User blog comment:Aryn Tarra/No Chains Too Tight, Introduction and Chapter 1/@comment-31421-20120904170052

Hello there Aryn Tarra! Blog comments on fan-fiction on this wiki often take awhile to come in, especially for a newer writer. I liked the story thus far and would like to see more. One thing I noted is that you want it to match canon, but this first chapter is set on Byss prior to Jabba's death in 4 ABY. Byss was a restricted Imperial world at the time and it's pretty unlikely that criminal slavers would be found on Byss as it was populated by hard-core Imperials. Also, there were lots of dark side users on Byss, so it seems likely Serinii would've been detected as opposed to a more remote, lawless world. Just a thought, keep up the good work. If you ever want to move your story off a blog and onto a regular mainspace page and need help, drop me a line on my talk page. Cheers!