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Project Aims

 * 1) Our goal is to create a minimum of three Featured articles, showing the large amount of effort we would like to see put into the project.
 * 2) Create an extensive new and intriguing era.
 * 3) Build a good relationship between users.
 * 4) Most importantly, enjoy ourselves!

Please do join this project, for it will improve the wiki as a whole, and should be a lot of fun!

List of Participants

 * Darth tom
 * Obi maul12
 * Unit 8311
 * Troyb
 * Gnosis is knowledge
 * Arav the Undersith
 * Darth Nyne
 * Trak Nar

Articles
If you create an article for this project, please add to the article!


 * Project Cruentus
 * Cruentusian War
 * Darth Undersith
 * Zion
 * Gresk
 * Orskasp and related articles
 * Orskaspan
 * Ranasha
 * Elthior-class IV Assault Frigate
 * Eborax
 * Zayre
 * Necasian Military
 * Srav Federation
 * Jasef Yuiln
 * Ivran Gresev
 * Sviat
 * Death's Tongue Militia
 * Carsal Redharn
 * Vacoren Alliance
 * Hask Dofine
 * Ankarr
 * Battle of Dagobah (Cruentusian War)
 * Drakuv-class assault tank
 * Okol-class mobile missile launcher
 * Battle of Shattered Ridge (Cruentusian War)
 * Toronian Class Storm Tank
 * Nataska Vergulva
 * Battle of Hypori (Cruentusian War)
 * Hoag's Peble
 * Molot-class anti-infantry platform
 * Gan Gan
 * Kurtev-class heavy assault tank
 * Yukel-class assault fighter
 * Battle of Lehon (Cruentusian War)
 * Jam Dasua
 * Battle of Alaris Prime (Cruentusian War)

Timeline
Once articles start being created, a timeline may also be created

Discussion

 * To view past discussions, see Archive 1, Archive 2, Archive 3.

Well done so far on all of your articles, but you shouldn't be putting things like "Birth = DECIDE LATER" or "(NOTE: UNIT, I WILL CREATE AN ARTICLE FOR THIS PLANT, SO PLEASE DON'T)" in your articles. That's all Out of Universe maitenance content, so if you want to note all of that then it should be placed onto the article talk pages or placed inside this forum. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 18:30, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay Rhea, we'll bear that in mind. As for your Necasian hero idea, tom, I like it. For an image, to avoid any more master-chief nonsense, I have this one, which looks a bit evil if the Necasians are supposed to be the 'bad guys' (although its looking like there won't be any 'baddies' and 'goodies' in this war, which is a good thing) and  this one, which is a bit more neutral, or, which is a bit small. Also, what is his speciality--my heroine is about sniping and demo, Ironwings I guess is all about surprise attacks from above, so what about him? Also, I think that each side should have its own unique class of fighter, but, again given the date, fighters in this war should be little more than modern-day jet fighters with limited space capabilities, and each one will be suited for a different thing: e.g. Srav fighters are about ground support, Necasians are about dogfighting, Zayre don't need fighters, etc. What do you think? Unit 8311 19:11, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Ah, damn, you've already created the Askar thing. So why not use one of the images for a class of Necasian soldiers, or make a Necasian frontline hero--like the Sravs have a commander hero and a frontline hero, if you know what I mean, just so all my googling doesn't go to waste? Unit 8311 19:13, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I may make a frontline hero, who would be a supporter of Redharn's and would flee with him, but Invado would order his execution for 'treason' and 'war crimes'. I like the second most image, but not the first for this particular article, and I also will be using images of SPARTANS from Halo and of the Taungs. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:31, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Spartans? Please, I'm getting a bit tired of Halo stuff here, no offense. But I suppose they're kick-arse in any case, so if you really must I'll let it pass. Anyways, what do you think of my fighter idea? Unit 8311 19:37, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I like the fighter idea, and I get tired of seeing MC in every article, but their armor is just the sort that the NM SpecOps would look good in, and it resembles the Taung armor. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:43, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, I guess I can let another MC thing pass, and I already have an idea for the Srav fighter article: the Yukel-class assault fighter, which is essentially a nuke-equipped fighter-bomber. Also, I think each faction should have its own theme, just like my Steel Legion thing--e.g. the theme for the Srav Federation can be 'requiem for a dream' (just an idea) which can be heard here. Only the relatively major factions can have themes, if that's better. What do you think? I just ask because I like giving things themes.  Unit 8311 19:48, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I like that idea. I have two things now, one of which is going to really annoy you. :P The one for the NM will be one of the ones of KOTOR, and the one for the Zayre I would like to be, here's where you'll get annoyed, the Halo Soundtrack, heard here. It's getting a bit repetitive, with the whole Halo thing, but it just suits the Zayre perfectly. When I hear it, I get the image of a large Zayre army flying forth over a cliff top to do battle for their lives... What do you think? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 20:01, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, Arav, well done on the mini-factions! And, to all of you, what say you to the idea that, at the end of the project, we create various novels about the war but also a game? C3PO the Dragon Slayer has made Avian Hunt, which we all look forwards to, and what would you say to a Cruentusian War game? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 20:15, 15 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Well initially I would say yes but I think it is too much. I would love to see a game but isn’t that very technical and long? We should talk about this I think when we are almost completely finished the Project. At the end of the project. I will discuss further at the end and we know that’s a long way away, like at the end of the year. If you want the information to be top notch.  I say wait and see. If its really good at the end then I would say yes, but ill only help on ideas, I’m better at giving ideas then writing storeys.-- Arav  [Talk] . 06:05, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * That's what I was proposing. One to be made at the end of the Project. What would all of you say to that idea? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 06:20, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Hrm... this is sorta on-topic as it concerns the project, but somewhat off-topic as it doesn't concern the game. I'm willing to offer help with the tedious clean-up of grammar and spelling in the articles, seeing as how that's pretty much all I do anyway.  Also... if you'd like, I could draw images for the articles.  I'd rather be putting my art toward a more-promising project than to a certain kid who's proved to be more a hinderance than an asset.   Trak Nar  Ramble on 06:28, 16 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I did it!!!!!!!!!! I found the unfindable image!! I had to go to literally over 40 websites to find this image! I am so happy! Its really good, I found the url in a Dark Horse comic review! I was just about to leave the page when I saw the same name in the url as my pic did of it in My Pictures SWONEMP-36-FC-FNL. I found this image years ago! Well im so happy ill give you the image. [[Image:SWONEMP-36-FC-FNL.jpg|thumb|left|150px]] enjoy! Great to have you Trak!-- Arav  [Talk] . 06:36, 16 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Awesome. XD  And thanks.  I dunno if I'm gonna write any articles, but I'll definetly draw stuff.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 06:44, 16 May 2008 (UTC)

Further Discussion
Tom, please see The Battle of Lehon. Also the previous discussion place was stuffing up. It said there was no such page, so I created this. -- Arav  [Talk]. 08:20, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * It did the same thing for me too. I archived the first discussion section into another archive and I'm gonna do the same to the previous discussion in hopes that it'll remedy the problem.  The page is mosterously long. o.o   Trak Nar  Ramble on 08:50, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yep, it worked. Archiving the majourity of the previous discussions solved the problem.  Now for me to get my butt to bed...  Trak Nar  Ramble on 09:00, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * This is me, (just guess who, it's pretty damn obvious) and I have a few things. Thanks Trak Nar, your assistance will be greatly wanted, and, Arav, didn't you read Brandon's comment? Don't leave stuff in articles saying stuff like: 'TOM: NOTE, I WILL DO THIS LATER. I don't believe any of us are doing it any more. And, by the way, good image. 213.120.242.98 14:10, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've created the Srav fighter article, which I think should kinda be the basis for other fighter articles. Some other things: tom, I like the idea of a novel and game revolving around this, but like Arav said, let's leave that until the project is finished or almost finished. Now, should we start focusing on the first battles of the war (in fact, we can make Arav's Lehon battle the first one, to make things easier) or should we do one more collab battle, my idea this time involving the Zayre teaming up with the Necasians and both of them whupping some Sravs under the command of your Askar guy? Unit 8311 16:05, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I personally have some great ideas for the Necasians. Carsal Redharn is a great fan of the Zayre, and recognizes what a valuabe ally they will be, and he is a great fan of them. When Askar kicks his sorry arse right outta Necasian High Command and imprisons him for execution, Storm Ironwings, in repayment, will free him. Askar will then be really angry and spend time hunting him, whilst Redharn's great friend and Necasian Commander, Haveer Jarn, will be having doubts about Askar. He will have his loyalty called into question many a time, and will eventually set off to look for Redharn, with some officer he's in love with. Eventually, he'll find Redharn and Redharn will have founded a small faction using fighters, like the ones you created Unit, and Jarn and his Girl will discover him, asking him to return to the Necasian Military, and lead it from Askar's rule. Unfortunately, Jarn will have led Askar to Redharn, and Askar will shoot both Jarn's love and Redharn, mortally, before Jarn is forced to flee. He will then take control of the fighter faction and fight the Necasians. And I think we should do a few more collab battles, and some other additions to the storyline. What say all of you? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 16:25, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * That looks a bit complicated at first sight, but yeah, it seems good, and it might add a drama backdrop to the whole war thing. I think the fighter faction should initially use craft that are pretty much similar to the craft of other factions (i.e. glorified modern jet fighters, as I said) but towards the end they start to get upgraded so they resemble more the typical SW starfighters we know and love. Also, could Jarn be the Necasian frontline hero (initially at least)? Meanwhile, let's do one or two more collab battles, and then we can start serious work on the storyline. What do you think of my idea in the last comment I made for a collab battle? Should we start elaborating? Unit 8311 16:41, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, Jarn would be the frontline commander. And I was thinking about a logo for the Zayre also. Anyone got any ideas? About the battle, hell yeah! I'm so looking forwards to kicking some Srav butt! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 16:44, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. I think the Zayre logo should be arabic-looking, for some reason. Okay then, let's make the battle on (scratches head) (because I'm too damn lazy to think up my own ). The backstory, I think, should go something like this: Zayre approach Necasians for an alliance, Necasians decide they can use the Zayre to weaken the Sravs before eventually destroying them via suicide missions to elimiante them as a threat, so Askar and Ironwings team up with their respective forces to take down a Srav base on Alaris. And yes, the Sravs will get their butts kicked, though don't count on it going on, comrade.  Unit 8311 16:50, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Indeed. I'm in. I also think that, before we make more articles, we should decide the outcome of the war and what happens to each faction. The NM will descend into civil war, with Jarn taking 'em down, and Jarn will, eventually, kill Askar. The NM will then be taken on by Jarn, but his revenge mission will be done, and eh will retreat it to some other planet and disband it into the ruling government of that planet. What say you? And, for the Zayre logo, if anyone approaches me with a good one, it'd be much appreciated. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 17:02, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I say that we cross that bridge when we come to it, but I think that in the end the generals of each factions will start killing their leaders, and it will all end in one big battle where the frontline heroes of the factions decided to group together against their generals, who are hellbent on destroying each other, in a last-ditch effort to bring peace. But, like I said, I think we should worry about that later. Also, like I said before, we should establish a timeframe for the war--four years is good, three maybe. As for a Zayre logo, I thought the imagery from Assassin's Creed --look behind the title. I don't know where to get a picture of just that logo, but oh well. Meanwhile, should we start Battle of Alaris Prime (Cruentusian War)?
 * Indeed. I'll go and mess the logo around now. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:53, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Started the article. When you've got a moment, tom, do the prelude bit, which will be about the Zayre meeting up with the Necasians, and then I can start with the battle section. Unit 8311 19:09, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure thing! Anyway, I'm uploading a Zayre insignia now. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:12, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Image uploaded and article edited. I also have an idea to add a storyline to this war and to give reason to why the war was given up. Whilst I recognize that you may reject this, I think that Haveer Jarn and Nataska Vergulva should start a relationship and, through their love, relise that the war is pointless, and that they are all the same sort of people. What say you? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:34, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Absolute rubbish. What were you smoking when you thought of that? Just kidding. That's actually a very good idea--it could give a proper reason to why the frontline heroes would want to end the war. Then, they could get together somehow with Ironwings and try and stop the generals of their factions, who have basically gone demented. What do you think? In any case, I think we should start thinking about the middle stages of the war before we start thinking too far ahead. I'll edit the battle article now--tom, give an Ironwings reply to the second quote on the page when I'm done, will you?  Unit 8311 20:11, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, i'll take a look at the article, but it'll be the last thing I do tonight. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 21:02, 16 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Are you guys having problems uploding images on Project Cruentus Articles? Like, try uploding this image to the battle of Hypori. The nuclear bomb image from wookiepedia. Here's a link. . Thanks.-- Arav  [Talk] . 23:34, 16 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Timeline?-- Arav  [Talk] . 01:15, 17 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Obi, when you are ready, I think you need to make a faction of your own. Tom,Unit,Troyb and myself have made one. Also Trak and Nyne, if you guys want to, you should make a faction. Remember, if you guys want to.Where is Gnois and Nyne?-- Arav  [Talk] . 01:28, 17 May 2008 (UTC)


 * At the moment, I'm prolly gonna just focus on general clean-up and revisions of articles, and drawing pics for some. If I tackle too many article-writing projects at one time (currently working on two over on the Wook), then I'll get flustered, overwhelmed, and nothing will get finished.  Projects like this I feel are best to ease into 'fore diving in and cranking out article after article.  I need to review the lot of the articles anyway to get a general idea and feel for the time period.  Since it't taking place roughly 23,000 ABY (or so), then I'd assume that there will be a different look to the technology, clothing style, archetecture, etc.  Given the pace of technology in the real world and factoring that into the level of advancement depicted in the movies, then I doubt that things are gonna look the same way as they were in say 40 ABY.


 * This is a whole new era, and in the span of time it took to get to this era, a number of things could've happened. Technology could've advanced to a utopian Kryptonian level.  Or a catastrophy could've happened that knocked technology back so far that the people hadta look for new ways to acheive what they wanna do.  This could be steampunk for all we know (which always looks awesome)!


 * That's been a kinda tricky thing when it comes to creating new eras, 'specially those that're vastly ahead of the established era; the advancement or decline of technology. How far can we actually go?  How far can things advance?  Is there a limit?  As artists and writers, we need to keep those things in mind.   Trak Nar  Ramble on 04:44, 17 May 2008 (UTC)


 * That's fine Trak Nar. A Michaledsuarez will always be a good addition to the Project. And no Arav, we're not having problems uploading images, and I don't think Gnosis or Darth Nyne are all that active, and Obi maul12 was banned for a bit a while ago. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 05:24, 17 May 2008 (UTC)