CS:Raymus Drewton (TOS)

FA nomination
 Approve 
 * 1) &mdash;  JM ' 76 ' Ask Archives [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|18px]] 03:21, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I see nothing wrong with this article. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 23:26, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Since two other seers have reviewed this and there appears to be no problems, I'll support this. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 00:25, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] (talk) (contributions) 18:22, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I don't see any problems. --[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|35px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 13:44, 17 October 2008 (UTC)

 Disapprove/complaints 
 * 1) JM76's comments
 * 2) * "They realized what had happened and determined to escape the ship alive." I think you missed a verb before 'determined'.
 * 3) **Fixed. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Why did Idnum-Ki recognize them when they were at Khoonda?
 * 5) **Explained. "due to them being the sons of a Senator." Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * "Early the next year, a terrorist group called the Nockudumey had caused a hubbub..." Hubbub? Seriously?
 * 7) **Bah, that was another thing I missed changing from when I was a newbie. Changed to "a disturbance in the Senate". Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * "Tarisian, when he was to be killed by their leader, silently contacted Raymus via comlink." Odd sentence structure. Doesn't flow too well.
 * 9) **Edited and expanded. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * &mdash;  JM ' 76 ' Ask Archives [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|18px]] 19:32, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

 Comments 
 * My first FA nomination and possibly my first FA. I'll refrain from voting until other CSs have reviewed it. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:01, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Just a note, I've used all the available information I can for the Personality and traits and Talens and abilities. There's nothing more to use for expansion. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 01:13, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

Anyone? Drewton  ( Drewton's Holocron ) 18:00, 12 October 2008 (UTC)