User:Toln the Echidna/My First Fanfic

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Chapter 1 summary
The Jedi, Qui-Gon Jinn, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Yoda (who is a "Dagoban") live together on Naboo with their droids, R2-D2 and R4-P17. They decide to travel to Cloud City, on Bespin (for some reason). The Jedi leave Naboo and head for Cloud City. When they arrive, they see Palpatine and sense that he is a Sith Lord (wow, that was easy). Then, Darths Maul, Tyranus, and General Grievous show up, and Palpatine hides. The Jedi kill their adversaries in various ways including bisection, decapitation, and blasting (respectively).

Chapter 2 summary
The Jedi run away getting in to Twin Cloud Cars with their droids (somehow) and fly away. Palpatine gets in a Star Destroyer and chases after them.

Chapter 3
"The particle beam is heading straight toward us," shouted Obi-Wan.

"Ahhhh! hit we have been," said Yoda.

"We are crash landing on a planet called... What!? The computer went dead," said Qui-Gon. They crashed.

"R2, R4, are you okay?" asked Obi-Wan. There was no response. "That can't be good. I wonder where they are," said Obi-wan impatiently. He gathered the Force around him and he could see the droids and a man named Prince Beju in a palace in the center of the equator. "I know where they are!" exclaimed Obi-Wan.

"Good use of the Force, my young padawan," complimented Qui-Gon. They walked on for hours without talking. Finally Obi-Wan spoke.

"Look there's the city!" said Obi-Wan.

"A good job you have done leading us here," said Yoda.

Out of nowhere, someone said "Obawan!"

"That sounds like a Phidian," said Obi-Wan. Then he turned around. "Geurra! It's been seven years since i've seen you!" said Obi-Wan joyously.

"Paxxi came too," said Geurra.

"Good to see you again," said Paxxi as he and Obi-Wan shook hands.

"So, is Prince Beju gone?" asked Qui-Gon.

"I don't know," Guerra and Paxxi both said.

"Well, we went to Cloud City, Bespin, and found out that the Chancellor was a Sith and we found a few more. We took them down. To make a long story short, the Chancellor shot us with a torpedo. And now we're looking for two astromech droids," said Obi-Wan.

"We could help you with your ships, but I'm not sure we could help you with the droids," said Paxxi.

"We'll handle the droids. Thanks," said Qui-Gon.

Beep, beep, beep! Obi-Wan took out his comlink.

"Master Windu has requested that Tru, Ferus, Darra and I bring a transport to you. He said we could help you," said the voice of Anakin Skywalker.

"Okay," said Obi-Wan. "Oh wait! Do you know what planet we're on?" asked Obi-Wan.

"Yeah, you're on Utapau."

"Okay, thanks."

"Why are you on Utapau instead of Phindar?" asked Qui-Gon.

"We heard that Prince Beju might be here," said Geurra.

"Feel where he is, I can," said Yoda. He pointed to a platforc attached to a cliff.

"I have a transport," said Paxxi.

"Good," said Obi-Wan.

"Would you mind fixing our ships while we go after Prince Beju?" asked Qui-Gon.

"No problem." said Geurra.

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"Finally, I will have my three victims," said Prince Beju. Then he heard a laser sound. "get away you..."

"No, they're my victims. Heh, heh, heh," said a strange voice. The three Jedi came through the door, and Qui-Gon saw the face of his former apprentice.

"Xanatos," Qui-Gon said.

"Since your here, we should get this over with."

Then, four lightsabers clashed together. Smoke was rising in the air. The lightsabers were moving sofast that they were a blur. Then, two lightsabers stabbed Xanatos from behind.

Chapter 4
Anakin and Tru had killed Xanatos.

"Where are Ferus and Darra?" asked Obi-Wan. Anakin pointed towards blasterfire, droids and two Jedi. Then they ran to go help Ferus and Darra. As soon as the droids were finished off, two droidekas came in. There was no way to destroy them except to get them while they were rolling. Then the droidekas rolled towards them. Obi-Wan chopped them in half. Obi-Wan commed Geurra.

"Did you get the cloud cars fixed?" he asked.

"It blew up while we were working on it," Geurra said.

"We can take the transport that we brought," Tru said. As soon as they started, clones started shooting at them. The Jedi blocked several shots before slicing with their lightsabers. they finished off the group of clones and got R2 and R4. The Jedi called Mace Windu and told him about the clones.

"There have been strange things happening. Keep an eye out," Mace responded.