Talk:Forebearance-Class destroyer/@comment-35755132-20190102003222/@comment-15465323-20190103132323

I would personally not go with "the enemy" when referring to the CIS/ Separatists, just call them CIS or Separatists.

While you can simply write it off as Xan being extremely incompetent, it seems weird that he'll think that the newly arrived ships would be reinforcements that he hasn't even called for.

Watch out for your "where" and and "were".

The Tarkin Doctrine focused on overwhelming firepower and terror and, as far as I can get from this ship, it got a whole lot of firepower. This, of course depends on the size of the ship. Its fighter compliment also seems to suggest that it focus more on its own weapons than carrying fighters into battle but again it's hard to say without length, height and width of the class.

In any case, hope my short feedback can help you out.