DL:Muggera Delijiti

Disapprove/complaints

 * 1) Below are my complaints for this article:
 * Though there are enough words in the intro, it would look better if it was broken up into more than one paragraph.
 * The pictures in Hutt Secret Police, Height of Success and Never Enough are very crowded on my Widescreen computer, so on Fullscreen computers they will be even more so.
 * Clone Wars and Weathering the Storm should be expanded.
 * Capitalization errors throughout. Two examples of this are where you have "twi'lek" and "stormtroopers". The first letters of both words should be capitalized.
 * Postmortem is incorrectly spelled "Post-mordem".
 * Postmortem needs to be greatly expanded, along with much more about his legacy.
 * Talents should be greatly expanded.
 * The sections under Possessions and Vices should all be expanded or combined into one section.
 * Once these and any other complaints made by DLs are resolved, I believe this will be a Featured Article. - Brandon Rhea 04:16, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I've crossed out what has been fixed thus far, though it still needs work. A lot of these sections appear long, but they have two, three and sometimes one sentence lines in them. You should only hit the space bar to go down to a new "paragraph" when you have, in fact, written an entire paragraph. If the "paragraphs" in each section were to be combined, you'd be amazed by how much shorter this article would be. Please be sure to add in A LOT more detail and correct the other errors above such as the pictures. - Brandon Rhea 16:59, 10 October 2007 (UTC)


 * 1) Per the above and a couple I'm about to add.
 * The article could do for some expansion in the main body and the paragraphs should be split up, so instead of one huge paragraph, there would be several, which makes it look much better. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:45, 30 September 2007 (UTC)


 * 1) Per Brandon and NKSCF. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  16:02, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) The main picture is very blurry, so you should upload a clear/hi-resolution picture. Most of the sections only seem lenghty because it looks large, but in reality they are about 5 or so sentences in length spaced apart. I think you should greatly expand every section and write paragraphs with detail instead of a bunch of loose sentences. Also, the article lacks a talents section, and some of the pictures are rather small. I think the pics should be at least 150px, and if they aren't big enough, upload the bigger versions. Basically, major expansion. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|20px]] ( contact ) 22:39, 6 November 2007 (UTC)