HP:Ada Karr

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Review

 * Its fine, despite the minor stuff below. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 01:18, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

Things that need to be done

 * The post-mortem section is kinda' short. Barely two paragraphs
 * Some images seem cluttered together, but that may just be my monitor.