User blog:Toln the Echidna/Hi, tell me if my ideas suck!

First of all, I would like to introduce myself. Hi, my name is Toln the Echidna, but you can just call me Toln! I'm pretty much new here. I am hoping and expecting that my time on this wiki will be a great experience for me.

One thing I'm curious about is if this idea for a fan fiction series is interesting, original, creative, or special (in some way). This will be a sort of description of the premise of the possible fan fiction:

During and around the time of the Brotherhood of Darkness, three children are born (I don't want to explain their backstories, because that will partially ruin the story).

One is an acolyte of the Dark Force religion on Dromund Kaas where Darth Millenial is his mentor. Eventually a sith you may have heard of's apprentice appears and... some stuff happens that I would consider a spoiler at this point.

Another child is raised in the jedi order. He always holds himself to a high standard and strives to be the best he can be as a jedi. You would think he was secure in his beliefs in the Force. One day he starts thinking about some information that he knows about his parents, and decides to go on a journey to prove to himself that he is on the right path. This story involves a lot of different religions in the Star Wars galaxy, some new (anything I can think of), some old (whatever I can find on Wookieepedia).

The other character is lame (in the "can't walk" way) and is very powerful in the Force. His "destiny" eventually plays a large role in the path he takes. He is a jedi. He meditates a lot because of something he has recently sensed. Sorry this one is so vague, I'm not sure where he's going yet. I know more of what I'm going to do with him than what it seems, though.

These are all pretty vague, and I don't even have names for the characters or the series yet, but hopefully this is enough for you to give me your opinion on these ideas. Thanks in advance to anyone who comments and I guess I will see you around!

Toln the Echidna