Talk:CC-2009/@comment-26497721-20200102003321

The story is wonderful. However the only problem is that Typhuss' considered a member of the Galactic Alliance and is said to have been around during the Legacy Era. Since he died in 15 ABY, the Galactic Alliance was formed 13 years after his death while the Legacy Era began 25 years after his death.

Other than that I can tell you put a lot of effort into the story. You should be proud.