Forum:Project Cruentus/14

Further Discussion
Archived the old discussion. Darth Tyler, please tell us your plans for the project instead of just adding your name to the participants list.--Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 05:01, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * It's fine what he's done. --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] (talk) (contributions) 17:31, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Tyler, if you want to expand on a minor article, feel free to select one and ask if it's okay. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  20:26, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Announcement: Ankarr is almost done. Now year four is due to begin. This is when everything will go to hell. Characters will die. Planets will burn. People will be backstabbed. The United Coalition of Worlds will enter. And inevitably, the last battle, the mother of them all. The end is sight. The Project has come so far. Good job so far, everyone. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  19:00, 14 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Time for my big ice world battle that I told Unit and Tom about. Keep that to the end. I will start the battle article when I feel like the war is getting to an end. Unit, you told me you want to be in it already, so Tom, wanna make it a 3 way colab? We work it out in time?--Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (My contributions ) 19:46, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Before that, you mind if I start off a DTM skirmish or two? We gotta have some buildup. And the ice planet can be, so make it the second battle of Hurcha. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  19:51, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

Do what you wish. :)--Arav the Undersith (Contact Me ) (<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 19:54, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

ICE world planning.....

Also I was thinking if Tom and Unit, you two and I could make a battle together? It could be my DTM attack the Necs in space. Then the Nec's escape to a near by ice planet like Hoth. The DTM follow them. Funny enough the Srav's come and attack the Necs. The DTM and Sravs first attack each other while trying to attack the Nec. Then after a short time the 2 factions agree to join forces and attack the Necs together. With the Srav's weapons and my suicidal troops we attack the Necs. We drive them into a rocky mountainous area. The Nec's are highly out numbered. The DTM then suddenly attack the Sravs. Now it is back to a 3 way battle. A blizzard comes. Now they are fighting practically blind. Because the Sravs and the Necs have better weapons and are more wealthy, they have infrared visors and powerful gun lights. They use this advantage to hunt the DTM as well as hunting each other. They fight. Suddenly a Nec Frigate comes and fires on the mountain causing avalanches killing many. All factions slowly leave the mountain area and enter area that has lots of rocks and high and low terrain. A DTM frigate comes and blasts the crap out of the Nec Frigate. The Frigate does not blow up but crashes in a more flat area. The DTM frigate was blinded by the blizzard and crashes into a large mass of snow about 2 kilometres away from the Nec frigate. Some Nec soldiers survive and join the battle, boosting the low Nec numbers. Oh at the start the factions DTM have 6,000 but at this point they have 4,000 troopers, Necs have 9,000 but at this point they have 2,000 and the Sravs have 8,000 and at this point they have 5,000 because of avalanches. The battle has now become full scale. All factions have retreated to caves and hide behind large masses of snow. The Necs are completely outnumbered so they want to leave. They want to get to the shot down Nec frigate and fly the docked fighters. The DTM soldiers don't want to leave but they have too as they are ill equipped. The Sravs don’t plan on leaving and suspect that the other 2 factions are going to flee so they plan to snipe the rest out. At this point the Nec and DTM are FREEZING COLDD and getting frostbite but the Sravs dress warm and are fine (lucky). The 2 factions make a run for it. The 2 factions don’t attack each other on the way to the ships. The Sravs however snipe them out. The DTM loose 1,400 troops and the Necs loose 400 troops as the ship is very close. The DTM get into their docked ships and escape, launching an eborax bomb in the Sravs position. It kills 1,000 Sravs and the Necs leave without attacking any of the factions. After 3 hours of waiting, a Srav frigate comes and picks up the surviving 3,900 troops. So... you like? I would also like if this battle would be near the end of the half of year 4. (Srav wins, all have heavy losses). --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 20:14, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

I know it is late, but I would like to be involved in this. Not with my own faction, I would like to have a character(s) in an existing faction.  Wing   msg 21:21, 16 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Welcome back Xwing. Just letting you know, the only person other than myself that can make characters for me, is Unit because he does a damn good job . Sorry Xwing, the DTM is closed (for your particular idea of character making).--<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 04:45, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * @Xwing327: If you're looking for a faction to make characters in, the United Coalition of Worlds currently has only one person in it. Darth mavoc (Talk) 06:34, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Alright, I am interested in having a character for the United Coalition of Worlds.  Wing   msg 23:11, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Well feel free to create a page for him or her... or it. It can be anything you want really. Darth mavoc (Talk) 02:48, 19 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Bear in mind that there are already several characters lined up to join the UCW, one of which is Snaipes Horgan. You can also create a character for the Necs or Sravs if you wish, Wing. Arav: Battle of Ord Vaxal (Cruentusian War) and Battle of Nodessa Binary (Cruentusian War). Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  17:11, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks. When I get back from work, I will start on them.  Wing   msg 15:59, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay. And now it is time for Simiyar Tech to die, unfortunately. Nonetheless, their products will still live on and will be used by the UCW. Nyne, if you're still around and reading this, feel free to comment. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  18:44, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * And I want a battle between Menunadexu and another faction when Corus Okaxer dies. Anyone? Jedi Vilxi (Talk) 21:35, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Your Menunadexu doesn't really say much about your faction. -- Michaeldsuarez [[Image:Sabersmilygreend.jpg|20px]] ( Talk ) ( Deeds ) 03:32, 1 December 2008 (UTC)


 * No offence Vixi but you put no time and effort into your faction article. Its great that you joined but if you want any faction to battle yours then do what User:Darth Storm did, and work on it. Then ask us and we will make a decision. That’s just my opinion. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 10:27, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I'd be more than willing to do a battle with you Vilxi as long, as Arav and Michael have said, you detail what your faction is about, their tactics, tech level, etc. As such, judging by your one-sentence faction article they could be a bunch of hippies who fight with baguettes for all we know. Remember that they can't last for long so don't make them too good. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  17:05, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay, thanks. My article will be a work in progress. Jedi Vilxi (Talk) 21:18, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh and Menunadexu will be defeated not destroyed in the final battle, so they have to last till then. Thanks! Lord Cyprinus (Talk) 22:22, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, but that's not possible. They'll have to be destroyed far before then. --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 17:27, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Fine. But they do come back after this war, even read the article infobox. Lord Cyprinus (Talk) 21:52, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Note to Unit: I bet you have been getting frustrated on finding DTM commanders? Well, I finaly made a category for it. Category:Death's Tongue militants . There you go. Note to all: I am working on a battle. Its called Battle of Abonshee (Cruentusian War). Thanks. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 05:49, 5 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Arav: okay, and cool. Let me know if you need anything. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  18:31, 5 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I propose that we add one more year to Cruentus. I think we can write a lot more battle articles (now we have many more participants). Unless we cram over 6 participants in one year with over 5 battles already. That does not sound good to me. Please discuss. I say that we discuss for a week and at the end, we come to a conclusion and then we add a year or don't. It wont hurt to expant Cruentus to the max :p. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 11:29, 6 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Actually, Unit, would you like to co-write the Abonshee battle with me? If you do, what do you want to write? (parts..like Prelude etc). Thanks. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 11:34, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Another year's not needed. --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 11:40, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree with Darth tom. Another year is really needed, for many reasons. Firstly, the past 4 years need not be so solid, and set into stone. I don't mean to say, however, that these new factions should be shoehorned into previous battles, radically changing the continuity we've setup, but perhaps they can be given minor battles during those years, and then a catalyst to allow them enter the bigger plane of battle. It'd be similar to the Lost Ones and the HoD or the UCW and various battles (the one with Makakson set fire to everything [w00t] and the pretend battle that "killed" him).


 * My second point would be that 5 battles in a year is not alot. There's more then enough room for alot more. Hell, the previous years (esp. Year 3) shows that we can have a heap of battles in one year. Darth mavoc (Talk) 13:28, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I'd be willing you help you, Arav. Got any exact plans? Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  11:49, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I was thinking that now would be a good time for the UCW to actually show itself to the greater galaxy. I was thinking that it might be a raid of somesort (and perhaps a show of power [i.e. their EMP technology]) against the Sravs. I also have a bunch of pics that could be used for the UCW's military (and that you might to look at Arav). @Arav: Whenever you're next online (not now though, its late here), leave me a message, and I'll get straight onto IRC. Darth mavoc (Talk) 13:36, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, I was thinking that we should have about two more battles before the UCW unveils itself. Then, it might step into a three-way between the Sravs, Necs, and DTM, and we might make that an FA/GA. I'd also like to see the pics you have in mind, Mav. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  17:43, 6 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Yes. I will find an ice worlds name and use that for the 3 way battle. Don't add to it yet. We also must discuss what each of us is doing. First, Tom and Unit, pick which planet looks the best for the ice battle., , , , , , or . That is a big selection of planets. Please choose wisely and please look at all. I really like Csilla, Ilum or Diado. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 00:13, 7 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Unit, here is my view of the battle. Civil War in Abonshee. Serfs stand up against their leaders and protectors. The army splits and some stay on the Godlings side and some go on the serf’s side. They fight. DTM here this news of civil war and fly with a small fleet of troops with explosives. The DTM help the serfs. The DTM take out the protectors and gain access into the main city of the godlings. DTM, along with the serfs, capture and kill the godlings. Serfs and DTM win. They are in debt and DTM use that debt to use the whole planet as their training ground. Serfs don't like that and DTM use suicide bombers to kill the serfs. The army men take side with the DTM and the planet is full of scientist labs, areas to test bombs and mass destruction weapons. They set up satellites and tracking systems. Then after the planet is fully "upgraded", the DTM take over Abonshee's system. That can lead to Units and Mavocs faction to try and restore peace. That’s my plans. Thoughts Unit and Mavoc? --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 00:26, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nice idea for the battle, Arav. Though I think the DTM would make liberal use of eborax to kill the peasents. For the ice battle, we can use, which has already had a battle, but if I had to choose from those I'd go for Ando Prime or Diado. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  14:49, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I will write a battle. Right now, I'm reading the Cruentusian War page to get an idea on what this is all about. I'll write one of the smaller, stub battles if you guys agree. (Also, I can do images, if anyone needs some.) &mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 21:25, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * If I can make up a battle (I was thinking Mygeeto), I'll happily to that. If I have to pick one already created, I'd probably choose Toydaria.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 21:56, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * If you want to do Toydaria, tyler, then fine. Joe doesn't seem to be interested in it, so I guess nobody's stopping you. If you do want to write a battle, say who it involves, and you can write a draft on a userpage so we can have a look. Also, if you want to upload images, look beyond canon to stuff like Halo and WW3 games, considering Cruentus tech is closer to modern warfare stuff. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  22:14, 7 December 2008 (UTC)


 * So, for me and Unit. So thats 2/3. I will make the article now. Please do not add anything but the information for the Info box. Thanks. We can add to the intro, prelude etc after we discuss in more detail on what parts are we going to do. Thanks. --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith  <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 05:17, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 * To Mav: as the UCW is about to enter the war imminently, we can have the meeting and document that creates it: The Treaty of Corellia, for a name, and their entry battle, which I feel should take on a oceanic world like Kothlis. If you have any ideas, post them, and if you want me to start on the entry battle ASAP say so. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  19:34, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I like the idea of The Treaty of Corellia. A nice homage to the creation of the Rebel Alliance. Uh, when you are next online (as well as myself), I'll leave you a message on your talk page so we can discuss this over IRC. Darth mavoc (Talk) 01:19, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Will someone do a battle with me? I was thinking Hoth or Ord S'brate. Anyone? Vilxi Okaxer, Shi&#39;ido Jedi Knight (Talk) 21:13, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
 * For me, no. I have no clue of how advanced your faction is, leaders/commanders in the Cruentus period, why was the faction made and when, how big their army is. Just letting you know, there is no jedi or sith. The only force-sensitve people were the Lost Ones, which were wiped from the Cruentusian War. When I see more detail in your faction and their commanders, then I will think about it. Sorry. OK, Tom and Unit: Lets talk about the Ice world battle. Now we need to discuss in more detail with the battle. My info of it is at the top. Guys? --<font color=#00416A>Arav the Undersith <font color=Blue>(<font color=#C3B091>Contact Me ) <font color=#00416A>(<font color=#C3B091>My contributions ) 04:49, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Mav: seeing as we both live on the other side of the world (you in Australia, I in Europe), finding a good time for an IRC chat would be hard (what time are you usually on, Euro time?). In any case, my idea for the treaty is that simply some mainly human worlds pledge military strength to a new coalition, as does the Zayre represented by Redharn and Ironwings. I can start it if you give the word. Arav: I mostly okay with that battle plan, sans the DTM and Sravs allying (doubt hardcore enemies would just shake hands like that). You want me to make adjustments or new ideas, that's fine. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  13:29, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I'd be happy, Vilxi, to destroy your faction as planned. Would you care to discuss here, on the IRC or some other place? --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 17:33, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure. Tell me on my talk page when we can discuss it. THanks. Vilxi Okaxer, Shi&#39;ido Jedi Knight (Talk) 21:10, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Arav and Obi: Here. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  20:02, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Mav, if you're around to read this, the UCW's intro battle has been started, and I've taken the liberty of starting the Treaty of Corellia article. If you want any input, feel free to spill your ideas. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  17:16, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

Just wondering, are the Savis a mercenary faction or have they become just a regular action? It seem like the faction itself it participating in one-one-one battles. -- Joe Butler   (Talk to me) 04:25, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
 * What do you mean? For the most part, they've either been hired by a third party or are defending themselves. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  15:12, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Ah, I see. -- Joe Butler   (Talk to me) 15:46, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Also, are you guys thinking of creating another project when this one is finished? -- Joe Butler   (Talk to me) 15:47, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Not to the best of my knowledge. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  15:52, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

I would like to join this project. How do I?  Darth Taikin (Talk to me) (My work)(Become a Jedi)  13:53, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Just add your name to the participants list. However, it's too late for you to make a new faction, unless it's something incredibly minor and puny, but you can make your own character for one of the factions, as someone suggested above, or an independent one, as long as it doesn't get involved in the main storyline. Unit 8311 [[Image:1110 Big small.jpg|20px]] Talk!  16:51, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
 * To be honest, it wouldn't be possible for you to have a faction at all... --[[Image:Darth tom sig.png|100px]] <font color="#000001">(talk) <font color="#000001">(contributions) 18:13, 9 February 2009 (UTC)