HP:Joshua Reytel/Renomination

=Joshua Reytel=

Vote

 * 1) Meets standards. President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 21:03, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

Complaints

 * From the infobox:
 * "Light Gray"; should be "Light gray"
 * From History:
 * "History" should be "Biography"
 * From Early Life
 * "Early Life" should be "Early life"
 * "youngest Core World capitans"; misspelling there, unless you're writing in Spanish.
 * "Joshua and his ship was sent"; were sent, since it's speaking of two or more things.
 * From "Outbreak"
 * "The council reluctantly agreed to leave"; The Council should be capitalized, since it's proper in this case.
 * From Liberation
 * " though the council refused to be a part of the attack "; same as the above error.
 * From P&t
 * "the numerous conflicts that Joshua was a part of including the war was"; put commas around "including the war".
 * "Joshua strongly yet privately opposed the Jedi Order"; put commas around "yet privately"
 * "he felt that strength yet compassion was necessary"; commas around "yet compassion"
 * From BTS
 * "when Brandon Rhea's character Cos Jonathan Dashin became Supreme Chancellor"; Commas around "Cos Jonathan Dashin".
 * Why is there an extra unnecessary header at the bottom?

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