CS:Darth Ximus

This is the review page for the ongoing featured article nomination of Darth Ximus.

Objections

 * 1) ITCO's, since I have to put this, objections
 * 2) *Intro
 * 3) ** "For a long while Ximus trained and he quickly passed Ne-Rei Dis." This needs to be altered to make it sound a little less contradictory.
 * 4) **" He pushed forward quickly, but was almost as quickly pushed back."  Sounds awkward. I would reword the latter half. - I'm the Chosen One You must see it... 22:10, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Both have been fixed. -- SavageOpress1138  Help you I can, yes 22:14, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Bounty Hunting
 * 7) **He took all of the jobs he could get and could not complete many of them. He could complete many of them, and slowly began to get better and better. Confusing here. Could he or couldn't he?- I'm the Chosen One You must see it... 22:30, June 6, 2011 (UTC)