Star Wars Fanon:FW/Failure at Cerea

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Failure at Cerea
Nominated by:-- Josh Bender Talk 01:15, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Nomination comments: It's about time I nominated something of mine somewhere.-- Josh Bender Talk 01:15, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Excerpt
''The Twi’lek approached the Mandalorian nervously and sat down across from him. “So Siena,” the Mandalorian started, “did you get the girl?” Siena shook her head. She opened her mouth to say something, but her jaw rattled back and forth, unable to make an audible sound. The Mandalorian pushed his drink towards her. “Drink,” he ordered. Siena grabbed the cup with her shaking hands and chugged the Ne’tra gal, the thick fluid stuck to her throat. Once the glass was empty she set it down and breathed a sigh of relief. The Mandalorian placed his elbows on the table. She couldn’t tell, but he was checking her over. After he noticed the bandaged wound on her arm, he looked into her eyes. He had known the expression in them. “Tell me what happened on Cerea,” he said in a calm voice. Siena closed her eyes and took a deep breath and remembered the last eighteen hours that had transpired in her head.''

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I am ready to take any criticism. It can only make my work better.-- Josh Bender Talk 01:15, November 16, 2009 (UTC)