Talk:Xhasa

Fanonification
The primary issues are the use of adjectives that represent your personal opinion&mdash;"unnerving glow," "powerful species" and the like. Once these are addressed, the problem ceases. I would also suggest the removal of unrealistic elements, like the overly long lifespan and the lack of negative traits; though these are not forbidden by policy, the community frowns upon such "Mary Sue"-type articles. Cheers, 12:56, September 5, 2011 (UTC)