Talk:Rise of Ruin: A Corruption of Innocents/@comment-173.90.97.218-20190819153316

Okay, okay decided to give you some feedback on your story.

The actual wriitng is decent, good job there.

There isn't really a story, it seems more like the beginning of a story.

It would be helpful to say where the story takes place.

Also, you'll want to fix the opening article. Check the layout guide for tips on how to do that.

Also, I would suggest putting a warning for  mature content on the front.

That's all I have to say, can't wait to see if you do anything else!