User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/THE CHOSEN ONE: Chapter 6 released!/@comment-29301-20130403002010/@comment-29301-20130404025534

Regarding Ben Kenobi: I'm not sure how I feel about having Obi-Wan at the age you have him. One good idea that I think the films had was that of beginning with a young Obi-Wan and showing him developing as a Jedi. That aside, I like what you did with him in his introduction. In brief, he's familiar enough and different enough to drive home that it's Obi-Wan, but not Obi-Wan pulled out of the movies and dropped into this story. There's not much else I can say without repeating myself.

Regarding Michael: I like his setup as the archetypal "loser-hero", who wants to do good but doesn't know how to begin, and therefore comes off as a preacher who doesn't practice. I think that the struggle that he has between his lofty (yet distant) ideals and his desires to get ahead on this miserable planet (i.e, wanting Sara back, considering murdering Joshua, etc) so far does a good job of foreshadowing the internal conflicts that I figure he'll have much later in the series. You already knew that, though; there hasn't been much in these last two chapters to have me change or add to that assessment.

Regarding Logan: Actually, I didn't pay much attention to Logan and it's almost 10:00pm so I'll have to pay attention to him some other time. Good night, sir.