DL:Battle of Vuur (Dar'yaim War)

Complaints

 * Couple of spelling mistakes (seeked, instead of sought).
 * Could do with a longer intro.
 * Are those types of notes really needed?
 * Could use a bit more text. --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 14:36, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Meets FA nomination standards?

 * Sorry, but no. [[Image:DarthAb.gif|Jasca Ducato]] Sith Council Sith Campaign 11:33, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes now.
 * Much better, Squishy. Yes.
 * Yeah. --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 14:36, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

 * Not sure it'll do much good, but I'll go back and fix the typos. As for the notes, I believe they could be necessary however I could instead put it into the article itself. I'll try to fix it up, and I said I'd be stretching it because I know a short article wouldn't exactly be considered FA quality.
 * There, I finished updating it. I fixed what I could and I think I made it a tiny bit better. Please tell me (Jasca) if it's any better or not. I don't mind if it's still not FA quality, but is it any better?
 * I like the extensions, alot. [[Image:DarthAb.gif|Jasca Ducato]] Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:41, 13 April 2007 (UTC)


 * The intro is much better and the pictures are well-balanced with the text. I liked this one on the first time, but now it is even better. :) --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 13:54, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, uh, it's kinda superflouos to put this here since I already accidentily put it on your talk page. But, this article is much better know and this, IMO, makes Narod become a hero for his self-sacrificing nature.