Talk:Darth Valerius/@comment-74.98.164.192-20121122231710/@comment-2200849-20121123151631

Hey, just edited the article to fix some formatting and spelling mistakes. I think the storyline definitely has potential&mdash;you might consider shortening his lifespan, though, as such a long life is not realistic. Thus, your character can come across as an all-powerful someone, which would make him look unoriginal. This is only my personal advice, though, and is not something that has binding power or is compulsory in any way. Cheers!