Forum:Project Cruentus/10



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Further Discussion
Two things for tom: should I start the Zayre-Savi skirmish and then you fill it in, and could you finish off Ilatas at the first opportunity? Unit 8311 10:51, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, feel free to start it. I added another section into Kothlis and did a basic spell check of a few of the asections, but not them all. Feel free to make some minor edits, but please don't touch the 'Legacy', 'Aftermath' and 'Behind the Scenes' sections; I'm still working on them. I'll finish that off and review it to see if it's good enough for good article status later today, as well as italicizing the classes of the vehicles, although it'd be helpful if you did that. If you don't wish to, I'm quite fine to do it, however. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 07:46, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I just saw what you did. Not bad, but I have one concern: why did you get rid of the mention of the Renard slipstream?! That's how Renard makes the DarkBird effective against ground forces! You have failed me for the last time, you continuity-hole causing pest! Just kidding. Other than that, thumbs up from me. Also feel free to add quotes, from the Sravs as well--just remember, Vlad: fanatical, Boras: quiet. And add a snide Askar response to Renard's quote, will ya? Unit 8311 11:22, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * At some point soon, yes. I have a lot of things on at the moment. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 11:30, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Shall I add more to the Ankarr skirmish, or would you prefer to tackle that one yourself? Unit 8311 11:33, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Mebbe add another two sections, and then I'll come in and do some to it once I've finished with Kothlis. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 11:52, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okey-dokey. Which reminds me: Kopalnia and Selonia still need to be finished. I'll do Kopalnia now just by adding a few stub sections, and with Arav's inactivity here lately, I'm afraid you might need to add Selonia to your to-do list. Of course, if you're feeling lazy, you can get yours truly to do it for you, but I hope that won't be needed. Unit 8311 11:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Has anyone given thought to a skirmish or battle that could cause the destruction of the Simiyar Moon? I've racked my brain but can't come up with a solid option for it, but being that it seems the war is getting close to it's close now I'd like to fret it out a little more so that the company and moon come to a final conclusion.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 00:02, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

I have finnished the Battle of Selonia (Cruentusian War)! Tom: You need to fill out your factions aftermath and anything else you want to. Arav (talk ) 00:26, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nyne, I think we discussed the Simiyar thing a while ago, and IIRC we settled that eventually the Sravs would get fed up with Simiyar leeching from them and would assault the moon to gain the facilities for themselves, and that it would get destroyed in the resultant skirmish. I think this battle will take place in the fourth and last year of the war, were everything will start going boom. Bearing in mind tht we're still in year two, so we've got plenty of time to plan. Arav, nice job with Selonia, but tom will still have to add some finishing touches to wrap up loose ends. Unit 8311 13:09, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, with tom temporarily gone, I guess that makes me Temporary Project Chief. You may all lick my feet. Anyway, the project has its second GA nom! Hopefully it will be as well-recieved as the last. EDIT: I have a proposal: it's somewhat late, but I want to change the Project logo, which is somewhat misleading, as the war doesn't involve Jedi or anything of the like. My suggestion: this or something similar. Thoughts? Unit 8311 20:10, 28 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Sorry Unit but I don't like that picture. I think we should have one made. It could have the 4 main factions DTM,Nec,Srav and the Zayre in the logo with their weapons and uniforms. I think if Trak is up to it, she could make it for us. But she is inactive and has not replyed to my image request. Thats just my opinion. NOTE: I am going to write a battle called Second Battle of Bothawui (Cruentusian War). Over an out. --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 02:49, 30 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Actually no, I wont make another Both battle yet. I will make a Invasion one! Invasion of Carrivar (Cruentusian War). --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 03:24, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Personally I think we should use that battle one, or something similar. I suppose I could cobble something in the vein of your idea on photoshop, but it'd probably come out looking somewhat ugly. But let's wait for tom to come back and voice his views before we decide on anything. Unit 8311 11:27, 30 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I will then make the Invasion one into a battle one. Unit, would you like to make the Battle of Carrivar a colab? I am now just moving the page to Battle of Carrivar (Cruentusian War). --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 05:41, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * If by that you mean me help you with it, then sure. But before I do anything, have you got any exact plan for the battle in mind? Unit 8311 14:30, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I mean a colaboration. Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 05:15, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * That's what I meant. Anyway, like I said, do you have a plan, or shall I concoct something for you? Unit 8311 10:37, 1 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Ah your here! Cool. Ok, I think it should involve your Srav's, my DTM and the natives of the planet. I can't find any mention of what type of planet it is so we can make it rocky, a planet like Hoth etc. I think that the Nec's left something like a radar emitting recorded Nec chatter. The DTM and Sravs both take some of their fleet to the planet to make a "surprise attack" on the Necs. They both come to the planet and fire at each other from frigates. That is short and both factions land on the planet not too far away for each other. They still believe that the Necs are on the planet. The Necs have left underground mines to take out as many people they can. (If you have not realised the Necs are not there and planed that the DTM and Srav battle each other). The mines take out few as both factions take out small halo mongoose type of vehicles to find the other factions. The mines take out 50 men from Srav and 29 from DTM. Seeing as you are here, tell me what you think, if you don't like it then tell me your idea. If you do expand on what I have said please. --Arav the Undersith (<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 10:53, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Personally I think it shouldn't involve the Sravs, who are still reeling from the DTM raids. Still, not bad, just replace the Sravs with the inhabitants and we might have something. But still, like with your DTM Hoth idea, we can push this exact idea to year three or four, where the DTM will be coming out in force. Thoughts? EDIT: I have some pictures that could be used, shall I upload 'em? Unit 8311 10:58, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. Thats a great idea. If its just going to be a DTM and native battle, ill do it, as always I am glad for you to give opinions and edit where you see fit. Yes, uplode the images. Also, like my DTM recrutment pic? Be honest. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 11:08, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. It's actually quite good--considering how crappy Paint is. One thing: I'm somewhat confused as to the seemingly random pictures of Sravs and Necs at the bottom. If it said 'these are enemies, they must burn in hell rar rar rar' or words to that effect, it would make more sense. Other than that, good job.  EDIT: Images uploaded, what do you think? I'd say the image of the militants is pretty badass.  Unit 8311 11:12, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Links? And yes, those faction leaders are supposed to burn in hell. .--<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 11:21, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Check out the Carrivar article. Unit 8311 11:23, 1 August 2008 (UTC)


 * If you were near me I would kiss your robotic face!  There fantastic! Heh, I have no clue what to do for the battle. NOTE:Thinking........Thinking.... AH HA! (That wub thing has not been used in AGES!)My DTM land on the planet and are looking for some remnants of the Ratakan Empire. It was a tip off by numerous spice traders. DTM land, search the planet. A DTM ship was left unattended and some curious natives enter the ship and somehow activate it and start shooting into the bushes. A whole squadron are behind the bushes. The native kills 400 men by firing bullest and launching a missile. Immediately the DTM retaliate and fire at the natives. The DTM are furious and demand justice! They now hunt down the natives. They find them near river fishing. The DTM fire at them and some come down the hill and fight hand to hand combat. The natives have to retaliate. They are armed with spears and crossbow. The natives offer a minimal threat as the DTM have better weapons. The DTM are victorious. The DTM make it back up to high ground and get their ship. The DTM leave the planet.....BORING! Ok the DTM are about to leave when a huge group of natives holding the dead DTM soldier's weapons. There are armed with guns, grenades and also some eborax rocket launchers. (Wondering if you can make that article). The DTM and natives fight. The eventually get the main frigate to launch a eborax bomb on the native's position killing them all. The DTM leave the planet to, a moon. Well that’s what I have got. Any thing to say before I go to bed? --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 11:46, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I like it. One thing though: I'd make the natives a bit more advanced, giving them very basic weapons (like WW1/WW2 guns), but other than that, a thumbs up from me. I'll create an article for a DTM/mercenary rocket launcher now, in fact. EDIT: there. Unit 8311 11:50, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry to barge in like this. I'd just like to see if I can attempt to make continuity between each of the factions. Well, my suggestion for this, is a question I'll pose to Arav: Why are the DTM looking for remnants of the Rakatan Empire, and what gave them that idea? I was just wondering, because the Lost Ones were involved in a battle somewhat recently, and as they are going to leave the war almost as quickly as they entered it, I wouldn't mind if they could get some mentionings. Oh, by the way, I'm on IRC at the moment, so if anyone wants to discuss anything, now would be a good time :). Darth mavoc 12:02, 1 August 2008 (UTC)


 * What I wanted to discuss with you, Mavoc, is the upcoming big Lost Ones battle, which you outlined on the Ravyr page. How did you imagine it coming about? And I also have some images for said Rataka battle droids:, regular ones, heavy-duty ones. My idea for the battle was: the Lost Ones turn up on the planet, where a Necasian spy outpost is. They pwn it, prompting the Necs there to set a distress call before dying. A small Nec taskforce in the region hears it, with Jarn at the command, as does an elite Srav commando squad. They both turn up, start to bitchslap each other, before they come under attack from legions of droids and have to fight together before reinforcements come. Meanwhile, the Zayre also learn of it and turn up, wanting a piece of the action. Jarn and Vergulva get closer in the battle, and eventually it all ends when Ironwings kills Ravyr. Thoughts? I also wanted to discuss the Janos Snake and the pre-Republic thing with you. I thought that perhaps in this year or the next year he could be forced to accompany Emela Makakson on a mission, and ends up losing faith in the cause when she napalms innocents and his own men, and eventually deserts and goes around neutral planets trying to build up a force to end the war once and for all. Opinion? Unit 8311 14:38, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I was actually hoping the Lost Ones might get a few more battles in. But I think the timeline won't have enough space for it, so I guess you're idea for their last battle, is good. Of course, why they would attack that place will have to be discussed and determined. But, I do like the concept - very much so. As for Janos, that'll do for now. I haven't really been thinking about him, as I've been preoccupied with other stuff. Darth mavoc 00:38, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Started the Carrivar battle. Mavoc: See the Battle of Carrivar (Cruentusian War) for information. If you want me to add information about your Lost Ones, ask. The DTM are looking for the Rakata for information and their high tech ships. They purely want their technology that they did not leave behind. The must of taken the really good ships and left the not so good ones behind. Hope that helps. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 02:22, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Arav, do you want me to add anything to Carrivar, or do you have your own plans for that? Mav, is it okay with you if I make the Rat battle droid articles, using the images I suggested? And do we have anything to see of the minatures? Also, I forgot to point out in my concept above that the LO are on the planet to take the cache of battle droids there, which they use to besiege the Sravs and Necs on the planet. EDIT: Whoah, whoah, whoah. After reading through Carrivar, I need to say: Arav, are you suggesting that Krennel is dead? If so, then no no no. I stil have plans in mind for the guy. But if it turns out that he simply survived a nuclear explosion with some cuts, then that's okay. Unit 8311 11:25, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Feel free to make the Battle Droid articles using the images you suggested (which I forgot to mention, I thought they were really good choices). And no, I still haven't gotten around to making any physical models as of yet. I was planning on doing Storm Ironwings first, but I can't get my hands on any D&D minis to use a basis. I might do Haveer Jarn instead, but I don't know what to use as a basis for him - I might do a stormtrooper or something. Oh, and if either of you are still here, I'm able to get onto IRC so we can discuss this project. Darth mavoc 11:47, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Right. The two Rataka droid models are done: Militisab Autora and Militisab Ultatora. You can add to them if you want. Anyway, I suppose Jarn (in armour) would be easier to do--just take a storm/clone trooper and fiddle his face around. And considering that so far me and Arav have signed off every time you suggest an IRC chat, I think it may be easier to just discuss it here. Unit 8311 16:22, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Unit:He does not die. He does though get some nasty scars on his forehead (It was a small nuclear weapon, a radius of 20 meters). Also, I think that you can come in and colab with me. I'll add Articles by Unit8311. (I knew you would bring this up about Kreenel, I just wanted to scare you, Hehe). --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 00:01, 3 August 2008 (UTC)


 * I propose we make a battle article that kills off the Vacoren Alliance. Lets face it, Troybs not comming back. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 06:52, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree, but let's leave it to year three. We can say that the VA was supplying arms to mercs behind the scenes, just so it doesn't seem that it appeared out of the blue. I asked Troyb if he wanted to participate, but he said that he was very busy but might 'try to'. And as for the Krennel thing, phew. 20 metres seems kinda small for a tactical nuke, though, but what the hell, not everyone can be a super-mega-physics science genius like me.  EDIT: I have done Carrivar, if you want to add anything else, feel free. Unit 8311 16:32, 3 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Nice. Unit: I was wondering if you would like to fill out the culture section in DTM article? I will fill out the Vehicle bit and you can fix it up if you would like to. Also, what’s the next battle? Can we make a Vacoren Alliance one? So they can actually be in one battle? It would be cool.--<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 06:22, 4 August 2008 (UTC)