DL:Second Battle of Providence

Disapprove/complaints

 * 1) Prelude, all the sections of Main Battle and Droid Confederacy need expansion. One thing that might help with the Main Battle section is splitting parts of them into multiple paragraphs and then expanding them a little bit, because as it stands we really can’t have one-paragraph sections on a Featured Article. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  05:05, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, please expand it in most sections. Needs detail throughout and short sections aren't always good. -- Victor, Sr. HoloNet 209 05:12, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:24, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

Temporary Rejection
Due to the length of time this article has been on the nominations page without any changes, it is now a rejected FA nominee until the author decides to fix it up to standards. - President Brandon Rhea   (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  17:36, 30 January 2008 (UTC)