User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/CONTENT RELEASE: New short story released, plus updated TCO prologue/@comment-82555-20100228074413

I just scanned over The Tragedy and I like it. I really enjoyed the meeting between Maul and "the new master", and the dialogue was done well. I thought the pacing, for the most part, was good. At first, I found the beginning to be a little slow, but after reading it a second time it doesn't seem too bad. Good job.