User talk:Troyb/Archive 4

Request Wikia
Go here.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 01:02, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

I was acting like a Canadian.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 02:00, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Okay, eh?--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 02:03, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

OK Ill make an image

YouTube
Hey, Troyb! Could you find a youtube video of the NCIS theme? I could really use it at the NCIS wiki. It starts as clips playing with the letters N C I S coming in. Thanks. 16:26, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

OK.

What?--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:35, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

OK, Cool. Also I think it will too.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:37, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Do you want me to help you out with the New CIS?--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:40, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

I was gonna add some citations and quotes. I'll do it tomorrow--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:42, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

No I wanna work on my Jump droid article so I can get it good article next week--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:44, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Well, you can add quotes.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:47, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Thanks.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 17:59, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Tomorrow.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 18:01, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Have you ever uploaded a pic? Just go to Wikipedia, find the article, right-click, press save as picture, and save it to one of your folders. Then go to Special:Upload and do what it says.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 18:14, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Oaky.--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 18:39, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Its good. Hey, Ive got to eat lunch. I'll be back in about 15 min. BYe,--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 18:43, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

OK im back--'Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 18:55, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

RE:Hob Goblin
Meh, well I don't like crossovers, but I won't judge it on that, except for one thing; Those pictures are of the Green Goblin, not the Hob Goblin. Anyways, as for the article, yes, there are things that could be improved. They are as follows: -- Victor  ( talk ) 19:32, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Introduction is (way) too short
 * No era icon(s)
 * The article lacks a personality/traits section
 * The article is basically too short; The history/biography is a mere 5 full paragraphs long. (And that should be the most important part of the article)

Rivalry is misspelled in the intro. The intro's too small. There should be a post-mortem/legacy section and a personality/traits section. It should also be expanded. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 19:35, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

I don't have time for that; inspect it yourself and I've told you please not to post videos on my talk page. -- Victor  ( talk ) 22:55, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

You can perfectly inspect it yourself, and before you post it, its up to you to judge whether or not it is vulgar or not, and if you think you may be banned for it. If that's the case, then just don't post it; but like I said, if it's fine, then don't worry about it. Plus, YouTube videos have nothing to do with SWF. -- Victor  ( talk ) 23:00, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

Infobox
The date of creation and arms don't show up. Do you think you can fix it? 23:44, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

Hob Goblin
I did see the bust article and I'm curious to see what you'd like me to do for the Hob Goblin article. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 15:16, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

I'm not a bust fan, but it was a good read. I have to go eat lunch now, but when I come back, I will post a new intro on your talk page and you can tell me whether or not you like it. I'll be back in about twenty minutes. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 15:22, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

I'm sorry Troyb, but I just can't make a very good intro with the amount of information given. I'd advise that you add some history to it and make a post-mortem/legacy section. Sorry. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 15:58, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

I'm a bit busy with my articles right now, but you can always try Google images. The videos are great btw. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 16:27, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

I've never gotten into that before, but my dad likes the Transformers. Gotta go. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 16:30, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Transformers
Sure. I don't care about YouTube videos on my talkpage. 21:19, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Those were great videos! Thanks! BTW, you should make a holotheater for your videos. 21:42, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I started a holotheater! There is a link on your page above the other movies.  21:57, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Its just a start. There still have to be links to the movies and maybe a background color.  22:00, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah. It might be a while for it to be finished.  22:08, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Both of those vids were cool. Thanks.  22:21, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Yep! Peace.  22:31, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, but its coming out on Disney Channel. I love HSM! I'm gonna take a break.--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 22:46, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Hey ,an sorry for the belated response, yeah so far so good, going great for me here for now, and in life. Well rtegarding to the SWA I will vote at my own pace, no offense I reading the articles and not who wrote them, I will chose my favorite article no the article by my friend, if you catch my drift. Well see yah, nice talking to yah. Darth tader Mandalore battles 03:42, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Video
Great idea! 14:30, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

I probably won't need the video. I'll see what I can find. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 16:39, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Well I'm looking for it now. You still want me to? Darth tader Mandalore battles 16:43, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Sorry, buddy, but I couldn't find it anywhere. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 16:53, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Well there was no powers as far as I can see, plus no image was to be found. So I took your video, enlarged it and took a screen pic of it and edited it. Here it is;
 * Well I didn't exactly know what ur looking for but here it is. Darth tader Mandalore battles 17:00, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Okay, well your welcome, and if it was a full body the image would of been pixelated and/ or had to be small. Darth tader Mandalore battles 17:08, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Expand the intro and personality/traits. There are a couple of misspelled words, but besides that, it's ok. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 17:55, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Great idea! 18:19, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

I think Mysterio's awesome, to let you know--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 23:11, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay I had to eat supper. And by the way my Jump droid will overpower Mysterio in nominations!!!!--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 23:28, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

"This human is retarted. Blast him. *Kills Mysterio* Who's the foolish idiot now?"

- Jump droid

--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 23:31, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Jump droid:And I do not wish to waste my precious ammo on you fool.--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 23:38, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Jump droid:Sorry for getting physical, thanks for the oil.--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 23:40, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Im gonna work on my Hoth hog article--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 23:44, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Looking good! Could you help me out on my namesake? Any ideas about what he could do for the New CIS? 23:50, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

You said I could... I think. 23:52, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Sorry. I'll change the stuff. 23:56, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

OK. Thanks. 23:58, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Well I'm not part of it. I create my own fanon that's either completeley new or based off an obscure canon character--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 00:28, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

I dunno why he hates you--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 00:31, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

Crossovers
Because some of them are blatant copies of the characters they represent. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 00:38, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

Here yah go.
 * There yah go, hope thast what you want, oh yeah to take images of your screen press this, $$Ctrl+Alt+Print Screen(upper right of Keryboard)=Image of screen$$ Yeah then just open something like paint and do edit - paste. That should do it. Well yeah, your welcome, bye. Darth tader Mandalore battles 01:09, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Your Welcome, anytime, but tellin you what to do will help, well see yah. Darth tader Mandalore battles 01:21, 29 June 2007 (UTC)



New CIS opinion
I personally think that it was great that you and Darth Tyler revived the CIS into the Galactic Civil War. So for it's great, but I would like to see more Rebel vs. CIS pictures and battles and I would like to see a revived Dooku and Grievous, to bring more power, ya know what I'm saying? But, I also think that it'd be cool to see an Imperial General Grievous lookalike... Keep up the good work!

P.S. Add the Star Wars Robot Chicken Admiral Ackbar Cereal and/or the Yo Momma Fight! Those were funny scenes!

Jedi Scum 21:28, 30 June 2007 (UTC)'

GA Votes
Please see the note I put under your support votes for Jump droid and Beta-1 and comply as soon as possible. - Brandon Rhea 23:21, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

Re: Jack.
Good to here from you, Troyb. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) 00:04, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Tell you the truth, Troyb, I think that they should be deleted. They are almost exact copies of the people they represent. If you had done something similar to a Zack Fayne or Ryan Vex for instance, then there wouldn't be a problem. Sorry, but I think that they should go. Maybe if you tried it at a different angle they would be ok. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 01:53, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

I'm standing by my decision. Like I said before, try it a different way and it might work. Other than that advice, I have nothing else to say about this issue. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 01:59, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Sorry.--Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 00:20, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

Your Concern
I noticed on Tyler's talk page that you were sorry he voted for the policy I put up for a vote. I don't know if you read it or not, but a group will be created to review the existing crossovers. If your articles truly are not carbon copies, then you have nothing to worry about. Only carbon copies and such will be deleted. - Brandon Rhea 05:33, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

Yeah but if you talk to me it'll be in delays cause Im also on IRC. Join us, dude Darthtyler Talk 21:14, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

Wiki
First of all; it's not yours. But we can call it that. And BTW, I also have my own wiki!!! The Swedish Star Wars Fanon Wiki. Maybe I'll come and write some at the Spidey Fanon, if I have time. I don't know much about Spider-Man except the basic. (I liked Spider-Man before the movies came and when they came I didn't care anymore).  N@M3Le$  | Talk  | Contributions | MoaDS | Namelesennius  21:16, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Lol. All hail me!!!  N@M3Le$  | Talk  | Contributions | MoaDS | Namelesennius [[Image:Namelesennius.jpg|25px]] 21:34, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

. Type Troyb and use the scrollbar to pick #swfanon. Darthtyler Talk 21:19, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

Not at the moment. In a minute I will. Darthtyler Talk 00:17, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

ok i just got finished with what i was doing. ill be there in a sec Darthtyler Talk 00:56, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

thanks for the good luck and i think robot chicken is crap because it   IS    crap. Darthtyler Talk 01:04, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

May the Force be with you as well, Troyb. Darthtyler Talk 01:13, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

Sorry
If I used any of your fanon in my new IG-50 combat droid article, I'm sorry. I know I mentioned the name Troyb in my article. If your not happy with it, I'll get rid of anything you don't like. I already told Darth Tyler but he didn't reply yet. Anyways, sorry if I used your fanon without permission.-- Jedi Scum 17:24, 17 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Anyways, with that out of the way, I was wondering if I could make a Federation-class cruiser article for you. The Federation Swarm looks like a very cool ship and I'd like to make the article. Would that be ok with you? I'm currently starting an article on an Imperial cruiser based on the Arc Hammer. Reply on my talk page!-- Jedi Scum 17:22, 18 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks for letting me edit your articles! I'll see what I can do.-- Jedi Scum 21:14, 19 July 2007

Whose articles? What are you talkin about?&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 18:25, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

ok im going to hpfanon bye&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 18:34, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

CBT's talk page
I know you were trying to help, but CBT doesn't believe in God and he's not a fan of people telling him to believe in/pray to God. It probably wasn't the best idea to say that. - Brandon Rhea 22:03, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It's not your choice or right to decide that he should start believing in God. - Brandon Rhea 00:22, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

Exactly, you saying "should" is part of the problem I am pointing out to you. Please see this quote from CBT: "Why don't you stop referencing the bible and communism and other shit. These are your opinons. I have no probelm with you being a Christian, and believing in God. Okay, I happen to not believe, as the life I've lead up to now has severly shaken my belief."

- CBT

Having talked to him after he had that discussion with another user, he informed me that it basically meant "you can believe, but don't tell me that I should". The key word in there is "should", just as it was in your statement. - Brandon Rhea 02:45, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I have not had that pleasure. - Brandon Rhea 05:10, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

IRC
Are you on IRC?
 * Please sign your comments. Thank you. - Brandon Rhea 04:01, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

irc
Hey Im back online

No its my fanon version of Tao Vader's first apprentice.who's toa?

Poll
Could you help answer my poll I put up today? Thank you. - Jedi Scum 15:50, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Where's Darthtyler?
Do you think he died or something? or is he on vacation? or did his computer break?75.85.102.29 16:44, 22 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Well since you didnt sign with your user name I dont know who you are but I know he didnt die, hes gone to other wikis for awhile. But if you are going to ask him if you can work on New CIS or his article, no.Troyb(CIS ShadowFeed) contribs[[Image:Troyb2.jpg|20px]] 18:07, 22 August 2007 (UTC)

That was me that asked where darthtyler was, I dont think the NCIS can be in the movie, it takes place in 16 BBY and Troyb and Darthtyler arent allies untill about 5 ABY Kudeb Private of SWF 19:27, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

They also dont make Neimodian legos, plus, I already had the idea of droids in my movie for a while, when I put a cape on a battledroid, i decided to ask darthtyler if I could have Darthtyler in the movie. I dont even know if he's gonning to say yes or not.Kudeb Private of SWF 19:01, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Last night I thought about it, and decided that I could probably have troyb mentioned a couple times, possibly a picture of him in the background of a scene, which is the most I could garentee at the moment. I'll look over you troyb article to find out what he did in 16 BBYKudeb Private of SWF 15:48, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I found a great picture with two neimodian aides in it. Which one of the aids do you want troyb to be?Kudeb [[Image:Privatepatch.png|15px]] Private of SWF 16:23, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * one on the right, got it.Kudeb [[Image:Privatepatch.png|15px]] Private of SWF 17:24, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Thats the most I can garentee.Kudeb [[Image:Privatepatch.png|15px]] Private of SWF 20:00, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Troyb didn't use a droid army untill 11 BBY, five years after my movie takes place.Kudeb [[Image:Privatepatch.png|15px]] Private of SWF 15:42, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Back
Hey waz up Troyb its me.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 23:14, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

A little secret
Can you reveal to me your little secret about your birth date. I will not betray you. Well if you change your mind visit my talk page. George Skywalker 18:45, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

by the way, check out marvelcomicsfanon.--Zakkoroen 02:15, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Hey Troyb! check out this pic!

Hey
Hey I'm back. Permanently. Dude 've been gone for a long time...&mdash; Darthtyler  Talk 04:14, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Not bad. Busy, but what else is new. You? --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 00:53, 23 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Welcome back. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 00:55, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

That's good to hear. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( Commission Room ) 01:05, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yup. Busy, busy. Anyway, I believe Tyler responded above. --  JM  76  Ask   Archives  [[Image:Sabersmilyjm76.jpg|20px]] 01:08, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

YES!!! I HAVE BEEN LOKING FOR YOU!
Dude, I've been looking for you everywhere...anyways, check out these cool wikis I've been to...here and here!&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:05, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I was thinking we could make a Sherlock Holmes-like character.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 23:37, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Vic. Alright let's name him...&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 23:46, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Something good. I'll look at wookieepedia for something we can retcon...&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 23:49, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Herleu Portio - (the link is a link to wikipedia, from the detective in which I got the name)&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 23:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * We have to decide a species. . &mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 23:56, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Alright.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 19:20, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

Vic
Same old, same old. A few new users, FA requirements have been increased a bit, and lastly, I proposed this. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( Commission Room ) 20:07, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks for the userbox!  Michaeldsuarez  ( Activate Holocron ) 00:48, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

RE:

 * No thanks. -- Don Victor, Sr.  [[Image:Coat of arms of Mexico.png|27px]] ( Commission Room ) 23:17, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Hi, nice to see you again. To answer your question, that header on my talk page is old and needs to be updated, in fact, I'm in school right now. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 14:15, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

Huh
I don't get it...?&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 19:31, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Don't worry, Troyb. I'm staying here permanently. I just said I should've stayed on my vacation. And I should've. I should have not come back. But I did. And I'm not turning back. Not again. And I don't know why I'm using periods so much. I really don't. But I will become an admin one day. I will.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:32, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Nominate me whenever I get enough respect around here. Right now, I'm considered fairly new, aren't I?&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:35, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I guess so. Nom me whenever the elections start, then.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:37, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll post a forum asking when they start, and if not, if they can now.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:40, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Correct your grammar, spelling, punctation, usage, etc., and start accepting criticism and you'll be an admin in almost no time.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:42, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, you know what I mean. For instance, "don't" has an apostrophe.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:46, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Alright, let's make that detective.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:47, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No, a detective. And its spy not spi.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 20:50, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

My Vote
I actually didn't vote for CABAL, so that was a poor example for me to use. It's not that I don't like the article or anything, because it's interesting, but I originally voted for the article only because it's been nominated so many times. That was a poor decision on my part, as that's not why an article should be voted in. The article has far more potential, and a lot of work that needs to be done, and I want it to be the best it can possibly be before it's given GA status. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:17, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll clean it up a bit in terms of grammar and all, and I'll see if I can flesh it out a bit without adding any new story elements. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:22, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

New CIS
The rewrite of the New CIS is done. It still needs more information in the culture section to be a GA, though. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  03:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * If you want, since you said you couldn't think of any ways to make New CIS more detailed, I could help out with some story elements and add them in just to make it flow better. That way, it'll be GA by next week. What do you say? - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  17:00, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

That's fine. I just want to make sure things make sense in it. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  19:54, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * When I'm done I will. Now, this is totally up to you at this point, but do you mind if the article is considered a collaboration between you, Tyler and me? I mean, by now I've put nearly five to six hours into this article, so I think that's only fair. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:34, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Well, obviously, but in the end if this wins GA next week (or this week, depending upon if I finish tonight and people change their votes) then it should at least be noted that I did most of the clean up and expansion work that promoted it to GA and potentially FA status. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:40, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I don't really use userboxes, but thanks anyway. And, I know we all worked on it. I'm not trying to steal credit for the story or the original write-up. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  21:45, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Congratulation! I hope New CIS becomes a good article.  Michaeldsuarez [[Image:Sabersmilygreend.jpg|20px]] ( Activate Holocron ) 19:46, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Well helllo there
Hi.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 19:47, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

GA
Sorry man, but the culture still needs to be expanded for my vote to change. Dexington 22:42, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Also, keep in mind that the rewrite I'm helping you with is not finished. Other than the Rise of the NCIS section, the article is still lacking detail. I'll try finishing tonight. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  23:20, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Photoshop
No, I don't. Sorry. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  23:20, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Not to try to gloat, but with me doing? You're damn right it'll be GA. Also, as far as the rewrite goes, what I'd like to do (with your permission) is to take out the whole list of planets and perhaps make a stub article called "Planets of the New Confederacy of Independent Systems" or something like that. Removing the list from the article avoids the need to have to explain how each one was taken. I would obviously keep an astrography section, but it'd just be a few paragraphs about why the NCIS had so many planets, what they were used for, etc. I'd also use the Main Article template to direct readers to the "Planets" page. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  23:50, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Not really a fan of the video, but that's just me. Also, in the future, don't put videos on my talk page since they just take up too much room. As far as the astrography section, I don't even know if I would vote for the article for GA even AFTER doing all of those rewrites. You can't simply have a list of planets that were taken over without going in and, in detail, explaining how each one of them was conquered. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  00:10, 27 October 2007 (UTC)


 * No, I'm not kidding. With an entire list of planets like that without a detailed explanation of how they were each taken over, it fails in being "complete and detailed". It's your choice as to whether or not you want to leave it there, but I certainly wouldn't be voting for it for GA with a list like that. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  00:19, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

You'll have to wait until next week for it to win GA, then. That also gives me a little more time to finish the history and all for you, since I wanted to work on some of my novels tonight anyway. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  00:24, 27 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Voting ends for this weeks round tomorrow night, so I doubt it'll get enough votes by then. - President Brandon Rhea [[Image:Presidentialseal.gif|27px]] (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  00:42, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Just to clarify, I believe you need at least two more votes to get a GA. It needs to be above 0. Dexington 02:05, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Re:

 * Well, thanks, but I don't think Jack's coming back, there isn't a single one over there (other than myself) who didn't hate him. Anywho, my unbanning is in the talks, we'll see how it goes on the IRC.--G0-T0 10:27, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Well he isn't a admin.--G0-T0 17:56, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Rewrite
No, it's not finished. I stopped working on it last night to work on some of my other stuff. I'll finish working on it this weekend. I didn't finish it last night because I knew that it wouldn't win GA this week, especially since you have a long list of planets with absolutely no unique explanations for each one as to how they were conquered. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  15:15, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Hullo
Hullo, eh? Um, I wanted you to come see Alien Research. C'mon, Troyb, if you like Star Wars, you like aliens, eh!&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 18:54, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Damn your fast. Hey, check my userpage under "Star Destroyers" to see what I'm working on at the moment.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 00:09, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I clned up your astrography. Oh, and I'm just retconning a bunch of unnamed Star Destroyers into my own names. Would you like me to ark your talk page?&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 00:14, 28 October 2007 (UTC)