User blog comment:Brandon Rhea/Alternative Saga Update: April 21, 2010/@comment-57818-20100421203725

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"Here's the last sentence of Part 1: 'This time, things would be different.'" - Great, now you've jinxed yourself. You're going to be compelled to change the line now. -_- "I’m going to do my own personnel review of everything in the book so far..." - loltypolol

"THIS IS NOT A REWRITE." - No...not another rewrite, no....OH, GOOD GRIEF NO 'HE'S AT IT AGAIN!!!! Kill me before I have to read and edit this story all over again. Please kill me. I want to die.