User:Ocarina451/Sandbox

SANDBOX - please don't edit - it could get messy

A borrowed Mary Sue test, created by Atarumaster88. I don't claim any part except the answers.

Character who's currently being put through the wringer: Gen

Section 1

 * 1) No.
 * 2) No.
 * 3) Three, if you count a number
 * 4) I have much better names in store for them, thank you.
 * 5) Nope.

Section 2

 * 1) No.
 * 2) N.O.
 * 3) Nope. Unless you count accelerated aging as meaning he should be younger. LOL
 * 4) Kaminoans are not magical.
 * 5) Nah.
 * 6) Definitely not. Hey, I'm fine where I am.
 * 7) Nope.
 * 8) No.
 * NO
 * No, it's a perfectly normal brown
 * 1) Nope.
 * 2) ?? No?
 * 3) The DC-15S is famous, but it's mass produced, kid.
 * 4) No. The nearest thing is an old scrap bucket of a salvage ship that's faster and has more firepower than it ought to, but it doesn't even belong to him
 * 5) ?? His helmet? It has a HUD.

Section 3

 * Um, you could say so
 * 1) Jango Fett. Duh.
 * No
 * No
 * 1) He was born out of a GROWTH JAR and if that isn't unusual I don't know what is
 * 2) He has literally MILLIONS of clones.
 * 3) Why wouldn't I? Hey, can't I write clone trooper stories?
 * 4) Not that I've heard.
 * 5) Nope.
 * 6) Nah.
 * 7) Uh. . . I don't shoot things. . . like, ever
 * 8) Definitely no. LOL
 * 9) Not everyone.
 * 10) Does everyone you like end up liking the character?
 * 11) Does everyone on the "good" side end up liking the character?
 * 12) Does everyone on the "evil" side end up liking the character?
 * 13) Does the character often rebel from authority?
 * 14) And get away with it?
 * 15) And not suffer any consequences ever?
 * 16) Does the character have few major personality weaknesses?
 * 17) No personality weaknesses?
 * 18) Does the character's personality closely resemble that of your own?
 * 1) Does the character's personality closely resemble that of your own?

Section 4

 * No
 * No
 * 1) Nope. Obi-Wan gave him a mind wipe but that's, like, the opposite
 * 2) Does the character, not being a Jedi, have magical/mutant powers anyway?
 * 3) Does the character have telekinesis or telepathy? (Twins count.)
 * 4) Does the character just "know things" for no apparent reason?
 * 5) Can the character fly/is an expert pilot?
 * 6) Without the aid of wings/ships?
 * 7) Can the character heal with a touch and/or thought?
 * 8) Do animals instinctively like the character?
 * 9) Does the character learn faster than his peers in more than one subject?
 * 10) In nearly all subjects?

Section 5

 * 1) No way
 * 2) Nope
 * 3) Uh. . . nobody.
 * EW
 * 1) Kind of, it implies that they get married sometime later
 * 1) Kind of, it implies that they get married sometime later

Section 6

 * 1) Same for all my characters. Yes. I'm a friendly person.
 * 2) Heck no!
 * 3) Gee, no. I'm not that sensitive.
 * Uh, it's how I write. . . by visualizing my characters

Section 7

 * 1) Yeah.
 * 2) . . .A lot of it
 * 3) Obi-Wan but they are NOT friends and Obi-Wan wipes their memory afterwards
 * 4) Not that I can think of
 * 5) Same
 * 6) What did I say?
 * Uh, it's also implied that he is genetically altered to have a normal lifespan. But nothing spectacular.
 * 1) Wouldn't you be happy if you found out you didn't have to die in the next thirty years?
 * 2) My aging process has been normal thus far. I'm just fine, thanks.
 * 3) Does the character save the day and/or another character's life?
 * 4) Through magical/mystical intervention? (Jedi powers count!)
 * 5) Through dying?
 * 6) Does everyone go into mourning?
 * 7) Does s/he get not dead by the end of the story?
 * 8) In the sequel?
 * 9) Does the character defeat large amounts of enemies single-handedly, displaying skills greater than Mace Windu and Yoda combined?
 * 10) Does the character defeat most opponents he/she faces with relative ease?
 * 11) Does the character defeat powerful opponents (Dark Jedi, Jedi, Sith, etc.) with relative ease?
 * 12) Does the character naturally pick up new abilities throughout the course of the story?
 * 13) With great ease?
 * 14) Three max: Tatooine, and he may have been to Kashyyyk and Coruscant on missions
 * 15) Does the character rapidly gain the support of an army / faction
 * 16) He doesn't lead them

Results
0-16: Developed character, unlikely Mary Sue/Gary Stu.

17-24: Borderline.

24-30: Mary Sue/Gary Stu. Proceed with greatest caution.

30+ Reconsider your character and plot. Please.