Thread:Sakaros/@comment-29301-20180903145046/@comment-29301-20181220172816

Okay, that makes more sense.

If I may make things more difficult for you, however... I'm not so sure that making sure the reader knows about the fallibility of Sith alchemy would entirely solve the problem. You're talking about making the narrative clear about the disease, that it may have flaws in it. Well and good, but there still remains the issue of the cure itself being unclear. Because Tirien is cured by performing a moral act which causally does not seem linked at all to his being poisoned in the first place.

Of course, it doesn't help you one bit that the Star Wars source material is as vague as it is about what it means to be Force-sensitive and what it means to be "cut off from" the Force.