Thread:Boomdodger/@comment-31050517-20190804155115/@comment-5148107-20190930230833

I'll try my best to join in whenever possible. Many apologies for not being able to work or communicate, I've been super busy with real life as of late, still trying to find a balance between school and work!

Also, I saw your feedback on Herald of Chaos, and totally forgot to respond so I'll do so here. Many thanks for sending your feedback, HoC is something of an experiment for my Old Republic series, so hearing other people's opinions really helps. To answer the question you had regarding characters--Darth Inflictus and Kariphos are completely original characters first introduced with this short story!

I found some free time earlier so I've been trying to get through your series. I finally started Ryloth Under Siege, and I'm currently about halfway through. I'll write a full review later, but initial thoughts are somewhat mixed, to say the least. I need to finish the story and analyze everything before finishing my final review for it!

I will admit, there are many problems with your stories that I feel we could fix in our collab, so it should be fun to delve into what you have so far and do a little bit of nitpicking. Once I get through Yuuzhan Vong, we should meet up and discuss pros and cons so we can build off of that--I genuinely think that your series has the potential to be even greater! The concept of clones post-Clone Wars is super interesting (and something I'm generally very careful with in my own writing given how cliche things can become...) and I feel I must commend you for going down the route you have with them.

It wasn't my intention to write a full essay in response, so my aplogies for that haha. I'll probably have a bunch of free time the rest of today. The best time for me to have a chat with you will be in the evenings.