User:Ty294/Dawnbreaker Project/1



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Het, Ty, check my newly revised article on the Uberweapon. Did I get it yet? *JA_394 (Talk) 22:44, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Post here! AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 19:32, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, which one of you flat-footed monkey-@$$ed fools caused me to loose my changes to the Uberweapon's description? *The Gatekeeper 22:28, April 2, 2011 (UTC) I am totally confused... Garyn Dakari (Talk) 00:25, April 3, 2011 (UTC)Garyn Hey, Ty, check my article on the Uberweapon. I want to see if I got it. *The Gatekeeper 01:11, April 3, 2011 (UTC) By the way, how do you get an avatar on here? I saw Garyn did. HOW DID YOU DO THAT???!!! /explosion *The Gatekeeper 01:30, April 3, 2011 (UTC) Okay, Ty, I've got to be honest with you... I do not think I can make an article look like that. I just don't know how...  I gave my self an avatar by clicking 'add image'. Garyn Dakari (Talk) 08:31, April 3, 2011 (UTC)Garyn Hey, I already beat you to the to-do list. Mine is already made. User:VictoriousLegend/To-do List 🇺🇸   Het, Ty, check my newly revised article on the Uberweapon. Did I get it yet? *JA_394 (Talk) 22:44, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, very good. I moved your list over to a subpage of your profile: User:TrueSith'ari/To-do list. I'll do this for everyone as they get signed up so we can each work on our lists seperately. Before you start making articles, look up the site's layout guide. (Your profile's talk page will contain a list of links to rules, guides and other things. Please read them.) And finally, after each post you must add your signature (the 4 ~) so people can identify you. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 20:01, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Why can't I access my list directly from my profile? TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 20:20, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * JA 394 (Talk) 20:35, April 2, 2011 (UTC)What am I supposed to do, exactly?
 * Hmm... looks like it's going to take us some time to figure out this new reality, Gatekeeper. TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 20:37, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * JA 394 (Talk) 20:51, April 2, 2011 (UTC) Indeed it will, monkey-@$$.
 * Allright, for the last time... STOP CALLING ME THAT!!! TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 20:57, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * The Gatekeeper 20:58, April 2, 2011 (UTC) Oh? What are you gonna do about it? *****-slap me?
 * Not at all, Grate Creeper... TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 21:03, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * LOL fellas. JA, you put the signature (4 ~) after your post. Darkon, you will need to insert a link onto your userpage. Here's the link User:TrueSith'ari/To-do list. To create a page, you need to go to the main page. Sub-pages must have the name of the oringal page (For example, User:JA_394) and then add /page name so you get: User:JA_294/To-do list. To link to it, simply add two "[" on one side and two "]" on the other. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 21:20, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Now I understand why you haven't written any articles on your characters yet, Ty. I've just gone through the Layout Guide and Manual of Style. To put it mildly, those rules are absurd! Something tells me that every article I write will be omitted! GRRRRR!!! TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 21:42, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * They're not quite as bad as they look. They also make the articles look professional and not sloppy. Now, what you can do is start by creating user sub-pages for your characters first (Like User:TrueSith'ari/Lord Darkon ). You can build the articles there without any threat of deletion (rules do not apply to user sub-pages) then move them into official articles once complete. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 21:47, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, I have written a good part of the article on Lord Darkon. What do you think, Ty? TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 22:31, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * (reply to the Grate Creeper) I think the same creeper you look at when you stare into a mirror is responsible, hehe. TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 22:54, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll tell yah what, I'll make an example article to show you guys what an article needs to look like. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 23:25, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Jehee! I have finished my article on Lord Darkon! Well, that's it for today from me, see you tomorrow... TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 23:47, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid not JA. Here, let me show you some of my pre-existing articles: Velum-class battleship, Joe Tylars, Imperial Gamma Force. There are special templates for things like quotes and personal information. Also, the articles are divided into sections using the = sign. The layout guide should give more info. EDIT: Oh yah, JA, you post in this order: *-1st TEXT-2nd Signature-3rd. And there is an insert image button at the top of the edit screen. If you try to upload an image, you should read the image policy first. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 03:26, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please remember to add your signature JA. Try this, start with the less important characters. I've made my first article for the series here: User:Ty294/Captain Vols. The lesser characters are the easiest articles to write. Press edit and just look at how it's been formated. If you want you can copy some of the text and paste it onto your article so you can make changes there. I've gotta go to bed, I'll try to help more tomorrow. Oh, one more thing. Do not create any more articles onless they have User:JA 394/ in front of them. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 03:57, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, that's easy for a minor character, Ty. But I want my main characters to be a bit more developed and detailed, like what I wrote for Lord Darkon. TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 13:23, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Maybe, but you should start with these easier articles to "get you feet wet" before tackling the longer onces. Try starting with one of your lesser fleet officers. Remember to have User:TrueSith'ari/ in the article name. @Dakari, same to you. I've already moved some of your articles into sub-pages. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 13:37, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, how is this for my User:TrueSith'ari/Captain Boljak character? TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 14:12, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes that is much better. Not perfect but an improvement. First go over it and change some of the tense errors (the articles must be written in PAST tense) for example "his ship and his entire group were presumed destroyed" as opposed to "his ship and his entire group are presumed destroyed". You can also do this for the Lord Darkon article. I'll help you with the infobox when you've completed these edits. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 14:17, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've finished altering my Lord Darkon and Captain Boljak articles. But it looks like the term True Sith Empire is already used here on this site! And it is nothing like my creation... Well, allright, the new name of my power is "REBORN TRUE SITH EMPIRE". Which means the new abbreviation is RTSE! Garyn, please make all the aproppriate modifications in both stories... TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 14:51, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Finished my first article: User:VictoriousLegend/Guardian Project It's about the program that led to the creation of the Guardians.
 * Finished the article on the User:TrueSith'ari/Blood Sanctum vessel. TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 15:49, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Actually, you wouldn't need to rename it. Our article can just be called "True Sith Empire (Dawnbreaker series)". Oh ya, you only need to place your signature after a post, not an article. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 16:54, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Too late... I already renamed it in all my articles/assets! Actually, I like this new name more! And I want to avoid any confusion with that "True Sith Empire". So I'll stick with RTSE! TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 17:05, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok then, I had changed it in the one article but I'll change it back. Notice I made some other changes to the article. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 17:08, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I see my Boljak article now has an infobox. How did you do that? TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 17:26, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Infobox templates have to be created a certain way. There currently is no template for you specific faction. I can create one down the road but for now, we can use pre-existing ones. The one he has now is a generic Sith Character infobox. Also note: Don't link to an article in the quote itself, you can in the lower area, just not in the quote. Finally, you'll notice I added the line: was a naval officer in Lord Darkon's Reborn True Sith Empire. You must first state what he was before stating what he did. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 17:30, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Allrigh, finished my User:TrueSith'ari/Lady Deathstrike article, with an infobox. As I wrote it, I realized how much more details I have to add to my Darkon article... TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 18:57, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * BTW, how do I upload pictures to appear in my character's infoboxes, and how do I upload a custom picture as my avatar on my profile (that planet picture is starting to get boring)? TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 19:02, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I am also rather curious about how to do that. [[File:Double_Bladed_Lightsaber_Smiley_Blue.PNG]] VictoriousLegend (Comlink) [[File:1502.gif]] 19:32, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok, now come perhaps the most important thing in article writing Darkon. NO BIAS. This will be tough for you and JA, but you can not inject your own opinion or preferces into the articles. So like this line: he fled their duel rather than fight to the death, an act of cowardice that sickened her states that Ty294 acted in cowardice as a fact. However, he fled because Darkon joined the fight and he know he couldn't fight both at once. So whether it was cowardice or not his Deathstrike's opinion. AK2.png Ty294 AK1.png (Talk) 20:33, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * What if I were to add "In Deathstrike's opinion" before the "he fled their dueld etc." That would imply it was merely her opinion, not a fact. BTW, the text in this conversation is getting so small as to be almost impossible to read. What is wrong? TrueSith&#39;ari (Talk) 20:43, April 3, 2011 (UTC)