Thread:Sebolto/@comment-36984184-20180922145654/@comment-1998339-20180922151340

Hey! Apologies, I have all article comments hidden by default so I'm guessing I missed yours.

Basically, I reverted primarily due to the Order 66 section & the -to-bullet list conversion of the History section. The Order 66 section extrapolates too heavily on the nature of the unit's status. "Fired" in context could mean any number of things to the author & may not necessary mean they were declared traitors. Without a better idea of the author's intended meaning, we can't know for sure. Since that part of the edit was a borderline content change, I reverted per the Editing Policy.

Secondly, the conversion of the  headers to a bullet list was unnecessary as it seems likely that the author intends to expand those sections with a description of the unit's participation in those conflicts. Converting them to a list does not help in this regard, seeing as the author would have to revert back to the headers to begin adding content to those sections.

That said, I've gone back & edited the page myself, incorporating your tense, syntax, & grammar fixes while leaving off the elements listed above. Feel free to take a look & let me know if this clears up the issue. Thanks! (: