User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapter 15 released/@comment-1169345-20091208005136

You had some very clever lines in this chapter, I like the reference to A New Hope, with that line by Owen Lars.

I liked the way you had Anakin forced to remain on the planet. The sharecropping contract was a stroke of genius and a good way to avoid the slavery thing Lucas used.

The Japor Snippet, though a minor detail was very well done. I like that it was a symbol of his Chosen One status and that it was given to his family before his birth. Much better than the idea that a little boy carved it.