Talk:Gray Jedi Code/@comment-32152343-20170530104141

For me, lines 2.2 complete themselves to much, leaving the rest of it feeling clunky.

With that said, I have been trying to think of a complete loop version (on & off) for a while & all I have is this:

Flowing through all, there is balance.

There is no peace, without the passion to create it.

There is no passion, without the power to fuel it.

There is no power, without the knowledge to use it.

There is no knowledge, without the serenity to see it.

There is no serenity, without peace to guide it.

There is freedom in life.

There is pupose in death.

The Force is all things & I am the Force.

Yes, I know it is incredably long winded.. Just working out what to trim down. ;)