Forum:FP:Hi I'm Josh and I...have a grammar problem

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So it has come to my attention on two separate accounts that I have a grammar problem. Now, I'll admit that I'm not a grammar wizard (a C average can attribute to that) but I need to know what's wrong so I can change. Now, Ataru has been kind enough to tell me that my dialogue structure had problems, but I'd like others to take a look at my novel and this article and tell me what else is wrong with my grammar. In fact, it'd be nice if you guys didn't point everything out, but just different examples.

Thank you in advance, and here's hoping that I'll find the change I need.-- Josh Bender Talk 17:06, 24 August 2009 (UTC)