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==Further discussion==
 * Hoag's Peble, no offence meant, is a terrible name. It sounds like a little backwater village near where I live in England, and as for Nurture's forest... No, personally, I like the name, for the planet, Ankarr, and the Battle could be called the battle of Shattered Ridge? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 11:00, 10 May 2008 (UTC)


 * No Problem. Like my new Sig?-- [[Image:SithHappens-789590.jpg|37px]] The Dark Lord  Try it, I dare you! . 11:15, 10 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I mean, Like the New Sig? Sorry if this is of topic but its just you and me.-- [[Image:SithHappens-789590.jpg|37px]] Arav the Undersith  Try it, I dare you! . 11:18, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, very nice, but, as you said, it's off topic. Do you fancy starting Ankarr? You're quite good with planets. If so, I'll start Battle of Shattered Ridge. Remember, for images, Ankarr is rough, rocky and forest covered, with a few lakes, but no real civilization. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 11:31, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

No problem! Ill make the Planet. I wont make too much of it today just a info box and enough info for starters to not get it deleted. Its 9:30 here and im tired. . Also it will be mothers day tommorw and I might be on. If I am I will be on a slow computer. Thanks for the nice comment.--  Arav the Undersith  Try it, I dare you! . 11:39, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, do we think we should start creating our NM/SF battle article, tom? To make things easier, I say we make it on a canon planet-- springs to mind. If that's okay with you, I can start with the article. Unit 8311 11:41, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Dagobah sounds good. We need to start planning storyline however. Who will be the victors? I'm here for the next fifteen minutes, then I'll need to leave for a bit. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 11:44, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I say we make it a draw--the terrain eventually forces both factions to retreat. I'll create the article now. Unit 8311 11:47, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Suits me. However, what about the subject of vehicles? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 11:52, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The article's done. As for vehicles, well the Sravs have mainly tanks and artillery units, which aren't that suited for swamps, and the Necasians can have more hit-and-run, terrain-worthy vehicles that work better in the environment but aren't good against Srav firepower. You can fill in the Necasian side of the infobox now. Unit 8311 11:55, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Will do, but I've got to go now, so it'll be the last thing I do for now. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 11:57, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I will get images for the Vehicles, A battle thing for the Battle of Dagoba and a pic for Ankarr. If you don’t like them just change it and get a new one from PCPL. It’s in the Forum.-- [[Image:SithHappens-789590.jpg|37px]] Arav the Undersith  Try it, I dare you! . 22:34, 10 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Its that time! The time to change Article for Improvement.-- [[Image:SithHappens-789590.jpg|37px]] Arav  [Talk] . 22:46, 10 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Indeed. Any votes? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 06:45, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Toronian Class Storm Tank could use a bit of touch-up. It's quite new, but still. Speaking of which, should we continue with the Dagobah battle, tom? Like adding a few quotes and sections and stuff? Unit 8311 19:40, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I concur with the tank idea for AoI. And yeah, let's carry on in the article! I, as I've said, had the idea for a carnivorous swamp plant, and a few others. Have you any ideas? Arav, I made the Battle of Shattered Ridge (Cruentusian War) article, but you'll need to fill in the parts in the infobox. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:44, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, we can make the swamp plant the reason that the two sides retreat, but then say that radiation from Srav weaponry eventually killed it off, possibly opening up possibility for another battle in the future. I'll add a quote now; you can add one from your faction commander. Unit 8311 19:47, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure thing. I like the way you gave a plausible reason for the plant dying. I'll add a quote and a few things in a sec, and, Arav, if you could find a picture of a good swamp battle? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:53, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay then, but I gotta go now. I'll be on tomorrow, though, and we'll be able to start adding details and stuff. Unit 8311 19:55, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, that's good. I added a quote but, Arav, if you could find a good pic? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:57, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I've expanded the battle article. Tom, I feel it could use some work form your side. As for the AoL idea, should we just go ahead with the tank, as it's probably the most need of expansion? Also, let's do another collab battle, this time maybe between the Sravs and the Zayre, and then we start working on mapping out the cause of the war. I also feel that the Zayre could possibly make use of the force/magic, just to counter the high-techness of the other sides. Unit 8311 19:30, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * It could use a hell of a lotta work from my side. I've been very busy recently, and have been unable to do much, but I'll be trying to make an effort. And I whole heartedly agree with your Srav's VS Zayre, and the force would be a good addition to their arsenal. At the moment they just use basic weapons. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 20:36, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * OK, I added a lot to the battle article. Arav, you got any ideas for our one? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 21:47, 12 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I will soon help as I have said before. I am currently going to do the Mini Factions and create a new planet. Sorry.-- Arav  [Talk] . 07:09, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I've added a few quotes to the Dagobah battle. Tom, you can add new ones, change, remove, whatever. Should we start planning the Srav/Zayre battle? Also, I think it's about time we started discussing the opening of the war. I think it should start as a petty skirmish between some of the mini-factions, and then as they make alliances and start to attack some of the big players the war eventually spreads, like a domino effect, rather than all the sides simply deciding to start shooting each other one day. What do you think? Unit 8311 12:48, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Whilst I like that, I think that the smaller factions should also be destroyed, consumed or assimilated by the larger factions, rather than just allying themselves. And, for the battle, I had the idea that the Zayre, who don't have any proper war ships of yet, would have left from the battle me and Arav have started, and stumble upon a Srav controlled planet unknowingly. Encountering these opponents, they would assail them and the battle begins. And I'm currently working on a good image for the Battle of Dagobah. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 16:21, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I was about to say that eventually by the midpoint of the war all the mini-factions will either be destroyed or of no more tactical significance. Speaking of which, we should decided how long to make the war--four years sounds about good to me. As for your battle idea, then yes, that sounds like a good cause. Also, if the Zayre are going to the force/magic/force magic/whatever, what sort should it be? I think it should be elemental--e.g. weather control--just to balance out their lack of military hardware. As well as that, I had the idea of giving each side a hero--by that I mean not a commander, but an RTS-type hero is the most prominent soldier in his/her's respective army, if you know what I mean. I already have some ideas for the Srav heroine, if you wanna hear 'em. Unit 8311 17:00, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, sounds good. And by weather you mean lightning etc. right? And the heroine for the Zayre I have a few ideas for, but I'd like to hear yours first. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 17:03, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, lightning and wind and stuff like that. Okay--her name will be Nataska Vergulva, a highly skilled Srav commandess who is also a demolitions expert. She is also able to 'paint' targets with lasers for nuclear missile strikes, and maintains a cold and 'tough girl' image in battle, although she is really a bit soft underneath. Now lets hear ideas for yours. Unit 8311 17:11, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Mine is for Warlordess Storm Ironwings, a Zayre warlordess who's mother, he previous warlord, died from Eborax. She's not ready for the respnsibility of Warlordess, but the war is the making of her, and she grows to fill the mantle of Warlordess, and proves to be a great military commander. Both female heroines I see! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 17:16, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Sound good, but 'Ironwings' sounds a bit cheesy for some reason. Should we create article for our heroines (as stubs a least) and start on the Srav/Zayre battle? Then, once Arav finishes with the mini-factions, we can work on the first battles of the war. Unit 8311 17:18, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but the Zayre name has a reference to something else. Yeah, let's create stubs. I'll be away for about half an hour, then I'll do that. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 17:22, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, Nataska Vergulva is done. When you're back, where do you think we should hold the Srav/Zayre battle? Unit 8311 17:31, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I'll create the stub now, and I'm thinking of a barren, rocky and sun-baked planet. Your opinion? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:04, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * That's okay. ? ? ? Or should we make our own? Unit 8311 18:05, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Hypori I think personally. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:23, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Alright then, Hypori it is. I can create the article now, if you want. Have you decided on the extent of Zayre abilities yet? Unit 8311 18:27, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Just create a stub for now; more discussion is needed. And, for the Zayre abilities, I have decided that all Zayre will have rudimentary force weather abilities, such as the ability to conjure up storms and hurricanes etc. Obviously more Zayre will create more powerful effects. As with humans, there will be some Zayre with Jedi like abilities, but they will have no training. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:31, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Stub created. Actually, this can be how the Zayre get involved with the war proper--they could return back to Ankarr after the battle and take it, and then ally with the Necasians against the Sravs (the alliance could change/be broken at some later point). But back to the battle article--we must decide on a victor. I sorta think the Zayre should get kicked off again, as then they can return back to Anakrr and take it, but seeing as they just lost the previous battle, it might be a bit unfair. Unit 8311 18:44, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I see. I made some changes. Well, on outcome, we never lost to Arav's Rodians. We gave 'em a thrashing but they took some of us with them, so we won. And I'm happy for the Zayre to be forced to retreat. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:48, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, damn. Well in that case, we can just say that the Zayre are trying to track down Rodian remnants or something and they stumble across the Sravs on Hypori. Sound good? In that case, I'll make the battle outcome a Zayre defeat. Unit 8311 18:51, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * No, keep it as it is, because, although the Zayre won, they are sufficiently weakened enough to need to find somewhere to lick their wounds. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:53, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I meant making the Hypori battle a Zayre defeat. I'll start filling in the article a bit now. Unit 8311 18:55, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I'll join you. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 18:59, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I've finished off the Hypori battle. Tom, add some more stuff, quotes (do a response from Ironwings to Vergulva's quote in the second battle section ). I also opened up the possibility of a Zayre/Necasian alliance, if you don't mind. Once that's done, shall we discuss on the starting battles, which should be next on our to-do list? Unit 8311 18:44, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * cool, I'll take a look and make some changes. This Vergulva is starting to annoy me! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:14, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Why is she starting to annoy you? Unit 8311 19:18, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * No, she's a fantastic character, but she's too damn powerful! My Zayre get their butt kicked! Ironwings, up your game! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:29, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Heh heh, your pathetic Zayre will be utterly pwned by hax0r Srav superiority! Now, all we need are some images, and perhaps some finalization for Arav's mini-factions ideas, so that we can proceed. Unit 8311 19:31, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Pwned my arse! Anyway, yeah, some images would be good. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:37, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Not sure about some specific battle images, but I have found what I think is a perfect image for the infobox in the actual war article--see on Wookieepedia. Speaking of which, the war article is in desperate need of updating, which I'll do now. Unit 8311 19:41, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, the articles is in need of updating. I imagine that you were unable to do it because of the wikia mess up, so I'll do it tonight. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 05:49, 15 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I will do the Mini Factions now.-- Arav  [Talk] . 05:58, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * War article's updated, added insignias in the infobox to make it seem more Wikipedia-like (and therefore better ). Speaking of which, does the Zayre have any sort of insignia? And should we go ahead for my nuclear bomb idea for the infobox? And someone needs to create a bigger war infobox...Unit 8311 07:26, 15 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Its good but I think there is a better one. One that shows a war of many ships fighting, like the Battle of Couruscant. Im rushing, sorry. Please fix up the New battle article I have made. Ill do it up soon.-- Arav  [Talk] . 07:44, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Nah, I kinda think something like the image you uploaded for the Dagobah article would be better. In fact, I think space combat should be minimal in this war, as it's 20K years before Yavin, so technology should only be a few generations ahead of ours. Anyway, I'll fix up the new battle one, but clarify one thing for me, Arav: is it supposed to be the first battle of the war? That's the impression I got from the infobox outcome. Unit 8311 12:33, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The Dagobah image article is a great favourite of mine. Anyway, I have an idea for the NM here. The hero will be a Askar someone orother, and will be a great military commander and SpecOps leader, before usurping Carsal Redharn. You guys like it? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 16:42, 15 May 2008 (UTC)