DL:Darth Krayt (Jasca Ducato)

Approve

 * 1) I've expanded upon everything asked. And I'm doing to red-link now. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 20:29, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Much better. - Brandon Rhea 23:49, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Victor  ( talk ) 00:28, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Per the above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 19:25, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) No complaints. --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 20:49, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

Disapprove/complaints

 * 1) Expand Early years, Becoming a Knight, Sith Crusade and Legacy. - Brandon Rhea 04:54, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) I am sure A'Sharad could have a more extensive history in Early life and Becoming a Knight. Perhaps throw in some Fanon in there too, since I know that copying all canon stuff is sorta pointless. Between the Wars and Krayt's Reign could definitely go into detail about the actual events, making it a reason to believe why Krayt was such a good emperor. Plus, legacy should most definitely be expanded- someone like that ought to have a long legacy and must have influenced a lot. Also, expand personality and traits, and move "Force potential" and "lightsaber training" into a Talents section. -- Victor  ( talk ) 05:14, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've done everything you asked for. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 20:27, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 22:31, 26 August 2007 (UTC)