User talk:Troyb/Archive V

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Re: Troyb
Nope. As I also said, there are way too many formatting errors (please review the Manual of Style) and the first section is one long paragraph. A LOT needs to change before I was to voice support. - Brandon Rhea 21:06, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Basically what Brandon Rhea said - first, you should revise the article to fit the Manual of Style, as Rhea previously suggested. What I specifically mean is fixing grammar, capitalization errors, separate your paragraphs, have an "introduction" of decent length for your character, spelling errors, no acronyms (instead of CIS, put Confderacy, etc), and such. Also pictures would be good.


 * Very well, but in my opinion it won't reach FA quality that way. Also, next time, I wouldn't ask for advice if you won't even consider it for improvement of your article. Good day.


 * I agree with Vic. You asked both of us to give our suggestions on what you need to do to make your article worthy of recieving FA status, yet you then say that you will be keeping it the way it is? Your article currently has a -5 rating under FA nominations, so they obviously agree with what Vic and I have told you. If you truly do want your article to be FA status, then you would do well to implement the changes that we suggested. I truly hope you do. - Brandon Rhea 03:45, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I assume by that you mean that it will be updated in good time. - Brandon Rhea 15:14, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Awesome, because it does have the potential. - Brandon Rhea 15:17, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Very well. However, that article needs A LOT more detail. It needs a history and everything. - Brandon Rhea 15:21, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

Nice userboxes
That is a LOT of GIFs. --C3PO the Dragon Slayer 6,000,000 forms of communication 15:32, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

Clan
Hi troyb! would you have a look at my clan page and sign the guestbook or join. Oh, and I hope you enjoy this wiki. I certainly do. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:14, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

rrrgghh!!!
I don't know if this is true, and i'm doing my best to keep my temper, but I believe that message was a personal attack. GRR! ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 19:31, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Alright, i'm sorry. My sense of humor needs a little refinement, besides, I didn't know it was a joke. Oh, and by the way, just because the Sith clan is "better" right now, doesn't mean mine won't improve. Peace? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:16, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Gifs!!!!
Where do you get all those cool gifs? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:25, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Do you want to be on my friends list? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:29, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

CIS
I don't support the CIS in general, but what do you mean by your CIS?''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:34, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Sure. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:39, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Great.''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:42, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

The article? in what way? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:45, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

No problem! anytime! Oh, and can you make images?

I normally don't nominate upon request, but if you promise to be as helpful as you can with the order, then I will. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:52, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

I will, then. Oh, and I didn't see your name on the members list.''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

No problem. I will nominate you now. I was making a modification to the page when I received your message ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 21:59, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

You mean the council? you already joined the order ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:02, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Nothing really happens. The council makes large decisions. I will vote for you. You must have 4 votes to become a member of the council. (if we get more members, I will raise this number.) How long have you been a member on this wiki? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:07, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

This clan is going to make a lot of developments, but it will take some time, so be patient. Oh, and I am a master of Makashi, Form II, like (sigh) Dooku, but Jedi used it too! ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:18, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

True, he was a Jedi. I am thinking on having a clan party at some point, Do you have any ideas? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:25, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Good ideas! When should it be scheduled? It has to be at least 5 days after April 7th. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:30, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

How about april 13th? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:34, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

We don't even have twelve members in the order yet! ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:37, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

That would mean that all except one would be members. how about 3? At least until we have more members. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 22:42, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Yes, we do have to have votes. I'm not a dictator. I will consider changing the rank time, although keep in mind that ranks can be earned (MUAHAHAHA ) ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 23:35, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Friends
Hi Troyb, thanks for voting for me. Want to be friends?

Darth Spack 01:23, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Rankings
You can earn rankings if you have made a significant contribution, or helped a lot, or came up with a really good idea, basically. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 01:54, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Party
I hope all of our clan members attend ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 11:51, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

They're What?!?! Then we have to improve it quickly! Do you have any ideas to add to it? i'll go fix the grammar. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 11:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

I fixed what he missed. You write the extra stuff, i'll look for images. you should put that troyb image that you asked for on image request in the article. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:05, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Does this image help? you can make it smaller. type ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:11, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

working on it!! ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:23, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Here's one Type  ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi)  12:32, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

I'm exhausted! Good luck, but I can't find anything else ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:41, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

What about it? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:44, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

I'll get to work ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:47, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

I put in a few images. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 12:56, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

If you can find one. I don't know where to look. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 13:08, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

The trouble with my computer is that he can't show videos on this website ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 13:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

That's the point, also try to get new members, I got like 6 from my last Mando party. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  17:03, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Re: clan vote
I voted for you 18:31, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

would you tell thye other members about the party change? ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 19:42, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

When you become a knight. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 23:48, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Well due to the attendence changing the name of my party will throw off some guests, so it's still here, I added a jedi fan clans own section and a sith. Go here, It starts at 5 pm EST. Any questions plz ask. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  16:40, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Yeah basically, heres the first party it's inactive but you can get a general idea about it, User:Darth tader/Mandalorian party. Bye. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  16:54, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Party
Wher is the party?

Darth Spack 04:35, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Party
I was really dissapointed to move it but family issues made me move it. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  18:56, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Council
No prob, Troyb.

Easter
You too, Troyb. Silenced Nighthawk ( Comlink )( Past Missions ) 00:19, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Article?
Troyb, can you help me with my articles? I just started writing fanon here and may be unfamiliar, if there is anything wrong help me plz, thank you. There are four articles, one of which is under construction. They are listed as follows:


 * Superconducting Crystal Chip
 * T-80 Light "Core Fighter"
 * T-123 Heavy "Core Fighter"
 * GAT-X782 Advanced Tactical "Core Fighter"

Thank you,

Silenced Nighthawk ( Comlink )( Past Missions ) 00:40, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Easter
Happy Easter to you too! Darth Spack 09:53, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Hey Troyb, could I use your "this user teaches the jedi arts at Taikin's jedi order" userbox"? If not its fine its just that I don't know how to make userboxes.

Darth Spack 09:53, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

defacto admin?
Troyb, de facto means self-appointed. You need to get a bureaucrat to make you an admin, but I'm sure you can do well. Just not as a de facto. As for my question, thank you for the comment.

Silenced Nighthawk ( Comlink )( Past Missions ) 01:03, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Party
Okay.

Userbox
Thank you! ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 19:28, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Do both of those things, please ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 19:31, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Call the council members to the clan talk page ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 19:34, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Userboxes
Sweet userboxes man! Mind if i use some on my page?

Friend
Sure, I'llsign up soon. I can help design the portal page, I have experiance with that type of coding. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  23:56, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Well I know how to edit it and make it better. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  00:03, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

Sure, I'd be honored to be your friend. On the Taiken's Jedi Order, though, the answer is no. No offense to any of the parties involved, but I just don't like it. If there's something important that's involving the site (like help with an article) or someone has new information concerning the Jedi, then I'll be there to help/listen. Thanks, though. No hard feelings on that?

Will do.

RE:friends
I'll be your friend;what do you mean by CIS clan? 23:41, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Name Drive
Thank You!

Yes.

Taikin.

I put a template I made at the top of your user page

Okay

The link I used on both our pages was Battle of Cato Neimoidia (New Republic era)

I was gonna make a picture, but that ones ok

thanks

good. I think we should start going into the legacy era for the battles

I was actually looking for a planet that had less information and was a stub on wookieepedia. (Agon nine, cordes,etc.) I'll try to find a planet on wookieepedia for a space battle. I'll be back in a little while.

How about Boordii?

I dunno either, but haha-Greek empire! You stole that from my article! You can keep it though. I don't really care. Just pointing it out.

I meant the whole ancient empire thing.

Redemption
I assume you're talking about his talk page and userpage. The only reason he has that is because I was trying to be friendly and welcome him, yet admonish him for swearing at Jack, but the first thing he did was insult me back, he even insulted Ewoksfist when he attempted to help me. Just because he seems to be a bad guy, don't let that stop you from welcoming him.

RE: Good Article
 That's the page were we will nominate GA's in the future. However, the page itself isn't set up yet, so you'll have to wait before nominating anything. -- Talk to an Admin Mind Trick Jedi Library

You mean a list of our battles/wars?

Okay, I'll get the page started. Don't talk to me until I'm finished

I like the article, but I don't think you will get many votes to make it a featured article. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 20:14, 11 April 2007 (UTC)

New CIS/GDE Wars.

We need more battles.

Hey are you still on?

Hope you liked your toy. I had nothing else to do. I made one for Jack (see his talk page), but he hasn't used it yet.

What is the idea?

YES! POLIS MASSA!!!!!!!

I was thinking this: Neimoidians in our army get sick of an unknown virus, and we go to Polis Massa to steal it from them. However, the Polis Massans use the Jedi to protect them. Or we could go with your idea.

Personally, I do like your idea better. And also, I don't like getting into fights like that, so I'm not going to get in that discussion. I'll add the info from Polis Massa.

Take a look at Battle of Polis Massa. I am going to make the article for Star Forge II in a little while, but first make an image for the surface battle and the space battle.

Lets ask Nebulax if he wants to fight us in a battle or something

I'll ask him.

I just left a comment on Nebulax's talk page. I'll go to the cantina right now.

That wasn't long.

Can you help me with the All-Terrain Missile Launcher? I need ideas

Yeah bettween 3:00 and 3:30pm EST, it will officially start, See you tommorow. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  23:54, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

Redemption
Well this guy is causing problems, and if he does it again I will have no problem reporting him to an Admin or the Wiki staff. Now not to be offensive but heres what I think Redemption is. He is a person who maybe is/was picked on a lot, he probally feels more powerful on the web because people won't actually pick on him due to his actual appearence or personality. So he comes here and when he has aproblem he lets it all out. Now anyone who read this, I am stating my opinion, if this was a problem to someone you may delete it. Darth tader Mandalore clan MPTG  19:00, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

I'm not gonna talk at the RC anymore. And yes, lets make more members of the New CIS concil.

11

Okay. I'll come up with 3, and you come up with 2. Jack said hes thinkin about it

Mine: Sabhaa – Neimoidian (Sanskrit-council) Anaazrita Fac - Geonosian, cousin of Sun Fac (Sanskrit-independent) Kiita the Greater– Geonosian, archduke of Geonosis after Poggle (Sanskrit-bug) --Darth Tyler(talk) 19:59, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

You like the picture on the Vale's page?

Add the Template:Online to the top of your page I created it

thanks

A new advanced battle droid...like a Cortosis version of the magnaguard

Ill change Cortosis MagnaGuard X-42 then.

One what?

I'll make one

You can make a history of Vale as a member of the modal nodes before he bacame part of the Trade Fed.

Ok. im about to upload a pic of the x-42

Ill add the droid infobox

You mean a Quarren?

How about Avidhi? Sanskrit-abnormal

Ideas
Hey I have an Idea for your New CIS/GDE wars! The Army goes and invades the Ukaba Sector with little resistance because the Ukaba Sector fleets suck. Then all of Ukaba join the NCIS/GDE, which adds to your armys and invasion forces, after Training centers are set up. Ohh and your free to make up systems and planets. (Don't Look Here!)(Where is the Rebel Base?) 02:36, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

Have you ever seen High School Musical? Just a question. If you have, come help me at This wiki. I just started it and will be taking a break from swfanon.

Yes, you will. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 13:10, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

New CIS
Not bad. ''' (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi) 13:15, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

I'll be gone until I get atleast 20 people on the wiki. I see you have come and helped me. Are you going to stay and help me? If you edit enough, I'll make you an admin. But not right now. And I'm not trying to bribe you, either.

I'll need all the luck I can get. Gotta go. (Don't Look Here!)(Where is the Rebel Base?) 18:47, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

Re:Party
I might not be there but if i do I'll say hi. (Don't Look Here!)(Where is the Rebel Base?) 17:24, 14 April 2007 (UTC) P.S. I not really gonna edit that much today, I got to finish up a project for school.

Thanks for putting it on my Wyyrlok page. Ill make that duel when I get more time on swfanon and not hsm.

Im on swfanon right now.

All of today. I am goig to work on hsm tomorrow, then swfanon the next day, and so on...

Can anyone go to that party?

Nebulax
Hey, Nebulax is thinking of ideas for our fight.

Thanks for your opinion

New category
Hey, I made a new category for our people.

Go vote for my article as featured article!--Darth Tyler Talk to Palpy Palpy is awesome 08:34, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

what is a admin border?

Im staying on swfanon for today actually thanks for voting for Darth TYler

We need 3 more people

Let me start off with this quick question and dont worry i'm not interrogating you im doing this to everyone:Why do you believe Darth Tyler is fit to be Clan leader and why do you believe Darth JCS shouldnt be the clan leader?

Hey dude, check out Star Wars Fanon:The Second Wiki Awards. I nominated us in the last category

Also, come nominate something for this. I'm trying to get people to come.

Sure. Gues waht? They're not voting for Darth Tyler as FA because its weird.

I dunno what to create. Maybe 1 more council member?

go to Battle of Polis Massa and follow the link to the starforge II

cause thats the link, and you should make it on that title. also add the ship infobox and remember to place it under all the correct categories

take a look at what i did to the SFII

Sure. Let's make our own wookiee commander that leads the opposing forces. then he'll help us finish the SFII. Ill think up an exotic name for the wookiee commander

See Battle of Kashyyyk (Legacy era). Can you finish it? And please use correct grammar because it is very time-consuming to go back and fix all the problems (no offense).

Okay. Ill make the image so Ill be offline for a couple of minutes, but Im not going to change my template on my userpage unless I really have to go

Okay, Im done. Check out the image

Why don't you ever try to make an image?

I wasn't complaining I was just asking. Now there is one thing: can you make the page for the Wookiee leader. Just follow the link on the battle page. if you can't find a wookiee infobox, which there probably isn't, we'll find an infobox

Awesome idea. Tyler could have a duel with him. Go ahead and make the article.

You have the best ideas ever dude.

Okay. Remember to add the info about the battle of kashyyyk and if you want, he can also live during the clone wars and help yoda with that battle, too

Dude I was gonna make the pic but if you want you can find one

Hey dude! I got an awesome idea! How about we make our own video game that Tyler and Troyb are in!!!! Instead of Republic commando, Separatist Commando!!!!!!!--Darth Tyler Talk to Palpy Palpy is awesome 20:34, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Please????????

Hold on let me do a picture request for someone else and then Ill get to work on the game

Ill add that info to the game. Also I cant do that picture request cause I dont do gifs.

Star Wars: Separatist Commando. And what do you mean you need a new pic?

I know about the FA thing. Nah, lets not have another grievous.

Do you wanna be my apprentice? Remember I asked you on Wookieepedia if you wanna be Force-senstive? Perhaps...you could be my apprentice.