User talk:Darth tom/V

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Star Wars: The Lost Mantra
Ok, firstly I just want to say that it is in the top 5 things I have ever read. Better then some CHAPTERS in the Harry Potter series. The characters are extremely well done in their parts. I love how you used so much descriptive words. At first I did not really like the tons and tons of descriptive words but as I got half way, I did not want it to stop. My favourite bit was when Sasha said.....scratch that, EVERYTHING! It is that good. I can’t wait to read the series when it is written. But seriously, I like when you emphasised the environment of Dantiooe and its fresh air. I like the 8th paragraph when Sasha fainted or something like that and time stoped for him. Sasha's name is good but it sounds like a female name but it is the Star Wars Universe, so call you’re self what you want. I can’t believe you turned lovey-dovey romance into hot Star Wars reading. Shairi is one tough cookie. Her baby dies, but come on; Shairi survived a huge crash and some spooky powerful light throwing her down to the floor. I love that you used Pirates instead of some uber powerful sith lord getting defeated by some young Jedi Master hopeful. Putting Episode 3 out of this edit, the novel is to a great start. When you said in the 20 something paragraph where it said "their limbs entangled" does not sound right to me. You could just say that they fell on each other or something like that. Well there you go, that is my opinion. ! Arav  (talk ) 10:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Cool [[Image:AndeLeg.jpg|20px]] Arav (talk ) 10:48, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Fanon Interest
Well, thanks. Actually yes, Lotr is one of my favourite books, so I'll look through some articles in Lord of the Rings Fanon wiki. Neterwan 19:22, 1 July 2008 (UTC)