User blog:Grand Admiral Harmon/Phantoms of the Past Chapter 1 Edited and Chapter Two

Hello, all. So, first off, I would like to say that my newest book Phantoms of the Past is swiftly becoming a personal favorite of mine, ranking pretty high up in the ranks of my books I've written. I really have never worked that much with the Old Republic Era, so, doing this is defiantly something new. Like, I am able to work with the Taungs (aka Mandalorians) and do a lot of stuff.

Chapter I: Large Dark Friend, Little Green Friend was defiantly I think a good jump start, introducing two major characters into the story, Yoda and Anakin Skywalker and jump right into action. My personal belief is, if the first chapter doesn't get you interested, why should the rest of the story be any better (although we all know most of the best books have crummy beginning then suddenly you get swept up as the author surprise attacks you).

Chapter II, which I plan to release today, takes us to Coruscant. I would like to say more, but, I won't. Lets the suspense build for anyone whose reading my story. (I hope people are reading the book).