UTC)


 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:55, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. - Brandon Rhea 18:03, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:55, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * The following sections need expansion: Formation, Collapse, Disintegration, aftermath of Endor. Remove links from section titles. Also, remove out-of-universe content; Legacy era is out of universe, and the like. Enemies and rivals could each use more expansion. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. The pictures also need to be spaced out some and they need to be organized in a left, right, left, right, etc. fashion. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:10, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Still some expansion needed in the history. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 15:04, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I've rectified all of the above. Unit 8311 14:39, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:10, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 15:04, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Sorted the above complaints. I left the astrography image as it is as moving it messes up the section. Unit 8311 15:51, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Perhaps add how long each leader led for (such as "Filose Naj (3869 BBY- 3840 BBY)"). -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, the years could help. Some pictures could also be spaced out some. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:11, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 13:58, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:11, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 13:58, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
I'll get the years in there in about an hour, gtg. Dexington 23:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:12, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:00, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 07:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:12, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:00, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * What year does he encounter the Jedi Bendu? - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:12, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I dunno. You're the Bendu Master, you can make up any date before 50 BBY. Side note of d00m: What's with all of the crests? Reminds me of toothpaste. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:57, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Between 15,000 BBY and 4 ABY, it would have to be the Bendu. Unless it's before 15,000 BBY, you'd want to change it to Bendu. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  03:20, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  20:16, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:55, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * The pictures could be spaced out a bit. Other than that, I've always loved this article but I have no idea why. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I remember you once said that the main picture did it for you, when it was up for FA nomination a long time ago. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:34, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:02, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:55, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:02, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Under History, each section should be expanded to detail their use and battles, etc. Legacy should be it's own section apart from History and also be expanded. Behind the Scenes should be "scenes" (lowercase). -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:53, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. This article not only requires expansion, but a GREAT DEAL of expansion. It looks like a bulleted list with absolutely no depth in the history. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * A lot of expansion. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:07, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:53, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes (forgot to write this earlier). - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  03:18, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:07, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Redlink in the introduction paragraph, must be filled in. The "Main" template should be taken out of the "Second Clone War" section and integrated into the article, and then the section needs major expansion. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:53, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Growth of popularity should be expanded and more information about Second Clone War should be added from the mian article, although you don't have to take the "Main" template out. I use it myself in some articles. Also be sure to get rid of that red link in the intro. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:10, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:53, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:10, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro is too short (185 words). Fighting style should be integrated into a "talents" section, along with in depth detail about the droid's abilities, equipment and tools. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:53, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Creation, Civil War, Return Home, Yuuzhan Vong war and Legacy all can be expanded. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Sorted. Unit 8311 16:15, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:17, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:53, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Sorted the above. Unit 8311 12:29, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:36, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:17, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Would a droid actually say "Yay! A war! Just what I was built for!"? - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I find it humorous. I especially like the "Yay! Another war!" I like it, personally, because it adds character to a non-living being (droid). -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:36, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * The last line of the introduction would look better if it was merged with the paragraph above it. You should also add in a history of how this form came about and how it was taught to students, both light and dark. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  01:07, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:18, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?
*Yes. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  01:07, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Meep. I addressed this already; I believe I remember iterating that all Force Power articles (unless they are weird ones like Exar's soul thing, or the thought bomb - stuff primarily related to one character) in the Wook did not have histories. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:01, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I agree with you, Solus. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 01:09, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Is this Wookieepedia? - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  03:17, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * While it is not, there is nothing in the rules that says Force powers must have a History. Only characters do, and I believe the Force power has everything it needs. And this is detailed, as rule #3 says, it is "well written, comprehensive and detailed". -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 04:17, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Keep in mind that you're using things that aren't FA requirements in your reasoning for why FA status should be removed. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  04:28, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Where? If this is true and I did not notice out of ignorance (Since I wanted to so badly finish up last night), please direct me to them. I will fix them. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 04:40, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Removing the "Main" template from articles, for example. That template is there for a reason and there is nothing that says you cannot have one in an FA. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  13:40, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * That's one of my complaints, but not the only one. Just like the thing with the "bolding" that is unnecessary in Order of Sovereignty; after Xepeyon fixed everything else except the bolding, I changed my vote to no because it's just an opinion as he pointed out, and I can't hold that against him. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 22:18, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Then I will change my vote if Solus fixes that hanging sentence at the end of the introduction. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  22:27, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. I didn't mean to spawn a debate. :P - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:12, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * It's cool, debates are fun. But seriously, those kind of discussions are needed to clarify between opinion and requirement, so it was actually good you brought it up. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 00:14, 19 October 2007 (UTC)


 * No. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:18, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * External links aren't really necessary. And I think since it is a Force power, it should be moved to "Force Shield". -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None that I'm aware of. - Brandon Rhea 18:02, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. - Brandon Rhea 18:02, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:22, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * History could be expanded, but it's made up for in the description of each individual prophecy. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Indeed. If I expanded the history, the rest would be redundant and it would just be a list of the prophecies, basically. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  16:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Basically. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 21:37, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Introduction is far too short. Under the objective sections, each game type could be described with more detail. History sections lack a lot of detail and should be expanded. "Great Jedi Purge" should be merged into the history, not be it's own section. Playing styles and techniques lack detail too, they should be expanded. Redlink in that bottom quote should be filled in/removed/replaced with Wookieepedia link. Team play section should be placed under the "Objectives" and explained in greater detail. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. Every section in the article can either be merged with another or be greatly expanded. Right now, it looks too much like bullet points. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:24, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * Yes. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:24, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Part of the first introduction sentence (The language of the Shapeshifters, Shikkri) should be reworded to say "Shikkri, the language of the Shapershifters," etc. (So Shikkri is first). Other than that, the article is perfect. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:10, 14 October 2007 (UTC)


 * None that I am aware of. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA Status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:44, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. Though this article is primarily a list, it is a well thought out list and the amount of effort and obvious research that went into this article constitutes that it remain as a Featured Article. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:00, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:26, 23 October 2007 (UTC)