Thread:Spacetear/@comment-1255618-20151223005139

Hiya! :D

I was really impressed with your contributions to the article 'The Gray Jedi Order', so was wondering if you would be interested in helping to make some up-dates to the 'Gray Jedi Code'. There is not doubt that the code is awesome, and it is starting to elevate to "meme" status with lots of commentary on the page and even video responses to it on YouTube, but there has been some common criticism of it that I think is valid, and that there could be some room for tweaks to clarify the meaning of the code while still being true to the original vision and language.

I'm new to how this wiki works, so I tried making some attemptedly minimal edits based upon some feedback that I've heard and also some suggested revisions in the comments. I was also trying to add some more explanation about the code corresponding to what is said about the Gray Jedi in the article 'The Gray Jedi Order'. My edits were quickly reversed given that I am not the original author, which as you know is Locksmithjones. This caused me to do some digging and upon seeing that you are responsible for 'The Gray Jedi Order' page now due to Locksmithjones's years-long inactivity, I felt inspired to try and contact you and see if I could work with you (and whoever else might be interested) and throw some ideas back and forth about possible updates. In all honestly, any revisions I would look for would be small: my vision is that the code remains similar enough to Leonar Danal's quote at the top of the page such that it seems clearly derived from it. You can take a look at the page's history to see some of the changes I had in mind. I am happy to explain my thinking about any of those proposed edits, and in addition I would be eager to hear if you have your own ideas since I'm not one to stubbornly cling to my own thought patterns. x)

I was thinking about speaking directly to Brandon Rhea to ask for permission to edit the page. Of course, I can do this myself, but I also wanted to ask him that you be able to gain permission to edit the article since I think any contribution you could make would be invaluable. Is this something you would be interested in? :) 