Star Wars Fanon:FW/Knights of the Old Republic: Vanguard of the Republic

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Knights of the Old Republic: Convict's Dawn
Nominated by: Atarumaster88   ( Talk page ) 03:47, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nomination comments: I've read this story before and have just been too preoccupied to actually read and review it. I'll get to that before the end of the month. Atarumaster88  ( Talk page ) 03:47, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Excerpt
Then the blaster fire stopped. It was a beautiful thing, silence, and my sore ears welcomed it gladly. However, no one else in my squad looked even slightly pleased. In fact, just about everyone else in the building looked like they had just seen their own tomb. Scrambling from their positions, the two soldiers who had just helped me made their way toward the wall opposite of me. The room was dimly lit, as I mentioned before, and it was difficult to see what was going on, but there was an awful lot of screaming.

An ear-piercing whistle and a few screeches were heard in the distance. Some soldiers acted instinctively and ducked to the ground. Others screamed in terror. I, foolish as I was, simply stood there in fright, looking absolutely ridiculous.

“Aerial bombardment!”

Objections

 * This blanket objection will cover everything I bring up to JM via e-mail. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:47, May 26, 2010 (UTC)