Talk:Shakvail: Beginnings/Chapter 5: Consular

This will serve as the talk page for Chapter 5, where any readers/editors are encouraged to leave comments regarding the chapter. Some initial author's notes regarding the chapter follow.

1. Spri'Leks are a near-Twi'Lek species, the result of an developmental mutation and Sith manipulation of their genetic code. They are my own invention.

2. Cerale, rtace, and yei, these names for invented grains are variations on 'rye' a crop suited for cold weather.

3. Wol carries a slugthrower, not a blaster, as the simpler technology is easier to produce and maintain in the distant Outer Rim.

4. Nematodes, of course, are real animals, and size-manipulation aside, I have attempted to accurately represent their biology.