User talk:Atarumaster88

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Poll
What do you think of the Force Exile series? 5 stars! It's pretty good Meh. Mindless drivel. Its teh suckz. I wants to hax it off da interwebz. What are you talking about again?
 * See Force Exile I: Fugitive, Force Exile II, and Force Exile III: Liberator for more information.

DLs
Yes, I do agree with MPK, as he said more people are needed. Perhaps one more person won't suffice! We might need two. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 23:38, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure, if you want. I already know that it most likely won't make the cut, but knowing what to fix should I ever get around to it would be nice. Good to have you aboard, though I've been incredibly inactive anyway, so I don't know if that really counts as a welcome. I know you're gonna make it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  14:57, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:00, 30 June 2008 (UTC)

MAJORSPOILERS
Every single one of my Featured Articles has MAJORSPOILERS. I figured I'd let you know that since you're reviewing articles. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 15:32, 30 June 2008 (UTC) I'm fairly certain I told you that....or at the very least hinted to it. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom) (Record) 15:39, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you; I suspected as much anyway. You owe me, Rhea. My eyes are *bleeding*. Bleeding! I didn't realize you were in the middle of re-evaluating all of your FAs when I agreed to this. The indignities, indeed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:35, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Be very careful reading Bendu Order. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 17:52, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Mr. Rhea, when I first began reading and reviewing your work, it was a whim, and then later on as a favor and for enjoyment. As it is apparent that I will soon be handling things in a more official capacity, the luxury of sparing something a thorough read solely on MAJORSPOILERS is, for me, no longer something I can afford. As I wish to be at my absolute razor-sharp best and fair in reviewing all the Featured Articles, I will be reading each article with equal thoroughness. I say this not to encourage you to do the same thing or push my viewpoint, but to simply state the new dynamic. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:56, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay then. I was just saying this because one of your conditions for being a Decreton Lord was to have the right to abstain from reading and voting based on, among other things, MAJORSPOILERS. You had not made it known before then that you were going to be changing this, especially when you thanked me just a few hours ago for a warning. - President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom) (Record) 18:12, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Perfectly understandable. The decision was only made less than an hour ago, at any rate, though I may still skip some articles for the purposes of too many MAJORSPOILERs. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:14, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Probably for the best. Also, I haven't read what you said about the Bendu Order on your page yet, but when I do I may respond if I feel the need to. Also, can you come onto IRC? - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 18:15, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * As you wish. I didn't want to be overly presumptuous and post my reviews on the DL forum until officially confirmed for the position; just trying to get a head start on the work. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:17, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * That's fine. It works on your page or on the article talk pages. Also, you may have seen the message before I edited the IRC thing in, but can you come onto IRC? - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 18:18, 30 June 2008 (UTC)

Heroes
You might like the first two quotes on this page. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 15:35, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Indeed. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 16:56, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Just so you know, that Prophecies of The Skywalker page is outdated. I assure you, no member of the Bac family will EVER be the Vice-President of the United States. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 16:53, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I hope so, Commander, for your sake. I caught a whiff of something on that page, one I've smelled before, and I don't like it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:54, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Edit summaries
It'd be nice if you kept these constant sarcastic comments in edit summaries to yourself. I don't care if you do it to me, as annoying as it may be considering I pointed out a fair few spelling errors in your article before you nominated it for GA, but not everyone who sees you doing that to their article is going to know it's sarcastic. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 23:51, 2 July 2008 (UTC) Thank you. - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 00:03, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I stand corrected; my sincere apologies. I let my distaste carry itself over in my copyediting and I assure you it won't happen again, to you or anyone else. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:59, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Dude
Don't worry about it. I know it was in jest, and I know I have no clue about lightsaber combat. But that aside, the reason it sucks is because I wrote it and thought it was good back then, and then in recent months realized a lot of my stuff needed rewriting. The only article I was actually able to/have been able to rewrite is Narod, and the others I have not even gotten around to. I began on Roviik, but have yet to finish... someday. Anyway don't worry about it, I know they were in jest, and took no offense. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 02:34, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * With that said, can you please review Narod Antrell next? I know it may throw you off your list, but if you can, please do so ASAP. That article is my top priority always. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 02:46, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

He's going to do Ussej Padric Bac III next. I asked him first! - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 02:49, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Epic lulz. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:57, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Vic, Brandon, both of your respective articles have reached the Desk of Atarumaster88 and have been duly reviewed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:21, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Irony
"another reviwe"

- You

Should I take you to task on this or just leave it alone? - <font color="#1A2BBB">President Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(Pressroom) <font color="#1A2BBB">(Record) 17:08, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Considering how I essentially had to review that article twice, a most unpleasant experience, due to a browser hiccup that trashed all my work, I would suggest the latter. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:21, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks much. If you have a moment, could you join the IRC please? [[Image:Darthtomsig.png|163px]] iChat What I've done 13:55, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Liberator Cover
is the first draft of the cover, I now have a psd of it so if you need any changes let me know.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink 02:33, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Wow, looks good so far. Just a few small changes, if you don't mind. The lettering of "Liberator" should be a little smaller and the same color as the other novel covers. . If at all possible, minimize the green haze between the lower title block and the characters. Also, I'd like as much of Doriana's clothing and such as possible to remain, so that the scene with the Twi'lek and scouttrooper is completely isolated from the rest of the background by the three characters flanking it. You may need to move his head to accommodate that. The background greenish haze should try and incorporate some more of the variety of colors in the Nebula image, especially the yellows, to keep it from being too green. This is entirely my fault for changing the camera angles, but I'll have to find something to fill up that space in between the Jedi front and center and the girl. You could move the girl closer to the Jedi to fill that gap, but if you come up with a better solution, by all means use it. Other than those admittedly minor things, it looks great. Thanks for taking the time to do this. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:16, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Check it out again, uploaded to the same name.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 05:07, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I like it. Like it a lot. :-) Great job, Darth Nyne. I have but one tiny fix. Right behind Doriana's ear, there's a little bit of the blue background that was in the original image; it doesn't quite seem to fit there. Could you remove that? Thanks. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:43, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * There you are, and I hope it's good, whenever you're ready to start on the next one just start sendin me some details.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 18:05, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Awesome! As an afterthought, would it be possible to shrink the lettering down a little on the "Force Exile" and "Liberator" lines? A quick comparison with previous covers shows that they're a little bigger. (See my userpage). At any rate, it looks wonderful over all and I will get the details for the Yanibar Tales cover to you as soon as I figure out what I want.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:27, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * That should cover it, let me know what you think.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 05:41, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Bullseye on the bottom line. The "Force Exile" still looks a little hard to see; can you just darken that bit? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:23, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * there you are, darker and stands out more.  N.Y.N.E. Comlink[[Image:sithempire2.png|30px]] 20:16, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

RE: Fair warning
Okay, thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  20:37, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, I'm sorry, it's fixed now. Thanks. BTW, you haven't done all of my articles, I don't see Tulak there. He's likely to get torn apart. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:17, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Good point. I have yet to work on most of the characters yet, but I will let you know when I get to him. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:18, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * No problem - I'd dread doing the characters, too. On the image thing, any of my images you see here or on my Photobucket account you are 100% allowed to use, though for the Photobucket ones, when you pick one, I'll have to tell you the source, as I can't put them down there. Happy image hunting! - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:09, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:15, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

BtS
Hey man, I just created Category: Behind the scenes for a page of mine, and just messaging you so you may use it, too, on your own BtS pages. See you around. --<font color="#9F05">Victor <font color="#AA00">(talk) 02:03, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the notice. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

FE Series
Lol, sure. I'll get right on it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:08, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 'Preciate it. I'm even going back and double-checking the pics. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:12, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Ha, well everything looks in order. I'll vote for it for GA, but if you want it FA'ed, you'll have to add more links, and I would need you to add a BtS also, except the whole thing is a BtS...kinda. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:36, 10 July 2008 (UTC)