User:Red Head Rider/Peer review

I am asking other members of his community who have more experance then to assist me by critiquing some of my articles. I would be most grateful to anyone who would take the time to do this. You may give your critizem on my talk page

Articles I would like help with
The critiquing of my articles is in no way limited to his list, but these are the ones I would really like to see improved.
 * Dan Eardornn

Things to Remember

 * I'll take honesty over flattery any day of the year. If you have a problem with anything about my article then speak up.
 * Please DON'T CHANGE THE ARTICLE FOR ME. Tell problems that you see and then let me change it myself.
 * And please be spicific. Don't go "I don't like your writting style." Rather explain what about my writting style you don't like.

Rewards

 * I will publicly reconize your attempts at helping me on the behind the scenes section of my article and on my user page.