Star Wars Stories: Rebel Commandos Prologue

A Bad Reputation
My name is Har Reer. I am a human that is sick of all of the curruption the Empire has brought to the galaxy. The Empire kills people in the streets just for breaking simple laws like plays that critize the empire or ir super stars say any thing their not suposed to they get executed or if people write songs that will inspire rebellion. I'm sick of it all. My dad was executed for speaking out against the Empire's injustices. My brother went to jail for not paying his taxes on time. The Empire seems to harshly puinish every one but, themselves. Its time the Empire gets puinished.

A Time of Action
I enlisted in the rebellion but, I signed up as a commando. Even though they say ordinary troopers make the biggest differences in a war as a whole commandos make the biggest individual differences and I want to personaly make a difference and I want the empire to know I was the one taht did it. I reported at the planet Carida. Its was hot there and had some plants and trees. Then a rebel commando drill instructor said " Sup, your going to love it here. "  I followed him into a room with a number of trainers. Then a person came to me and polietly said " Hi I'm Dan whats your name. " I replied " Har. " Dan had dark brown hair and eyes. Me and Dan became best friends. Then I also meet a friend named Hace and his friend named Dol ( Dol was a Rodian with green skin). Vedoss was our head instructor who taught us the rules and codes of rebel commandos along with how do essential things such as reloaded amo, how to perform medical procedures , how to hack into computer networks , how to charge explosives , how to take cover and how to defused explosives. Vedoss was an assembler ( species ). We trained firing all types of ranged weapons with our weapons instructor named Feroon. Our conditioning instructor was a very muscular human named Hanon. Hanon made us weight lift and do a series of strength building exercises. Are stragetic instructor was a Bothan with light brown skin named Thedos Lumos. Are close combat instructor was a Trandoshan named  Gon Pate. Most of he trainers were former imperial commandos that could no long stand to surve the Empire. Some of us did not trust them but, as long as they hated the Empire as much as I did I couldn't care less however, I was still supicous of some of them. Vigor Pree was a mentor to me and was a former imperial commando his mom was Human but, his dad was Rodian he looked like a human with anteneas on his head and with brown skin. He was also fairly muscualr. We also had to complete a series of obstical courses. With teacher like our we all  passed and were ready for comabt and war.