User blog comment:Nightmare975/First chapter of Imperial Treachery is released!/@comment-35495-20090210063111

Well, by prose, I mean instead of saying something like, "The ship landed," say something like, "The war-weary ship, worn and bruised from its days at Malachor V, touched down upon the docking bay of Dantooine like an owl in the night." or something. Spice it up with creative language; don't be afraid to go in-depth and get descriptive. http://www.write101.com/greatprose.htm <-- That link might help.