Thread:Reylan Praxon/@comment-31050517-20171112194818/@comment-33558815-20171113234629

Apologies for the delay. I check this about every 24 hours or so, unless I'm editing my two works or adding on to them. As for Stone, I think it has potential. However, I do see a few things wrong with it, which is simple organization. I don't know if I'm the only one to see it or not, but it kind of has this chaotic gist to it. I kind of feel myself losing pace with the story in a few areas, and the format just seems a bit...loose? I honestly don't have the actual word to describe it, but when Chapter 5 comes out, I'll see what I can diagnose about that chapter solely.