Talk:Dark Order War

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I took the template off, but keep working on it cause its really good :]

The way I work at any project is that I go full speed and efficiency for a short while, run out of steam, take a break for a while, and then restart the process. As of now I'm trying to get my creative energy back. MPK 13:55, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Battle over Thule
Hello. I'm a huge Star Wars, suprisingly. And I found your Dark Order to be very interesting to me. I have a few ideas. Luke Skywalker, Kyle Karant, the Fiery Dawn's captain, and the commander of the New Republic's forces that got destroyed at the Second and Thrid Battles of Eriadu plan to attack the Super Star Destroyer Persia and a huge fleet heading to Kooriban to attack the last of the Korr Loyalists. The large Sith fleet regroup at Thule Luke leading Rouge Squadron and Kyle in the Raven's Claw lend a helping hand. And the Fiery Dawn and it's captain does something to turn the tide of the battle (but the ship and the catpain still survives). Persia is badly damaged and leaves for Kooriban and finish off the remants of the Korr Loyalists, where Persia's finally destroyed.


 * Thanks for the feedback. Your idea is good, but a few things would have to be changed. For one thing, the Korr Loyalists were all killed in the First Battle of Eriadu. Jaden Korr was never particularly popular with the other Imperial leaders, which is why it was so easy for the Sith to take over. Second, Luke Skywalker isn't the leader of Rogue Squadron at this time, but that's pretty minor. I'll keep this suggestion in mind. Thanks again. -MPK 17:21, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

Hello. It's me again. I like to thank you for agreeding to my idea. Here are some of my new ideas. Luke Skywalker, Wedge Antilles, Kyle Katarn, the Fiery Dawn's captain (Jace Dillian or Dillion), and the commander of the New Republic's forces that got destroyed at the Second and Third Battles of Eriadu (you could name him if you want to) are leading a jedi/ elite republic fleet against the Greater Sith Empire. Winning many victories and freeing planets. But here an idea for an campain. Persia had sent up a cluster of TIE Constructon facities and small shipways on the end of the hian Way. He plan is to take complete control of the route and literlly split the galaxy in half. But Luke, Wedge, Kyle, Jace, and the commander destroyes all the shipyards and facilies and stop Persia's plan. Plus a few small battles will take place. P.S. Thank for listening to my ideas.

Thanks for the ideas. As usual, I'll keep them in mind. -MPK 18:07, 7 March 2008 (UTC)


 * It's me, again. Just one more question. When are you going to start on your page. I can't wait to see OUR ideas together. P.S. You want know my name?

It could be a while before I [chronologically] get to when the ideas you give take place. And yes, it would be helpful to be able to identify you as something other than an IP address. -MPK 17:16, 11 March 2008 (UTC)


 * my name is Carrie Starr Desariee-Patterson. I was born in London, U.K. and move to Malibu, Calafornia. I was mostly raised by my uncle and his long-time girlfriend. They'll be married soon. I found high school to be very hard. At school, I actually have few real friends. Everyone else say their my friends, but I don't think so. I first watched Star Wars when I was three in Britian. I become a little obsessed with it. At six, I typed Star Wars and other stories on my computer. But I also like Star Fox and The Boondocks. I'm Anglo-Saxon or Anglo-Catholic, still speak with a British accent, 14 years of age, loves Slasher-type of films, and I'm...bisexual.

Oooookay then....- President Brandon Rhea   (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  16:40, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

A nickname would've sufficed. -MPK 17:07, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Sorry. How about just Desariee. And could you give a date or month when you're going to update the Dark Order War, please.
 * Release dates of any kind are out of the question. When one tries to write a story of large scale, he can encounter writer's block, more pressing issues, or a multitude of other scenarios the effects of which could help or hinder his/her progress. I work on this stuff whenever I can, and that's all that will be said. -MPK 03:24, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

Sorry. Just asking. - Desariee
 * For future reference, you don't need to apologize for asking a question. -MPK 02:30, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Okay - Desariee

Question- who's better, Atton Rand or Carth Onasi-Desariee

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