Thread:PrimalTheGreat3021/@comment-104549-20170709203135

I've been browsing a couple of your articles. Remember that, per the Article Guidelines, all articles must be written in third person. First person (e.g. here, here, and the fourth paragraph here) and second person (e.g. the first line here) are not correct. Please take some time over the next few days to rewrite the lines necessary so it's all in third person. An easy rule to remember that might help is that your personal observations don't belong in the body of the article; they are best placed in a "Behind the Scenes" section or the Comments (you are allowed to comment on your own article). Additionally, you can always share your writing or development process on your user page.

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