Star Wars Fanon:FanonProject/Project Cruentus

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Project Aims

 * 1) Our goal is to create a minimum of three Featured articles, showing the large amount of effort we would like to see put into the project.
 * 2) Create an extensive new and intriguing era.
 * 3) Build a good relationship between users.
 * 4) Most importantly, enjoy ourselves!

Please do join this project, for it will improve the wiki as a whole, and should be a lot of fun!

List of Participants

 * Darth tom
 * Obi maul12
 * Unit 8311
 * Troyb
 * Arav the Undersith
 * Darth Nyne
 * Trak Nar
 * Darth mavoc

Factions and their leaders

 * Death's Tongue Militia-Arav the Undersith
 * Lost Ones-Darth mavoc
 * Necasian Military-Darth tom
 * Srav Federation-Unit 8311
 * Vacoren Alliance-Troyb
 * Zayre-Darth tom
 * Simiyar Tech-Darth Nyne
 * Savi Alliance-Obi Maul12

Articles
If you create an article for this project, please add to the article!

Timeline
24,299 BBY
 * Battle of Lehon (Cruentusian War)
 * Various skirmishes between minor factions
 * Battle of Dagobah (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Shattered Ridge (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Hypori (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Alaris Prime (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Bothawui (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish on Simiyar (Cruentusian War)
 * Battle of Cul-Huq (Cruentusian War)

24,298 BBY
 * Battle of Raxus Prime (Cruentusian War)
 * Skirmish on Alasad (Cruentusian War)

Discussion

 * To view past discussions, see Archive 1, Archive 2, Archive 3, Archive 4, Archive 5, Archive 6, Archive 7.

Further Disscussion

 * Can somebody please archive the past 2 discussion? It would be much appreciated. I like those ideas and agree. I have some aquatic Vehicles. Here they are.--[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 23:53, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

Ok here they are! Rodian Stinger. That is one of the 2 different types of DTM vehicles supplied by Simiyar Tech. If thats ok. Then the othe one is the SAVF. It stands for Simiyarian Aqua Vehicle Fighter. I have found a prefict vehcile to look like a modified DTM Vehicle.-- Arav (talk ) 00:10, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * That's nice, Arav, but remember, no lasers--in this era, only starships have any lasers, and then they're used as anti-missile countermeasures. And besides, lasers underwater don't really make sense, whatever the makers of the clone wars cartoon say. Also, here's another image you could use  . Unit 8311 09:48, 8 June 2008 (UTC)


 * You have no idea what has been happening on the IRC. lol. I had to fix up an Auto Block. Vic and Brandon were kidding around. Sannse had to help out. Anyway I will fix up the vehicle.--[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 11:03, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Good. Arav? You want the previous section archived? Why can't you do it? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 11:15, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * You're damn right I have no idea what's being happening on the IRC. My computer nearly explodes whenever I try to log on to it. Anyway, do you guys want any more pics for the next battle? I also have some ideas for the battle if you want/need any...Unit 8311 12:12, 8 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Please do! I give you permission to make DTM vehicles for me. Lol. Thanks. --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 12:30, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. Razorshark-class attack boat has been created for the Necs, and I think the DTM should use only a limited number of those Stinger things and add stuff like air cushions and propellors to their existing vehicles--e.g. the hoppers, stinger buggies etc to create a cheap fleet of fast boats, and use mercenaries in scuba gear underwater. I also have an alternative image for that Stinger thing (I think you should change the name for that to avoid confusion with the buggy) and some battle imgs which I'll upload now. Unit 8311 15:46, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * This for the battle, this for the alternative stinger, as well as this for the stingy]. You likes? Also, I had the idea of creating minor field commanders for each of the faction, who won't be overly important but will still feature in minor battles and alongside major commanders. Shall I elaborate? Unit 8311 15:51, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Please do. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done
 * Okay. For the time being, let there be three field commanders per side, to keep thing simple. For the Necs, I had the idea of Emela Makakson, a young woman who managed to rise through the ranks despite the sexist nature of the Necs, and is obsessed with napalm and flammable weaponry, and her sadism disturbs even Askar. She's a capable commander, but isn't often given command due to the fact that she enjoys burning her own troops for fun. We then have Renard Curl, a fighter wing pilot who commands an elite DarkBird squadron, and Rez Makin, a SpecOps leader who has an expert grasp of stealth. For the Sravs, we have Boras Magdiyek (guess), who manages an elite tank division, Vlad Mutin (again, guess) who has access to prototype radiation bombs, and Trak Dremin, who is mentored by Vergulva herself and commands a sniper squad which is small but surpasses even the Nec sharshooter cohort. For the DTM, we have Req, a mysterious human warlord who has an innate knowledge of explosive; Krennel, a scientist who produces deadly strains of Eborax, and Reloiux Dqwer, a Rodian whose speciality is propaganda. You like? Any thoughts you have to add to that? Unit 8311 20:07, 8 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Good, Good. The leader of the DTM Sabsa Junn, will also be there. Please see the discussion page guys. If you guys have not already voted for the Battle of Cul-Huq (Cruentusian War) than you should. Tom would it be Ok if you started the Battle article. If thats ok. I am Currently creating DTM commanders, majors and stuff like that. I am very busy with that.--[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 00:48, 9 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Also might be a problem. The natives will shrow a spin into the battle!--[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav  (talk ) 02:38, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Firstly, Unit: Even Askar?! No way... she must be one hell of a sadistic- well, you get where this is going. No, I like those ideas. We'll also need to work on the relationship between Jarn and Vergulva. Arav: There will be no problems with the naives unless they're alive. Get my hint? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 06:05, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. I already have an idea for that--after the Selonia battle, Askar decides that Jarn is becoming too much of a threat to his power, and he sends him on a suicide mission to an icy world (not Hoth, because that's too obvious) to free Nec POWs from a Srav gulag. He deliberately gives him an inadequate force, and hopes that either the cold or the Sravs will finish him off. However, Jarn succeeds in freeing the POWs (maybe some, not all, just to make it fair) but meets Vergulva in the camp. The two fight, but the cold wears them down, and after a brief conversation Jarn gets away. Askar's plan totally backfires as Jarn becomes even more popular as a result, and Jarn is starting to think that he and Vergulva are quite alike, and vice versa. Thoughts? Meanwhile, should I start the field commanders, as stubs at least? And when are you and Arav going to start the Selonia battle, out of curiousity? Unit 8311 10:25, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I'll most likely be starting it tomorrow, as CUSWFN is my primaary aim tonight, and I'll make the Nec stub, but you can make the rest. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 16:14, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. If by the Nec stub you mean the Nec field commanders, then feel free to create content, but leave the images to me, because I've already got some selected, unless you've got your own that you absolutely adamantly want. Meanwhile, Arav, do you mind if I change the image on the Rodian Stinger page--you can choose between the two alternatives I presented if you want. Unit 8311 17:18, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure thing! [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:39, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Good. I'll add stuff like quotes, images and supplementary content. Unit 8311 19:53, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * OK, but don't be annoyed if I delete some. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 19:55, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * That'll be fine by me. Also, add a Askar response to the quote on the Emela page. Unit 8311 19:56, 9 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Go for it.Do what you like Unit. --[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 06:35, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry I haven't been contributing much. It makes it a bit difficult whe the factions involved aren't mine. Which brings me to why I'm editting the discussion in the first place. I was wondering how my faction can fit into this. Does anyone have any ideas? I was thinking that my faction might bump into the Sith (the species, not the cult) or perhaps the True Sith. Of course this may not be viable, as it detracts from what you are all trying to achieve (well at least it seems you're trying to achieve this) - a galactic conflict that doesn't involve either side of the Force. Darth mavoc 10:37, 10 June 2008 (UTC)


 * You're right, mavoc, so far it looks like as if the conflict isn't going to involve any force stuff at all (which, IMO, is a good thing). The only real force-users are the Zayre, and even they just assume their powers are exclusive to them. Anyways, maybe your faction could take on a few minor warlords, or perhaps it could go around scavenging important Infinite Empire stuff that the Rakata left behind. Moving on; Arav, I changed the pic, but I expected you to put up a bit more of a fight than that. Never mind, I like a submissive servant editor. Unit 8311 10:42, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Hmmmm... I'll think something up and run past you all. Is that ok? Darth mavoc 11:04, 10 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Go for it. Thanks (Bows down to the shrine in his room with all Unit's article's stuck to the wall).--[[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] <font color="Green">Arav (<font color="Green" size="1">talk ) 10:52, 10 June 2008 (UTC)

Two questions: None of the technology used by any of the participantes in the Cruentusian War is anywhere near as powerful as Rakatan technology, right? And secondly, would any of the factions be afraid of the fact that the Rakatans might come back at full power? Darth mavoc 11:16, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Hmm...not as advanced, maybe. It's hard to tell because of the lack of canon facts about Rataka technology, but if it came to a full-scale war, the factions would be hard-pressed, methinks. And the factions would probably all dread going back to Rataka slavery, but bearing in mind that now they've established themselves, they'd feel a bit confident. If it's a small Rataka group, then the Sravs would just nuke them, the Necs would overwhelm them, the Zayre would pwn them with their powers, the DTM would use their hit-and-run, explosive tactics, etc. That help? Unit 8311 11:48, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I'm ust trying to figure out how I can fit my faction in. I was thinking that my Rakatan group goes to retrieve a powerful artifact, when they run into any of the factions. I was thinking the facction they run into, get scared at the prospect that the Rakatans have returned to full power (they would know this as the Rakatans required the Dark Side of the Force to use anything they made as the IRE). That's about all I got, didn't bother with an outcome just in case it'd be a waste of time. But do you, or anyone else, think that might work (with the proper adjustments)? Darth mavoc 12:16, 10 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Sounds good. I'd make it a minor mercenary faction--say maybe Obimaul's Savis--they bump into, to give them a chance. Scared, the mercs get some help and the two battle, with the Ratakans simply trying to grab something important they left behind and the mercs thinking they've come back in force. Ultimately, the Rataka get away with their thing, but maybe some of the more fanatical ones stay behind, and maybe pull some strings amongst the mercs to try and manipulate them to do their bidding. What do you think? Ultimately, BTW, I don't think the Ratakans should make any massive contributions to the war, but they could remain behind the scenes. Unit 8311 12:26, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Technically the Rakatans aren't apart of this, as the Lost Ones have been exiled from the former empire, and are wanted for treason beause they wouldn't give thier bodies up to perfect a cure for the Eborax virus. And, to be honest, I never really saw my faction making large contribuitons to the war, anyhow. I mostly saw them having cameo-like appearances. But who knows, maybe the object they go to retrieve could serve as a plot-device. Maybe a way to control the Rakatan's vehicles without using the Force. Darth mavoc 12:45, 10 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Hmm. Well, I agree that they're not going to be big, but maybe what they're looking for is some sort of psychic device that enables a user to control anyone you think about (just an idea). They could end up losing it to some mercs or warlords, and while the main war triangle plays between the Sravs, Necs, Zayre and DTM, in the background mercs and warlords try and get their hands on it, forming a nice backdrop to the epic main war. Thoughts? Unit 8311 12:51, 10 June 2008 (UTC)

If you are including my mercenaries in a fight again, then I'll contribute to the battle. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 13:00, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * That'll be okay, Obimaul. Meanwhile, Arav, I moved the Rodian Stinger to a different title, but I didn't get rid of the original name entirely. Unit 8311 14:13, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * BTW, I have found another rich source of images: . Some of them are a bit too obviously real-world, but there are some good ones in there which suit our purposes. Opinions? Unit 8311 20:33, 10 June 2008 (UTC)

I think this or this would be great for my mercs charging into battle. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 21:02, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I like the images. Mavoc: I thionk we can fit you into this war, as I'd like everyon who wants to to play a part. Sorry I've been busy the past two days, but I'll start the Selonia battle tonight. [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] My page iChat What I've done 06:02, 11 June 2008 (UTC)