Talk:Through Glass

Analysis Requested
Uh, yeah. Y'see, the reason I wrote this story is because there's a longer one I want to write, and Revan's a major character. The problem is, I don't really know how I consider Revan. So, I decided to find out by writing a shorter, less complex story following her. I'm still having trouble, though, and I need a third perspective. So, for anyone who reads this story and can be arsed to, I need somebody to characterize her; based on this story, how does Revan appear to think and why? Also, I need to know if anyone can spot any inconsistencies in her character and tell whether they're believable or not (people in real life are often paradoxical).

So, yeah. The bottom line is that, for some obscure reason, I don't trust myself to understand my interpretation of Revan without somebody else's opinion. If anyone could be arsed to analyze her and put their findings below on this talk page, I'd really appreciate that. -MPK, Free Man  04:44, December 21, 2010 (UTC)