User talk:Ryluk Shouja

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Do you think it'll be ok if i remove those improvement templates on the top of my page. I've done everything i can think of to fix them...so i'm just thinking that the person probably forgot that they put them up. --  Tesh  162  06:37, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

Please fix your images to be sourced properly. This is a rule that must be followed. See how at Special:Upload and for more help, see Template:Information. If you have questions, just ask me, but please follow these rules. Thanks. -- Victor  ( talk ) 06:05, 8 October 2007 (UTC)


 * No problem. -- Victor  ( talk ) 06:09, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Thank you very much for indirectly teaching me that link trick (to make external links appear like regular links). -- Victor  ( talk ) 06:43, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

I know! that's the odd thing about it. Putting the entire URL works Even though you didn't mean to, thanks anyway for teaching me the trick on accident. What I mean is this: Regular link is for example Narod Antrell; external link is ; but, writing out the whole URL as you do looks like Luke Skywalker instead of. -- Victor  ( talk ) 06:46, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Last night I did read a few of the articles you created (where I found the link trick). I haven't read your entire storyline yet though, just a few articles here and there. -- Victor  ( talk ) 19:10, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Hey, Ryluk. How about yopu just get the logo when youcome over tomorrow. --  Tesh  162  14:37, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

I hate my dad's Comp. The keyboard sucks. anyway...yeah, just get the pic when you're over here tomorrow after youth group. --  Tesh  162  14:39, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Tesh's pic
For now, until i can get a better pic, can you find a pic of a guy in black armor with two vibro-blades (black) standing before a dead body or other guy. You don't have to show the head, not until i get a better picture. Can you do that? --  Tesh  162  18:18, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Black vibroblades. Like in the article. thanks so much! --  Tesh  162  18:29, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

np. and thanks again for the pic. This will do wonders to Tesh's page. Oh, and i really like the pics on Ryluk's page. Really adds a lot. God Bless. --  Tesh  162  18:43, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Just to let you know. It doesn't have to show the head...so hair doesn't matter. God Bless. --  Tesh  162  18:55, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

You know what, first, restart the template, copy the code and paste it over the current one without modifications. Then, once it's saved, feel free to modify colors/names of spots, etc. That way you know if errors are made by looking at the history. If it still doesn't work, I can just create it for your from scratch, but first try out what I asked. I hope that helps/works. -- Victor  ( talk ) 07:15, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

You're welcome. -- Victor  ( talk ) 07:33, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

No problem. That's what I'm here for. -- Victor  ( talk ) 08:43, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

Funny thing
Thanks again for indirectly helping me out. I didn't know that "fiancé" was spelled differently for a man (fiancé) and a woman (fiancée). Thanks. -- Victor  ( talk ) 08:43, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Indeed, writing sure gives us a lot more information to work with. --Don Victor  (contact)  09:44, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

No problem, it's deleted. --Don Victor  (contact)  21:55, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

No problem, it happens. Used to happen to me all the time and I'd be asking admins to delete a bunch of images/pages (before I was an admin. Now if I upload wrong stuff, I just delete it myself ) -- Don Victor, Sr.   ( Commission Room ) 06:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

The Fanon Menace
Should i put up the info about Season 4, 5, & 6 now or wait until you're done with the outline? --  Tesh  162  14:02, 20 October 2007 (UTC)

Images
I deleted one image but not the other because you are currently using it in your article. You know, instead of having images deleted, just upload over the old one. To do that, just go to an image, then go down until you find the link "Upload a new version of this image" (or something like that) and then upload it like a regular file. Then, just clear your cache (You don't always have do, it usual is refreshed quickly) and the new image should replace the old one. Just letting you know. -- Don Victor, Sr.  ( Commission Room ) 20:15, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Tesh's page
Dude! I'm almost done with Tesh's page. Yeah, i gave up on trying to make it the second longest page on the site. I figured, once I'm done, all I have to do is get pictures. That's going to be the difficult part. I'm going to see if I can use my comic book pics for most of these, since very few are from the time period my books were written in. Anyway, So, yeah. I'm finally almost done, then I can work on The Pirate Wars, The Xian Conflicts and Zan's page, Hetur-an's page, Alura's page, the Alura's page, and Chin's page. Yeah, so I've still got a lot, but I'm a lot closer now. God Bless. --  Tesh  162  20:11, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

Well, Tesh's page is done, if you want to read it. I'm kind of pleased with the way i tied the Battle of Najiba in as the pivotal point in Tesh's life. Now to work on the other pages. The Alura's won't be that long, I'm almost done with it know. The Pirate Wars, yeah, that won't take long either. I'm not going to do the Xian Conflict, because there's only like two or three battles in it, which are all explained on Tesh's page and other pages related to the time period, so yeah. The big one will be the character pages. God Bless --  Tesh  162  10:05, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

RE:Ryluk Shouja
I do have some suggestions. The article looks great at first, but as it goes on, it begins to lessen in details throughout the biography. Unlike Wikipedia, there shouldn't be a separate portion in the biography for his personal life. It should be merged into the biography. Also, several sections could use more details and expansion. Such sections are "The Businessman", "As a Lord", and pretty much all those sections below it. Death should definitely be expanded upon, and you must add a personality and traits section of substantial length.

The equipment section looks fine, but perhaps you should merge the section "The Shouja Mansion" into the Equipment section, since it really shouldn't be it's own section. Lastly, I don't think the "See also" section is necessary at all, since those links you mention are already linked in the article, however, that's just my opinion. However, "external" links are not necessary at all. Remove that section, because linking to Wookieepedia is unnecessary and has no relevance to your character. That's pretty much it, mostly expand sections, add sections, and give detail. Nicely done so far though. -- Victor, Sr. HoloNet 209 07:33, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

No problem. Glad I could give suggestions and help out. -- Victor, Sr. HoloNet 209 07:41, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

I will review your article later tonight on it's respective talk page. -- Victor, Sr. HoloNet 209 06:43, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

Postmortem is for what happened immediately after death, and Legacy is the long term effects that occurred because of Ryluk. Both are required. -- Victor, Sr. HoloNet 209 20:08, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

I was finally about to log in. Delga's page is now complete. You may fire when ready, commander...oh wait. wrong place. anyway. I made Delga's page. You should be happy now. And Tyrus' is coming up soon. Oh, and i'm like fifty pages into Newfound Heir. --  Tesh  162  12:57, 22 December 2007 (UTC)

Answers
I saw the questions you asked Vic, and since he's not here I figured I'd answer them for you. Postmortem goes under the History section, while Legacy is its own section. You can nominate your own articles for GA, and if it becomes GA then it gets automatically nominated for FA. - President Brandon Rhea  (Pressroom)   (Accomplishments)  18:20, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

RE:
Merry Christmas to you too. And no problem, I am always here to help out! -- Victor, Sr. HoloNet 209 19:04, 25 December 2007 (UTC)

Ryluk's appearances
Ok. I thought I replied, but I guess I didn't. Yes. Ryluk appears in Newfound Heir. He is in all three of my books. --  Tesh  162  13:56, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

Re:
Thanks for answering my questions, appreciate the assistance. - Lost Soul 19:44, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

As you requested...
-- Tesh Vohore  Director of "The Fanon Menace" - Celebrating 3,000 views  15:49, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, and Ryluk. Just thought I'd tell you. I added something to the Behind the Scenes on The Fanon Menace, something I thought that you should see. Again, it's one of the least things we could do. -- Tesh Vohore  Director of "The Fanon Menace" - Celebrating 3,000 views  20:14, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

Ryluk
There are still sections that aren't large enough. I remember one section in particular that needed help. I think it was The Businessman, or some for thereof. Expand these and it'll be an FA. Jesus Freak NK says NK's 'mazin' articles 21:22, 30 January 2008 (UTC)

The Fanon Menace
Do you think we should make a category to put all of the Fanon Menace stuff in called ? Or at least something along that line? -- Tesh Vohore  Director of "The Fanon Menace" - Celebrating 3,000 views  08:03, 2 February 2008 (UTC)