Star Wars Fanon:Deletion page/Kelden

Kelden
I'm not entirely sure what the author of this article is trying to achieve here, but in this author's opinion there are innumerable problems and all of them seem to be irredeemable. The tense wavers from past to present to other odd mixes, even within the same sentences. The grammar is overwhelmingly bad, to the point that it reads like someone ran it through Google Translate or Babelfish not once, but twice. The prose is also very, very purple and full to bursting with POV, and the images (now deleted for policy violations) are not sourced and are overly provocative (basically, they're snaps of models pulled from a Google search, near as I can tell).

In this author's opinion, no purpose can be served by keeping this mess. It has borne the Grammar and Sexuality templates for as long as this author can remember.

Delete (1)

 * 1) As the proposer. 07:44, June 12, 2012 (UTC)