User:Atonai Demaris

Atonai Atriedes Demaris

Character Details

Name: Atonai Atriedes Demaris Age: 21 Affiliation: Jensaarai Rank: Apprentice Height: 6'2 Weight: 77kg Hair: Purple Flicking Hair Homeworld: Utapau Race: Human Speech Style: Cleverly articulated and witty. Fighting Style: Personally developed, unorthadox style. Habbo Name: Swimmies Languages: - Pau'an - Utai - Galactic Basic

Equipment

- Curved Hilt - Datapad - Grey Robes - Teal Tunic

Biography

Atonai Demaris is human male from Utapau, a planet near the Outer Rim. He grew up in one of the largest sinkholes on the planet. He decends from a long line of swordmasters and found profound skill with a blade at an early age, a trait picked up by most Demaris family memebers. It wasnt long until he was identified by the jedi. He began training at about 5 years old. His shy demeanour and casual attitude led to lack of recognition. But when small competitions in the younglings took place he displayed great talent with a blade.

At the age of 12 he gained a master, Ja'kan Vish. They went on several missions together to and Atonai learnt a lot from his master. He never thought he'd see himself looking up to someone as a hero. With the help of his master, Atonai grew his knowledge of the force and combat skills and progressed quite quickly for a padawan.

But soon atfer his 15th birthday, Atonai's master left the jedi, for the sith. Unknowing to Atonai who was told his master was captured and killed on a mission. This sense of betrayal and dissappointment led to Atonai rethinking his life as a jedi. He then began retraining himself in combat and restudying all over again without the help of a master. Through solitude he found new happiness and self pride and developed his own style of combat, a one handed saber grip and a varying reverse grip. This led to him being more adverse and aggressive when attacking as it allowed more space between him and the opponent while still maintaining the power.

He soon started visiting the planet Ilum quite regularly for personal 'pain training' in which he allowed himself to sit in the snow, not in warm clothing and taking the pain of the cold and concentrating it throughout his body. He discovered new resilliance and understanding of himself through meditation on Ilum.

Atonai remained inside the order walls for quite some time. He became quite hard to get a hold of and was often not speaking for days at a time. No one really understood what this phase was, but everyone just let him go. He found fun in simply reading books and wandering the jedi halls and watching training sessions. For a while he refused to turn up to classes and was often secluding himself from everyone.

In solitude Atonai discovered emotions he hadnt felt before. He had never felt anger in his life due to his abonormal mindset, however he began feeling it whilst mediating. He found it odd that during times of such peace he felt such emotions. He began to display un-jedi like traits such as jealousy and resentment. Finding trouble dealing complicated emotions he hadnt felt before. He went back to retraining and this, Atonai found to be, a salvation. He was seen to be much happier when he had a blade in his hand.

Over time he perfected his personal fighting style. He was surprised at himself when he realised it. Atonai then began visiting his old home on Utapau, and at one point living there for a brief period. Seeing it fit that he disconnects himself with a hurtful past, Atonai destroyed his saber. He saw it as his final link with his previous master and using it caused distress for him, which he figured to be the cause of all the anger and jealousy he has been feeling.

Soon after, Atonai returned to Utapau for the last time. He went to the sinkhole that the Demaris family once owned, layed detpacks throughout the sinkhole and detonated the bombs. The sinkhole was completely destroyed leaving a large black hole in the ground. He felt there was more he had to do, in order to disconnect himself from the past.

The Jedi order was raided by quite a number of sith, and Atonai was of the few jedi present to help defend. He held off a couple of sith, before being instructed to get out of the area. In a near death moment, Atonai remisced about his old days on Utapau, he realised how much he missed them, a life with no responsibility. The jedi decided to counter-attack and attacked the Sith citadel, which turned into a successful raid. Atonai didn't play a large role in the attack but he hadnt had more fun than he did like that for quite a long time.

Atonai soon gained another master, Shyron. He crafted a new saber, a purple saber with a curved hilt, this better aided his unique fighting style. He soon faked his own death, in a planned attack. He sent out a message across the galaxy stating his death, and then went into hiding with the Krath. He gained a master in the Krath, Junik Dryant, and is now a prominent young apprentice. He steadily became integral in the strengthening of the Krath Order. He soon felt failed by the Krath and earned no respect as one, Atonai decided to leave them once and for all and return to the Jedi.

He began retraining as a Jedi and attained a new master after being selected from a Jedi Bear Clan, [Huggy-Bear's IC name]. Atonai soon started a small 'Padawan Task Force' which involved padawans doing recon and scouting missions for Jedi. Atonai learned his trials were near and went back into a state of seclusion, to finalise training and studying his topics. Feeling as though his efforts towards studying and training were unrecognised Atonai lost hope in ever gaining his trials.

He began exploring the Jedi archives for better ways to learn the ways of the force, but in a more practical sense. He practised powers and fighting styles many Jedi felt should be outlawed and studied in restricted sections of the Jedi Library, extending his knowledge of the galaxy and all that fills it. Atonai also found himself regularly confiding his thoughts and feelings to his brother, a fellow padawan, Barda Demaris. Barda explained to Atonai his feelings of lack of recognition were normal and not to give up, Atonai pretended he would change his ways, but continued with his current training and studying techniques.

Atonai was told his trials were to be delayed a little longer, he saw this as a good thing, surprisingly to himself. He used his valuable time to study and train much harder. Through training and sparring sessions, Atonai gained a new friend, Kalou Dryant. Kalou was very profficient with a saber and force techniques and taught Atonai many techniques. Atonai realised that through the training he had been doing, he still wasnt ready for trials and the council may have already forseen this. Atonai didnt let it get him down though and practised many of the techniques and styles Kalou taught him.

Atonai was approached by a man on Dantooine while Atonai was patrolling some marshland, the man made Atonai an intriguing offer and he felt this was all relevant to the recent doing of Atonai, and somehow connected to eachother. Atonai agreed and waited for it to fulfill. Atonai turned his back on the Jedi, throwing down his robes and Jedi equipment. He was seized on Dathomir by Nuova tryte and Zaaron Juh'kinx and taken to Qexis, home of the Jensaarai order. Atonai was initiated, and welcomed by all the members and pledged himself to the tutelage of the Jensaarai. He got a master, the Saarai-Kaar himself, Rauna Rasquez.

Atonai was amazed at the Jensaarai Academy, the resources available seemed to surpass every Jedi Order he had seen. He learned his initiation into Jensaarai wouldnt be easy nor quick, but he accepted it. Atonai also lost all contact with his old Jedi friends and family, not by choice. He was to disconnect himself from his past, which Atonai had done before in hopes of a new start and struggled for a while. Missing his old friend Kalou Dryant, Atonai would meditate at the Jensaarai Academy to overcome the feelings of missing old friends and family, The Jensaarai were his new family.

Atonai's brother, Ahna Demaris learned of Atonai's betrayal to the Jedi, and tracked Atonai to Ilum. Ahna made an attempt on Atonai's life and was almost successful and Atonai's old master, Ja'kan Vish, using a new name, Saiin Vol arrived to rescue Atonai. Ja'kan fought off Ahna and took off with Atonai, saving him from certain death. For years Atonai had hated his old master, but forgot all his feelings and thanked him, forgiving him for leaving him in the past.

Before joining Jensaarai, Atonai had previously tried to disconnect himself from the past but failed in many ways. He wanted to complete whipe out everything before Jensaarai. He slaughtered friends and family alike, and came across his old master, whom he thought he had already forgiven him. Atonai snuck up behind Ja'kan and slit his throat with a small knife. He stared down at the lifeless body, not feeling any emotion except relief. His body seemed lighter and his thoughs seemed much clearer after finishing it all.

He still continues his training as an apprentice to Rauna Rasqeuz and aspires to be a great Jensaarai Defender.