User blog comment:Nightmare975/First chapter of Imperial Treachery is released!/@comment-27572804-20090210062552

Well, like JM76, I suggest flowery prose; that's just details, details which are descriptive and such. Stuff you wouldn't want to see in article, but it is good in a narrative work of this sort. And yeah... I just noticed the whole 14-year old thing too. Still an intriguing read though, something I will definitely keep up. Hope all that helps out.