HP:Ryluk Shouja

Review

 * The article's decent, and the only problems I see are minor ones that can be fixed easily.

Things that need to be done

 * "The Bounty Hunter" needs to be changed to "The bounty hunter".
 * "The Businessman" needs to be changed to "The businessman".
 * "Hiding Hunter" needs to be changed to "Hiding hunter".
 * Because they are written referring to titles and not to the actual people, "As a Lord", "Hunting as a Lord" and "The end of Lordship" need to be changed to "As a lord", "Hunting as a lord" and "The end of lordship".
 * "Death of the Hunter" needs to be changed to "Death of the hunter".
 * The word "Bounty Hunter", which appears a few times in the introductory paragraph, need to be lower-cased to "bounty hunter".
 * The Postmortem and Legacy sections could both be expanded or simply merged. --[[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 13:31, 24 December 2007 (UTC)