Talk:Phantoms of the Past/Chapter 2: The Council

Suggestions

 * Dear author, allow me to make some recommendations for your story
 * 1) Use Wookieepedia to get little canonical things like "Wookiee" and "Calamari" spelled correctly.
 * 2) Try and establish more to your work than just straight dialogue. There's very little description or characterization at the moment and a happier balance would improve the quality of your story. Cheers. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 04:54, September 26, 2009 (UTC)