User blog:Nightmare975/Official Release of Imperial Treachery Chapter 1!

This time I mean it. This isn't a sample. I've spent a lot more time on this version than last time.

Imperial Treachery Chapter One

Please leave comments and criticism here or at the novel's talk page. It'll most likely be a while until the next chapter, so I'll probably start making bog posts about the characters, so look forward to that.