Thread:SavageOpress1138/@comment-4707580-20160830033611/@comment-3528596-20160830213158

Hi Colby! I have a really long message for you, but it does not mean you are in trouble. On the contrary, I'm writing a long message because I'm trying to be clear and make things easier!

I used a text compare tool (https://text-compare.com/) to take a close look at the differences between Ebon Hawk (Colby James) and. I noticed some strange differences. There are several typos that exist in your version, such as "fastest" -> "fasted", "ten" -> "tan", "traveled" -> "travelled", "Proton" -> "Protom", and "shield" -> "shielf" to name a few.

I'm honestly very curious. Did you hand copy the article from Wookieepedia to Star Wars Fanon? That's an incredible amount of work and dedication, and if that's the case, I really want to make sure you're putting your efforts to better use! There's no reason to spend that amount of time hand copying something. If you want to use a Wookieepedia article as a guideline, by all means do so, but try writing it in your own words from the beginning instead of going through such an arduous process.

Anyway, it seems like you might still be struggling with some grammar issues (which, I would guess, may have led to your copying of the Wookieepedia article). I'd like to offer some more help, because I really do want to help you. That's part of my job as administrator here. I'm usually in the Star Wars Fanon chat room for a while during the afternoons or evenings my time (which is Central Standard Time), which I believe is around 12 noon or 1 for you. If you're around during that timeframe, please feel free to join the chat to talk to me. There are often other users there as well, including Firedance, who would be willing to try to help. You can join the chat easily be following this link: Special:Chat.

As for your Ebon Hawk article, I have a suggestion. Copy-past the infobox template from here (Template:Individual ship infobox), fill in the desired information (and you don't need to have any and tabs here on Star Wars Fanon), and then move on to the article body. Try to write that in your own words, following the grammar rules I've been utilizing.

I know that was a really long message, and I'm sorry about that. I want to stress that I'm not disciplining you; you aren't in trouble. I'm sincerely trying to make your life easier. :) Let me know if this helps at all.