User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapter 15 released/@comment-82555-20091201001055

I think Annikin has been very realistic, if I was told that I was the savior I wouldn't believe it. How I think of Sarus is weird, I kinda like him and I kinda hate him. I don't like Dooku, the way he attacked Annikin in Ch. 7 didn't seem to be what a Jedi Master would do. Then again that's what you were going for. I like your creativity, and the two groups that you made a great. They help make your story more original. Ussej seems like a character from Lord of the Rings, but it really doesn't ruin the story. What I don't like about your story so far is the fact the Qui-Gon Jinn isn't a major character. :P He's one of my favorite. To tell you the truth, there is nothing I don't really like about your story. If there is in later chapters I'll be sure to tell you.