Thread:TrueSoren/@comment-37327532-20190906190434

Here's an extract from the "Second Battle of Takodana " page:

"Boarding the vessel, he quickly cut through any resistance he met, dispatching them with as little mercy as Darth Vader did the Rebels years prior. He soon encountered the strike team, tearing the attacking droids to literal shreds with the Force. Moving on, he cut ribbons out of the primary reactor, killing as many as he could along the way, as gruesome as possible. Some were thrown against bulkheads and blast doors, some he cut open with his blade, watching their insides spill out, with horror-stricken stormtroopers watching, before also being sliced apart. A few were even impaled on jagged metal he ripped from the ceiling or walls.

''Absolute panic and terror filled the Convex, and soon he reached the bridge. Brutally slaughtering the guards, he flung control stations across the room, tore conduits and electrical systems out of the walls, slashing open the polished floor, and horribly punished anyone who stood in his way. Krennic, seeing the madness play out in front of him, tried to run, but Valtierex had other plans for him. Using the Force he slammed Krennic against the floor, breaking a number of his teeth, then began smashing him against every surface in the now very on fire, bridge. He did this all while screaming at him in his native tongue.''

After putting Krennic through so much pain that he could no longer even speak, Valtierex ignited his lightsaber, spoke a few last words, then finally executed him, leaving Krennic's broken body to be consumed by the flames."

NOTE: Valtierex is my FANDOM equivalent. I include him in all my works.

So, too brutal? 