User blog:Bluethunder213/Chapter Two is complete!

I just released chapter two of Star Wars: Red Talon! I would really enjoy it if anyone who has time to read it and tell me what you think. I really don't mind tough criticism, it'll help me improve as a writer. Also, I am writing Red Talon Origins. It is a collection of short stories about all the members of Red Talon before they became mercenaries. I hope to have it released soon after the release of part 1 of SW:RT.

Thanks for reading this and enjoy Red Talon!