Star Wars Fanon:FW/Force Exile I: Fugitive

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Force Exile I: Fugitive

 * Nominated by: Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 04:52, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Definitely a good work of fan fiction. As I've said before, I recommend it to anyone, and find it to be an excellent nominee for featured work status.

Excerpt
''Sheets of rain slashed down through the Coruscant night. Howling currents of wind whistled through the myriad starscrapers, causing passersby of various species to seek the shelter of overhangs or buildings. The clouds loomed over the megalopolis, as if the sky was seeking to vent its wrath on the populace. Lying on a stained, slick slab of duracrete, oblivious to the pounding rain, was a young human male. His singed clothes and tattered appearance spoke of violence and chaos. Gasping for breath, drenched with rain, sweat, and tears, he lay on the slab trying to absorb all that had happened to him within the last few hours, trying to comprehend the destruction of all he held dear, trying to realize that everyone he had considered family was dead, and trying to determine what to do next, now that he was public enemy #1 as the cylindrical silver object belted to his waist marked him as a Jedi Knight, the millennia-old order now declared an enemy of galactic civilization.''

Comments
Only reason I'm not voting yet is because in any work of fan fiction, there's bound to be corrections to be made. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 04:52, 19 November 2008 (UTC)