User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/Alternative Saga Update: April 21, 2010/@comment-20644-20100421204703

I probably won't change it. It's an important line that sets up the rest of the book, particularly for one specific important supporting character.

"loltypolol"

Says you, lol. Seriously though, I will be reading over the whole thing, finding some errors, etc. I know there are some in Chapter 4 and Chapter 8, specifically.

"Kill me before I have to read and edit this story all over again."

You know you like it.