CS:Joe Tylars

This is the review page for the featured article nomination of Joe Tylars.

Objections

 * 1) Brandon Rhea has something to say
 * 2) *Basics
 * 3) **Intro is short by 73 words. 200 words minimum.
 * 4) **No talents and abilities section.
 * 5) **BTS is just a bulleted list.
 * 6) **Spelling, grammar, and tense errors throughout, which indicates that this wasn’t proofread or spell checked.
 * 7) *Needs a lot of work. I’m not even going to bother with a real review unless those are taken care of. If you don’t want to expand the intro or add a talents section, please re-nominate this for good article status instead of featured article status. - Brandon Rhea Alliance Starbird.svg (talk) 19:56, December 3, 2009 (UTC)