Forum:Decreton Lords - massive FA review

Fellow Decreton Lords! Welcome to the first massive Featured article review!

Please sign all your complaints and whether or not you wish to revoke FA status! (You may repeat complaints; I wish to hear each one of your complaints)

Complaints

 * Intro is way too short, lacks actual era icon . -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro's a bit short. It's lacking what, Vic? [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:22, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Introduction should be expanded.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Same as abaove. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes, until complaints are fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:22, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, until expansion.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Until fixed. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 *  By a majority of Decreton Lord votes, the FA status of this article has been revoked.  -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:10, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro is a bit short, "Behind The Scenes" must be grammatically corrected. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:24, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand Intro. Correct "Behind The Scenes".--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs to be cleaned up, expanded. - Brandon Rhea 22:09, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:24, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No, but, expand that introduction.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Until fixed. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:09, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Introduction is WAY too short. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro's too short and it could use some expansion. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:26, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Introduction needs expansion.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * All fixed. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * A good intro is greater than or equal to 200 words in length. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 14:50, 24 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Everything, particularly the part about the battle itself and the introduction, should be expanded. It also has far too many red links. - Brandon Rhea 22:11, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes, until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:26, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, until fixed. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 16:50, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. I've fixed the introduction. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:11, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro is too short. The history all needs to be merged (level 2 headers need to be brought down to level 3).-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:48, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro could be a little bit larger. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:30, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro needs expansion.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed intro. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro could be a bit longer, expand or remove Conquering the Sith and expand Civil War. - Brandon Rhea 22:15, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:30, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:15, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Bunch of red links, obviously incomplete. Move templates to talk page. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:35, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Too many red links. Looks incomplete.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It fails multiple rules, most blatently the "no redlinks". Plus it is incomplete. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes 'til fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:35, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 *  By a majority of Decreton Lord votes, the FA status of this article has been revoked.  -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:12, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * They were probably under personality/traits, but a talents section is needed. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Post-mortem section should be seperate from Death section. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Other than one sentence, there is nothing in Death and Legacy about his legacy so an actual legacy section needs to be added. - Brandon Rhea 22:18, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope, but get that talents in. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per NKSCF.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, until fixed. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:18, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Introduction is WAY too short. Fails manual of style (level 2 headers need to be level 3). -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro's too short and MOS trouble. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:39, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic and NKSCF.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * intro is too short. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro and Fighting the Red Dawn need a great deal of expansion. It also needs to conform to the MOS.

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 23:39, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:20, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
 *  By a majority of Decreton Lord votes, the FA status of this article has been revoked.  - Brandon Rhea 22:24, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Fails MOS (headers are misused), Personality is short, lacks a talents section, story is incomplete. Intro too short; Too short overall. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 16:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Vic, you keep on about the talents section. But its not one f the rules that an FA needs one.
 * Nope. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro, add more detail into just about everything else and it fails the MOS. - Brandon Rhea 22:25, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 16:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:25, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
 *  By a majority of Decreton Lord votes, the FA status of this article has been revoked.  - Brandon Rhea 22:25, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * personality is too short, lacks talents, has main article links (should be integrated into article). Intro kind of short. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No talents section. Short intro.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic and CBT. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:00, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed all problems. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign
 * Intro could be expanded more, Zao tenj War requires greater detail. - Brandon Rhea 22:28, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 16:53, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:00, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 09:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:28, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Links in section titles need to be removed.-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expansion is needed in the few sections after "New Republic".--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None, except what CBT said, but that's minor. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:02, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove section title links and expand New Confederacy of Independent systems sections and New Republic sections. - Brandon Rhea 22:29, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:02, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:29, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Has an incomplete section w/ improving template. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * "Conflict Begins" has an improvement template in it. Main article should be organized into sections with proper use of headers.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic and CBT. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Conflict begins is empty and incomplete. - Brandon Rhea 22:31, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No, just fix that however. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No, but fix it up.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. - Brandon Rhea 22:31, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Introduction is way too short, external links are all messed up, fails MOS (headers are wrong level), lacks detail in sections. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Introduction needs expansion. Header use is incorrect, a few sections under the "Jedi Master" header need expanding.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above, and there's one too many quotes in the intro, but, meh. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:06, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:06, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Move template to talk page, expand traits/talents. Fix year redlink. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand Traits/talents.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above, except the template. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:10, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:10, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Lacks personality and traits and talents, intro should be a bit expanded. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro could be expanded. Needs Personality/Traits. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above, and change Jedi category to fit the highest rank he achieved. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:13, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No. However, please put a "Talents" section in.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 12:22, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, yes. No, but per CBT, though. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:13, 19 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Try again? Anyway, I'm very curious how come there were no complaints back then when the first DL review was done. I'm pretty sure I didn't edit the article during that period, or if I did, I didn't remove ½ of its information. :] --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 20:58, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Introduction is too short, fails MOS with headers, Personality is too short, lacks talents, is incomplete. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Introduction needs expanding. Headers incorrectly used.  No talents section.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:14, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:14, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * introduction is way too short. Fails MOS with headers. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:20, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:16, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed.-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:48, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * All is fixed. [[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 06:18, 19 July 2007 (UTC)


 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:16, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * intro is too short, no talents. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro. Add talents.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * doesn't talents = traits ???  Pinky 49 Talk 19:28, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * One question, how could he have been born in 15 BBY and die in 26 BBY? Read the section above the post-mortem one. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:18, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. I missed that.  Pinky 49 Talk 18:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:18, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro is too short, fails MOS with headers, personality is too short and talents is not there. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro. Improper header use.  No talents section.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:21, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until then. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:21, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:23, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:23, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Fails MOS in headers; Lacks talents; Intro needs expansion. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Improper header use. Intro needs expanding.  Add talents.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed the above, but I'm letting you guys decide on whether or not the talents are large enough. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No. --Jack Phoenix (Contact) 19:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * GREATLY EXPAND INTRODUCTION! (Its a huge article); Fix headers to fit MOS; move Alternate universe stuff to another article; Make talents. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed the above, but will let you guys review the talents to see if they suffice. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:30, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until then. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:30, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Lacks personality. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Personality and Traits needs to be added. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:33, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until then. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 17:47, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, yes. Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:33, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Remove main article links. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:35, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:35, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Expand introduction. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:37, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 17:57, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:37, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:38, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:38, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:40, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:40, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:42, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 17:43, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:42, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 17:43, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:46, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:46, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Lacks personality. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Add personality. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:49, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Personality, traits and talents have all been added. - Brandon Rhea 19:22, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes .--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 12:28, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:49, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No. - Brandon Rhea 19:22, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Organize personality/traits into paragraph.-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:48, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Vic.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:51, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:51, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Lacks era icon and personality. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Era icon and personality need to be added. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. Still needs eraicon. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:55, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 17:59, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep, unfortunately. Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:55, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * None. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:56, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:37, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:56, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:59, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fails the rules, as it has more than the allowed number of redlinks. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 23:41, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * no. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 17:59, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. Darth Abeonis Sith Council Sith Campaign 23:41, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * No era icon, REALLY short introduction, history is short and has a bunch of redlinks. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Era icon needs to be added. Redlinks need attention.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above, minus the eraicon. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:05, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * no. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:05, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:07, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * no. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:07, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Introduction is way too short, move template to talk page. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:12, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:12, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * move template to talk page. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Template needs moving.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:17, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * No. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:17, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro should be longer.-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Move template to talk page. --  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:22, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until expanded.-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed [[Image:Xepeyon.JPG|30px]] You Speak, I've Spoken 06:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)


 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:22, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Move template to talk page, era icon, no links in section titles. Introduction is way too short.-- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Template moved, section title now has the "main" template beneath, introduction expanded. I'm not sure how to make era icons, though; I've never bothered. --C3PO the Dragon Slayer 6,000,000 forms of communication 18:23, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Never mind, I placed an era icon. --C3PO the Dragon Slayer 6,000,000 forms of communication 19:08, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro. Move template.  Needs era icon.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:24, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:24, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro needs expansion and article lacks detail totally. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * General expansion is needed.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per above. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:26, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:26, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * none. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:27, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * no. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:27, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Complaints

 * Intro is too short. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * Yes until fixed.
 * Fixed. So no. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:29, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 Pinky 49 Talk 23:08, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * intro = 250 words
 * intro min = 200 words

Complaints

 * none, just move template to talk page. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Template moved. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:41, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * None. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:30, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Revoke FA status?

 * no. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:47, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No.--  CurrentBigThing  ( Say It To My Face ) 13:03, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nope. [[Image:NKsig.png|70px]] Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles [[Image:sabersmilygreend.jpg]] 18:30, 19 July 2007 (UTC)