Talk:Herald of Chaos/@comment-173.90.97.218-20190806192542

Hello, I have decided to give you some feedback.

First, I will be completely honest with the feedback I give you.

Okay, description and actual writing was pretty spectacular, I was extremely impressed with the level of detail in your work.

I liked Darth Inflictus, he was a decent character but somewhat underdeveloped.

The other characters were also underdeveloped, it would've been better if the story was longer.

The characters were really my only complaint, everything else in the story was really well done. ( It would've been fine for an actual story, seeing that it's a fan fiction is even more impressive. ) if you can improve you character development for the future, that'd be awesome. I would also love to see more of Darth Inflictus.