Talk:Star Wars: Echoes in the Void/Initiation

This is one of my first attempts at a drawn out short story series. I've written novels before, but not short stories. I suck at short stories. So, please bare with me. I was wondering if, after you read it, you could give me some feedback on what you thought of it. If I get enough possitive feedback, I'll conitnue, but if not, I'll quit while I'm ahead. Don't be afraid to be brutally honest with me. I'm a writer and director...I get criticism all the time for what I do. This is just to let you know more about what the main article is. God Bless you all. --  Tesh  162  18:18, 18 March 2008 (UTC)