Talk:Star Wars: Civil War/@comment-31421-20190823203750

Feedback was requested, so here it is. Fair warning: I'm not in the business of sugar-coating and I have higher standards than most. If that's not the feedback you were looking for, stop reading and ignore the rest.

I can't review (or even finish) this story. The context, conflict and characters aren't fleshed out enough, and there's no clue given as to who some of these people are, or why they are together, or what they are arguing about. The description/world-building is sparse almost beyond words, and it takes me out of the universe in a jarring fashion when similes are used to refer to Earth ( "like Monument Valley on Earth") in a Star Wars work, where, presumably, Earth does not figure. I would suggest reading some other more developed works by more practiced authors (e.g Sakaros, JM76, Goodwood, or Solus) on this community, or published Star Wars works as the first point for improvement.

As a first attempt, it's an okay start, but this has Star Destroyers full of room for improvement.