Star Wars Fanon:FanonProject/Project Cruentus

Attention! This Project is now closed. Any users wishing for entrance into the Project should message me if they have a good idea for the Project, and acceptance will be decided by the Project participants on a case by case basis.

Our article for Improvement is Okol-class mobile missile launcher!

If you are looking for an image or would like to share it with the project then see here









Project Aims

 * 1) Our goal is to create a minimum of three Featured articles, showing the large amount of effort we would like to see put into the project.
 * 2) Create an extensive new and intriguing era.
 * 3) Build a good relationship between users.
 * 4) Most importantly, enjoy ourselves!

Please do join this project, for it will improve the wiki as a whole, and should be a lot of fun!

List of Participants

 * Darth tom
 * Obi maul12
 * Unit 8311
 * Troyb
 * Arav the Undersith
 * Darth Nyne
 * Trak Nar
 * Darth mavoc
 * Xwing327
 * Lord Oblivion

Factions and their leaders

 * Death's Tongue Militia-Arav the Undersith
 * Lost Ones-Darth mavoc
 * Necasian Military-Darth tom
 * Srav Federation-Unit 8311
 * Vacoren Alliance-Troyb
 * Zayre-Darth tom
 * Simiyar Tech-Darth Nyne
 * Savi Alliance-Obi Maul12

Articles
If you create an article for this project, please add to the article!

Timeline
24,299 BBY
 * Battle of Lehon (Cruentusian War)
 * Various skirmishes between minor factions
 * Battle of Dagobah (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Shattered Ridge (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Hypori (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Alaris Prime (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Tandankin (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Bothawui (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish on Simiyar (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Cul-Huq (Cruentusian War)

24,298 BBY
 * Battle of Raxus Prime (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish on Alasad (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Selonia (Cruentusian War)
 * Mission to Kyros (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Kopalnia (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish on Alstuna (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish in Ilatas (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Kothlis (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish on Ankarr (Cruentusian War)
 * Raid in Lesangel (Cruentusian War)
 * Raid in Gresevokrad (Cruentusian War)

Discussion

 * ''To view past discussions, see Archive 1, Archive 2, Archive 3, Archive 4, Archive 5, Archive 6, Archive 7, Archive 8, Archive 9.

Further Discussion
Two things for tom: should I start the Zayre-Savi skirmish and then you fill it in, and could you finish off Ilatas at the first opportunity? Unit 8311 10:51, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, feel free to start it. I added another section into Kothlis and did a basic spell check of a few of the asections, but not them all. Feel free to make some minor edits, but please don't touch the 'Legacy', 'Aftermath' and 'Behind the Scenes' sections; I'm still working on them. I'll finish that off and review it to see if it's good enough for good article status later today, as well as italicizing the classes of the vehicles, although it'd be helpful if you did that. If you don't wish to, I'm quite fine to do it, however. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 07:46, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I just saw what you did. Not bad, but I have one concern: why did you get rid of the mention of the Renard slipstream?! That's how Renard makes the DarkBird effective against ground forces! You have failed me for the last time, you continuity-hole causing pest! Just kidding. Other than that, thumbs up from me. Also feel free to add quotes, from the Sravs as well--just remember, Vlad: fanatical, Boras: quiet. And add a snide Askar response to Renard's quote, will ya? Unit 8311 11:22, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * At some point soon, yes. I have a lot of things on at the moment. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 11:30, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Shall I add more to the Ankarr skirmish, or would you prefer to tackle that one yourself? Unit 8311 11:33, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Mebbe add another two sections, and then I'll come in and do some to it once I've finished with Kothlis. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 11:52, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okey-dokey. Which reminds me: Kopalnia and Selonia still need to be finished. I'll do Kopalnia now just by adding a few stub sections, and with Arav's inactivity here lately, I'm afraid you might need to add Selonia to your to-do list. Of course, if you're feeling lazy, you can get yours truly to do it for you, but I hope that won't be needed. Unit 8311 11:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Has anyone given thought to a skirmish or battle that could cause the destruction of the Simiyar Moon? I've racked my brain but can't come up with a solid option for it, but being that it seems the war is getting close to it's close now I'd like to fret it out a little more so that the company and moon come to a final conclusion.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 00:02, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

I have finnished the Battle of Selonia (Cruentusian War)! Tom: You need to fill out your factions aftermath and anything else you want to. Arav (talk ) 00:26, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nyne, I think we discussed the Simiyar thing a while ago, and IIRC we settled that eventually the Sravs would get fed up with Simiyar leeching from them and would assault the moon to gain the facilities for themselves, and that it would get destroyed in the resultant skirmish. I think this battle will take place in the fourth and last year of the war, were everything will start going boom. Bearing in mind tht we're still in year two, so we've got plenty of time to plan. Arav, nice job with Selonia, but tom will still have to add some finishing touches to wrap up loose ends. Unit 8311 13:09, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, with tom temporarily gone, I guess that makes me Temporary Project Chief. You may all lick my feet. Anyway, the project has its second GA nom! Hopefully it will be as well-recieved as the last. EDIT: I have a proposal: it's somewhat late, but I want to change the Project logo, which is somewhat misleading, as the war doesn't involve Jedi or anything of the like. My suggestion: this or something similar. Thoughts? Unit 8311 20:10, 28 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Sorry Unit but I don't like that picture. I think we should have one made. It could have the 4 main factions DTM,Nec,Srav and the Zayre in the logo with their weapons and uniforms. I think if Trak is up to it, she could make it for us. But she is inactive and has not replyed to my image request. Thats just my opinion. NOTE: I am going to write a battle called Second Battle of Bothawui (Cruentusian War). Over an out. --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 02:49, 30 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Actually no, I wont make another Both battle yet. I will make a Invasion one! Invasion of Carrivar (Cruentusian War). --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 03:24, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Personally I think we should use that battle one, or something similar. I suppose I could cobble something in the vein of your idea on photoshop, but it'd probably come out looking somewhat ugly. But let's wait for tom to come back and voice his views before we decide on anything. Unit 8311 11:27, 30 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I will then make the Invasion one into a battle one. Unit, would you like to make the Battle of Carrivar a colab? I am now just moving the page to Battle of Carrivar (Cruentusian War). --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 05:41, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * If by that you mean me help you with it, then sure. But before I do anything, have you got any exact plan for the battle in mind? Unit 8311 14:30, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I mean a colaboration. Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 05:15, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * That's what I meant. Anyway, like I said, do you have a plan, or shall I concoct something for you? Unit 8311 10:37, 1 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Ah your here! Cool. Ok, I think it should involve your Srav's, my DTM and the natives of the planet. I can't find any mention of what type of planet it is so we can make it rocky, a planet like Hoth etc. I think that the Nec's left something like a radar emitting recorded Nec chatter. The DTM and Sravs both take some of their fleet to the planet to make a "surprise attack" on the Necs. They both come to the planet and fire at each other from frigates. That is short and both factions land on the planet not too far away for each other. They still believe that the Necs are on the planet. The Necs have left underground mines to take out as many people they can. (If you have not realised the Necs are not there and planed that the DTM and Srav battle each other). The mines take out few as both factions take out small halo mongoose type of vehicles to find the other factions. The mines take out 50 men from Srav and 29 from DTM. Seeing as you are here, tell me what you think, if you don't like it then tell me your idea. If you do expand on what I have said please. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 10:53, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Personally I think it shouldn't involve the Sravs, who are still reeling from the DTM raids. Still, not bad, just replace the Sravs with the inhabitants and we might have something. But still, like with your DTM Hoth idea, we can push this exact idea to year three or four, where the DTM will be coming out in force. Thoughts? EDIT: I have some pictures that could be used, shall I upload 'em? Unit 8311 10:58, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. Thats a great idea. If its just going to be a DTM and native battle, ill do it, as always I am glad for you to give opinions and edit where you see fit. Yes, uplode the images. Also, like my DTM recrutment pic? Be honest. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 11:08, 1 August 2008 (UTC)