Thread:Colby James/@comment-3528596-20160829021929

Hey there, Colby! I'm so glad you're pushing forward with your fanon contributions! It's awesome to see you sharing your ideas and stories with the wiki. That said, I see you're still making a lot of the same grammar errors. I thought I might take a minute to remind you about some good grammar rules to follow.

You'll want to edit down your sentences. Currently, you've got mostly run-on sentences that never end. You want to use proper punctuation and conjunctions to join or separate independent clauses. This will help you avoid the comma splices that currently dominate your articles.

As part of that, remember that sentences end with a period (".") and not a comma (","). Many of your current sentences, including those at the end of paragraphs, end with commas.

If you implement those rules, that should go a long way in making your articles much easier for other people to read and enjoy. If you have any questions about this, please feel free to ask me. Thanks, and good luck! 