DL:Darth Tyler

Approve

 * 1) Read it all. Jasca Ducato's complaints don't seem to be a problem anymore. --C3PO the Dragon Slayer 6,000,000 forms of communication
 * 2) Gotta agree with C3PO.
 * 3) Just. 20:26, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Barely. --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 21:21, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

Disapprove/complaints

 * Expand introduction, expand traits.  Victor  ( talk ) 10:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I am not going to be unfair to the other nominees, and just like I said that Order of the Whills didn't have a sufficient introduction at less than 200 words, Tyler doesn't either. Tyler's introduction could be massive and has a lot of content which can be integrated into the introduction. For example, the summary of his history could probably be enough alone, plus a description of his traits and personality would be order. I also requested that his traits be expanded; His personality section is way too short and his abilities/traits could be elaborated on. -- Victor  ( talk ) 21:52, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Fails rules 4, 8, 11 and 12.