Forum:High Priests - First Good Article Review

The High Priests will now review each good article that has yet to reach featured article status, per the High Priest Responsibilities. Once the complaints are made, authors can change their article to restore it's good article status. An article loses GA status after 3 of 4 High Priests revoke its status. Dexington 03:45, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * One nasty red link, wouldn't mind having "Strike on the new Confederacy" paragraphed as blocks are hard to read. Dexington 03:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Nothing except add an available appearance. I guess the red link is gone. --[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No, still a very good article. Dexington 03:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until the redlink is removed. Dexington 15:22, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until the possible appearance is made. Besides that, no, I see no reason to do so.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. Admittedly, it's better than most of my battles. -MPK 16:14, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Comments
Is there a possible appearance? The red link is still there, by the way. Dexington 15:53, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * I have been rectifying complaints for FA and I think it's there, but I'll let you guys decide here. I still think it's good enough. Dexington 03:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Just add a possible appearance, and it'll be ship-shape.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:53, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 03:50, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No, it's of good article quality.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:53, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. It's pretty professional for the most part. -MPK 16:14, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Expand "Pre-Colonization", "History of Ord Aretus after 64 ABY", "Fauna" and "Culture". Many of the paragraphs near the bottom half of the article are one or two sentences and need to be expanded or combined. Red links abound . Fauna needs to be "Flaura and Fauna", Culture needs to be "Society and Culture". Dexington 03:54, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Per above. It also needs a "Behind the scenes" section, possible appearances, and proper era icons.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:55, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?
With 3 votes, Ord Aretus has lost its GA status.
 * Yes. Dexington 03:54, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:55, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until spelling mistakes are rectified and paragraphs are merged. -MPK 16:16, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Congested pictures in "Early Life" and from "Battle of Lehon" down to "No Survivors". "Confrontation" and "Mutual Agreement" need expansion. "No Survivors" needs expansion or combination. Dexington 03:57, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Several sections throughout are too short and need expansion or merging as many of the paragraphs are just two or three sentences long, and also needs possible appearances .--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:59, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No, still a good article. Dexington 03:57, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No, but it's on a blade's edge from yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 15:59, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. -MPK 16:18, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Picture congestion at "The Clone Wars". "Between the Wars" could use expansion or clarification. Dexington 04:01, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Expand "Talents" and "Personality and traits", then add a possible appearance.
 * Some of the paragraphs could be merged (minor nitpick). -MPK 16:21, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No, very nicely done article. Dexington 04:01, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:02, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. (I personally don't care that much for Darth Krayt, but that's more a matter of taste) -MPK 16:21, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * I know Tyler's gone, but still... Red links abound (due to Tyler being gone). Small amounts of one sentence paragraphs. Dexington 04:03, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Several redlinks throughout the article.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:09, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Though the article itself is ridiculous, it doesn't fail any requirements in my inspection. No Yes, per Brandon below. Dexington 04:03, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Just to point out, GA standards say that there can be absolutely no red links, so one red link makes an article fail standards. Just wanted you to keep that in mind for this and any other article with red links. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  04:10, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

With 3 votes, Darth Tyler has lost its GA status.
 * Yes.--[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 16:09, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, per Brandon and Dex's points above. -MPK 16:22, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Death could use a little expansion and the quotes are kinda lame, but other than that, perfect. Dexington 04:06, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Absolutely not. Dexington 04:06, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * No. The story is surprisingly original. -MPK 16:25, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Red links abound. Expansion in the entire "Escaping the Empire" section. Personality to Personality and Traits. Dexington 15:27, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes, for now. Dexington 15:27, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, until aforementioned errors have been rectified. -MPK 16:28, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None, great article. Dexington 15:28, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 15:28, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * It does have an improvement tag, but this isn't nomination so it doesn't matter. Combination in War's End to make paragraphs at the bottom could be helpful. Dexington 15:30, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 15:30, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Nearly every paragraph in the first half is a couple sentences. Combination of said sentences is needed. Talents and abilities is its own section, not a sub section of personality and traits. Dexington 15:32, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes, for now. Dexington 15:32, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. Dexington 15:34, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * No. Dexington 15:34, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * One short paragraph, nothing to worry about. Dexington 15:36, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Excellent article. Dexington 15:36, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Too many sentence long paragraphs. Pictures need to be ordered properly (left,right,left,right,etc.). Dexington 15:38, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Unfortunately, yes. Dexington 15:38, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * All around it's too short. Amazing legacy, but the history needs vast expansion. Dexington 15:39, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes. Dexington 15:39, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Comments

 * For the record, I do plan on expanding this in the foreseeable future, but feel free to take away GA status if you feel the current history isn't enough. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  03:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Red link. Expand Culture and Astrography. Dexington 15:41, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * Yes, get rid of the red link and it'll be fine. Dexington 15:41, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro is too short (126 words). Red link. Expand the entire thing. Dexington 15:43, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Revoke GA Status?

 * I don't know how it got GA in the first place, to be honest. Dexington 15:43, 5 January 2008 (UTC)