Talk:Changing of the Gand/@comment-173.90.97.218-20190809150837

Hello, I had decided to review your work for you.

I saw that you made it as a challenge, under 1'500 words with change as the theme.

I feel you did really well, Zuckuss was done decently ( given the restrictions. ) description was good, again given the restrictions, though I have seen worse in longer works.

Really well done, it would be nice to see how the series goes along. And to see you write a longer story.