User blog comment:Nightmare975/First chapter of Imperial Treachery is released!/@comment-20644-20090209221638

"Chapter" is a very deceptive choice of words. Your chapter is less than a page and a half long, and it's only 657 words. I haven't read it yet so I can't comment on the content itself right now, but it doesn't seem to be much of a chapter from what I can see.