User talk:Darth tom/V

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Star Wars: The Lost Mantra
Ok, firstly I just want to say that it is in the top 5 things I have ever read. Better then some CHAPTERS in the Harry Potter series. The characters are extremely well done in their parts. I love how you used so much descriptive words. At first I did not really like the tons and tons of descriptive words but as I got half way, I did not want it to stop. My favourite bit was when Sasha said.....scratch that, EVERYTHING! It is that good. I can’t wait to read the series when it is written. But seriously, I like when you emphasised the environment of Dantiooe and its fresh air. I like the 8th paragraph when Sasha fainted or something like that and time stoped for him. Sasha's name is good but it sounds like a female name but it is the Star Wars Universe, so call you’re self what you want. I can’t believe you turned lovey-dovey romance into hot Star Wars reading. Shairi is one tough cookie. Her baby dies, but come on; Shairi survived a huge crash and some spooky powerful light throwing her down to the floor. I love that you used Pirates instead of some uber powerful sith lord getting defeated by some young Jedi Master hopeful. Putting Episode 3 out of this edit, the novel is to a great start. When you said in the 20 something paragraph where it said "their limbs entangled" does not sound right to me. You could just say that they fell on each other or something like that. Well there you go, that is my opinion. ! Arav  (talk ) 10:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Cool [[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 10:48, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Fanon Interest
Well, thanks. Actually yes, Lotr is one of my favourite books, so I'll look through some articles in Lord of the Rings Fanon wiki. Neterwan 19:22, 1 July 2008 (UTC)

Mary Sue
Ha, you messaged me just as I finished doing just that. :D - Solus (Bird of Prey)  16:58, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Cruentus ideas
Tom, did you read the ideas I posted on Cruentus? If so, could you post some feedback? I can go ahead with them ASAP, all I need is your approval. Unit 8311 14:56, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Aha
Glad to hear it. I myself will be on far less frequently, but I will still be coming on a daily basis, save that I'll just be on an hour max. Anyway, I posted a big load of stuff towards the end, the third or fourth comment from the end, if that helps. By the way, would it be possible for you to upload some images for me, which I can't do now with my computer's present state?Unit 8311 12:31, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

Redirects

 * Tom, TLM, The Lost Mantra, and SWTLM are all now redirected to Star Wars: The Lost Mantra. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:54, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

help
what would be a good catagory for copala III and what is past tense

RE:RE:help
thanks

Simiyar
By all means, it was created as something the Cruentus community could work on collectively I'd like to see people make some employees and such that work there, and any vehicles that can be made by Simiyar can be put in the category Simiyar Tech Products, and added to the known Products List in the article.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 01:24, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Administrator
Hi, Tom. Would you like to be nominated for administrator? In the short time you were here, you were able to accomplish much. You already proven your leadership skills by running the CUSWFN and by handling Project Cruentus so well. You also help many new users. You would be a great administrator. What do you think? -- Michaeldsuarez  ( Activate Holocron ) 18:06, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * P.S. In your opinion, when is the best time to archive talk pages?

It's done. You're now a candidate for administrator. Good luck! -- Michaeldsuarez  ( Activate Holocron ) 18:59, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * P.S. Thanks, I'll achive my talk page tomorrow.

Thanks. -- Michaeldsuarez  ( Activate Holocron ) 19:04, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

I know
Thanks for the warning. I already knew, I just hadn't got there yet. In fact, I was putting it all on when I got the edit conflict with you. Thanks--Mattkenn3 18:22, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Sankyuu
Sankyuu for your reminder. I thought I had put a category, then I realized I didn't. But thank you for adding two more categories. I have no brain, obviously XD. ZanariDasz 20:28, 8 July 2008 (UTC)ZanariDasz

Okay
I've got no problem with it. I created the GFFA article because there were a lot redlinks for it at the time. No problem at all. Thanks for doing that. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 11:50, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Keep up the good work! Since lazy bums like me aren't doing it for you. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 11:52, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Categories
Thank you for your edits, much appreciated. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 12:04, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * If you're only creating redlink categories, then no, you don't need to tell me. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 12:36, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Re:Matters
Sure. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 15:12, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Deletion
"been without an introduction for loads longer than 24 hours"

- You

We don't really make a habit out of deleting articles just because there's no introduction. Just inform the user or add one yourself please, which I've done in this case. Also, please check the dates on articles that are not properly categorized and also check the dates of the persons last contributions. The user who wrote Cryogenisis Suspension has not been here since late 2006. We did not have a Categorization Policy that was really enforced at that point. My rule of thumb is that if it was uncategorized before September 1, 2007 and the user is no longer here, I will categorize it. If it was uncategorized even in March 2008 when it was created but the user has not made an edit in a few months, I sometimes categorize that depending on who the person was. Just figured I'd let you know since this is really the best way of going about this. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 20:00, 9 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I just put it under Category:Technology. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 20:08, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Will do. I actually wouldn't have even noticed it for awhile, but I happened to go into the Articles for immediate deletion category and saw that stuff there. - President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 20:13, 9 July 2008 (UTC)


 * That's cool. Good work. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 20:17, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

RE:Ilatas
You can do, but bear in mind that I have it mostly planned out, so you can expect me to make big changes to whatever you write. BTW, would you mind uploading those images I requested right now? And I had an idea to make the Kothlis battle our second GA. THoughts? Unit 8311 13:04, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Let me make the basic outline first, then do what you want. I have to go in a couple of minutes, so expect me to do it later. Meanwhile, if you'd be kind enough to upload the images (I gave better sources on the forum, if that's the problem), then put the humvee-tpe thing into the NVD-12 Armored Recon Attack Vehicle, the blurry APC thing into the Ironhog armoured troop carrier, and the last one into the Kothlis article. I'd be grateful if you coul ddo it. Unit 8311 13:13, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Good news, tom: my computer problems are (moslty) solved, so I'll have much more time for this. I'll see if I'm still able to upload images in a moment. Also, I gave the actual sites for the images on the forum, but never mind. Unit 8311 18:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Right now, I can upload images, but with difficulty. Don't add too much to Ilatas, I have my own ideas in mind. Also, see the idea for a new Necasian unit that I put on the forum. Unit 8311 19:44, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Hi
hi tom its me 62.193.236.100 09:36, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

About Uthelians
Well, thanks for the category. ) But doesn't Uthelians mean sentients? Ih'Chirik is just a bird, not an alien like Aghot or Gran. But still there are articles, that fall under such a category. =) Neterwan 18:19, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Hi
Hey tom, do you have time for a quick IRC chat? If not, then could you check the forum? I posted some good stuff there that needs looking at. Also check out Ilatas--you can add to tha now. Unit 8311 20:18, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Darth odysseas
Hello I am spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas ad I want to thank yu for giving me the right directions.I think that I will create a ship article but I am not sure about that.I am new here,so can you tell me what is easy to be created?(for example I bet that it is not easy to make a fanon about a battle). If you want,please write your name to my friend list(can be found here)

This is what I'm looking for now.Can you tell where can I find the categories?Also I dont use a signature is this nescessary?

Hey tom I have problems while editing.In the article Massive attack the words are in the same place where the image is.Why this happens.This time I uploaded the pic on swfanon in the right way. Also how can I add my category?

Do you know a template who says that the current aricle is under active construction and it is not ready?Also the text on the article massive attack is going over the pic,can you help me with that?

I have already firefox(lolz).Thanks for your help,if you need me for anything I will help you.

If I want to add a pic in the proper way what I have to do?I copied the url of an image on sw fanon.Is that ok?spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 15:42, 15 July 2008 (UTC)

Where can I find a list with eras(not the fanon eras)? spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 08:07, 16 July 2008 (UTC)

I want to add the little era icon in the right corner of my article Flexible attachment.Can you tell me where can I find the era codes?spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 09:17, 16 July 2008 (UTC)

Dont you see that this fanon is under construction?Just wait.spartan-53 aka &#91;&#91;Darth odysseas&#124;UserTalk:spartan-53&#93;&#93; 09:59, 16 July 2008 (UTC)

Re:Channels
No, not on this computer. Sorry. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 16:59, 15 July 2008 (UTC)

Sorry
Please accept my humble apologies, oh master. I, being of little brain, foolishly assumed that you had forgotten to make the edits. On a different subject, would thou object if I started the Ankarr skirmish? Unit 8311 13:04, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you, oh my lord...er, I mean thanks, mate. There's not much to discuss that comes to mind, but you if you have a moment, finish Ilatas. A sentence or two as an aftermath will do. Unit 8311 13:09, 16 July 2008 (UTC)

High Priest
I saw that you are a high priest.Well done for improving sw fanon.Please see my artcle R3-L6 please,rate it and comment it.I think is my best.And DO NOT EDIT without my permission except if you want to correct some gramar mistakes.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 06:46, 17 July 2008 (UTC)

Also I think that the manual of style of Flexible attachment is ok now.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 07:00, 17 July 2008 (UTC)

Ok read it.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 13:16, 17 July 2008 (UTC)

Well,I dont have any idea now,but if I think something good I'll inform you. Also,where can I see you articles?spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 07:50, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Well,I have over 300 edits but I am here only 4 days.I lack of ideas today.Do you have any suggestion of a fanon that I can make?Also I think that noone reads or rates my articles.Why? P.S:Even without vote,I support youspartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 08:53, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Hey,I am working on a new article with the name Dark jedi Nicole and I want help.Do you know the image code(such as te quote code)?I want to add a pic.I also think to improve this article to the level of the featured article.Please do not edit anything else.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas &#123;&#123;Vadersmile}} 11:05, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

I didnt mean that code.I mean to add a text under a pic who is at the middle of an article.Maybe I am doing something wrong.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 11:36, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

I will extend the story about R3-L6.I have some ideasspartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 13:09, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Cruentus
I have an idea about the project.What about adding a brand new faction?I know how its just a little....weird but I think its good.

Some help with the Planet Spirit?
Admittingly, I am trying to do too much at once, I believe. But that's another story for another time (speaking of which, it's 3:42 AM here). I was wondering if you could help me with the Planet Spirit. I can't seem to think up much else for them, and I don't want them to seem underdeveloped. If you could help me spawn some ideas or contribute some of your own, that would be really nice. But you don't have to, I don't want to waste your time! Thanks for reading this though. ZanariDasz 10:46, 20 July 2008 (UTC)ZanariDasz


 * I don't mind. Thank you though! You know, I have no idea how to post out a conversation here. Oh well, I'll get the hang of it soon enough, right? ZanariDasz 20:24, 20 July 2008 (UTC)ZanariDasz

Notice
Hey tom. I'd just like to point out that from tomorrow I'm going on holiday for a couple of weeks. I don't know if I'll have internet access--there's a strong chance that I will, but nothing is certain--but if I don't, could you finish off Kothlis and nom it for me, and temporarily take my job as the Cruentus Caretaker? Unit 8311 16:50, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Gah, you're going too? This is exactly why summer sucks... Anyway, Selonia needs some finsihing touches from you. SO GET TO IT! (cracks whip) Unit 8311 17:00, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

Name
I want help.If I want to make a fanon with a clone commando(I dont want now),do I have to name the page with the code of the clone(e.g TRG-66-YTF)or I can use a name?

Thanks.Sorry for not signing,I dont know why in this specific talk page I forget to sign.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 08:52, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

Darth Chaos
I found this article and I think it must be rewritten.I wrote my suggestions to the articles talk page but you as a high priest must check it,it can be a good one.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 08:35, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

Oh I forgot to ask you where did you find that pic with your name in the top of your talk page?I want to have one with my name too:)spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 08:38, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

Ok,you have right,I didnt know that when we say homeworld we mean the place that someone just born and only that.And when I said that this article can be featured I mean that the user can write a very good story about that.

P.S:I will try to make a pic with my name on Galactic basic.Can you tell me the program that you used?

Thank You
Well, I'm thanking you for the congratulations anyway. What you said was very kind, and that does deserve some form of gratitude. You did well on the elections. Just doing the good work that you're doing. -- Michaeldsuarez  ( Activate Holocron ) 14:49, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

Shield operation
Can you tell me what to do to make this article a good one.It has a long story,pics related links,what I should correct?Also can you rate it?spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 17:38, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

Hmmm.... you have right.I saw some good and featured articles on the same category(organisations)and they were bigger.I am thinking now to leave shield operation as it is(or expland the current events)and start an article about a clone commando.I think that I cannot add more events to shield operation but I can add better stories related to it.If you have an advice to make a good fanon about a clone commando then just tell me.spartan-53 aka Darth odysseas 06:45, 24 July 2008 (UTC)

Okay Then... IRC
I will (try) to get on then, Darth Tom of the Sith. ZanariDasz 09:10, 24 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your help with the Planet Spirit stuff! In return, if you need someone to draw a character for you, ask me! I might not be the best artist, but I try! And I do it free of charge! *nodnod* Sadly, I do not color, so I hope you don't mind black and white pictures, neh? ^^ I cannot draw objects well, however. I can draw Humans and Twi'Leks, hypothetically I can draw other Near-Humans. But, anyway, thank you! ZanariDasz 02:52, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

Hey
Hey tom. I'm still on holiday, but I've got momentary internet access. So I'm asking you to finish preening the Kothlis battle for GA--adding quotes, spellcheck, etc. I'll also start the DTM battles now. I'd be grateful if you could do that, and it shouldn't take moer than ten minutes. Thanks. Unit 8311 16:28, 25 July 2008 (UTC)

Forums
Tom, this is the second time you've created a forum in the past few days that has had to be deleted. You can't just create forums without the approval of the community, so please don't do this again. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 12:42, 26 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Yes, you did create a forum. You created "Forum:Personal Notifications", which would need to be approved. As for the Lost Mantra one, it may not have been in the forum namespace, but the way it was set up made it one. That sort of thing is best left for the talk pages of articles. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 20:17, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey man, thanks for your help with fixing up my first article. There's a lot of stuff about editing a Wiki, especially starting an article from the ground up, and it's really a lot of material to go through to make sure it's done properly. I hope you'll check out my other articles once I've completed them.

Thanks again

Tyrant19 14:36, 26 July 2008 (UTC)Tyrant19

Kothlis
Tom, I don't know if you're reading this in time, but if so, then could you do whatever else you intended to Kothlis, if anything, (I added quotes, but you can treat them as filler and change them) and put it on the GA page. If you can't, then I'll try and find time to do it at some point. At the rate we're going, I think we'll have fufilled the project targets easily, no? Unit 8311 15:00, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
I try haha. It took some time to get italics and stuff but it isn't too bad once you get the hang of it. And I saw the Categories warning at the top of the page so I made sure I did that in my article. Tyrant19 15:03, 26 July 2008 (UTC)Tyrant19

Message
This is just to notify you that I have nominated Kothis for GA when you come back, tom. Unit 8311 18:19, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Image request
Hey tom. I have a simple request and nothing more, so I hope you don't feel as I'm pushing you. Anyway, as you know, I wrote the RFA archive page and as you can see there, there are images of the candidates that have had an RFA or have been nominated (mostly the latter). So far though, there are images of only myself, Darth tader (the most recent addition), Brandon Rhea, CurrentBigThing, and Jasca Ducato. You are one of the candidates on that page, since you ran in the most recent election. So basically, my request is if you could please upload an image of yourself (at best a headshot) for the archives? If not, that is perfectly understandable; I know some people prefer their privacy and I know some people might not be allowed to do so, and therefore either a yes or no is fine with me. Like I said, this is just a request, to make the archive a bit more filled and more professional. If not, don't worry about it. Thanks for reading and please get back to me ASAP. :) &mdash;Victor, Sr. «discussion» 03:43, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Colab battle
Letting you know.... Also I was thinking if Unit, you and I could make a battle together? It could be my DTM attack the Necs in space. Then the Nec's escape to a near by ice planet like Hoth. The DTM follow them. Funny enough the Srav's come and attack the Necs. The DTM and Sravs first attack each other while trying to attack the Nec. Then after a short time the 2 factions agree to join forces and attack the Necs together. With the Srav's weapons and my suicidal troops we attack the Necs. We drive them into a rocky mountainous area. The Nec's are highly out numbered. The DTM then suddenly attack the Sravs. Now it is back to a 3 way battle. A blizzard comes. Now they are fighting practically blind. Because the Sravs and the Necs have better weapons and are more wealthy, they have infrared visors and powerful gun lights. They use this advantage to hunt the DTM as well as hunting each other. They fight. Suddenly a Nec Frigate comes and fires on the mountain causing avalanches killing many. All factions slowly leave the mountain area and enter area that has lots of rocks and high and low terrain. A DTM frigate comes and blasts the crap out of the Nec Frigate. The Frigate does not blow up but crashes in a more flat area. The DTM frigate was blinded by the blizzard and crashes into a large mass of snow about 2 kilometres away from the Nec frigate. Some Nec soldiers survive and join the battle, boosting the low Nec numbers. Oh at the start the factions DTM have 6,000 but at this point they have 4,000 troopers, Necs have 9,000 but at this point they have 2,000 and the Sravs have 8,000 and at this point they have 5,000 because of avalanches. The battle has now become full scale. All factions have retreated to caves and hide behind large masses of snow. The Necs are completely outnumbered so they want to leave. They want to get to the shot down Nec frigate and fly the docked fighters. The DTM soldiers don't want to leave but they have too as they are ill equipped. The Sravs don’t plan on leaving and suspect that the other 2 factions are going to flee so they plan to snipe the rest out. At this point the Nec and DTM are FREEZING COLDD and getting frostbite but the Sravs dress warm and are fine (lucky). The 2 factions make a run for it. The 2 factions don’t attack each other on the way to the ships. The Sravs however snipe them out. The DTM loose 1,400 troops and the Necs loose 400 troops as the ship is very close. The DTM get into their docked ships and escape, launching an eborax bomb in the Sravs position. It kills 1,000 Sravs and the Necs leave without attacking any of the factions. After 3 hours of waiting, a Srav frigate comes and picks up the surviving 3,900 troops. So... you like? I'll run it by Unit and if you both do, I will let Project Cruentus know about the battle. I would also like if this battle would be the last of year 2. (Srav wins, all have heavy losses) -- <font color="Green">Arav (<font color="Green" size="1">talk ) 06:29, 29 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Unit and I think we should push this to year 4. It should be a major battle of year four. This message will be faster, see this. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 05:36, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

CUSFWN
To be a regular recipient of the CUSWFN do you just have to ask or is there some kind of process to go through, because i'm interested in becoming a recipient.  Anti-Formal  Come slang wit' me Work I've Put In 01:51, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Welcome back

 * Welcome back, Darth tom. Lots of stuff has happened since you've been gone. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:12, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

RE:
That's alright. :) --Victor talk 01:10, 9 August 2008 (UTC)


 * I know, no worries. ;) --Victor talk 18:00, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

Done
ok, I fixed my sig, thanks ;) -- Lord EggHead  (No, I am your father!) 14:52, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

Request
darth tom i need your help with a big project. a second grand army of the republic that will be at war with the new CIS/GDE. of course with consent of darth tyler this war will be at hand. can i count on you. either way may the force be with you.Wrest;ler9


 * Hey. I'm on the IRC. Come and chat. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 08:30, 12 August 2008 (UTC)