User blog comment:Nightmare975/Imperial Treachery, now with less ;'s!/@comment-20644-20090925221134

I'm going to direct the problems to you - you're the author, and therefore the person that this sort of thing goes to. Anyway, you're still having issues with the proper punctuation and capitalization after quotes. For example

“And that was our very own Arcia ladies and gentlemen, singing a battle hymn for our men-at-arms.” The announcer addressed.

You don't put a period at the end of that, nor do you capitalize "the." It should read:

“And that was our very own Arcia ladies and gentlemen, singing a battle hymn for our men-at-arms,” the announcer addressed.

This problem is all over the place. If I didn't know you have an editor, I'd think you didn't have an editor. Your editor needs to either shape it up or you need a new one, because your current one isn't exactly doing you any favors.