User talk:Troyb/Archive V

Re: Troyb
Nope. As I also said, there are way too many formatting errors (please review the Manual of Style) and the first section is one long paragraph. A LOT needs to change before I was to voice support. - Brandon Rhea 21:06, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Basically what Brandon Rhea said - first, you should revise the article to fit the Manual of Style, as Rhea previously suggested. What I specifically mean is fixing grammar, capitalization errors, separate your paragraphs, have an "introduction" of decent length for your character, spelling errors, no acronyms (instead of CIS, put Confderacy, etc), and such. Also pictures would be good.


 * Very well, but in my opinion it won't reach FA quality that way. Also, next time, I wouldn't ask for advice if you won't even consider it for improvement of your article. Good day.


 * I agree with Vic. You asked both of us to give our suggestions on what you need to do to make your article worthy of recieving FA status, yet you then say that you will be keeping it the way it is? Your article currently has a -5 rating under FA nominations, so they obviously agree with what Vic and I have told you. If you truly do want your article to be FA status, then you would do well to implement the changes that we suggested. I truly hope you do. - Brandon Rhea 03:45, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I assume by that you mean that it will be updated in good time. - Brandon Rhea 15:14, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Awesome, because it does have the potential. - Brandon Rhea 15:17, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Very well. However, that article needs A LOT more detail. It needs a history and everything. - Brandon Rhea 15:21, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

Nice userboxes
That is a LOT of GIFs. --C3PO the Dragon Slayer 6,000,000 forms of communication 15:32, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

Clan
Hi troyb! would you have a look at my clan page and sign the guestbook or join. Oh, and I hope you enjoy this wiki. I certainly do. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:14, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

rrrgghh!!!
I don't know if this is true, and i'm doing my best to keep my temper, but I believe that message was a personal attack. GRR! ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 19:31, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Alright, i'm sorry. My sense of humor needs a little refinement, besides, I didn't know it was a joke. Oh, and by the way, just because the Sith clan is "better" right now, doesn't mean mine won't improve. Peace? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:16, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Gifs!!!!
Where do you get all those cool gifs? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:25, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Do you want to be on my friends list? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:29, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

CIS
I don't support the CIS in general, but what do you mean by your CIS?''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:34, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Sure. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:39, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Great.''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:42, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

The article? in what way? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:45, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

No problem! anytime! Oh, and can you make images?

I normally don't nominate upon request, but if you promise to be as helpful as you can with the order, then I will. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:52, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

I will, then. Oh, and I didn't see your name on the members list.''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

No problem. I will nominate you now. I was making a modification to the page when I received your message ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:59, 5 April 2007 (UTC)