Talk:What if Anakin didn't dew it? Episode 4/@comment-31050517-20191013023113

I like how this whole entire series just keeps you guessing. I think that one of the first sentences, "Sidious does not want to take Anakin as an apprentice because he feels that Anakin will use his new found rage towards Sidious to kill him when he gets the opportunity." It's not bad, but it could be a lot better. For instance, I think instead of just telling us that he wants to kill him, show us how he wants him dead via facial expressions or something like that. At the end when the clone lieutenant is mentioned and has a couple of statements, like I said before, please give them names so that they can have some character development and they can witness the character development of Anakin and Sideous. But otherwise, I know that the plot is good, characters are absolutely astonishing and the structure is okay. Meaning, I sometimes have a difficult time understanding who was saying what but it isn't too bad.